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2025年高考英語高頻易錯押題卷 應用文寫作
一．書面表達（共20小題）
1．（2024秋 運城期末） 假定你是李華，你的美國好友Chris正在學習中國傳統文化，發郵件向你請教"福"（Fu）字的相關知識。請給他回封郵件，內容包括：
（1）"福"字的含義；
（2）"福"字的使用場合。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80個左右；
（2）請按如下格式在相應位置作答。
Dear Chris，
Glad to know that you want to learn more about traditional Chinese culture，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
2．（2025 云浮模擬） 假定你是李華，外教Ryan打算使用AI技術輔助英語作文批改，并向同學們征詢意見。請你給外教寫一封郵件，內容包括：
（1）你的看法；
（2）你的建議。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80個左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Ryan，
I hope this email finds you well.
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
3．（2025 張家界模擬） 你們學校英語俱樂部打算進行以"My Favourite Book"為題的分享交流活動，請你根據以下要求寫一篇發言稿，內容包括：
（1）介紹這本書；
（2）分享這本書的理由。
注意：
（1）詞數100左右；
（2）可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
（3）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear fellow students，
I feel honored to share with you my favourite book called ______
4．（2025 河源模擬）假定你是李華。為深入了解廣府文化，你校決定開展"走進廣東"主題活動，請寫一封郵件邀請交換生Amy參加此次活動。要點如下：
（1）活動時間；
（2）活動內容。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Amy，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
5．（2024秋 呂梁期末）假定你是校學生會主席李華，你校學生會計劃邀請人工智能專家Smith教授就人工智能（AI）話題做一個報告。請你給他寫一封郵件，內容包括：
（1）發出邀請；
（2）同學們關于人工智能所感興趣的問題；
（3）期待到來并表示感謝。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80詞左右；
（2）可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Smith，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
6．（2024秋 唐山期末）假定你是李華。為了體驗生活，你參加了社區舉辦的"最美勞動者"攝影大賽。請給你的英國筆友John寫封郵件，分享此次經歷。
內容包括：
（1）參賽作品介紹；
（2）參加活動感受。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好；
（3）請在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear John，
How are you？Recently，I participated in a photography competition organized by my community，called "The Most Beautiful Workers".________
I'd love to hear your thoughts on this topic.Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes，
Li Hua
7．（2024秋 潮州期末）假定你是李華，你的外國筆友Tom對中國的名言警句很感興趣。他寫信向你請教"有志者，事竟成"的含義。請結合個人經歷給他回信，談談你對此警句的理解。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答卷的相應位置作答。
Dear Tom，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
8．（2025 湖北模擬） 假定你是李華，準備暑假到英國旅行一周。請給來自英國并有10年導游經驗的外教Kevin寫一封郵件，咨詢相關情況，內容包括：
（1）值得游玩的景點；
（2）旅行中的注意事項。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80個左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。
Dear Kevin，
I'm Li Hua from Class 2.
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
9．（2025 海陵區校級一模）假定你是李華，你的朋友Mark將在元旦期間來你家做客，特發郵件詢問你的假期的一些活動安排，請你回復一封郵件。
內容包括：（1）歡迎來訪；
（2）你的元旦假期活動安排。
注意：（1）寫作詞數應為80個左右；
（2）可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
________
10．（2024秋 淄博期末） 假定你是李華，你們學校上周舉辦了校園英語節，請你給英國好友Paul寫一封郵件分享此次活動，內容包括：
（1）活動內容；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Paul，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
11．（2024秋 武漢期末）假設你是李華，即將赴英國St Andrew's College交換學習一年。得知宿舍有限，需競爭獲得，請你提交一份申請。內容包括：
（1）申請理由；
（2）你的優勢。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Accommodation Office，
I'm Li Hua，________
Yours，
Li Hua
12．（2024秋 江西期末）明天的英語課輪到你作主題發言，請你以"中國神舟19號飛船（Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft）發射成功"為主題寫一篇發言稿，內容包括：
（1）發射時間：2024年10月30日4時27分；
（2）你的感想。
注意：（1）寫作詞數應為80個左右；
（1）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Good morning，everyone，
I'm excited to share with you the successful launch of China's Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft.________
Thank you!
13．（2024秋 遼寧期末）假定你是學生會主席李華，你校將舉辦手工制作（Hands﹣on craft making）比賽。請你給擅長制作的外教Miss Jones寫一封郵件，邀請她擔任評委，內容包括：
（1）比賽信息；
（2）評判內容；
（3）表達期望。
要求：
（1）寫作詞數應為80個左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Miss Jones，
________
Best regards，
Li Hua
14．（2025 江西一模）假定你是李華，得知你的好友Jack成功入選校足球隊。請寫封郵件向他表示祝賀，內容包括：
（1）肯定他的付出；
（2）提議慶祝活動。
注意：（1）寫作詞數應為80個左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Jack，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
15．（2024秋 益陽期末）假如你是李華，為推廣和平與友愛的理念，你校將舉辦一場名為"Music For Peace"的音樂節活動。請你在學校英文社團網站上發布一篇博文進行宣傳。內容包括：
（1）活動宗旨；
（2）活動安排；
（3）你的期待。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Join Us In"Music For Peace"!
________
16．（2024秋 保山期末） 假定你是李華，最近參加了一次虛擬合唱團（virtual choir）活動。你的英國好友Richard得知此事后很感興趣，向你了解相關情況，請給他回一封郵件。內容包括：
（1）活動介紹（時間、地點、內容和方式）；
（2）你的感受。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Richard，
I hope this email finds you well.
______
Yours，
Li Hua
17．（2024秋 長壽區期末） 你是李華，你校將舉辦一場國際文化交流節。請你用英語寫一則通知，向全校學生介紹此次活動的相關信息并邀請他們參加。內容包括：
（1）活動目的：促進不同文化間的理解與交流；
（2）活動時間：下周六9：00﹣17：00；
（3）活動地點：學校操場及教學樓一樓大廳；
（4）活動內容：文化展覽、文化表演、文化講座。
注意：
（1）詞數100左右；
（2）參考詞匯：文化交流節Cultural Exchange Festival促進enhance
18．（2024秋 廣東期末）你班外教Peter課堂上讓你們討論"最有效的學習方法"。請你寫一篇發言稿，內容包括：
（1）方法介紹；
（2）你的評價。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Peter and classmates，
________
Thank you!
19．（2025 濰坊模擬）假設你是李華，你的英國好友Jim準備參加中國文化網舉辦的"Sharing China"春節文化影像展全球作品征集活動，他發來郵件詢問你的建議。請你用英文給他回復，內容包括：
（1）拍攝內容建議；
（2）簡要說明理由。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80個左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Jim，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
20．（2025 福州模擬）假設你是李華，上周你參加了學校舉辦的科技作品展示活動。請你給英國朋友John.寫一封郵件分享這次經歷，內容包括：
（1）你的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear John，
I'd like to share with you an exhibition of sci﹣tech works I took part in last week.________
Yours，
Li Hua
2025年高考英語高頻易錯押題卷 應用文寫作
參考答案與試題解析
一．書面表達（共20小題）
1．（2024秋 運城期末） 假定你是李華，你的美國好友Chris正在學習中國傳統文化，發郵件向你請教"福"（Fu）字的相關知識。請給他回封郵件，內容包括：
（1）"福"字的含義；
（2）"福"字的使用場合。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80個左右；
（2）請按如下格式在相應位置作答。
Dear Chris，
Glad to know that you want to learn more about traditional Chinese culture，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris，
Glad to know that you want to learn more about traditional Chinese culture，and I will introduce the Chinese character "Fu" to you.It is of great significance，which generally means good fortune，happiness，and prosperity.We usually paste the character "Fu" on the front door during the Spring Festival.It can also be seen in homes during special celebrations like weddings or on important festivals.This simple character carries our best wishes for a better life.I hope that this can help you understand the "Fu" character better.Wish you great progress and joy!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：It is of great significance，which generally means good fortune，happiness，and prosperity.
翻譯：它具有重大意義，通常意味著好運、幸福和繁榮。
分析：which引導非限制性定語從句。
高分句型二：I hope that this can help you understand the "Fu" character better.
翻譯：我希望這能幫助你更好的理解"福"字。
分析：that引導賓語從句。
【解答】Dear Chris，
Glad to know that you want to learn more about traditional Chinese culture，and I will introduce the Chinese character "Fu" to you.It is of great significance，which generally means good fortune，happiness，and prosperity.【高分句型一】（"福"字的含義） We usually paste the character "Fu" on the front door during the Spring Festival.It can also be seen in homes during special celebrations like weddings or on important festivals.This simple character carries our best wishes for a better life.（"福"字的使用場合） I hope that this can help you understand the "Fu" character better. 【高分句型二】Wish you great progress and joy!
Yours，
Li Hua
【點評】提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型。
2．（2025 云浮模擬） 假定你是李華，外教Ryan打算使用AI技術輔助英語作文批改，并向同學們征詢意見。請你給外教寫一封郵件，內容包括：
（1）你的看法；
（2）你的建議。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80個左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Ryan，
I hope this email finds you well.
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ryan，
I hope this email finds you well.
Regarding your plan to use AI technology for English composition correction，I believe it's a truly innovative idea.AI can efficiently identify grammatical and spelling errors，freeing teachers to focus more on content and creativity.However，I suggest ensuring the AI's suggestions are not overly mechanical，as it's important to maintain the unique voice of each student.Additionally，periodic human reviews should be conducted to ensure accuracy and fairness.
Finally，I hope the AI can also provide feedback on writing style and structure.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：AI can efficiently identify grammatical and spelling errors，freeing teachers to focus more on content and creativity.
譯文：人工智能可以有效地識別語法和拼寫錯誤，使教師能夠更專注于內容和創造力。
分析：這句話使用了現在分詞短語freeing teachers to focus more on content and creativity作狀語。
高分句型二：However，I suggest ensuring the AI's suggestions are not overly mechanical，as it's important to maintain the unique voice of each student.
譯文：然而，我建議確保人工智能的建議不會過于機械，因為保持每個學生的獨特聲音很重要。
分析：這句話使用了as引導的原因狀語從句。
【解答】Dear Ryan，
I hope this email finds you well.（問候）
Regarding your plan to use AI technology for English composition correction，I believe it's a truly innovative idea.AI can efficiently identify grammatical and spelling errors，freeing teachers to focus more on content and creativity.【高分句型一】（看法）However，I suggest ensuring the AI's suggestions are not overly mechanical，as it's important to maintain the unique voice of each student.【高分句型二】Additionally，periodic human reviews should be conducted to ensure accuracy and fairness.（建議）
Finally，I hope the AI can also provide feedback on writing style and structure.（希望）
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【點評】這是一篇提綱類作文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數，不要太多也不要太少。
3．（2025 張家界模擬） 你們學校英語俱樂部打算進行以"My Favourite Book"為題的分享交流活動，請你根據以下要求寫一篇發言稿，內容包括：
（1）介紹這本書；
（2）分享這本書的理由。
注意：
（1）詞數100左右；
（2）可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
（3）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear fellow students，
I feel honored to share with you my favourite book called ______
【答案】Dear fellow students，
I feel honored to share with you my favourite book called Gone with the wind written by Margaret Mitchell.Scarlett，the heroine，used to live a comfortable life in Twelve Oaks before the outbreak of the American Civil War.Although she experienced a lot of ups and downs，she never gave up hope and courage to carry on with what was left for her.
The last line of the book"After all，tomorrow is another day"has become my motto.No matter when I am short with my parents or feel upset，I reflect on myself，realizing how lucky I am compared with Scarlett.The gutty and gritty tone of the book attracts me in particular.It is Gone with the wind that teaches me gumption，which most of the youth lack today.
I do expect my sharing may inspire you and I am willing to hear your recommendation of the books you love
【分析】高分句型一：Although she experienced a lot of ups and downs，she never gave up hope and courage to carry on with what was left for her.
譯文：盡管她經歷了很多風風雨雨，但她從未放棄希望和勇氣，繼續做剩下的事情。
分析：這句話使用了although引導的讓步狀語從句，what引導的賓語從句。
高分句型二：It is Gone with the wind that teaches me gumption，which most of the youth lack today.
譯文：是《亂世佳人》教會了我勇氣，而這正是當今大多數年輕人所缺乏的。
分析：這句話使用了強調句It is+強調部分+that+其余部分，which引導的非限制性定語從句。
【解答】Dear fellow students，
I feel honored to share with you my favourite book called Gone with the wind written by Margaret Mitchell.Scarlett，the heroine，used to live a comfortable life in Twelve Oaks before the outbreak of the American Civil War.Although she experienced a lot of ups and downs，she never gave up hope and courage to carry on with what was left for her.【高分句型一】（介紹這本書）
The last line of the book"After all，tomorrow is another day"has become my motto.No matter when I am short with my parents or feel upset，I reflect on myself，realizing how lucky I am compared with Scarlett.The gutty and gritty tone of the book attracts me in particular.It is Gone with the wind that teaches me gumption，which most of the youth lack today.【高分句型二】（分享這本書的理由）
I do expect my sharing may inspire you and I am willing to hear your recommendation of the books you love.（希望）
【點評】這是一篇提綱類作文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數，不要太多也不要太少。
4．（2025 河源模擬）假定你是李華。為深入了解廣府文化，你校決定開展"走進廣東"主題活動，請寫一封郵件邀請交換生Amy參加此次活動。要點如下：
（1）活動時間；
（2）活動內容。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Amy，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Amy，
I am Li Hua，brimming with excitement as I extend a warm﹣hearted invitation to you for our school﹣organized event， "Discover Guangdong"，which is scheduled to commence at 9：00 a.m.on June 15th.
This event is bound to be a cultural extravaganza.Initially，we will pay a visit to a local museum，where a wealth of historical artifacts and cultural relics await our exploration，enabling us to gain deep insights into Guangdong's long﹣standing history.Subsequently，a handicraft workshop will provide you with an opportunity to immerse yourself in traditional Cantonese handicrafts，such as the delicate art of paper﹣cutting or the exquisite porcelain painting.To round off the day，we'll relish a sumptuous feast of authentic Cantonese cuisine，with dim sum taking the spotlight.
Your presence would not only add luster to the event but also offer you a precious chance to experience the unique charm of Guangdong.I'm eagerly looking forward to your favorable reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Initially，we will pay a visit to a local museum，where a wealth of historical artifacts and cultural relics await our exploration，enabling us to gain deep insights into Guangdong's long﹣standing history.
譯文：首先，我們將參觀當地的一家博物館，那里有豐富的歷史文物和文物等待我們探索，使我們能夠深入了解廣東悠久的歷史。
分析：這句話使用了where引導的非限制性定語從句。
高分句型二：To round off the day，we'll relish a sumptuous feast of authentic Cantonese cuisine，with dim sum taking the spotlight.
譯文：為了結束這一天，我們將品嘗一頓豐盛的正宗粵菜盛宴，點心將成為焦點。
分析：這句話使用了with復合結構。
【解答】Dear Amy，
I am Li Hua，brimming with excitement as I extend a warm﹣hearted invitation to you for our school﹣organized event， "Discover Guangdong"，which is scheduled to commence at 9：00 a.m.on June 15th.（活動時間）
This event is bound to be a cultural extravaganza.Initially，we will pay a visit to a local museum，where a wealth of historical artifacts and cultural relics await our exploration，enabling us to gain deep insights into Guangdong's long﹣standing history.【高分句型一】Subsequently，a handicraft workshop will provide you with an opportunity to immerse yourself in traditional Cantonese handicrafts，such as the delicate art of paper﹣cutting or the exquisite porcelain painting.To round off the day，we'll relish a sumptuous feast of authentic Cantonese cuisine，with dim sum taking the spotlight.【高分句型二】（活動內容）
Your presence would not only add luster to the event but also offer you a precious chance to experience the unique charm of Guangdong.I'm eagerly looking forward to your favorable reply.（盼望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【點評】這是一篇提綱類作文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數，不要太多也不要太少。
5．（2024秋 呂梁期末）假定你是校學生會主席李華，你校學生會計劃邀請人工智能專家Smith教授就人工智能（AI）話題做一個報告。請你給他寫一封郵件，內容包括：
（1）發出邀請；
（2）同學們關于人工智能所感興趣的問題；
（3）期待到來并表示感謝。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80詞左右；
（2）可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Smith，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Smith，
I'm Li Hua，chairman of the Students' Union of our school.I'm writing to invite you to give us a talk on AI.
AI has been a hot topic these years.What we are really concerned about is as follows.First of all，we are interested in how AI will affect and change our lives.Then，we are wondering whether robots will replace humans in the future.Finally，as younger generations，we are eager to figure out what we should do to face the coming challenges.
We would highly appreciate it if you could give us an earliest reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：What we are really concerned about is as follows.
譯文：我們真正關心的是以下幾點。
分析：這句話使用了what引導的主語從句。
高分句型二：Then，we are wondering whether robots will replace humans in the future.
譯文：然后，我們想知道機器人是否會在未來取代人類。
分析：這句話使用了whether引導的賓語從句。
【解答】Dear Smith，
I'm Li Hua，chairman of the Students' Union of our school.I'm writing to invite you to give us a talk on AI.（發出邀請）
AI has been a hot topic these years.What we are really concerned about is as follows.【高分句型一】First of all，we are interested in how AI will affect and change our lives.Then，we are wondering whether robots will replace humans in the future.【高分句型二】Finally，as younger generations，we are eager to figure out what we should do to face the coming challenges.（同學們關于人工智能所感興趣的問題）
We would highly appreciate it if you could give us an earliest reply.（期待到來并表示感謝）
Yours，
Li Hua
【點評】這是一篇提綱類作文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數，不要太多也不要太少。
6．（2024秋 唐山期末）假定你是李華。為了體驗生活，你參加了社區舉辦的"最美勞動者"攝影大賽。請給你的英國筆友John寫封郵件，分享此次經歷。
內容包括：
（1）參賽作品介紹；
（2）參加活動感受。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）郵件的開頭和結尾已為你寫好；
（3）請在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear John，
How are you？Recently，I participated in a photography competition organized by my community，called "The Most Beautiful Workers".________
I'd love to hear your thoughts on this topic.Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John，
How are you？Recently，I participated in a photography competition organized by my community，called "The Most Beautiful Workers".
My photo was about a street cleaner.It showed him sweeping the streets early in the morning.The sun was coming up，and the light made everything look warm.The cleaner was very focused on his work，cleaning every part of the street.You could see the dirt and leaves he had swept up beside him.
Taking part in this activity made me deeply appreciate the hard work of all laborers.I realized how much they contribute to our daily lives.It was a meaningful experience that inspired me to see beauty in everyday work.
I'd love to hear your thoughts on this topic.Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：The cleaner was very focused on his work，cleaning every part of the street.
譯文：清潔工非常專注于他的工作，打掃街道的每一個地方。
分析：這句話使用了現在分詞短語cleaning every part of the street作狀語。
高分句型二：It was a meaningful experience that inspired me to see beauty in everyday work.
譯文：這是一次有意義的經歷，激勵我在日常工作中看到美。
分析：這句話使用了that引導的限制性定語從句。
【解答】Dear John，
How are you？Recently，I participated in a photography competition organized by my community，called "The Most Beautiful Workers".（話題）
My photo was about a street cleaner.It showed him sweeping the streets early in the morning.The sun was coming up，and the light made everything look warm.The cleaner was very focused on his work，cleaning every part of the street.【高分句型一】You could see the dirt and leaves he had swept up beside him.（參賽作品介紹）
Taking part in this activity made me deeply appreciate the hard work of all laborers.I realized how much they contribute to our daily lives.It was a meaningful experience that inspired me to see beauty in everyday work.【高分句型二】（參加活動感受）
I'd love to hear your thoughts on this topic.Looking forward to your reply.（盼望）
Best wishes，
Li Hua
【點評】這是一篇提綱類作文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數，不要太多也不要太少。
7．（2024秋 潮州期末）假定你是李華，你的外國筆友Tom對中國的名言警句很感興趣。他寫信向你請教"有志者，事竟成"的含義。請結合個人經歷給他回信，談談你對此警句的理解。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答卷的相應位置作答。
Dear Tom，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom，
Glad to hear that you're interested in Chinese old sayings and want to learn about"Where there is a will，there is a way"，I am writing to share my opinion on it.
There was a time when I was faced with a host of difficulties.I was nearly at the edge of giving up when a good friend of mine told me this famous saying.After that，I began to look at things differently，convinced that I could manage to tackle every problem as long as I stuck to my goal.Now，with a never﹣give﹣up mindset，I am brave enough to deal with all the difficulties I encounter.
All in all，only when we insist on what we want to do can we eventually overcome whatever challenges in our life.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：There was a time when I was faced with a host of difficulties.
翻譯：曾經有一段時間，我面臨著許多困難。
分析：運用了when引導的限制性定語從句。
高分句型二：I was nearly at the edge of giving up when a good friend of mine told me this famous saying.
翻譯：當我的一個好朋友告訴我這句名言時，我幾乎要放棄了。
分析：運用了when引導的時間狀語從句。
【解答】Dear Tom，
Glad to hear that you're interested in Chinese old sayings and want to learn about"Where there is a will，there is a way"，I am writing to share my opinion on it.（寫信目的）
There was a time when I was faced with a host of difficulties.【高分句型一】I was nearly at the edge of giving up when a good friend of mine told me this famous saying.【高分句型二】After that，I began to look at things differently，convinced that I could manage to tackle every problem as long as I stuck to my goal.Now，with a never﹣give﹣up mindset，I am brave enough to deal with all the difficulties I encounter.（自己的經歷）
All in all，only when we insist on what we want to do can we eventually overcome whatever challenges in our life.（理解）
Yours，
Li Hua
【點評】提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型。
8．（2025 湖北模擬） 假定你是李華，準備暑假到英國旅行一周。請給來自英國并有10年導游經驗的外教Kevin寫一封郵件，咨詢相關情況，內容包括：
（1）值得游玩的景點；
（2）旅行中的注意事項。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80個左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。
Dear Kevin，
I'm Li Hua from Class 2.
______
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Kevin，
I'm Li Hua from Class 2.I am writing to seek your expert advice on my one﹣week trip to the UK this summer，given your decade﹣long experience as a tour guide.
Firstly，I would like to know about some must﹣visit attractions in the UK.I'm particularly interested in historical landmarks，cultural sites，and stunning natural scenery.It would be wonderful if you could suggest some places that are less crowded but still offer a unique experience.
Secondly，I would appreciate any tips or advice you have for traveling in the UK.This could include information on transportation options，local customs，places to try traditional cuisines，and any safety precautions to keep in mind while exploring.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給有10年導游經驗的外教Kevin寫一封郵件，咨詢相關暑假到英國旅行一周的情況。
高分句型一：It would be wonderful if you could suggest some places that are less crowded but still offer a unique experience.
翻譯：如果你能建議一些不那么擁擠但仍能提供獨特體驗的地方，那就太好了。
分析：運用了that引導的限制性定語從句。
高分句型二：This could include information on transportation options，local customs，places to try traditional cuisines，and any safety precautions to keep in mind while exploring.
翻譯：這可能包括交通選擇、當地習俗、嘗試傳統美食的地方，以及在探索時要記住的任何安全預防措施。
分析：運用了不定式短語作定語以及while引導的時間狀語從句中的省略結構。
【解答】Dear Kevin，
I'm Li Hua from Class 2.I am writing to seek your expert advice on my one﹣week trip to the UK this summer，given your decade﹣long experience as a tour guide.
Firstly，I would like to know about some must﹣visit attractions in the UK.I'm particularly interested in historical landmarks，cultural sites，and stunning natural scenery.It would be wonderful if you could suggest some places that are less crowded but still offer a unique experience.【高分句型一】（值得游玩的景點）
Secondly，I would appreciate any tips or advice you have for traveling in the UK.This could include information on transportation options，local customs，places to try traditional cuisines，and any safety precautions to keep in mind while exploring.【高分句型二】（旅行中的注意事項）
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【點評】提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型。
9．（2025 海陵區校級一模）假定你是李華，你的朋友Mark將在元旦期間來你家做客，特發郵件詢問你的假期的一些活動安排，請你回復一封郵件。
內容包括：（1）歡迎來訪；
（2）你的元旦假期活動安排。
注意：（1）寫作詞數應為80個左右；
（2）可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
________
【答案】Dear Mark，
I am absolutely thrilled to hear that you're coming to visit me during the New Year's Day!A warm welcome awaits you.
On the first day，we'll head to the local folk custom village，which is filled with various traditional handicrafts and performances.There，you can try making some delicate crafts yourself.Subsequently，having a hearty meal at a farmhouse is a must.It is on the second day that we plan to go to the city library，where we can immerse ourselves in the ocean of knowledge.
I'm certain we'll have an amazing time.Looking forward to your arrival!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給朋友Mark回復一封郵件，告知他假期來家做客時的一些活動安排。
高分句型一：On the first day，we'll head to the local folk custom village，which is filled with various traditional handicrafts and performances.
翻譯：第一天，我們將前往當地的民俗村，那里充滿了各種傳統手工藝品和表演。
分析：運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句。
高分句型二：It is on the second day that we plan to go to the city library，where we can immerse ourselves in the ocean of knowledge.
翻譯：第二天我們計劃去市圖書館，在那里我們可以沉浸在知識的海洋中。
分析：運用了強調句型"it+be+被強調部分+that+其它"結構以及where引導的非限制性定語從句。
【解答】Dear Mark，
I am absolutely thrilled to hear that you're coming to visit me during the New Year's Day!A warm welcome awaits you.（歡迎來訪）
On the first day，we'll head to the local folk custom village，which is filled with various traditional handicrafts and performances.【高分句型一】There，you can try making some delicate crafts yourself.Subsequently，having a hearty meal at a farmhouse is a must.It is on the second day that we plan to go to the city library，where we can immerse ourselves in the ocean of knowledge.【高分句型二】（元旦假期活動安排。）
I'm certain we'll have an amazing time.Looking forward to your arrival!（盼望來訪）
Yours，
Li Hua
【點評】提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型。
10．（2024秋 淄博期末） 假定你是李華，你們學校上周舉辦了校園英語節，請你給英國好友Paul寫一封郵件分享此次活動，內容包括：
（1）活動內容；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Paul，
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Paul，
I'm writing to share an the English Festival hosted in our school last week.All my classmates were actively engaged in various activities，ranging from crosswords to English dramas.I had the opportunity to participate in an English speech contest，which was both challenging and rewarding.Additionally，the talk show was popular among the students.
The festival was an unforgettable experience.Not only did it boost my confidence in speaking English，but it also helped me connect with others who share similar interests.Overall，it was a great opportunity to learn and grow.
Do you have such similar events？Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：All my classmates were actively engaged in various activities，ranging from crosswords to English dramas.
翻譯：我所有的同學都積極參與各種活動，從填字游戲到英語戲劇。
分析：本句運用了現在分詞短語ranging from crosswords to English dramas作狀語。
高分句型二：Not only did it boost my confidence in speaking English，but it also helped me connect with others who share similar interests.
翻譯：它不僅增強了我說英語的信心，還幫助我與有相似興趣的人建立了聯系。
分析：本句運用了not only置于句首的部分倒裝結構及who引導的定語從句。
【解答】Dear Paul，
I'm writing to share an the English Festival hosted in our school last week.All my classmates were actively engaged in various activities，ranging from crosswords to English dramas.【高分句型一】（活動內容）I had the opportunity to participate in an English speech contest，which was both challenging and rewarding.Additionally，the talk show was popular among the students.
The festival was an unforgettable experience.Not only did it boost my confidence in speaking English，but it also helped me connect with others who share similar interests.【高分句型二】Overall，it was a great opportunity to learn and grow.（個人感想）
Do you have such similar events？Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【點評】提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型。
11．（2024秋 武漢期末）假設你是李華，即將赴英國St Andrew's College交換學習一年。得知宿舍有限，需競爭獲得，請你提交一份申請。內容包括：
（1）申請理由；
（2）你的優勢。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Accommodation Office，
I'm Li Hua，________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Accommodation Office，
I am Li Hua，an exchange student to join St Andrew's College for a year.I am writing to apply for on﹣campus accommodation.
Living on campus will allow me to fully immerse in the college's academic and social life，improving my study experience.I believe my enthusiasm for group activities and ability to adapt quickly to new environment make me a suitable candidate for on﹣campus living.I am eager to integrate into the new environment and contribute positively to our campus.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.I am excited about the prospect of becoming a student here and eager to hear about the accommodation options available to me.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Living on campus will allow me to fully immerse in the college's academic and social life，improving my study experience.
翻譯：住在校園里將使我能夠完全沉浸在大學的學術和社交生活中，提升我的學習體驗。
分析：Living on campus 動名詞短語做主語，improving my study experience現在分詞短語作狀語。
高分句型二：I believe my enthusiasm for group activities and ability to adapt quickly to new environment make me a suitable candidate for on﹣campus living.
翻譯：我認為我對團體活動的熱情以及快速適應新環境的能力使我成為適合住校的候選人。
分析：my enthusiasm for group activities and ability to adapt quickly to new environment make me a suitable candidate for on﹣campus living是省略that的賓語從句。
【解答】Dear Accommodation Office，
I am Li Hua，an exchange student to join St Andrew's College for a year.I am writing to apply for on﹣campus accommodation.
Living on campus will allow me to fully immerse in the college's academic and social life，improving my study experience.【高分句型一】（申請理由）I believe my enthusiasm for group activities and ability to adapt quickly to new environment make me a suitable candidate for on﹣campus living.【高分句型二】I am eager to integrate into the new environment and contribute positively to our campus.（優勢）
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application.I am excited about the prospect of becoming a student here and eager to hear about the accommodation options available to me.
Yours，
Li Hua
【點評】提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型。
12．（2024秋 江西期末）明天的英語課輪到你作主題發言，請你以"中國神舟19號飛船（Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft）發射成功"為主題寫一篇發言稿，內容包括：
（1）發射時間：2024年10月30日4時27分；
（2）你的感想。
注意：（1）寫作詞數應為80個左右；
（1）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Good morning，everyone，
I'm excited to share with you the successful launch of China's Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft.________
Thank you!
【答案】Good morning，everyone，
I'm excited to share with you the successful launch of China's Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft.It took place on October 30，2024，at 4：27 AM.This achievement marks another significant milestone in China's space exploration efforts.I feel immense pride knowing that our scientists and engineers have worked tirelessly to make this possible.The launch symbolizes our nation's commitment to advancing technology and exploring the unknown.I believe that Shenzhou﹣19 will pave the way for future missions，inspiring young people to dream big and pursue careers in science and space.
Thank you!
【分析】高分句型一：I feel immense pride knowing that our scientists and engineers have worked tirelessly to make this possible.
翻譯：得知我們的科學家和工程師為實現這一目標而不懈努力，我感到無比自豪。
分析：本句運用了現在分詞短語knowing that our scientists and engineers have worked tirelessly to make this possible作狀語及that引導的賓語從句。
高分句型二：I believe that Shenzhou﹣19 will pave the way for future missions，inspiring young people to dream big and pursue careers in science and space.
翻譯：我相信神舟十九號將為未來的任務鋪平道路，激勵年輕人有遠大的夢想，追求科學和太空事業。
分析：本句運用了that引導的賓語從句及現在分詞短語inspiring young people to dream big and pursue careers in science and space作狀語。
【解答】Good morning，everyone，
I'm excited to share with you the successful launch of China's Shenzhou﹣19 spacecraft.（主題）It took place on October 30，2024，at 4：27 AM.（發射時間）This achievement marks another significant milestone in China's space exploration efforts.I feel immense pride knowing that our scientists and engineers have worked tirelessly to make this possible.【高分句型一】The launch symbolizes our nation's commitment to advancing technology and exploring the unknown.I believe that Shenzhou﹣19 will pave the way for future missions，inspiring young people to dream big and pursue careers in science and space.（個人感想）【高分句型二】Thank you!
【點評】提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型。
13．（2024秋 遼寧期末）假定你是學生會主席李華，你校將舉辦手工制作（Hands﹣on craft making）比賽。請你給擅長制作的外教Miss Jones寫一封郵件，邀請她擔任評委，內容包括：
（1）比賽信息；
（2）評判內容；
（3）表達期望。
要求：
（1）寫作詞數應為80個左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Miss Jones，
________
Best regards，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Miss Jones，
I hope this email finds you well.I'm Li Hua，the President of the Student Union.We are organizing a "Hands﹣on Craft Making" competition at our school.Because we know you're expert in hands﹣on craft，we'd like to invite you to join us as a judge.
The event will take place on January 20th in the school auditorium from 2 pm to 5 pm.Participants will showcase their creativity through various craft projects.As a judge，you'll assess the originality，technical skills，and thematic relevance of each entry.
I would appreciate it if you would accept our invitation.
Best regards，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：Because we know you're expert in hands﹣on craft，we'd like to invite you to join us as a judge.
譯文：因為我們知道你是動手制作的專家，我們想邀請你加入我們擔任評委。
分析：這句話使用了because引導的原因狀語從句。
高分句型二：I would appreciate it if you would accept our invitation.
譯文：如果你能接受我們的邀請，我將不勝感激。
分析：這句話使用了appreciate it if...意為"如果......很感激"。
【解答】Dear Miss Jones，
I hope this email finds you well.I'm Li Hua，the President of the Student Union.We are organizing a "Hands﹣on Craft Making" competition at our school.Because we know you're expert in hands﹣on craft，we'd like to invite you to join us as a judge.【高分句型一】（發出邀請）
The event will take place on January 20th in the school auditorium from 2 pm to 5 pm.Participants will showcase their creativity through various craft projects.（比賽信息）As a judge，you'll assess the originality，technical skills，and thematic relevance of each entry.（評判內容）
I would appreciate it if you would accept our invitation.【高分句型二】（表達期望）
Best regards，
Li Hua
【點評】這是一篇提綱類作文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數，不要太多也不要太少。
14．（2025 江西一模）假定你是李華，得知你的好友Jack成功入選校足球隊。請寫封郵件向他表示祝賀，內容包括：
（1）肯定他的付出；
（2）提議慶祝活動。
注意：（1）寫作詞數應為80個左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Jack，
________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack，
I'm writing to offer my warmest congratulations on your successful selection into the school football team!Your hard work and dedication have truly paid off.I've witnessed your countless hours of practice and unwavering determination，which have now led to this well﹣deserved achievement.
To celebrate this wonderful occasion，I am thinking that we can have a small gathering at my place this weekend.If the weather permits，we can even have a barbecue in the backyard.We'll invite some mutual friends，and I'm sure it'll be a night filled with laughter and joy as we share in your success.
Once again，congratulations!I'm really proud of you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。題目要求學生以李華的身份，給成功入選校足球隊的好友Jack寫封郵件，向他表示祝賀，需首先肯定他的付出，再提議為他舉辦慶祝活動。
高分句型一：I've witnessed your countless hours of practice and unwavering determination，which have now led to this well﹣deserved achievement.
翻譯：我見證了你無數個小時的練習和堅定不移的決心，這些都讓你獲得了當之無愧的成就。
分析：運用了which引導非限制性定語從句。
高分句型二：To celebrate this wonderful occasion，I am thinking that we can have a small gathering at my place this weekend.
翻譯：為了慶祝這個美好的時刻，我想這個周末我們可以在我家舉行一個小型聚會。
分析：運用了不定式To celebrate this wonderful occasion作狀語、that引導賓語從句。
【解答】Dear Jack，
I'm writing to offer my warmest congratulations on your successful selection into the school football team!Your hard work and dedication have truly paid off.I've witnessed your countless hours of practice and unwavering determination，which have now led to this well﹣deserved achievement.【高分句型一】（肯定他的付出）
To celebrate this wonderful occasion，I am thinking that we can have a small gathering at my place this weekend.【高分句型二】If the weather permits，we can even have a barbecue in the backyard.We'll invite some mutual friends，and I'm sure it'll be a night filled with laughter and joy as we share in your success.（提議慶祝活動）
Once again，congratulations!I'm really proud of you.
Yours，
Li Hua
【點評】提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型。
15．（2024秋 益陽期末）假如你是李華，為推廣和平與友愛的理念，你校將舉辦一場名為"Music For Peace"的音樂節活動。請你在學校英文社團網站上發布一篇博文進行宣傳。內容包括：
（1）活動宗旨；
（2）活動安排；
（3）你的期待。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Join Us In"Music For Peace"!
________
【答案】
Join Us In "Music For Peace"!
Our school is organizing a remarkable activity called "Music For Peace"，aimed at promoting the values of peace and friendship among us all.The essence is to bring our community together through the universal language of music，fostering a spirit of friendship and harmony.
The activity will be held in our school's hall from 2 pm to 6 pm on 12th February，which will feature a variety of performances，including solo singers，bands，and orchestras，all coming together to create a symphony of peace.There will also be interactive workshops where you can learn about different musical cultures and their contributions to peace.
As a volunteer，I sincerely hope each and every one of you will be a part of this joyous activity.Your participation will contribute to a memorable experience that expresses our collective desire for a peaceful world.
【分析】高分句型一：The essence is to bring our community together through the universal language of music，fostering a spirit of friendship and harmony.
譯文：其本質是通過音樂的通用語言將我們的社區聚集在一起，培養友誼與和諧的精神。
分析：這句話使用了現在分詞短語fostering a spirit of friendship and harmony作狀語。
高分句型二：There will also be interactive workshops where you can learn about different musical cultures and their contributions to peace.
譯文：還將舉辦互動研討會，您可以在那里了解不同的音樂文化及其對和平的貢獻。
分析：這句話使用了where引導的限制性定語從句。
【解答】
Join Us In "Music For Peace"!
Our school is organizing a remarkable activity called "Music For Peace"，aimed at promoting the values of peace and friendship among us all.The essence is to bring our community together through the universal language of music，fostering a spirit of friendship and harmony.【高分句型一】（活動宗旨）
The activity will be held in our school's hall from 2 pm to 6 pm on 12th February，which will feature a variety of performances，including solo singers，bands，and orchestras，all coming together to create a symphony of peace.There will also be interactive workshops where you can learn about different musical cultures and their contributions to peace.【高分句型二】（活動安排）
As a volunteer，I sincerely hope each and every one of you will be a part of this joyous activity.Your participation will contribute to a memorable experience that expresses our collective desire for a peaceful world.（期望）
【點評】這是一篇提綱類作文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數，不要太多也不要太少。
16．（2024秋 保山期末） 假定你是李華，最近參加了一次虛擬合唱團（virtual choir）活動。你的英國好友Richard得知此事后很感興趣，向你了解相關情況，請給他回一封郵件。內容包括：
（1）活動介紹（時間、地點、內容和方式）；
（2）你的感受。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Richard，
I hope this email finds you well.
______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Richard，
I hope this email finds you well.Knowing that you are interested in the virtual choir event I participated in，I'd like to share some details with you.
Organized by a local choir association，the event took place at 7 p.m.last Saturday online and more than 50 people attended it.During one and a half hours，following the conductor's cues on screen，we sang two classic songs and one original piece composed by one member.
I had a wonderful time.Although we were not physically together，it's amazing to hear how our voices blended together.This event brought me joy and helped me forget about the stress of daily life.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：During one and a half hours，following the conductor's cues on screen，we sang two classic songs and one original piece composed by one member.
譯文：在一個半小時的時間里，我們按照屏幕上指揮的提示，演唱了兩首經典歌曲和一首由一名成員創作的原創作品。
分析：這句話使用了現在分詞短語following the conductor's cues on screen作狀語，過去分詞短語composed by one member作定語。
高分句型二：Although we were not physically together，it's amazing to hear how our voices blended together.
譯文：雖然我們沒有在一起，但聽到我們的聲音是如何融合在一起的，真是太棒了。
分析：這句話使用了although引導的讓步狀語從句，how引導的賓語從句。
【解答】Dear Richard，
I hope this email finds you well.Knowing that you are interested in the virtual choir event I participated in，I'd like to share some details with you.（寫信目的）
Organized by a local choir association，the event took place at 7 p.m.last Saturday online and more than 50 people attended it.During one and a half hours，following the conductor's cues on screen，we sang two classic songs and one original piece composed by one member.【高分句型一】（活動介紹）
I had a wonderful time.Although we were not physically together，it's amazing to hear how our voices blended together.【高分句型二】This event brought me joy and helped me forget about the stress of daily life.（感受）
Best wishes!（希望）
Yours，
Li Hua
【點評】這是一篇提綱類作文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數，不要太多也不要太少。
17．（2024秋 長壽區期末） 你是李華，你校將舉辦一場國際文化交流節。請你用英語寫一則通知，向全校學生介紹此次活動的相關信息并邀請他們參加。內容包括：
（1）活動目的：促進不同文化間的理解與交流；
（2）活動時間：下周六9：00﹣17：00；
（3）活動地點：學校操場及教學樓一樓大廳；
（4）活動內容：文化展覽、文化表演、文化講座。
注意：
（1）詞數100左右；
（2）參考詞匯：文化交流節Cultural Exchange Festival促進enhance
【答案】
Notice
Dear fellow students，
Our school will host an International Cultural Exchange Festival，whose aim is to enhance understanding and exchange among different cultures.
It will be held from 9 a.m.to 5 p.m.next Saturday.The location is the school playground and the first﹣floor hall of the teaching building.There will be all kinds of activities.A cultural exhibition will show the traditional clothes，foods and handicrafts from different countries.Cultural performances like dances，music and plays will also be on display.And foreign teachers will give cultural lectures about different countries' customs.
I sincerely hope that you can come and join us.It will be a great chance to experience our school culture.
The School Students' Union
【分析】高分句型一：Our school will host an International Cultural Exchange Festival，whose aim is to enhance understanding and exchange among different cultures.
譯文：我們學校將舉辦一個國際文化交流節，其目的是增進不同文化之間的理解和交流。
分析：這句話使用了whose引導的非限制性定語從句。
高分句型二：I sincerely hope that you can come and join us.
譯文：我真誠地希望你能來加入我們。
分析：這句話使用了that引導的賓語從句。
【解答】
Notice
Dear fellow students，
Our school will host an International Cultural Exchange Festival，whose aim is to enhance understanding and exchange among different cultures.【高分句型一】（活動目的：促進不同文化間的理解與交流）
It will be held from 9 a.m.to 5 p.m.next Saturday.（活動時間：下周六9：00﹣17：00）The location is the school playground and the first﹣floor hall of the teaching building.（活動地點：學校操場及教學樓一樓大廳）There will be all kinds of activities.A cultural exhibition will show the traditional clothes，foods and handicrafts from different countries.Cultural performances like dances，music and plays will also be on display.And foreign teachers will give cultural lectures about different countries' customs.（活動內容：文化展覽、文化表演、文化講座）
I sincerely hope that you can come and join us.【高分句型二】It will be a great chance to experience our school culture.（希望）
The School Students' Union
【點評】這是一篇提綱類作文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數，不要太多也不要太少。
18．（2024秋 廣東期末）你班外教Peter課堂上讓你們討論"最有效的學習方法"。請你寫一篇發言稿，內容包括：
（1）方法介紹；
（2）你的評價。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Peter and classmates，
________
Thank you!
【答案】Dear Peter and classmates，
I think taking notes is the most effective learning method.While listening in class，we write down key points，important formulas and explanations.It helps us focus and review later.It enables us to have a clear record of what we' ve learned and easily review the details again.
I feel this method is like building a knowledge ware﹣house.It stores what we learn and makes it convenient for us to refer back to.It has greatly improved my learning efficiency and understanding of knowledge.It gives me a sense of accomplishment and confidence in my study.
Thank you!
【分析】高分句型一：While listening in class，we write down key points，important formulas and explanations.
譯文：在課堂上聽的時候，我們寫下關鍵點、重要公式和解釋。
分析：這句話使用了while引導的時間狀語從句的省略句。
高分句型二：It enables us to have a clear record of what we've learned and easily review the details again.
譯文：它使我們能夠清楚地記錄我們所學到的知識，并輕松地再次復習細節。
分析：這句話使用了what引導的賓語從句。
【解答】Dear Peter and classmates，
I think taking notes is the most effective learning method.While listening in class，we write down key points，important formulas and explanations.【高分句型一】It helps us focus and review later.It enables us to have a clear record of what we've learned and easily review the details again.【高分句型二】（方法介紹）
I feel this method is like building a knowledge ware﹣house.It stores what we learn and makes it convenient for us to refer back to.It has greatly improved my learning efficiency and understanding of knowledge.It gives me a sense of accomplishment and confidence in my study.（評價）
Thank you!（感謝）
【點評】這是一篇提綱類作文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數，不要太多也不要太少。
19．（2025 濰坊模擬）假設你是李華，你的英國好友Jim準備參加中國文化網舉辦的"Sharing China"春節文化影像展全球作品征集活動，他發來郵件詢問你的建議。請你用英文給他回復，內容包括：
（1）拍攝內容建議；
（2）簡要說明理由。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80個左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Jim，
_______
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim，
I'm thrilled to hear that you're going to enter the Spring Festival Image Exhibition.I would like to give some advice.
It's a good idea to take pictures of dragon and lion dances in Chinatown.These dances，performed to drive away evil spirits and welcome in prosperous times，offer a glimpse into the festive atmosphere of Spring Festival.Alternatively，you can consider capturing a scene of family members making jiaozi together.Nothing is better at displaying the essence of Spring Festival — family reunions.I'm confident that these pictures will showcase how well Chinese culture has been embraced and spread overseas.
Hope you can get some inspiration!Feel free to ask me if you need further help.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：I'm confident that these pictures will showcase how well Chinese culture has been embraced and spread overseas.
翻譯：我相信這些照片將展示中國文化在海外被接受和傳播的程度。
分析：本句運用了that引導的賓語從句和how引導的賓語從句。
高分句型二：Feel free to ask me if you need further help.
翻譯：如果你需要進一步的幫助，盡管問我。
分析：本句運用了if引導的條件狀語從句。
【解答】Dear Jim，
I'm thrilled to hear that you're going to enter the Spring Festival Image Exhibition.I would like to give some advice.（開篇點題）
It's a good idea to take pictures of dragon and lion dances in Chinatown.These dances，performed to drive away evil spirits and welcome in prosperous times，offer a glimpse into the festive atmosphere of Spring Festival.Alternatively，you can consider capturing a scene of family members making jiaozi together.Nothing is better at displaying the essence of Spring Festival — family reunions.I'm confident that these pictures will showcase how well Chinese culture has been embraced and spread overseas.【高分句型一】（拍攝內容建議以及理由）
Hope you can get some inspiration!Feel free to ask me if you need further help.【高分句型二】（表達希望并且愿意提供幫助）
Yours，
Li Hua
【點評】寫作步驟：
第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時態、中心人稱和內容要點，避免填表式或履歷表式表達。
第二步：擬定提綱；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過渡，完美結尾。
第三步：遣詞造句，套用句型，上下銜接，地道表達，行文成篇。
20．（2025 福州模擬）假設你是李華，上周你參加了學校舉辦的科技作品展示活動。請你給英國朋友John.寫一封郵件分享這次經歷，內容包括：
（1）你的作品；
（2）你的感想。
注意：
（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；
（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear John，
I'd like to share with you an exhibition of sci﹣tech works I took part in last week.________
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear John，
I'd like to share with you an exhibition of sci﹣tech works I took part in last week.
My project was an intelligent robot that could recognize voice commands and help with daily tasks.It was a thrilling experience to see my creation among so many innovative works.I felt incredibly proud of what I had achieved，and it inspired me to delve deeper into the world of technology.The event was a great platform for learning and exchange，broadening my horizons and igniting my passion for sci﹣tech.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】高分句型一：My project was an intelligent robot that could recognize voice commands and help with daily tasks.
翻譯：我的項目是一個智能機器人，可以識別語音命令并幫助完成日常任務。
分析：本句使用了that引導的限制性定語從句。
高分句型二：I felt incredibly proud of what I had achieved，and it inspired me to delve deeper into the world of technology.
翻譯：我為自己所取得的成就感到無比自豪，這激勵我更深入地探索技術世界。
分析：本句使用了what引導的賓語從句。
【解答】Dear John，
I'd like to share with you an exhibition of sci﹣tech works I took part in last week.
My project was an intelligent robot that could recognize voice commands and help with daily tasks.【高分句型一】It was a thrilling experience to see my creation among so many innovative works.（自己的作品）I felt incredibly proud of what I had achieved，and it inspired me to delve deeper into the world of technology.【高分句型二】The event was a great platform for learning and exchange，broadening my horizons and igniting my passion for sci﹣tech.（感想）
Yours，
Li Hua
【點評】提綱作文在寫作時要注意內容是否包含了所有要點。寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型。
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