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【期末考點突破】專題13 書面表達20篇-外研版 2024-2025學年八年級英語下學期專項訓練（含答案解析）
1．學校舉辦英語演講比賽，主題是介紹自己最好的朋友。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇演講稿介紹你的好朋友Jeff。
內容要點：
1.個子比你高，比你更外向。他總是給你講有意思的故事。
2.喜歡運動，每周鍛煉四次。放學后，你們還一起打籃球。
3.喜歡聽音樂，看動作片，還喜歡看新聞，因為……
4.上周末，你們去Town Cinema看了電影，你覺得這家影院是最好的一家影院，因為它有最舒適的座位和最好的音效。
要求：
1.內容必須包含以上信息，并可根據需要適當添加；
2.書寫規范，條理清楚，行文連貫，段落分明；
3.詞數80詞左右，所給開頭和結尾不計入總詞數。
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to introduce my best friend Jeff to you.
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That’s all. Thank you.
2．《哪吒2》2025年春節期間上映，迄今全球總票房 (含預售) 突破155億。該片打破了迪士尼、環球對動畫榜的壟斷。
要點如下：
(1) 寒假期間，你和爸爸媽媽一起去電影院看了《哪吒2》；
(2) 哪吒有明亮的紅色的頭發，穿著紅色的衣服，他很勇敢，但有時很淘氣；
(3) 他和好朋友敖丙相互幫助，一起抗爭，他們教會我們堅強與善良；
(4) 這部電影受到各個年齡段人們的喜愛。迄今為止，3億多人已經看過它；
(5) 你認為，中國電影的未來……
要求：
（1）詞數：80~100個。
（2）要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發揮。
參考詞匯：《哪吒2》 Ne Zha 2
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3．“五一”勞動節即將到來，你打算和家人一起外出旅游。請根據圖示要點，寫一篇短文介紹此次旅行計劃。
要求：
1.補全標題；
2.短文必須包括圖示中的全部要點；
3.文中不能出現真實的姓名和校名。
My Trip to ______
Place Time Vehicle Activity Tip
My Trip to ________
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4．假如你是李華，新的學期已經過去一半。請你寫一封電子郵件給你的美國筆友John，告訴他你近階段的學習和生活情況，以及接下來的計劃。提示如下：
過去 1. 寒假在家鄉待了一個星期； 2. 家鄉變化很大，……（自由發揮1~2點）；
現在 1. 學會了用電腦做文字處理； 2. 喜歡旅游，因為……（自由發揮1點）； 3. 熱愛閱讀，……（自由發揮1點）；
計劃 1. 外出旅游； 2. 多讀書； 3. ……（自由發揮1點）
要求：1. 90詞左右，開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入單詞數。
2. 書寫認真，卷面整潔、美觀。
3. 內容完整并適當發揮；全文連貫、通順。
4. 文中不得出現真實人名、校名等相關信息。
Dear John,
How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I’d like to share something that has happened and my future plans with you.
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So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours
Li Hua
5．世界上最美的相遇，是遇見一個更優秀的自己。讀書和旅行都能讓我們開拓視野，增長見識，變得更加優秀。你更喜歡哪種方式呢？請以“ _______ helps me meet a better self”為題，根據下面的提示并結合自身的經歷，用英語寫一篇短文，分享自己的進步、經歷和未來計劃。
1. What helps you meet a better self
2. What is your most unforgettable book or trip
3. What do you learn from the book or the trip
4. What will you do in the future
注意事項：
1.補全題目，如“reading”或“travelling”；
2.文中不能出現真實姓名、校名等信息；
3.詞數：100詞左右；
4.文章必須包含所有要點，可適當發揮，使短文連貫、通順。
____________ helps me meet a better self
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6．假如你是李華，你校英文網站正在開展以“The Internet and Me”為主題的征文活動。請根據以下提示問題，用英語寫一篇短文投稿。
提示：
(1) How long do you surf the Internet every day
(2) What do you often do on the Internet
(3) What do you think of the Internet
注意：
（1）短文須包括所有提示內容，可適當發揮。
（2）文中不得出現真實的校名和人名。
（3）70詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）。
With the development of science and technology, the Internet has become a must in our life.
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7．2023年起寧夏中考體育將提高分數，這意味著學生的體質健康更加得到了重視。那么作為中學生，我們應該如何保持健康的生活方式呢？請你根據以下提示要點，以“How to keep healthy ”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，和同學們分享一下你的建議。
要求：
(1)語句通順、意思連貫、語法正確；
(2)包含所有提示要點，可適當發揮。
注意：
(1)詞數80詞左右（標題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）；
(2)文中不得出現真實的姓名和校名。
How to keep healthy
As we all know, health is the most important in our life. However, do you know how to keep healthy Here is my advice.
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8．武夷山是位于福建省的風景旅游區。假如你是李華。你的英國筆友Steve想知道你今年暑假的安排。請你根據以下圖示，給他寫一封回信，說說你暑假時打算前往武夷山的四天旅行計劃。詞數80左右。
Hope: … Plans: Day 1: arrive, 14:20, July, 22nd; Day 2: Jiuqu River, boat on; Day 3: climb; the hills Day 4: leave, 9:45, July, 25th Mount Wuyi Location (位置): northwest, Fujian Transportation (交通): by train Cost: 2,000 yuan Preparations: book a room…
注意事項:1. 必須包含所有提示信息，可適當發揮，格式和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
2. 意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規范；
3. 請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Steve,
As we all know, Mount Wuyi is a wonderful place to visit. Now I will tell you something about my trip plan to Mount Wuyi this summer vacation. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
9．愛好對我們意義重大。假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Mary給你寫了一封郵件想要了解你的愛好。請你根據以下提示信息，用英文給她回復一封郵件，向她介紹你的愛好。
提示：
1. 你的一個愛好；
2. 你的愛好從形成到發展的過程；
3. 你的愛好給你帶來的收獲。
注意：
1. 詞數為80左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
2. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3. 文中不能出現真實姓名及學校名稱。
參考詞匯：success（n. 成功） pleasure（n. 快樂，愉悅） knowledge（n. 知識）
Dear Mary,
Thank you for your last letter, and I’d like to tell you something about my hobby.
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．你上學期經常因為生病請假，寒假通過改變生活方式提升了身體素質，請根據以下要點，以My Healthy Winter Vacation為題，向同學們介紹你的寒假日常生活。
1. 決定多吃水果蔬菜，每天喝牛奶，少吃快餐；
2. 每天上午慢跑半小時，下午和朋友一起打籃球；
3. 早睡早起，不熬夜玩手機，保證足夠的睡眠；
4. 現在感覺精力充沛，你認為……
要求：1) 詞數：80-100個； (2) 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數； (3) 要點齊全，行文連貫，可適當發揮。
參考詞匯：慢跑 jog; 精力充沛的 energetic
My Healthy Winter Vacation
Last term, I often missed school because I was sick, which made me feel worried and tired. When the winter holiday began,
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11．每一年的4月7日是世界健康日。今年的世界健康日主題是“我的健康，我的權利”。為了增強中學生的健康意識，校英文雜志社正在開展以“How to live a healthy life”為主題的征文活動。假如你是李華，請你根據以下要點，寫一篇英語短文，談談怎樣過好健康生活。寫作要點：
1. 健康生活的重要性；
2. 飲食、運動、睡眠方面的建議；
3. 號召同學們保持健康；
寫作要求：
1. 內容必須包括所給要點，可適當發揮，使行文連貫；
2. 語篇完整，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規范；
3. 文中不能出現透露個人信息的語句，否則不予評分；
4. 詞數為 80 左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
參考詞匯：important (adj. 重要的), habit (n.習慣), exercise (v./n. 鍛煉), fast food (快餐食品)
How to live a healthy life
Nowadays, more and more people want to live a healthy life.
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12．陽光兒童醫院計劃在暑假招募一批志愿者，服務內容為：幫助醫院打掃衛生、照顧生病的小朋友。假如你是第一中學的王凱，請按照要求給該項目的負責人周先生寫一封申請信。
內容提示：
1.申請擔任志愿者;
2.說明自己樂于助人，善于幫助小朋友。要求：
1.申請信需要涵蓋以上所有要點，可適當發
揮;
2.詞數：80左右，開頭和結尾已給出(不計入總詞數)
Dear Mr. Zhou,
I’m Wang Kai from No.1 Middle School.
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Yours,
Wang Kai
13．假如你是Amy，你的學校將開展“靈魂在路上，讓心智成長”為主題的演講活動，請你根據下面的流程圖所給的提示，寫一篇關于旅行的演講稿，分享你對旅行的感受、你印象深刻的一次旅行以及體會。
注意事項：
1. 演講稿須根據流程圖自擬，要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；
2. 詞數在100左右，演講稿的開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數；
3. 演講稿中不得出現真實的人名、校名等相關信息。
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Amy. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about travelling with you.
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14．閱讀對于個人的成長起著舉足輕重的作用。Teens Talk雜志正開展主題為“Reading makes a full man.”征文大賽。請你根據以下提示，寫一篇英語短文。
要求：
1. 包含所有所給提示內容，可適當發揮；
2. 不少于80詞。
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15．Jack 是你的好朋友，在某些方面你們有相似之處，在另一方面，你們也有很多不同之處。
寫作要求：
1.根據以下信息，用英語寫一篇短文介紹你和你的朋友。
2.要求適當分段：語句通順，邏輯連貫：可適當發揮。
3.字數： 90詞左右 （開頭已給， 不計入總詞數）。
相同點 不同點
外貌和性格 外向而友好 Jack 比你高比你瘦
飲食和習慣 每個月吃1-2次垃圾食品 Jack 早睡早起；你常常熬夜，難得運動。
興趣和愛好 喜歡相互幫助和一起閱讀最喜歡 Blue Moon電影院及一條喜歡去的理由（使用比較或最高級）。 Jack 最喜歡動作電影，因為…… 你最喜歡……（電視節目類型），因為……
Jack is my best friend, now I’d like to introduce my best friend and me.
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16．一百、一千、一萬……即使有再多的零，沒有了一，一切都歸零。在我們的生活中，如果沒有了健康，財富、地位等一切也都失去了意義。請以“Ways to Keep Healthy”為題，參照下圖的信息，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的文章。
注意：1. 書寫清晰、字跡工整、行文流暢，語句通順。
2. 包含所給內容，并適當拓展補充。
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17．學校今年將開展暑期志愿者活動。假如你是Simon，你想和同學John利用暑假在兒童福利院做一些志愿者工作。請根據以下表格信息，以“Volunteering”為題，寫一篇英語作文，談談你們的愛好、夢想，以及你們將要做的志愿者工作。
要點：
Names Simon John
students from No. 2 Middle School
Free time this summer holiday
Place a children’s home
Activities 1. 讀故事； 2. 打掃衛生； 3. 一起唱歌、跳舞、做游戲； 4. ……
Feelings …
要求：
1. 詞數80詞以上；
2. 字跡工整，可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
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18．你校新來的外教Tony想通過問卷了解學生的生活習慣。問卷中有關于你喜歡的食品、你的睡眠狀況、空余時間的安排、個人清潔和運動等方面的問題。請你根據以下問卷問題用英文向 Tony作詳細介紹。
Something about your lifestyle.
What do you think of your lifestyle
How should you improve your lifestyle
Something more about it.
注意：文中不得透露個人真實信息；詞數90詞左右；開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Tony,
I’d like to introduce my lifestyle to you.
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19．健康的生活習慣對于成長中的我們是非常重要的。你認為健康的生活習慣應當是怎樣的呢？請根據下面的信息提示，寫一篇短文，首句已給出，不計入總詞數。
提示：健康飲食，多吃水果蔬菜；早睡早起，不熬夜，保證充足睡眠；參加運動，強身健體。
參考詞匯：熬夜stay up; 增進，加強build up
要求：
（1）條理清晰，把握要點，適當發揮；
（2）書寫工整，卷面整潔；
（3）80詞左右。
I think healthy habits are very important for us.
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20．“情緒，我們心靈的晴雨表。”在當今這個快節奏、高壓力的社會里，情緒管理已經成為了我們生活中不可或缺的一部分。越來越多的人開始意識到，情緒不僅僅是我們內心的感受，它更是影響我們行為的關鍵因素。因此，如何保持一個良好的心態，成了我們共同追求的目標。學校校報正在舉行以“How to Stay in a Good Mood”為題的英語征文活動，請根據圖片提示，用英語寫一篇不少于80詞的短文進行投稿，談談你的想法。
寫作要求：
1. 包含思維導圖中所有提示內容，可適當發揮。
2. 文中不能出現真實的姓名及校名。
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1．例文：
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to introduce my best friend Jeff to you.
Jeff is a 15-year-old boy from Shandong. He is kind and friendly. He is taller and much more outgoing than me. He always tells me funny stories and makes me laugh. I like him because he likes to do the same things as me. We are both interested in doing sports, which is good for our health. We often exercise four times every week and play basketball together after school. We both enjoy listening to music and watching action movies, because they can make us relaxed. Sometimes Jeff likes watching news. He wants to know what’s going on around the world and he hopes to be a reporter when he grows up.
Last weekend, we watched an action movie in Town Cinema. It was so wonderful. I think Town Cinema is the best movie theater. It has the most comfortable seats and the best sound. I hope to go there next time!
That’s all. Thank you.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：這是一篇演講稿；
② 時態：主要采用“一般現在時”和“一般過去時”；
③ 提示：寫作要點已經給出，“喜歡看新聞”的原因需要補充；“上周去看電影”部分要用一般過去時，但是介紹電影院的情況用一般現在時。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹演講的主題是我的好朋友Jeff（已給出）；
第二步，具體介紹Jeff的性格和愛好；
第三步，介紹上周去看電影以及Town Cinema的情況。
[亮點詞匯]
① be interested in 對……感興趣
② much more outgoing 外向得多
③ the most comfortable seats 最舒適的座位
④ make us relaxed 使我們放松
[高分句型]
He wants to know what’s going on around the world and he hopes to be a reporter when he grows up.（賓語從句、時間狀語從句）
2．例文
During the winter vacation, I watched Ne Zha 2 with my parents, and it left a deep impression on me.
Ne Zha, who has bright red hair and wears red clothes, is a brave yet occasionally naughty hero. What impressed me most was his friendship with Ao Bing. Although they face countless challenges, they help each other and fight side by side, which teaches us to be strong and kind.
The film has won the hearts of people of all ages. So far, more than 300 million people have watched it, making it a huge success.
I believe that the future of Chinese films is bright because they combine traditional culture with modern technology, just like Ne Zha 2 does so that people around the world will know more good Chinese stories.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：一般過去時和一般現在時；
③提示：根據寫作要點完成寫作，注意不要遺漏，可適當增加細節。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹自己看了《哪吒2》以引出下文；
第二步，描述哪吒的外貌、性格、與敖丙的友誼和帶來的啟示；
第三步，總結這部電影的成就；
第四步，書寫結語，表達期待。
[亮點詞匯]
①leave a deep impression on sb 給某人留下深刻印象
②fight side by side 并肩戰斗
③teach sb to do 教會某人做某事
④win the hearts of sb 贏得某人的心
[高分句型]
①Ne Zha, who has bright red hair and wears red clothes, is a brave yet occasionally naughty hero. (who引導非限制性定語從句)
②What impressed me most was his friendship with Ao Bing. (what引導主語從句)
③Although they face countless challenges, they help each other and fight side by side, which teaches us to be strong and kind. (although引導讓步狀語從句，which引導非限制性定語從句)
3．例文
My Trip to Shanghai
I’m very excited because May Day is coming. I’m going on a three-day visit to Shanghai with my family. We will go there by plane. We are going to visit the Disneyland. I’d like to take some photos with Mickey Mouse. We also plan to visit the museum and the Oriental Pearl Tower. When the night falls, we can take a ship to travel around Huangpu River. After that, we decide to do some shopping. There are many kinds of food in Shanghai. We can enjoy the local food and buy some for our friends.
I think we will have fun in Shanghai. We can’t wait to go there.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為 “一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，要注意不要遺漏提示的相關要點，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，先補全題目，接著介紹五一出游計劃；
第二步，介紹將要游玩的景點；
第三步，表達對五一出游的期待。
[亮點詞匯]
①by plane乘飛機
②would like to想要
③take some photos拍照
④plan to打算做某事
③many kinds of很多種
④can’t wait to do迫不及待做某事
[高分句型]
①I’m very excited because May Day is coming. (because引導的原因狀語從句)
②I think we will have fun in Shanghai. (賓語從句)
4．例文
Dear John,
How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I’d like to share something that has happened and my future plans with you.
I stayed in my hometown for two weeks during the winter holiday. Great changes have taken place in my hometown. People used to listen to the radio or watch TV in their free time, but now most families have computers and the Internet. Mobile phones make communication easier.
Now I have learnt to use computers to do word processing. I love travelling because I find travelling can help me learn about the world and enjoy the beauty of nature. I am also fond of reading books, and I am interested in reading books about Chinese history.
Then I plan to have more time to relax myself. I plan to go travelling in China during the summer holiday. I also want to spend more time reading different kinds of books because books can open up a whole new world to me. Moreover, I will keep working hard on my study and help my mum with the housework.
So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時態：現在完成時、一般過去時和一般現在時等；
③提示：根據提示從過去、現在和未來三方面介紹，并注意用不同時態敘述；要點已經給出，不要遺漏，可適當發揮。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，根據提示介紹過去的生活情況；
第二步，介紹現在的情況；
第三步，介紹接下來的計劃。
[亮點詞匯]
①take place發生
②use to do過去常常……
③be interested in對……感興趣
[高分句型]
①I love travelling because I find travelling can help me learn about the world and enjoy the beauty of nature.（原因狀語從句）
②Then I plan to have more time to relax myself.（動詞不定式作后置定語）
5．例文一：
Traveling helps me meet a better self
Traveling is like a mirror that helps me discover new parts of myself. Among all my trips, the most unforgettable one was my visit to Yunnan with my family last summer.
During the trip, we hiked in the mountains near Lijiang. At first, the path made me nervous, and I almost gave up halfway. But my parents encouraged me to keep going. Step by step, I finally reached the top. The view of the green valleys and snow-capped mountains was amazing! I learned that challenges are easier to overcome with patience and courage. I also met local children there. They shared stories about their lives. Their kindness and happiness touched my heart deeply.
From this trip, I learned to be more confident and open-minded. In the future, I want to travel to more places, especially those with different cultures. I’ll try to learn and respect local customs wherever I go. Traveling isn’t just about seeing new sights—it’s about becoming a better self.
例文二：
Reading helps me meet a better self
Reading is a journey that allows me to explore both the world and my inner self. The most unforgettable book I’ve read is “Treasure Island” by Robert Louis Stevenson. It tells the exciting story of a brave boy who sailed the sea to find hidden treasure.
The book taught me valuable lessons. Jim faced pirates, storms, and betrayal, but he never lost hope. His courage and wisdom inspired me to believe that even young people can overcome challenges. One scene I remember was when Jim stood up to Long John Silver, the cunning pirate. It showed me that bravery is not about being fearless, but about doing what is right despite fear. I also learned the importance of teamwork from the crew’s struggles.
From “Treasure Island”, I realized that books can shape our character. In the future, I will read more adventurous stories to strengthen my courage and creativity. I’ll try to act bravely in difficult situations, just like Jim. Reading isn’t just about words on a page—it’s about discovering a stronger, wiser self.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”、“一般過去時”和“一般將來時”；
③提示：材料所要求內容不得遺漏，寫作過程注意時態切換運用。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開門見山，點明文章主旨；
第二步，詳細介紹難忘的旅行的經歷；
第三步，分享自己旅行的收獲和未來的計劃。
[亮點詞匯]
①give up放棄
②encourage sb. to do sth.鼓勵某人做某事
③step by step一步一步地
[高分句型]
①Traveling is like a mirror that helps me discover new parts of myself. (定語從句)
②I learned that challenges are easier to overcome with patience and courage. (賓語從句)
6．例文
With the development of science and technology, the Internet has become a must in our life. I usually spend about one hour online every day.
On the Internet, I often do many useful things. First, I search for study materials and watch educational videos to improve my knowledge. Sometimes, I chat with my friends on social media to share our daily life. Besides, I enjoy listening to music and watching funny short videos to relax myself after study.
I think the Internet is really helpful. It makes our life more convenient and colorful. However, we should use it properly and not spend too much time on it.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②時態：時態為一般現在時。
③提示：寫作要點已給出，需圍繞每天上網時長、上網做的事情、對互聯網的看法展開，可適當補充細節，突出三個核心要點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開頭點明互聯網在生活中的重要性，自然引入下文。
第二步，依次回答三個提示問題，先說明每天上網時長，再列舉上網做的學習、社交、娛樂等活動。
第三步，最后闡述對互聯網利弊的看法。
[亮點詞匯]
①search for 搜索
②share 分享
③relax myself 放松自己
④more convenient and colorful 更方便和豐富多彩
[高分句型]
①I search for study materials and watch educational videos to improve my knowledge.（動詞不定式作目的狀語）
②I think the Internet is really helpful.（賓語從句）
7．例文：
How to keep healthy
As we all know, health is the most important in our life. However, do you know how to keep healthy Here is my advice.
Firstly, we should have a healthy lifestyle. We should get enough sleep and eat a balanced diet. Avoid junk food and eat more fruits and vegetables.
Secondly, take an active part in PE classes. Exercise regularly in class and improve our physical fitness.
Finally, do some interesting outdoor activities at weekends. We can go hiking, cycling or play ball games. These activities can make us stronger and more energetic.
In conclusion, a healthy lifestyle is essential for our well-being. Let’s take action and keep healthy.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要求已經給出，考生應注意不要遺漏，注意大小寫，適當添加細節，突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開篇點題，引出下文；
第二步，具體闡述保持健康的建議；
第三步，書寫結語，呼吁養成保持健康的好習慣。
[亮點詞匯]
①a balanced diet均衡的飲食
②take an active part in積極參加
③be essential for對……是必不可少的
④in conclusion總之
[高分句型]
①Avoid junk food and eat more fruits and vegetables. (祈使句)
②These activities can make us stronger and more energetic. (運用形容詞比較級)
8．例文：
Dear Steve,
As we all know, Mount Wuyi is a wonderful place to visit. Now I will tell you something about my trip plan to Mount Wuyi this summer vacation.
I plan to have a four-day visit to Mount Wuyi. Mount Wuyi is in the northwest of Fujian. So, I decide to go there by train. The whole trip may cost me about 2,000 yuan. Before I go there, I should book a room first. And I’ll take a hat and a camera of course. I plan to arrive there at 14:20 on July, 22nd. On the second day, I’m going to go boating on Jiuqu River. It must be interesting. The next day, I’ll go to climb the hills. And I plan to leave there at 9:45 on July, 25th.
I hope I can have an exciting trip. And what’s your plan for your summer vacation
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】［總體分析］
①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；
②時態：本文的時態“一般將來時”和“一般現在時”；
③提示：注意要點已給出，注意要點銜接自然，順暢。
［寫作步驟］
第一步，向好友介紹自己的計劃目的點是武夷山；
第二步，詳細介紹自己的旅行計劃；
第三步，表達期待并詢問好友如何度假。
［亮點詞匯］
① a four-day visit 一次四天的參觀
② decide to do sth決定做某事
③ looking forward to期待
［高分句型］
①Before I go there, I should book a room first.（時間狀語從句）
② I hope I can have an exciting trip.（賓語從句）
9．例文
Dear Mary,
Thank you for your last letter and I’d like to tell you something about my hobby. My favorite hobby is reading. I remember when I was a little girl, I enjoyed being with my mom when she read to me. Then when I grew older, I began to read books by myself. I was always lost in the stories and I learned a lot from the characters.
Now reading has become my hobby. I enjoy myself in the world of books every time I read. I think reading helps open my mind. And I have gotten much knowledge. What about you What’s your hobby
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封郵件；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”和“一般過去時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏提示，并適當添加細節，突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹自己的一個愛好；
第二步，介紹愛好從形成到發展的過程；
第三步，介紹愛好所帶來的收獲。
[亮點詞匯]
①tell sb. about sth.告訴某人關于某事
②enjoy doing sth.喜歡做某事
③begin to do sth.開始做某事
④in the world of books在書籍世界中
[高分句型]
①I remember when I was a little girl, I enjoyed being with my mom when she read to me. (when引導的時間狀語從句)
②I was always lost in the stories and I learned a lot from the characters. (and的并列句)
③I think reading helps open my mind. (賓語從句)
10．范文
My Healthy Winter Vacation Last term, I often missed school because I was sick, which made me feel worried and tired. When the winter holiday began, I decided to change my lifestyle to improve my physical condition.
I ate a lot of fruits and vegetables and drank milk every day. I also avoided fast food as much as possible. For exercise, I jogged for half an hour every morning. In the afternoon, I played basketball with my friends, which not only helped me stay fit but also allowed me to enjoy time with them. What’s more, I stopped staying up late on my phone. Instead, I went to bed and got up early to get enough sleep.
Now, I’m full of energy. I’m sure that a healthy lifestyle is the secret to good health, and I’ll keep these habits forever.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：主要為“一般過去時”和“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的每一項提示，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，引出寒假決定改變生活方式以提升身體素質的寫作意圖；
第二步，從飲食、運動、作息三個方面詳細描述寒假期間的生活方式改變；
第三步，表明現在精力充沛的狀態，闡述對健康生活方式重要性的感悟，強調會保持這些習慣 。
[亮點詞匯]
①fast food快餐
②as much as possible盡可能多地
③full of energy精力充沛
[高分句型]
①I played basketball with my friends, which not only helped me stay fit but also allowed me to enjoy time with them. (which引導非限制性定語從句)
②I’m sure that a healthy lifestyle is the secret to good health, and I’ll keep these habits forever. (that引導賓語從句)
11．例文：
How to live a healthy life
Nowadays, more and more people want to live a healthy life. A healthy life is very important. A strong body can help us study and work better.
Here are some suggestions on how to live a healthy life. First, we should have a healthy diet. Eat more fresh vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat too much fast food. Second, to keep fit, it’s a good way to exercise by taking a walk, running or playing ball games every week. They can keep you in excellent condition. Last but not least, enough sleep is necessary. Early to bed and early to rise keeps us active and lively.
Health is wealth. Let’s develop healthy habits and live a healthy life together.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏信息，可適當增加細節。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開篇點題，第一段總述健康的重要性；
第二步，具體從“飲食、運動、睡眠”三個方面給出保持健康的方法；
第三步，書寫結語，號召大家保持健康。
[亮點詞匯]
①diet飲食
②fast food快餐食品
③take a walk去散步
④in excellent condition健康狀況良好
[高分句型]
①Here are some suggestions on how to live a healthy life. (疑問詞+不定式)
②Second, to keep fit, it’s a good way to exercise by taking a walk, running or playing ball games every week. (不定式作主語)
12．Dear Mr Zhou,
I’m Wang Kai from No. I Middle School.
I want to be a volunteer to help at the children’s hospital. I’m always ready to help others. I can help to clean the room, make the bed and care for the sick children. Well, I’m good with children. I can teach them to sing and draw. I can also tell them stories. When I’m with them, I can always cheer them up. I hope I can get this job. And if I can get this job, I believe I will be a great helper.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Wang kai
【詳解】【總體分析】
①題材：本文是一篇應用文，圍繞申請成為陽光兒童醫院志愿者展開內容撰寫。
②時態：全文主要運用 一般現在時和一般將來時。
③提示：寫作時需涵蓋所有要點，適當發揮細節，以滿足字數要求，并保證語言表達自然流暢。
【寫作步驟】
第一步，直接表明寫信目的，即申請成為兒童醫院的志愿者，簡潔明了，讓收信人迅速了解信件核心意圖。
第二步，闡述個人優勢，包括樂于助人、幫助小朋友等要點，同時表達自己的期望與信心。
第三步，以禮貌、得體的語句收尾，表達對收信人回復的期待，符合申請信的規范格式和禮儀要求。
【亮點詞匯】
①be ready to準備好做某事；樂意做某事
②care for照顧；照料
③be good with善于和……相處
④cheer...up使……振作起來
【高分句型】
①When I’m with them, I can always cheer them up.（When引導的時間狀語從句）
③And if I can get this job, I believe I will be a great helper.（if引導的條件狀語從句和believe后面的賓語從句）
13．Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Amy. Today I’m glad to share my ideas about travelling with you.
I think travelling is really great. It’s fun to go to different places. We can see new things and learn about different ways of life.
Last year, I went to the beach with my family. It was a sunny day. When we got there, the blue sea and the golden sand made me excited. I played beach volleyball with my parents and built sandcastles. We also swam in the sea. It was so cool!
From this trip, I learned that spending time with family is important. And I found that there are so many beautiful and interesting things in the world. We should go out and see more. It can make our lives better.
Thank you!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇講稿；
②時態：時態為一般現在時；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏提示中的要點，可適當添加細節，并突出寫作要點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹你對于旅行的看法；
第二步，描述你的旅行經歷，包括在什么時間，地點等；
第三步，分享旅游的收獲。
[亮點詞匯]
①learn about了解
②in the sea在海里
③make our lives better讓我們的生活更好
[高分句型]
①When we got there, the blue sea and the golden sand made me excited.（When引導的時間狀語從句）
②From this trip, I learned that spending time with family is important.（賓語從句）
14．例文
Reading Makes a Full Man
Reading is very important in our life. It can open our minds and make us wiser.
My favorite book is The Little Prince. I love it because it tells warm and meaningful stories. Through the adventures of the little prince, I’ve learned about love and friendship. I have a good reading habit. I read for half an hour every night. It’s a great way to relax after a busy day. For the summer vacation, I plan to read some history books. I think they can help me know more about the past. I’ll also write down my feelings after reading.
Reading is really wonderful, and I’ll keep doing it.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：結合所給話題，介紹閱讀的重要性，可適當增加細節，注意行文邏輯和連貫性。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，點明主題，介紹閱讀的重要性及作用；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從最喜歡的書籍、習慣和暑假計劃三方面展開闡述閱讀的重要性；
第三步，總結全文，書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①plan to計劃
②write down寫下
[高分句型]
I think they can help me know more about the past. (賓語從句)
15． 例文
Jack is my best friend, now I’d like to introduce my best friend and me.
We have several similarities. Both of us are outgoing and friendly, so we can easily make friends. In terms of diet, we eat junk food only once or twice a month as we know it’s unhealthy. Also, we love reading together and helping each other. Blue Moon is our favorite cinema because it has the biggest screens, providing an amazing visual experience.
However, we are different in many ways. Jack is taller and thinner than me. He has a healthy lifestyle, going to bed early and getting up early. Conversely, I often stay up late and rarely exercise. When it comes to hobbies, Jack loves action movies best for the exciting fight scenes. I, on the other hand, like talk shows most since they offer me lots of new ideas and make me think.
In conclusion, though we have differences, our friendship remains strong.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：屬于人物對比介紹類文章，旨在通過描述自己與朋友 Jack 的異同，展現兩人的特點及友誼。
②時態：以一般現在時為主，用于陳述當前兩人穩定的外貌、性格、習慣、興趣愛好等方面的情況。
③提示：給定了明確的相同點和不同點的要點，涵蓋外貌性格、飲食和習慣、興趣愛好等方面。寫作時需嚴格按照要點，適當分段展開，做到語句通順、邏輯連貫，并可合理發揮，使內容更豐富。
[寫作步驟]
第一，開頭引入，直接點明寫作目的是介紹自己和朋友 Jack，簡潔明了，引出下文。
第二部，分別闡述相同點和不同點，包括外貌、性格、飲食習慣、興趣愛好，給人最直觀的形象。
第三部，總結全文，強調盡管兩人存在差異，但友誼依然堅固，升華文章主題，使結構完整。
[亮點詞匯]
①in terms of就……而言，在……方面
②conversely相反地
③on the other hand另一方面
[高分句型]
①Blue Moon is our favorite cinema because it has the biggest screens, providing an amazing visual experience.（原因狀語從句）
②He has a healthy lifestyle, going to bed early and getting up early.（現在分詞短語作伴隨狀語）
③I, on the other hand, like talk shows most since they offer me lots of new ideas and make me think.（since引導原因狀語從句）
16．例文
Ways to Keep Healthy
Health is very important in our lives. Without it, everything else becomes meaningless. There are many ways to keep healthy.
First, we should get enough sleep. A good rest helps our body recover and stay energetic. Second, eating healthy food is important. We should eat more vegetables, fruits, and less junk food. Third, doing exercise regularly can make us stronger and improve our mood.
Besides these, we should also keep a happy mind and stay away from bad habits like smoking. Only in this way can we live a healthy and happy life.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：一般現在時為主；
③提示：寫作要點提示已給出，考試應注意要求中的內容，充實細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開篇點明健康的重要性，引出下文關于保持健康的方法；
第二步，列舉具體的保持健康的方法；
第三步，總結全文，強調通過這些方式可以過上健康快樂的生活。
[亮點詞匯]
①meaningless無意義的
②energetic精力充沛的
③regularly有規律地
④stay away from遠離
[高分句型]
Only in this way can we live a healthy and happy life. (運用部分倒裝結構)
17．例文：
Volunteering
I’m Simon, my classmate John and I are students from No. 2 Middle School, where we have always been encouraged to participate in various social activities. This summer holiday, we plan to do some volunteering work in a children’s home.
I love reading, and my dream is to be a writer. So I’ll read interesting stories to the children there who are thirsty for knowledge and new experiences. John is good at singing and dancing. He wants to be an artist in the future. He will teach the children to sing and dance. Also, we’ll play games with them to bring more fun. Besides, we’ll help clean the rooms to make the children’s home a more comfortable place. I believe we’ll have a great time.
Volunteering not only allows us to do something we love but also gives us a chance to bring joy to those lovely children. It will surely be a meaningful experience.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般將來時”和“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏信息，考生結合自身經歷，適當增加細節。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹自己和同學John的身份，引出暑期去兒童福利院做志愿工作的計劃；
第二步，分別闡述自己和John的愛好及夢想，以及對應在福利院要做的事；
第三步，最后表達對志愿活動的期待，強調志愿活動既能做喜歡的事，又能給孩子帶來快樂，是有意義的經歷。
[亮點詞匯]
①be thirsty for渴望……
②be good at擅長……
③have a great time玩得開心
[高分句型]
①So I’ll read interesting stories to the children there who are thirsty for knowledge and new experiences. (who引導的定語從句)
②I believe we’ll have a great time. (省略that的賓語從句)
18．例文
Dear Tony,
I’d like to introduce my lifestyle to you. First, I eat lots of vegetables and fruit, but sometimes enjoy fast food. I sleep 8 hours every night though I occasionally stay up late. I exercise three times a week by running or playing basketball. Besides, I always brush my teeth twice a day and take showers regularly. In my free time, I read books or listen to music. I think my lifestyle is healthy overall, but needs improvement. I should eat less junk food and go to bed earlier. Also, I plan to exercise more often.
If possible, I want to try new sports like swimming next term. Let’s discuss healthy recipes sometime!
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；
②時態：本文應使用“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：應注意題干給出的要點并適當補充，使文章內容充實。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，借用文章已給開頭，引出主題；
第二步，根據題干的要點，介紹自己喜歡的食品，睡眠狀況、空余時間的安排、個人清潔和運動等方面；
第三步，分享自己的計劃并收尾。
[亮點詞匯]
①lots of很多
②stay up late熬夜
[高分句型]
I think my lifestyle is healthy overall, but needs improvement.（賓語從句）
19．例文
I think healthy habits are very important for us. All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of foods. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏提示，并適當添加細節，突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，首先要多吃水果蔬菜；
第二步，其次早睡早起，不熬夜，保證充足睡眠；
第三步，參加運動，強身健體。
[亮點詞匯]
①be very important for us對我們很重要
②during the night在夜間
③be bad for our health對我們的健康有害
④twice a day 一天兩次
[高分句型]
①Staying up late is bad for our health.（動名詞作主語）
②If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.（if引導的條件狀語從句）
20．例文
How to Stay in a Good Mood
Our moods are like a weather forecast for our hearts. So it is important for us to stay in a good mood. Staying in a good mood helps us do things quickly and face challenges positively. When we are happy, we can think more clearly and solve problems more important ones. When we are under too much pressure or have problems with others, it can make us feel sad.
So, how can we stay in a good mood Exercise is very helpful. It can make us feel tired but happy. Also, getting enough sleep is important. When we are well-rested, we are more likely to be in a good mood. Taking care of our emotions is important for our daily life.
Let’s try to stay happy and healthy! By following these simple ways, we can all enjoy a good mood.
【總體介紹】①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，可適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
【寫作步驟】第一步，開篇點題，點出情緒的重要性以及影響情緒的因素；
第二步，給出保持好情緒的具體方法；
第三步，書寫結語，再次強調好心情耳朵重要性，希望能聽從建議，保持好心態。
【亮點詞匯】①stay in good mood保持好情緒
②face challenges positively積極面對挑戰
③be likely to do sth有可能做某事
④take care of照顧
【高分句型】①When we are under too much pressure or have problems with others, it can make us feel sad. (when引導的時間狀語從句)
②Also, getting enough sleep is important. （動名詞作主語）
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