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2025年高考英語(yǔ)高頻易錯(cuò)押題卷 讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)
一．書(shū)面表達(dá)（共20小題）
1．（2025 云浮模擬） Susan had a secret：she loved robots.She had helped her dad in his workshop and knew a lot about motors，but her friends didn't know this.
One day，she heard Alex and Jacob talking about their robot，Robbie.They were preparing for a big competition but Robbie wasn't working properly.Susan was surprised by their courage，as they always seemed unpopular among the boys.She felt bad for them and wanted to help.
On the school bus home，Susan sat behind Alex and Jacob，who were still trying to fix their robot."This is impossible!The legs move before you press the switch and stop after you press the switch!"Alex said，looking at Robbie's legs，which were not moving right."The competition is only eight days away!"Jacob looked sad.He thought they were going to lose.
"Umm，how did you connect the wires from the switch？"Susan asked quietly over their shoulders.Alex turned and gave her a cautious look.Susan smiled and asked，"Did you connect the NO wire or the NC wire to the motor？"The boys stared at her as if she had just landed from Mars.
Susan gently took the robot and pointed out the wire connected to the motor."Here's the problem!".She explained that it was the NC wire.It means the circuit（電路）is Normally Closed.She then pulled a loose wire out of the robot and explained that it was the NO wire，which means Normally Open."If you connect this wire instead，Robbie will walk when you press the switch." Susan handed the robot back to Alex，who was staring at her with his mouth open.
"Change the wires and see，"she said before getting off the bus.Ten minutes later，her phone rang.It was Jacob： "Your idea worked，and we're wondering if you could come over and help improve our Robbie." Susan smiled.She knew she had made the right choice.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
After dinner，Susan walked cheerfully to Jacob's house.______
Finally，the competition day came，and the new team was ready.______
2．（2024秋 唐山期末）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
Today was Meatloaf Monday.Again，like every Monday.My mom knew how to make seven different meals，one for each day of the week.She kept all seven recipes in a pink folder，each one labeled with a day of the week.And that was our meal plan.
I stared at the dull mass my mom placed next to my corn. "I'm not really hungry，" I said，pushing my food back and forth on my plate. "Me neither，" said the twins.My mom sighed，looking disappointed.
"Malia，" she said， "you're eleven.You should be setting an example for your brother and sister.Now please，just pick up your forks and eat." Normally，I would have.But today I was feeling mean. "All of it tastes awful，" I said.My mom's eyes flashed.But her words remained calm. "Malia，" she said. "It's OK if you don't like my cooking.But it's not OK to be rude."
The next day I was sitting in our school's kitchen classroom，thinking about what had happened the day before when Mr.Bruin，our teacher，interrupted. "I've got exciting news，" he said.Exciting news？The class looked expectantly at Mr.Bruin. "To finish off our unit on kitchen skills，we're having a competition.And the first﹣place prize is the newest book in the Cave of the Dragons series，" said Mr.Bruin，holding up a copy for everyone to see.The class erupted into cheers.
At break times，all anyone could talk about was the upcoming cooking competition. "I'm totally going to win!" "My dad's the best cook ever.I've got talent in my genes （基因）!"
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
I thought about my genes，but I still wanted to participate in this competition.________
On the way home after failing the competition，I thought of my mum's meatloaf.________
3．（2024秋 呂梁期末） Lucy and her friend Jack loved being at school every day because they both really enjoyed music lessons.Lucy began playing two instruments，the piano and the violin，but she enjoyed singing more.She dreamed of being a pop star like Alex Pepper one day.Jack had a guitar and played pop and rock music very well.He wanted to be the coolest guitar player in the world.
One day，their music teacher，Mr.Brown，said to the class， "We're going to have a music competition here at school next Friday.If you want to enter，you must sing or play a song on the school stage.Alex Pepper will be here that day for his concert at City Stadium，so I wrote to his manager and asked him to come and give you some guidance.He's going to decide the best performer and invite him or her to his concert."
Lucy and Jack determined to take part in the competition as a team.They chose a song called I'll help you!They practiced on the playground in their spare time.Lucy made such great progress that Jack was deeply absorbed in her singing and often said admirably， "How sweet your voice is!"While they practiced，the branches of the trees around the playground were swaying（搖擺） in the wind as if they were enjoying their performance.
On the afternoon of the competition，all the students were waiting in the school hall for Alex Pepper to arrive.When he walked in with Mr.Brown，everyone clapped.Alex smiled and waved and then he and Mr.Brown sat down on special seats in front of the school stage.
Then the competition started.Lots of other students sang before Jack and Lucy.An older girl named Mary sang very well.Some students shouted"More!More!"when she finished."She's going to win，"thought Lucy.Soon Mr.Brown pointed to Jack and Lucy and called out that it was their turn.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph 1：
Lucy began to tremble unknowingly when she stood in the middle of the stage.________
Paragraph 2：
The big moment came.________
4．（2024秋 潮州期末）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整 的短文。
Jayce began noticing when he was in kindergarten that he looked different from his classmates.They had two hands while he had one.Due to their young age，Jayce was encouraged that he was just like an angel with one wing folded to prepare for something.
It started when one boy laughed at him.From that day，5﹣year﹣old Jayce turned sad.He returned home with questions. "Why am I different？Why me？Why？" He cried to ask his mother，Lewis.Seeing Jayce was mad at God for making him that way，the poor mother felt it a huge dagger（匕首）to her heart.What made her more sorrowfull was that she didn't know what to do at that point and how to provide answers to her son's questions which she could never find out herself.The white lie broke just like bubbles（氣泡）that day.
A few weeks later，Lewis turned on the TV to a news story，where she was shocked to find out the answer.It was Trashaun，an eighth grade student，that showed positive energy from his head to his toe.The 14﹣year﹣old sunny boy performed his slam dunks（大灌籃）on the TV，and had been a hit on the Internet.However，like Jayce，he had missed most of his left arm since his childhood.Lewis called her son Jayce in.The poor little boy got spellbound （著迷的），watching dunk after dunk.
Watching Trashaun was an inspiring moment for Jayce.He saw Trashaun as a tough role model who had a seemingly similar born disability but led a brilliant life.Little did Lewis know that a family friend had already contacted Trashaun，asking him to meet with Jayce to rebuild his confidence.
注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Para.1 The day was not spent drowning in self ﹣ pity but for fun.______.
Para.2 Staring at the shirt he sent Jayce，Trashaun began to talk about their left arms.______.
5．（2025 湖北模擬） Ally and I first met at a local riding club，where we were both eager beginners，learning the basics b f horseback riding.Our friendship quickly developed as we discovered our shared passion for horses and the excitement of riding a horse across open fields.We spent countless hours together，talking about everything under the sun as we watched the horses playing happily and lively.
Ally was very passionate about riding，and it was a joy to share that enthusiasm with her.However，being someone who set high standards for myself and those I cared about，I sometimes found myself pushing her to improve her skills，even if it meant being a bit demanding.
One sunny afternoon，during a particularly challenging riding exercise，I suggested a technique that involved a tight turn and a quick jump over a low fence.
"That's too risky， "Ally protested，biting her lips in concern."I'm not ready for that yet."
"Come on，Ally， "I urged，tapping my foot impatiently."You've got to push yourself if you want to get better."
Our voices rose，and soon we were locked in a heated discussion，and even our horses sensed the tension and became restless.Finally，we both accepted that we had different points of view and decided to leave it at that.But the leftover tension caused a slight but noticeable gap between us.
One evening after that argument，as I was helping my parents close up the store，my phone rang.It was Ally.I picked up the phone，my heart still heavy from our earlier disagreement.
"Hey， "she began，her voice full of hope."I was thinking we could try that technique again.I feel like I'm ready now."
I shook my head even though she couldn't see me."I don't think that's a good idea，'I replied，my tone firm.
She paused，and I could almost hear her disappointment."Okay，"she said softly."I'll see you then."
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
The next afternoon，I received a call from Ally's mother.______
I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast（石膏） on her leg._______
6．（2024秋 淄博期末） Outside the first few stars were beginning to appear.Dadu climbed on his bicycle and as my friend Aslam and I jogged along beside him，he said， "Come on，boys，can't you keep up with an old man？" I wished I had been at home，studying for that exam tomorrow...But Dadu was counting on me.We needed the money.He worked hard so I could stay in school although he once told me that he never liked the work.As we crossed the train tracks，two policemen passed by.
We melted silently into the shadows of the forest.Dadu switched on his torch.The flash of light swept the trees，illuminating enormous spider webs stretched between tree branches like soft nets.
"A den（獸窩） is near，so you both stay here and watch.I'm going further on to another den." Dadu handed Aslam an old cardboard box. "Remember，the traders won't pay for an empty box.I am counting on you，boys." Dadu left.
"This makes me frightened，" Aslam said， "if we get caught out there hunting for a pangolin （穿山甲），we could go to prison!"
The moon climbed higher into the sky... "Oy!What's that noise？" Aslam shouted.
My heart sank.A pangolin.For a while I held my breath，watching the pangolin sweep dry leaves with its flat，brown﹣gray tail.Its tiny eyes shined.With long claws（爪子），it dug through a pile of dirt.And then in the moonlight，we saw it.
Aslam picked up the box. "Get it，Rahim!Then let's call your grandpa and get out of here!"
"I can't." My voice sounded as quiet as a flower unfolding its petals. "You have to，" Aslam said. "Your grandpa said you have to be a man，remember？" "I know，I know!" I was almost shouting.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Holding the pangolin，I could feel its heart beating.______
We reached home with an empty box.______
7．（2024秋 遼寧期末）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
The previous day，my friend Joey and I had set out to slip in an overnight while the late summer Oregon weather was at its finest.Our first choice for a campsite on Mt.Defiance was crowded，so we redirected to nearby Bear Lake，a smaller，less popular location with only one established site.But when we reached the lake，we were disappointed.So we decided to leave our packs on the trail，go separate ways，and search out a prettier，more lonely spot.Of course，it wasn't smart to leave our packs﹣map，compass，headlamp，water bottle，everything﹣behind，but who hasn't done something like it before？
Almost as soon as I left the trail，I got turned around in the thick forest at dusk.I should have called out to Joey，but I didn't believe I could really be lost.Instead，I walked to a high point to relocate myself.
As the last of the light faded，I beat a path back towards the trail.I was scanning for our packs when I stepped right off of a high rock and fell 50 feet into a narrow canyon.I heard a snapping sound as I landed legs﹣first on a pile of rocks，and in the brief moment before I passed out from the pain，I remember one thing：puzzlement.
Over the following two days，I endured unimaginable pain，using every possible means to survive.I ate various berries，avoiding white berries and seeking group﹣style berries like blackberries and raspberries.I tried eating insects and caterpillars，though these attempts were mostly unsuccessful.As darkness fell quickly in the valley，I piled dry grass over my body to stay warm when temperatures dropped to 40 F.I used pieces of clothing to keep my cut clean.
Meanwhile，when Joey realized I was missing the next morning，he sprang into action.He first checked our signaling devices and extra supplies carefully，knowing their importance.He then retraced our steps as best he could，looking for any sign of me.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Unable to find me on his own，he made the crucial decision to seek help.________
On the third morning，I woke up to the sound of a helicopter.________
8．（2024秋 廣東期末） In Gangneung Town，South Korea，lived 70﹣year﹣old Park Jun﹣bo.His wife passed away a year ago，and he had been relying on his adopted dog，Bobby，for company.
One day，an unexpected fire broke out and burned their house to ashes.Park Jun﹣bo was rescued，together with his wallet and his favorite hat，but he was nearly injured.He was quickly sent to the hospital.He was heartbroken，believing that Bobby had been killed in the fire.He would rather have Bobby with him than his personal belongings.
However，Bobby was still alive，though with an injured leg.A journalist，who was covering the story of the fire incident，happened to pass by the ruins of Park Jun﹣bo's house.He noticed Bobby walking around the remains slowly and sadly.It would stop at certain spots，as if recalling the times it had spent with Park Jun﹣bo there.It then sat down，its eyes fixed on the path leading to the house，patiently waiting.Every time someone approached，Bobby would stand up，barking to warn them off，as if this place was the last connection it had with its beloved master and it had to protect it at all costs.The journalist saw the dog there every day when he passed by.He was deeply touched and recorded a video of Bobby.
The journalist managed to find Park Jun﹣bo in the hospital and showed him the video.Seeing Bobby still alive，Park Jun﹣bo burst into tears.But due to his poor physical condition，he couldn't leave the hospital.He requested the journalist to help Bobby.The journalist recorded Park Jun﹣bo's voice and placed the recording in a cage （籠子） he bought.Then，he put the cage beside the ruins.When Bobby heard Park Jun﹣bo's voice，it walked around the cage for a long time and finally entered the cage to listen to the voice.Thus，the journalist successfully took Bobby to the pet hospital.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
But two days passed in the pet hospital，and Bobby refused to eat.______
Bobby smelled Park Jun﹣bo's personal belongings and saw him in the video.______
9．（2025 福州模擬）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
There was a time in my life when I enjoyed violin very much.But when it came to performing in front of other people，I always became nervous and got discouraged frequently with my inability to play as well as I could when practicing alone.The fear of making mistakes made my hand tremble，overshadowing the joy I found in music.I worried that a single wrong note would break the connection I hoped to create with my listeners.
Determined to overcome this fear，I joined my high school orchestra （管弦樂(lè)隊(duì)） as a freshmen.At our first class，the conductor announced that we would have the opportunity to perform in San Antonio，and everyone was excited about the trip.
A few weeks before the actual trip，one of my friends sent me a video of Joshua Bell，a well﹣known violinist，performing at a subway station.I was particularly fascinated by one piece that he played for the passersby.And he earned＄32.17 for that piece.
I was deeply moved by the emotional richness and complexity of the piece，and I felt a strong desire to express its beauty.I imagined myself performing it confidently，just like Bell.I started practicing it like crazy.However，the difficulty of the piece and the constant repetitions and adjustments wore me out to the point where I almost considered just giving up.But it was a worthy challenge and I thought I could master it，with my unique style.
Several weeks later，our orchestra group were staying at a hotel in San Antonio.As we were hanging out，we found a beautiful courtyard just in front of the hotel.The friend who sent me the video and I were talking about how Joshua Bell's performance at the subway station went viral on the social media.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Suddenly，he suggested that I play for the hotel customers in the courtyard.________
I tried not to mind the mistakes halfway through the performance as before.________
10．（2024秋 東湖區(qū)校級(jí)期末）I remember the hot summer when my friends and I discovered ice cream sandwiches at the corner store.They were ten cents apiece，a lot of money back then.I don't remember how we came to buy one and taste it，but we were mad after that.Of course，none of us had any money.Whether we rode our bikes，or played ball，or sat and played cards，we talked and dreamed about those soft，creamy sandwiches.
My dad worked nights，coming home to join us for breakfast，and then sleeping till late afternoon.When he came home one morning，I heard the jingle （叮當(dāng)聲） of change in his pants and something ugly slowly came into my mind.That change was just what we needed，what I had to have.All day long I kept coming into the house and listening at his door.When I heard his sleeping sounds，I cracked the door.And there hanging at the foot of the bed were those pants.I slipped in and took a handful of change.It was enough for my friends and me to buy an ice cream sandwich，which we ate like greedy pigs.And I became a hero to my band of friends.
That went on every day for about two weeks.I had gotten good at slipping in and slipping out，and then ran to my friends and we headed to the store.
One day there was no change in dad's pocket so I felt for his wallet，hesitated a moment，and then took out two whole dollars.I had been okay with taking the change，but those dollars made my face hot.Even before we began enjoying sandwiches，my stomach felt sick.The importance and joy I had felt buying for my friends was gone.If dad knew what I had done，he'd kill me.
注意：（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
（2）開(kāi)頭已給出。
Paragraph 1：
Early that afternoon，I hid myself in our basement，crying.
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Paragraph 2：
In a moment I would never forget，he said， "Son，I've known since the first day you took the money."
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11．（2024秋 贛州期末） The sun was setting，giving a warm light over the neighborhood as Ethan walked home from school.The air was fresh with the sweet smell of flowers，and the distant sound of cars brought a sense of calm.His backpack，full of books and dreams，swung with each step，marking the end of another school day.
Spotting a shiny object on the roadside，Ethan bent down and picked up a stylish new smartphone.It looked almost untouched，and his heart raced as he realized how valuable it was.For a moment，he imagined the happiness it would bring to his tech﹣loving little brother or how it could ease his parents' financial load.But a quiet voice within urged him："Do the right thing."The smartphone，once a lucky find，now felt like a test of his integrity.
With determination，Ethan decided to find the phone's owner.He searched for any contact information or recent calls，his fingers carefully tapping the screen.He felt a sense of duty—this small act would speak volumes about who he was.Taking a deep breath，he dialed a number，his hand shaking slightly with a mix of nerves and the weight of doing the right thing.The phone rang，and with each ring，his resolve grew stronger.When Mr.Thompson finally answered，Ethan's voice，though young，was firm as he explained the situation.
Mr.Thompson was overjoyed，his gratitude evident in his voice.They arranged to meet at the local café，a place where they could both feel comfortable and at ease.As Ethan hung up，a smile spread across his face.The walk to the coffee shop was a journey of reflection.Ethan passed by familiar scenes，neighbors tending their gardens，and children playing in the fading light.Each scene was a glimpse of life，simple yet profound，reminding him of the community he was part of.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
At the coffee shop，the meeting was brief but heartfelt.________
As Ethan walked home，he felt lighter，as if a great weight had been lifted from his shoulders.________
12．（2024秋 辛集市期末） I sat in my parents' car.Mom had insisted I go with her to pick up Dad from work.Across from Dad's office is a bike store.That was the day my eleven﹣year﹣old eyes first saw the purple BMX Mongoose bike.From that day on，all I could think about was that bike.I even drew pictures of the bike in class.Every evening afterward，at five thirty，I eagerly went along with Mom to get Dad.
And every day I told my parents， "I want that bike!" But they disagreed and replied that I had already had a perfectly good bike at home.I'd argue it was old and ugly，thinking that my happiness depended on that purple bike.Days later，I found the store had sold that bike.I knew I'd never be happy again.
A week later，returning home from school，I tripped over something.Lying in the weeds near a river and some wooded lots，was a bike — the exact bike from the store. "Hey，whose bike is this？" I shouted，scanning the area.No one replied，and there was no one in sight.Maybe its owner didn't want it any longer.I couldn't leave it lying in the weeds.So I took it home and hid it behind the garage.Every day after school，I sat there，admiring it.But I didn't feel like riding and didn't feel as happy as I had thought.Thinking about the bike made my stomach tighten and uncomfortable.
A few days later，during lunch at school，my friend said， "Did you hear about Tyler，in the other fifth﹣grade class？He lost his new purple BMX Mongoose bike he had just gotten for his birthday.He left it by a river while playing in the woods.It got dark，and he couldn't find it."
"I'd never go off and leave a new bike like that.He doesn't deserve to have that bike，" I replied.My friend added， "Kids say he's nice.And they say Tyler is upset because his dad worked overtime to buy the bike for him." For the rest of the day，I couldn't stop thinking about Tyler.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
After school，I returned home and dragged to my room.______
"I know Tyler's house，" Mom said. "I'll drive you there."______
13．（2025 蘇州模擬） Last weekend，my classmates and I went camping in the mountains.We were all excited about the adventure.We carried our backpacks filled with food，tents，and other necessary supplies.After a long and tiring hike，we finally reached the campsite.The view was breathtaking，with a clear stream running nearby and tall trees providing shade.
We quickly set up our tents and started preparing dinner.Everyone was chatting and laughing，enjoying the peaceful atmosphere.Just as we were about to sit down and eat，dark clouds suddenly rolled in.The wind picked up，and it started to rain heavily.We rushed to take shelter in our tents，but the rain was so strong that water began to seep in.
We huddled together，feeling scared and worried.The thunder roared，and the lightning flashed.The stream nearby started to rise rapidly，and we realized that our campsite was in danger of being flooded.We didn't know what to do.Just then，I remembered that Mr.Smith，our geography teacher，had once taught us some survival skills in such situations.
Paragraph 1：
I told my classmates about the survival skills Mr.Smith had taught us.
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With the floodwaters getting closer，we knew we had to act quickly.
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14．（2025 喀什市模擬）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之成為一篇完整的短文。
In my last two years of high school，I felt really unhappy.It was a very competitive school，and everyone was focused on getting ready for the next big thing，like college.Even our casual talks were about SAT scores and grades.We always wondered what Ivy League schools （常春藤盟校）were looking for，which after﹣school activities would help us get into a famous college，and where we could find scholarships.
For me，things were even worse because my family was struggling financially，and even going to a free high school in New York City was hard for us.This made it hard for me to concentrate on my studies，and my grades dropped.I didn't want to talk about college with my classmates，so I stayed away from school for a long time.Instead，I went to cheap movies or took long walks around the city.Mostly，I lost myself in books.I read everywhere，like in Central Park，on the subway，and anytime I had a chance.
As I read more，I found a strange balance between feeling close to the characters in the books and feeling like I didn't belong in the real world.My English teacher introduced me to writers like Shakespeare，Andre Gide，and Honore de Balzac.Their books showed me a world I couldn't see but could only feel.They were like good friends who were always there for me，day and night.Sometimes，I think about those lost school days and feel sad.I wonder what could have been if my family wasn't struggling so much and if I didn't have so many challenges.It was really hard for me to keep up with my studies，and I often felt like quitting.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Thanks to the help of my English teacher，I found my way out of the darkness of high school.________
And after graduation from college，I set out to follow my love for writing.________
15．（2025 上饒一模） It was the beginning of December.People were busy in my home.The living room，transformed into a sort of workshop，was piled with boxes，wrapping paper，and some colorful ribbons（緞帶）.At the center of it all was my mother，Lee﹣Ann.
Every year，Lee﹣Ann organized a Christmas charity drive，collecting donations，gifts，and food hampers（食品籃） for families in need within our community.It was a tradition she had started when I was just a toddler，fueled by her belief that everyone deserved to experience the joy and warmth of life，regardless of their circumstances.
"But，Mom，do you think we can manage？I mean，it's amazing what you're doing，but it's a lot of work，and."I asked.
She stopped wrapping and looked up at me，her gaze firm yet gentle."Mark，do you know why I do this every year？"she asked.
I shook my head，realizing I had never really known her motivations.
"Because，"she continued，"giving brings us together.It reminds us that we're all part of a bigger family.
And if we can make even a small difference in someone's life，then all the effort is worth it."
Moved by her words，I nodded，understanding for the first time the depth of her commitment.
The days that followed were a lot of activities.Our family，along with a group of volunteers drawn in by my mother's infectious enthusiasm，worked tirelessly.We wrapped gifts，packed food hampers，and arranged deliveries.My mother was everywhere at once，encouraging，and spreading cheer.
On Christmas Eve，as we loaded the last of the hampers into the van，my mother turned to me and said，"Ready for the final round？"
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
I smiled，filled with a sense of pride and purpose."Let's do it."
______
"But Mom，"I replied，"you're the real superhero here."
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16．（2024秋 山西期末）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
On Thanksgiving Eve，Emily，the owner of a warm café，was closing up after a busy day.Since her husband's passing a few years ago，she had spent every Thanksgiving as a lonely figure，her son living away for college and only occasionally calling.
As she turned the sign to "Closed"，preparing to face another lonely holiday，she spotted a man sitting on the cold steps outside.He seemed to be in his late forties，dressed in old clothes，his face marked with the lines of hardship.He looked up，his eyes reflecting a mixture of tiredness and unspoken struggles. "Excuse me，Miss，" he whispered， "I haven' t had a decent meal in days.Could you maybe spare a bit？" Emily hesitated briefly but quickly unlocked the door，inviting him in with a warm gesture. "It's Thanksgiving Eve，" she said with a gentle smile， "No one should go hungry today."
The man，who introduced himself as James，gratefully took a seat by the corner window.：Emily prepared a big and hearty meal：warm pumpkin pie，freshly baked bread，and a roast turkey.As James ate，he shared bits and pieces of his life—once a truck driver，he had lost his job and subsequently his home，leading him to wander from place to place.Emily listened intently，feeling an unexpected wave of compassion（同情） as she connected with this stranger.
When the meal was finished，James reached into his worn﹣out jacket and pulled out a small，carefully folded paper crane（鶴）. "I made this a long time ago，" he said softly. "It's the last one I have.I want you to have it，as a token of your kindness today." Touched by the gesture，Emily thanked him and，on a whim（一時(shí)興起），offered James a part﹣time job at the café.James's eyes welled up with tears of gratitude. "I'd be pleased，" he replied.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
From that day forward，James worked at the café.________
One evening，as Emily and James were enjoying their dinner，Emily's son unexpectedly called.________
17．（2024秋 菏澤期末） We'd just downsized our home.As grateful as I was to have a roof over our heads，I couldn't help but feel blue.Our old house was beautiful and huge.Our current home？Half the size and crowded.We'd had to give away or throw away a lot of our stuff.But there were still boxes everywhere，from the family room to the garage（車(chē)庫(kù)）.
The day after the move，while the kids were in school，I tackled more boxes.By the afternoon，Id made real progress.The furniture was unpacked.The photos were hanging on the walls.But it just didn't feel like home.
Maybe I could change that.I checked the kitchen cupboard and saw that I had enough ingredients to bake chocolate chip cookies.Just like my grandma used to make whenever I needed cheering up.Wouldn't that be a nice surprise for the kids？When they got home from school，there'd be fresh cookies waiting for them on the kitchen counter.
I put on my apron（圍裙），measured out the brown sugar and butter and got to work.One by one，I added eggs to the mixer（攪拌機(jī)）.
POP!
What in the world？The mixer stopped working.My mixer was broken."Really？!"I felt like screaming.It was just a kitchen device，but it felt like the last straw.What more did I have to give up？
What would my grandma do？She'd lived through the Great Depression and had lost everything.Even in the face of hardship，she'd kept her family together.She used whatever she had to get by.Grandma wouldn't quit.She'd find another way.Inspired，I ran to the garage and searched the remaining boxes.Found it!
I pulled out Grandma's old white mixer.The one she'd passed on to me.She'd purchased it back in the 50's and it was ancient.Id marked the box it was in as"easily broken"，but the movers hadn't paid attention.They'd dropped it anyway.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
I wondered if it still worked.
______
Two hours later，the kids opened the door and said，"Mmmm，cookies!"
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18．（2025 云城區(qū)模擬）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
Once upon a time，there was a young athletic boy who is really hungry for success.For him，winning was everything and success was measured just by winning.He practised hard every day to win every race lying ahead of him.
One day，the boy was preparing himself for a running competition in his small village.A large crowd had gathered to witness the sporting event.A wise old man had travelled far to bear witness also.The race began.The boy with his determination，strength and power took the winning line and came to the first.The crowd were excited，cheering and waving at the boy.However，the wise man remained still and calm，expressing no excitement.The little boy，however，felt proud and important.
A second race was called and two new young fit challengers came forward to run with him.The race was started and sure enough the little boy came through and finished first.Once again the crowd was excited again，and cheered and waved at the boy.The wise man remained still and calm again，expressing no excitement.The little boy，however，felt proud and important.
Another race，the wise old man stepped forward and presented the little boy with two new challengers，an elderly weak lady and a blind man. "What is this？" the little boy was puzzled. "This is no race!" he claimed. "Race，" said the wise man.
注意：（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
The race was started and the boy was the only finisher.
"Race again，" replied the wise man， "this time finish together with all three of you."
19．（2024秋 葫蘆島期末） The sound of glass breaking is instantly recognizable.I'd been telling my best friend Missi a silly story and had spun around in the living room when I heard that sound and froze.
When I looked down at the carpet，it was covered with pieces of sparkling red，pink and clear glass.Missi said， "Oh，no，not the vase."
"Why？What did I do？"My face reddened.
"Abby，that glass vase was one of the few items my relatives brought when they came to America，"Missi replied nervously."If you'd broken anything else in the apartment，I would've gladly said I did it.But you're going to have to tell my mom that it was your fault，and she's going to be really mad."
I was terrified.I'd destroyed a priceless family heirloom（傳家寶）.Why did I have to spin around like that？
We gathered up the shattered pieces.I kept saying that maybe it could be fixed，but Missi said gently it didn't look possible.I insisted we keep the pieces.The glass was so fragile，like a colourful，swirly light bulb had exploded.Some of it broke even more as we tried to sweep it up carefully.
Missi said her mom would be home by six.My stomach was in knots.Would her mom yell at me or punish me？Would she tell me I couldn't stay in their apartment for the weekend？I couldn't stop playing the fifteen seconds over in my mind，me spinning fast and the sound of glass crashing.The only thing I could think of to say was"I'm sorry."
A couple of minutes after six we heard a key turn in the door.Her mom was home.Right from the start，we could see she was in a good mood."Hello!It's hot today.I want to treat you girls to that frozen yogurt I know you like，let's go! "her mom said.She pointed at the open door.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
"Before that，I need to tell you something."I said.________
Hearing my apology，Missi's mother burst into laughter.________
20．（2025 浙江模擬） "Want to take a walk，Tyler？" Grandpa Charlie called from the front room. "In a minute，Grandpa，" Tyler called back，looking at his mom. "I thought Grandpa wasn't feeling well，and it's cold outside.Can he take a walk？"
"The fresh air will be good for him.And your grandpa doesn't want to miss waving at people，" Mama said."He knows it makes them happy，and when they wave back，it makes him happy，too."
Tyler walked into the front room and saw Grandpa Charlie wrapping a gray scarf around his face and neck."Hope I don't look too much like a mummy（木乃伊），" Grandpa Charlie said，his eyes twinkling.He put on his red hat，and they stepped outside.
He waved to the first car that passed.A boy stuck his head out the window and yelled， "There's the man in the red hat!" Grandpa Charlie waved to him and to the people in the next three cars.They all waved back.
Grandpa Charlie and Tyler turned a corner.An old man wearing a brown hat and a scarf walked toward them.He was frowning.
"Hi，Henry，" Grandpa Charlie said. "I don't see you out much."
"My doctor is making me take walks for my health，but I don't like it，" Henry grumbled （抱怨） . "It's supposed to be autumn，but it feels like the dead of winter." He pulled his scarf up over his mouth and nose and walked past them.
"He's bad﹣tempered!" Tyler said in a low voice. "Henry is just lonely.His wife died right after we lost your grandmother."
Suddenly，a gust of wind blew off both men's hats.The hats flew toward the duck pond，and Henry's went in.Tyler ran down the hill and grabbed Grandpa Charlie's hat off the grass and fished Henry's out of the water.He ran back up the hill，holding out Henry's hat. "It's wet.Just throw it away.I'll have to buy a new hat，" Henry said coldly，walking past Tyler.
A car went by，but no one beeped the horn or waved.Grandpa Charlie didn't seem to notice for he was talking to a neighbor.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Tyler stared at his grandpa's red hat and came up with a plan.
A car passed，and the people inside waved at Henry.
2025年高考英語(yǔ)高頻易錯(cuò)押題卷 讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)
參考答案與試題解析
一．書(shū)面表達(dá)（共20小題）
1．（2025 云浮模擬） Susan had a secret：she loved robots.She had helped her dad in his workshop and knew a lot about motors，but her friends didn't know this.
One day，she heard Alex and Jacob talking about their robot，Robbie.They were preparing for a big competition but Robbie wasn't working properly.Susan was surprised by their courage，as they always seemed unpopular among the boys.She felt bad for them and wanted to help.
On the school bus home，Susan sat behind Alex and Jacob，who were still trying to fix their robot."This is impossible!The legs move before you press the switch and stop after you press the switch!"Alex said，looking at Robbie's legs，which were not moving right."The competition is only eight days away!"Jacob looked sad.He thought they were going to lose.
"Umm，how did you connect the wires from the switch？"Susan asked quietly over their shoulders.Alex turned and gave her a cautious look.Susan smiled and asked，"Did you connect the NO wire or the NC wire to the motor？"The boys stared at her as if she had just landed from Mars.
Susan gently took the robot and pointed out the wire connected to the motor."Here's the problem!".She explained that it was the NC wire.It means the circuit（電路）is Normally Closed.She then pulled a loose wire out of the robot and explained that it was the NO wire，which means Normally Open."If you connect this wire instead，Robbie will walk when you press the switch." Susan handed the robot back to Alex，who was staring at her with his mouth open.
"Change the wires and see，"she said before getting off the bus.Ten minutes later，her phone rang.It was Jacob： "Your idea worked，and we're wondering if you could come over and help improve our Robbie." Susan smiled.She knew she had made the right choice.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
After dinner，Susan walked cheerfully to Jacob's house.______
Finally，the competition day came，and the new team was ready.______
【答案】見(jiàn)試題解答內(nèi)容
【分析】Susan有一個(gè)秘密，那就是她喜歡機(jī)器人，并且對(duì)發(fā)動(dòng)機(jī)很了解。一天，她聽(tīng)說(shuō)Alex和Jacob的機(jī)器人Robbie出了問(wèn)題，正為即將到來(lái)的比賽發(fā)愁。在回家的路上，Susan指出了他們連接電線的問(wèn)題，并給出了解決方案。Alex和Jacob嘗試后發(fā)現(xiàn)Susan的建議有效，于是邀請(qǐng)她幫忙進(jìn)一步改進(jìn)Robbie。Susan很高興能夠幫助他們，并意識(shí)到自己做出了正確的選擇。
高分句型一：She was excited to see how she could further help improve Robbie.
翻譯：她很高興看到自己能進(jìn)一步幫助羅比提高。
分析：運(yùn)用了how引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。
高分句型二：As they worked，they chatted and laughed，forming a strong bond over their shared love of robots.
翻譯：他們一邊工作，一邊談笑風(fēng)生，因?yàn)閷?duì)機(jī)器人的共同熱愛(ài)而結(jié)成了牢固的紐帶。
分析：運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和現(xiàn)在分詞forming作狀語(yǔ)。
【解答】 After dinner，Susan walked cheerfully to Jacob's house.She was excited to see how she could further help improve Robbie.【高分句型一】When she arrived，Alex and Jacob greeted her warmly and eagerly showed her the changes they had made based on her advice.Together，they fine﹣tuned the robot's movements，adjusted the sensors，and ensured that everything was working perfectly.Susan's knowledge and skills were invaluable，and the boys were grateful for her help.As they worked，they chatted and laughed，forming a strong bond over their shared love of robots.【高分句型二】（Susan幫助Jacob調(diào)整機(jī)器人）
Finally，the competition day came，and the new team was ready.With Susan standing by their side，Alex and Jacob confidently presented Robbie to the judges.The robot moved smoothly and performed all its tasks with precision.The crowd cheered as Robbie demonstrated its abilities，and the judges were impressed by its design and functionality.When the results were announced，the team was thrilled to learn that they had won first place.They hugged Susan and thanked her profusely for her contribution.Susan felt proud and happy，knowing that her secret love for robots had helped her friends achieve their dreams.（在Susan的幫助下Jacob成功完成了比賽）
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2．（2024秋 唐山期末）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
Today was Meatloaf Monday.Again，like every Monday.My mom knew how to make seven different meals，one for each day of the week.She kept all seven recipes in a pink folder，each one labeled with a day of the week.And that was our meal plan.
I stared at the dull mass my mom placed next to my corn. "I'm not really hungry，" I said，pushing my food back and forth on my plate. "Me neither，" said the twins.My mom sighed，looking disappointed.
"Malia，" she said， "you're eleven.You should be setting an example for your brother and sister.Now please，just pick up your forks and eat." Normally，I would have.But today I was feeling mean. "All of it tastes awful，" I said.My mom's eyes flashed.But her words remained calm. "Malia，" she said. "It's OK if you don't like my cooking.But it's not OK to be rude."
The next day I was sitting in our school's kitchen classroom，thinking about what had happened the day before when Mr.Bruin，our teacher，interrupted. "I've got exciting news，" he said.Exciting news？The class looked expectantly at Mr.Bruin. "To finish off our unit on kitchen skills，we're having a competition.And the first﹣place prize is the newest book in the Cave of the Dragons series，" said Mr.Bruin，holding up a copy for everyone to see.The class erupted into cheers.
At break times，all anyone could talk about was the upcoming cooking competition. "I'm totally going to win!" "My dad's the best cook ever.I've got talent in my genes （基因）!"
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
I thought about my genes，but I still wanted to participate in this competition.________
On the way home after failing the competition，I thought of my mum's meatloaf.________
【答案】 I thought about my genes，but I still wanted to participate in this competition.I knew my mom's cooking wasn't great，but I wanted to prove that I could do better.I started to practice at home，using the basic skills that Mr.Bruin had taught us in class.The day of the competition arrived.I felt nervous and excited.I combined the ingredients with creativity，turning them into a dish that represented my growth as a cook.But as the competition ended and the results were announced，I didn't win first place.
On the way home after failing the competition，I thought of my mum's meatloaf.As I walked through the door，the smell of my mom's cooking filled the house.It was comforting and familiar.Seeing my expression，mother knew the result.She hugged me and said， "It's okay，Malia.It's not about winning or losing，it's about trying your best and learning from the experience." Her words made me feel better.I realized that even though I didn't win，I had gained something more valuable：the knowledge and love of cooking.
【分析】本文以人物為線索展開(kāi)。作者決定參加班里舉行的烹飪比賽，盡管自己沒(méi)有烹飪的基因。作者運(yùn)用課堂上所學(xué)的知識(shí)進(jìn)行訓(xùn)練，但比賽時(shí)作者沒(méi)有得獎(jiǎng)。回家后，媽媽給作者以安慰。作者意識(shí)到，盡管自己沒(méi)有獲勝，但獲得了更有價(jià)值的東西：對(duì)烹飪的知識(shí)和熱愛(ài)。
高分句型一：I combined the ingredients with creativity，turning them into a dish that represented my growth as a cook.
翻譯：我把食材和創(chuàng)造力結(jié)合起來(lái)，把它們變成了一道代表我作為廚師成長(zhǎng)的菜肴。
分析：本句使用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)turning them into a dish that represented my growth as a cook作狀語(yǔ)。
高分句型二：I realized that even though I didn't win，I had gained something more valuable：the knowledge and love of cooking.
翻譯：我意識(shí)到，盡管我沒(méi)有贏，但我獲得了更有價(jià)值的東西：烹飪的知識(shí)和熱愛(ài)。
分析：本句使用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。
【解答】 I thought about my genes，but I still wanted to participate in this competition.I knew my mom's cooking wasn't great，but I wanted to prove that I could do better.I started to practice at home，using the basic skills that Mr.Bruin had taught us in class.The day of the competition arrived.I felt nervous and excited.I combined the ingredients with creativity，turning them into a dish that represented my growth as a cook.【高分句型一】But as the competition ended and the results were announced，I didn't win first place.（作者準(zhǔn)備比賽、參加比賽和比賽的結(jié)果）
On the way home after failing the competition，I thought of my mum's meatloaf.As I walked through the door，the smell of my mom's cooking filled the house.It was comforting and familiar.Seeing my expression，mother knew the result.She hugged me and said， "It's okay，Malia.It's not about winning or losing，it's about trying your best and learning from the experience." Her words made me feel better.I realized that even though I didn't win，I had gained something more valuable：the knowledge and love of cooking.【高分句型二】（作者回家后得到媽媽的安慰以及作者的感受）
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（4）擬寫(xiě)草稿，修改錯(cuò)詞病句
擬寫(xiě)時(shí)，注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣性，語(yǔ)言的豐富性，并通過(guò)句與句之間連接詞的正確使用，使上下文連貫。
3．（2024秋 呂梁期末） Lucy and her friend Jack loved being at school every day because they both really enjoyed music lessons.Lucy began playing two instruments，the piano and the violin，but she enjoyed singing more.She dreamed of being a pop star like Alex Pepper one day.Jack had a guitar and played pop and rock music very well.He wanted to be the coolest guitar player in the world.
One day，their music teacher，Mr.Brown，said to the class， "We're going to have a music competition here at school next Friday.If you want to enter，you must sing or play a song on the school stage.Alex Pepper will be here that day for his concert at City Stadium，so I wrote to his manager and asked him to come and give you some guidance.He's going to decide the best performer and invite him or her to his concert."
Lucy and Jack determined to take part in the competition as a team.They chose a song called I'll help you!They practiced on the playground in their spare time.Lucy made such great progress that Jack was deeply absorbed in her singing and often said admirably， "How sweet your voice is!"While they practiced，the branches of the trees around the playground were swaying（搖擺） in the wind as if they were enjoying their performance.
On the afternoon of the competition，all the students were waiting in the school hall for Alex Pepper to arrive.When he walked in with Mr.Brown，everyone clapped.Alex smiled and waved and then he and Mr.Brown sat down on special seats in front of the school stage.
Then the competition started.Lots of other students sang before Jack and Lucy.An older girl named Mary sang very well.Some students shouted"More!More!"when she finished."She's going to win，"thought Lucy.Soon Mr.Brown pointed to Jack and Lucy and called out that it was their turn.
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph 1：
Lucy began to tremble unknowingly when she stood in the middle of the stage.________
Paragraph 2：
The big moment came.________
【答案】Paragraph 1：
Lucy began to tremble unknowingly when she stood in the middle of the stage.She was rooted on the stage and found it hard to sing with her mind blank when Jack played the guitar smoothly.Noticing Lucy's abnormal silence，Jack gave her an encouraging smile but it didn't work.Jack replayed the music，hoping to help Lucy calm down and get started.To Jack's relief，Lucy followed him this time though her singing was not as good as usual.They finished their performance regretfully，waiting for the result anxiously.
Paragraph 2：
The big moment came.Mr.Brown declared that the winner was Mary.The school hall erupted in cheer and applause.Lucy whispered to Jack guiltily， "I'm really sorry." Jack responded with a smile， "Never mind!I know you did your best." Tears welling up in her eyes，Lucy felt a gentle pat on the head.Looking up，she was surprised to see Alex Pepper. "Nothing can beat a strong heart，" he noted.Hearing these words，Lucy expressed her heartfelt gratitude to Alex and renewed her determination and hope.
【分析】本文以人物為線索展開(kāi)，講述了Lucy和Jack參加學(xué)校音樂(lè)比賽的經(jīng)歷，詳細(xì)描寫(xiě)了比賽的準(zhǔn)備過(guò)程、比賽當(dāng)天的情景以及比賽結(jié)果。
高分句型一：She was rooted on the stage and found it hard to sing with her mind blank when Jack played the guitar smoothly.
翻譯：她全神貫注地站在舞臺(tái)上，當(dāng)杰克流暢地彈吉他時(shí)，她發(fā)現(xiàn)很難在頭腦空白的情況下唱歌。
分析：運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句。
高分句型二：Mr.Brown declared that the winner was Mary.
翻譯：布朗先生宣布獲勝者是瑪麗。
分析：運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句。
【解答】Paragraph 1：
Lucy began to tremble unknowingly when she stood in the middle of the stage.She was rooted on the stage and found it hard to sing with her mind blank when Jack played the guitar smoothly.【高分句型一】Noticing Lucy's abnormal silence，Jack gave her an encouraging smile but it didn't work.Jack replayed the music，hoping to help Lucy calm down and get started.To Jack's relief，Lucy followed him this time though her singing was not as good as usual.They finished their performance regretfully，waiting for the result anxiously.（Lucy非常緊張，但是Jack的鼓勵(lì)讓她完成了表演）
Paragraph 2：
The big moment came.Mr.Brown declared that the winner was Mary.【高分句型二】The school hall erupted in cheer and applause.Lucy whispered to Jack guiltily， "I'm really sorry." Jack responded with a smile， "Never mind!I know you did your best." Tears welling up in her eyes，Lucy felt a gentle pat on the head.Looking up，she was surprised to see Alex Pepper. "Nothing can beat a strong heart，" he noted.Hearing these words，Lucy expressed her heartfelt gratitude to Alex and renewed her determination and hope.（兩人遺憾沒(méi)有獲勝，但是這次經(jīng)歷使他們重新堅(jiān)定了決心和希望）
【點(diǎn)評(píng)】（1）品讀原文，確定文章線索每篇文章都有各自獨(dú)特的寫(xiě)作思路，通過(guò)精讀文章，找到該篇文章的寫(xiě)作線索。（2）仔細(xì)審題，明確續(xù)寫(xiě)要求一般短文后面的"注意"都有對(duì)此次短文續(xù)寫(xiě)的具體要求，如詞數(shù)限制使用幾處標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。續(xù)寫(xiě)段落的首句提示，這樣考生可以做到"心中有數(shù)"。（3）回扣原文，揣摩續(xù)寫(xiě)思路根據(jù)文章后面的要求，再次快速閱讀短文，抓住文章的思路結(jié)合段首的提示語(yǔ)最終確定續(xù)寫(xiě)段落的思路。（4）擬寫(xiě)草稿，修改錯(cuò)詞病句在確定了思路和內(nèi)容之后，最關(guān)鍵的就是結(jié)合提示語(yǔ)或者文中畫(huà)線的關(guān)鍵詞擬寫(xiě)草稿。擬寫(xiě)時(shí)，注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣性，語(yǔ)言的豐富性，并通過(guò)句與句之間連接詞的正確使用，使上下文連貫。
4．（2024秋 潮州期末）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整 的短文。
Jayce began noticing when he was in kindergarten that he looked different from his classmates.They had two hands while he had one.Due to their young age，Jayce was encouraged that he was just like an angel with one wing folded to prepare for something.
It started when one boy laughed at him.From that day，5﹣year﹣old Jayce turned sad.He returned home with questions. "Why am I different？Why me？Why？" He cried to ask his mother，Lewis.Seeing Jayce was mad at God for making him that way，the poor mother felt it a huge dagger（匕首）to her heart.What made her more sorrowfull was that she didn't know what to do at that point and how to provide answers to her son's questions which she could never find out herself.The white lie broke just like bubbles（氣泡）that day.
A few weeks later，Lewis turned on the TV to a news story，where she was shocked to find out the answer.It was Trashaun，an eighth grade student，that showed positive energy from his head to his toe.The 14﹣year﹣old sunny boy performed his slam dunks（大灌籃）on the TV，and had been a hit on the Internet.However，like Jayce，he had missed most of his left arm since his childhood.Lewis called her son Jayce in.The poor little boy got spellbound （著迷的），watching dunk after dunk.
Watching Trashaun was an inspiring moment for Jayce.He saw Trashaun as a tough role model who had a seemingly similar born disability but led a brilliant life.Little did Lewis know that a family friend had already contacted Trashaun，asking him to meet with Jayce to rebuild his confidence.
注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Para.1 The day was not spent drowning in self ﹣ pity but for fun.______.
Para.2 Staring at the shirt he sent Jayce，Trashaun began to talk about their left arms.______.
【答案】The day was not spent drowning in self﹣pity but for fun.The boys met at a middle School on a sunny afternoon，and instantly bonded.Seeing his role model in flesh，Jayce was too thrilled to say a single word but stand there with his mouth open wide.Amused by the sight，Trashaun held Lewis' tiny hand as if Lewis had been his little brother to play hide﹣and﹣seek first，due to their similar congenital defect.Gradually，Trashaun led Jayce to ride bikes around the school，and eventually，taught Jayce slam dunks.During the rest，Trashaun took up a shirt that says "Five fingers can also make it"，which was prepared for Jayce.
Staring at the skirt he sent Jayce，Trashaun began to talk about their left arms.Trashaun smiled， "I guess you may be puzzled，surprised，upset，even frustrated，hating God make you this way." He stopped，falling his eyes on Jayce's，with one hand patting Jayce's head， "But I think this is the perfect way God made me.With five fingers，we also made it in lots of things just now.The missed arm is like a wing folded by an angel.Only when you're tough will you see the wing!" Behind stood Lewis，whose face was flooded with tears.She confirmed the 14﹣year﹣old would be a superhero one day，so would her son，who was unfolding his hidden wing！
【分析】本文講述了只有一只手的Jayce從開(kāi)始被別人嘲笑到后來(lái)被Trashaun鼓勵(lì)的事情。
高分句型一：Seeing his role model in flesh，Jayce was too thrilled to say a single word but stand there with his mouth open wide.
翻譯：看到自己的楷模，杰斯激動(dòng)得一句話也說(shuō)不出來(lái)，只是張著嘴站在那里。
分析：現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ)。
高分句型二：Only when you're tough will you see the wing！
翻譯：只有當(dāng)你堅(jiān)強(qiáng)時(shí)，你才會(huì)看到翅膀！
分析：only置于句首的倒裝句。
【解答】The day was not spent drowning in self﹣pity but for fun.The boys met at a middle School on a sunny afternoon，and instantly bonded.Seeing his role model in flesh，Jayce was too thrilled to say a single word but stand there with his mouth open wide. 【高分句型一】Amused by the sight，Trashaun held Lewis' tiny hand as if Lewis had been his little brother to play hide﹣and﹣seek first，due to their similar congenital defect.Gradually，Trashaun led Jayce to ride bikes around the school，and eventually，taught Jayce slam dunks.During the rest，Trashaun took up a shirt that says "Five fingers can also make it"，which was prepared for Jayce.（Jayce見(jiàn)到Trashaun及他們所做的事情，Trashaun如何鼓勵(lì)Jayce）
Staring at the skirt he sent Jayce，Trashaun began to talk about their left arms.Trashaun smiled， "I guess you may be puzzled，surprised，upset，even frustrated，hating God make you this way." He stopped，falling his eyes on Jayce's，with one hand patting Jayce's head， "But I think this is the perfect way God made me.With five fingers，we also made it in lots of things just now.The missed arm is like a wing folded by an angel.Only when you're tough will you see the wing!【高分句型二】" Behind stood Lewis，whose face was flooded with tears.She confirmed the 14﹣year﹣old would be a superhero one day，so would her son，who was unfolding his hidden wing！（Jayce在見(jiàn)到Trashaun之后受他鼓勵(lì)之后的改變。Trashaun認(rèn)為他應(yīng)該幫助更多的像Jayce一樣的孩子。）
【點(diǎn)評(píng)】解題方法點(diǎn)撥
（1）品讀原文，確定文章線索
每篇文章都有各自獨(dú)特的寫(xiě)作思路，通過(guò)精讀文章，找到該篇文章的寫(xiě)作線索。如是以時(shí)間為線索還是以空間為線索等這樣有利于考生"順藤摸瓜（結(jié)尾）"。
（2）仔細(xì)審題，明確續(xù)寫(xiě)要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有對(duì)此次短文續(xù)寫(xiě)的具體要求，如詞數(shù)限制使用幾處標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。續(xù)寫(xiě)段落的首句提示，這樣考生可以做到"心中有數(shù)"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩續(xù)寫(xiě)思路
根據(jù)文章后面的要求，再次快速回讀短文，抓住文章的思路結(jié)合段首的提示語(yǔ)最終確定續(xù)寫(xiě)段落的思路。同時(shí)結(jié)合文章畫(huà)線詞語(yǔ)提示，確定續(xù)寫(xiě)段落的內(nèi)容。
（4）擬寫(xiě)草稿，修改錯(cuò)詞病句
在確定了思路和內(nèi)容之后，最關(guān)鍵的就是結(jié)合提示語(yǔ)或者文中畫(huà)線的關(guān)鍵詞擬寫(xiě)草稿。擬寫(xiě)時(shí)，注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣性，語(yǔ)言的豐富性，并通過(guò)句與句之間連接詞的正確使用，使上下文連貫。
（5）關(guān)鍵用詞，標(biāo)出續(xù)寫(xiě)部分中使用到的原材料中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)這一點(diǎn)可以幫助考生自己檢查關(guān)鍵詞的使用情況并根據(jù)情況做出修改。最后在謄寫(xiě)文字時(shí)，務(wù)必做到"字跡工整、清晰"。
5．（2025 湖北模擬） Ally and I first met at a local riding club，where we were both eager beginners，learning the basics b f horseback riding.Our friendship quickly developed as we discovered our shared passion for horses and the excitement of riding a horse across open fields.We spent countless hours together，talking about everything under the sun as we watched the horses playing happily and lively.
Ally was very passionate about riding，and it was a joy to share that enthusiasm with her.However，being someone who set high standards for myself and those I cared about，I sometimes found myself pushing her to improve her skills，even if it meant being a bit demanding.
One sunny afternoon，during a particularly challenging riding exercise，I suggested a technique that involved a tight turn and a quick jump over a low fence.
"That's too risky， "Ally protested，biting her lips in concern."I'm not ready for that yet."
"Come on，Ally， "I urged，tapping my foot impatiently."You've got to push yourself if you want to get better."
Our voices rose，and soon we were locked in a heated discussion，and even our horses sensed the tension and became restless.Finally，we both accepted that we had different points of view and decided to leave it at that.But the leftover tension caused a slight but noticeable gap between us.
One evening after that argument，as I was helping my parents close up the store，my phone rang.It was Ally.I picked up the phone，my heart still heavy from our earlier disagreement.
"Hey， "she began，her voice full of hope."I was thinking we could try that technique again.I feel like I'm ready now."
I shook my head even though she couldn't see me."I don't think that's a good idea，'I replied，my tone firm.
She paused，and I could almost hear her disappointment."Okay，"she said softly."I'll see you then."
注意：
（1）續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
The next afternoon，I received a call from Ally's mother.______
I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast（石膏） on her leg._______
【答案】 The next afternoon，I received a call from Ally's mother.Her voice was trembling as she told me that Ally had been in an accident while riding. "She tried that technique you mentioned，" she said quietly. "She fell and broke her leg." On hearing this，I felt a wave of guilt washing over me. "I'm so sorry to hear that，" I stammered，my voice cracking. "I never meant for her to get hurt." I realized I should have been more supportive and patient，understanding that everyone has their own pace in learning.This realization weighed heavily on me，and I knew I needed to make up for it.
I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast on her leg.As I sat beside her，I apologized sincerely for my behavior. "I'm so sorry，Ally，" I said，tears welling up in my eyes. "I should never have pushed you so hard.Your safety is more important than any riding achievement." Ally smiled weakly，forgiving me with a reassuring look.We chatted joyfully，talking about the importance of listening to each other and respecting our limits.From that moment，I promised to be a better friend，one who supports and encourages her without being overly demanding.Our friendship，though tested，became stronger through mutual understanding and forgiveness.
【分析】本文以騎馬技巧挑戰(zhàn)為線索展開(kāi)，講述了作者與朋友艾利在騎術(shù)俱樂(lè)部因?qū)σ豁?xiàng)高難度騎術(shù)動(dòng)作的不同看法而產(chǎn)生的分歧。盡管雙方都懷有對(duì)騎馬的熱愛(ài)，但作者對(duì)高標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的追求導(dǎo)致了兩人之間的緊張關(guān)系。經(jīng)過(guò)一次電話溝通嘗試修復(fù)關(guān)系，但由于作者的擔(dān)憂并未達(dá)成共識(shí)，留下了彼此間的遺憾與距離。
高分句型一：I realized I should have been more supportive and patient，understanding that everyone has their own pace in learning.
翻譯：我意識(shí)到我應(yīng)該更支持和耐心，理解每個(gè)人都有自己的學(xué)習(xí)節(jié)奏。
分析：運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)understanding that everyone has their own pace in learning作狀語(yǔ)。
高分句型二：From that moment，I promised to be a better friend，one who supports and encourages her without being overly demanding.
翻譯：從那一刻起，我發(fā)誓要做一個(gè)更好的朋友，一個(gè)支持和鼓勵(lì)她而不是過(guò)分要求的朋友。
分析：運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句。
【解答】 The next afternoon，I received a call from Ally's mother.Her voice was trembling as she told me that Ally had been in an accident while riding. "She tried that technique you mentioned，" she said quietly. "She fell and broke her leg." On hearing this，I felt a wave of guilt washing over me. "I'm so sorry to hear that，" I stammered，my voice cracking. "I never meant for her to get hurt." I realized I should have been more supportive and patient，understanding that everyone has their own pace in learning.【高分句型一】This realization weighed heavily on me，and I knew I needed to make up for it.（描寫(xiě)作者得知艾利的腿受傷以及作者聽(tīng)到該消息后的感受。）
I rushed to the hospital and found Ally with a cast on her leg.As I sat beside her，I apologized sincerely for my behavior. "I'm so sorry，Ally，" I said，tears welling up in my eyes. "I should never have pushed you so hard.Your safety is more important than any riding achievement." Ally smiled weakly，forgiving me with a reassuring look.We chatted joyfully，talking about the importance of listening to each other and respecting our limits.From that moment，I promised to be a better friend，one who supports and encourages her without being overly demanding.【高分句型二】Our friendship，though tested，became stronger through mutual understanding and forgiveness.（描寫(xiě)作者到醫(yī)院后為自己以前的表現(xiàn)道歉，艾利原諒了作者，二人的友誼關(guān)系變得更加堅(jiān)固）
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