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中小學(xué)教育資源及組卷應(yīng)用平臺(tái)
中小學(xué)教育資源及組卷應(yīng)用平臺(tái)
2024-2025學(xué)年八年級(jí)英語下冊(cè)期末復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)牛津上海版
（試用本）（期末考點(diǎn)培優(yōu)）專題15 書面表達(dá)
學(xué)校:___________姓名：___________班級(jí)：___________考號(hào)：___________
1．Write at least 60 words about the topic “Fire Rules Around Us”. (以“我們身邊的防火規(guī)則”為題寫一篇至少含60個(gè)詞的短文，要求意思明確，內(nèi)容連貫。)
1. What should you do before you go into some public places
2. What will you do when you meet a fire
3. What do you think is the most important thing to do during a fire
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根據(jù)以下情境寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)
學(xué)校每年組織遠(yuǎn)足活動(dòng) (如：春游和秋游等)，下周學(xué)校將舉行“Our school trip”為主題的英語沙龍活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇短文和同學(xué)們分享。
1. What do you think of school trips 2. What did you do in one of your school trips 3. What advice can you offer to make the school trip more meaningful
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．Write at least 60 words on the topic “An unforgettable trip to ________” (以“一次去……的難忘之旅”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）
The following points are only for reference:
When and where did you take the trip
What did you do there
Why was the trip unforgettable
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．Write at least 60 words about the topic “China is calling”. (以“中國在召喚”為題，寫一篇不少于60字的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)
中國這些年來發(fā)生了很多的變化，科技發(fā)展突飛猛進(jìn)，人民的幸福指數(shù)也上升了。我們的國家發(fā)生了哪些改變呢？你的生活又發(fā)生了哪些改變呢？請(qǐng)結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷寫出你自己的感想吧。
1. What do you think of your motherland
2. What can tourists/you see in China
3. What can tourists/you do in China
(注意：1.短文中不得出現(xiàn)考試姓名/校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不與評(píng)分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。)
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根據(jù)以下情境寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)
假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你對(duì)英國朋友Jack 的郵件進(jìn)行回復(fù)。詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)單詞，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
To: Li Hua@
Subject: See you soon!
Hi, Li Hua! Next month, I’ll be with you in Shanghai. I can’t wait! It’s going to be so cool! We can do lots of exciting things together! I need to pack for my trip. What should I bring with me Any interesting places worth visiting I’d like to get you a gift from where I live. What would you like me to get you I’m so excited about the trip! See you soon. Jack
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．In 50—100 words, write an article according to the given situation (根據(jù)以下情境寫一篇50—100字的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)
你所在學(xué)校的校報(bào)正在開展征文活動(dòng)，主題為“我心中的旅游勝地”。請(qǐng)寫一篇短文，向同學(xué)們推薦一個(gè)你喜歡的旅游地 (travel destination)。文中應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：
1. 旅游地的名稱和位置；
2. 旅游地的特點(diǎn)和吸引人的地方；
3. 你為什么喜歡這個(gè)地方；
4. 給出一些旅行建議。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根據(jù)以下情景寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）
今年暑假你校將組織一次游學(xué)夏令營（study tour summer camp），現(xiàn)有以下四種設(shè)想：
1. 博物館之旅（a trip to the museum）
2. 科技之旅（a science and technology journey）
3. 地理之旅（a geography journey）
4. 藝術(shù)之旅（an art journey）
學(xué)校正通過校報(bào)了解學(xué)生的意向。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)給校報(bào)張老師寫封郵件，表明你最喜歡的一種設(shè)想，說明理由，并推薦一個(gè)目的地。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．Write at least 60 words about the topic “I at home and at school”. (以“在家和在學(xué)校的我”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)
情景提示：在8B Unit 7的詩歌My dad at home and at work中，小作者向我們描述了一個(gè)在家和在工作中完全不同的爸爸的形象。你能不能向我們描述一下你在家和在學(xué)校不同的表現(xiàn)，并對(duì)自己的不同表現(xiàn)進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)嗎？
注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)具體人名、校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．Write at least 60 words on the topic(以“What am I ” “我是怎樣的我”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)
情景：14歲的我，在生活中，是一個(gè)幸福快樂的我；在學(xué)習(xí)中，是一個(gè)勤奮刻苦的我；在運(yùn)動(dòng)中，是一個(gè)團(tuán)結(jié)合作的我；在交友中，是一份友好善良的我……請(qǐng)就任何一個(gè)角度分享我是怎樣的我。
(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。)
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “The place I want to visit most” (以“我最想去的地方”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)字的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)
注意文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名、校名及有關(guān)信息。
Questions for reference: 以下問題供參考
1. Which place do you want to visit most
2. Why do you want to visit it Give at least two reasons.
3. If you have a chance to visit it, what will you do there
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．Please write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite subject”. (以“我最喜歡的學(xué)科”為題，根據(jù)英文提示寫一篇不少于60個(gè)單詞的短文)
Suggested questions:
1. What is your favourite subject
2. Why do you like this subject
3. What have you learned from this subject
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．每個(gè)人都有自己夢想的工作，你夢想的工作是什么呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，以“My Dream Job”為題，描述一下你夢想的工作。
要求：
1）詞數(shù)80左右；
2）文章內(nèi)容包含思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容；
3）文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)地名、人名、校名。
My Dream Job What do you want to be
Where are you going to work
How are you going to do
When are you going to start
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．Write at least 60 words on the topic “Use electricity safely”. （你發(fā)現(xiàn)你身邊的親朋好友經(jīng)常有不安全用電的行為，有很大的危險(xiǎn)隱患。請(qǐng)以“安全用電”為題寫一篇 60—120 詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。）
Use the following points as a guide: （寫作必須包含以下內(nèi)容）
1. How do some people use electricity
2. Why should we use electricity safely
3. What’s your suggestion on using electricity safely
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________14．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favorite ________”（以“我最喜歡________”為題，可以是人，電影、書籍或是食物等，把你喜歡的美好事物分享給身邊的人并說說你喜歡的理由，寫不少于60個(gè)字的作文。）
注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________15．Write a short passage at least 60 words about the topic “The person I admire is_______” (以“我所欽佩的人是___________”為題寫一篇不少于60字的短文)
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）
Writing suggestions:
1. Whom do you admire (someone who is famous or ordinary people around you)
2. Why do you admire him/her
3. What can you learn from him/her
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________16．Write at least 60 words on the topic “A Gift to My Mother”, using the following questions for reference.（請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示問題，以“給我媽媽的一件禮物”為題，寫一篇短文，不少于60個(gè)詞， 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）
Suggested questions:
（1）What are you going to give your mother
（2）When are you going to give it to her
（3）Is it special Why
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________17．Write at least 60 words on the topic “A different ________”（以“與眾不同的 ________”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）
提示：生活是多姿多彩的，在你心目中一定覺得許許多多的人或物與眾不同。請(qǐng)你選擇一樣，向你的伙伴們介紹一下。要求先進(jìn)行總體描述，再說說你認(rèn)為其與眾不同的理由。
The following questions are for reference only.
以下問題僅供參考。
Who/What do you want to introduce to your partners
What is he/she/it like
Why do you think he/she/it is different from others (Give at least 2 reasons.)
注意：
1.在答題紙上將題目補(bǔ)充完整。
2.注意適當(dāng)使用形容詞。
3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。
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18．Write at least 60 words on the topic “The hero in my heart” (以“我心中的英雄”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格)
提示：每個(gè)人在成長的過程中總會(huì)遇見一些對(duì)你產(chǎn)生深遠(yuǎn)影響的人，他/她是“你心中的英雄”。請(qǐng)你用一件具體事例來講述你心中的英雄激勵(lì)你的故事。
（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。）
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19．Write at least 60 words on the topic “My favourite city”（請(qǐng)以“我最喜歡的城市”為題，寫一篇不少于 60詞的短文，內(nèi)容切題，語句連貫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）
注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。
Suggested questions：
1）Which city is your favourite city
2）What makes it your favourite city (Give at least 2 reasons)
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參考答案及試題解析
1．例文
Fire Rules Around Us Fire rules are crucial for our safety. Before entering public places, we should locate the safety exits. When a fire breaks out, call 119 immediately. Cover our nose and mouth with a wet towel and walk bent-over to avoid smoke. During a fire, the most important thing is to ensure our safety; do not waste time taking personal items. By following these fire rules, we can protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，闡述火災(zāi)的危險(xiǎn)性，如火災(zāi)會(huì)燒毀森林、破壞建筑等，進(jìn)而引出遵守消防守則的重要性；
第二步，詳細(xì)說明在火災(zāi)發(fā)生時(shí)的具體做法，如如何報(bào)警、逃生等。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①run away逃走
②first of all首先
③put out撲滅
[高分句型]
When a fire breaks out, call 119 immediately. (when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)
2．范文
Our trip to Xuhui campus Last week, we had a school trip to Xuhui campus.
We started on a sunny day in the morning. It took us two hours to drive there. When we got there, we were attracted by the landscape garden of Xuhui campus. Then we visited the history of Rongqiao middle school in the museum. We were deeply moved by the spirit of Rongqiao people. Finally, we tasted the delicious food of Xuhui canteen.
To make school trips more meaningful, I think we could do some research about the destination before the trip and take notes during the visit. In this way, we can gain more knowledge and have a better understanding of what we see. All in all, we had an interesting and meaningful school trip.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記述學(xué)校旅行經(jīng)歷的文章；
②時(shí)態(tài)：主要為一般過去時(shí)；
③提示：文章包含學(xué)校旅行的相關(guān)要點(diǎn)，介紹旅行去徐匯校區(qū)，描述旅行當(dāng)天的行程，還給出讓學(xué)校旅行更有意義的建議。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開篇點(diǎn)明主題，介紹上周進(jìn)行了一次去徐匯校區(qū)的學(xué)校旅行；
第二步，按時(shí)間順序詳細(xì)描述學(xué)校旅行當(dāng)天的經(jīng)歷，包括出發(fā)時(shí)間、路上用時(shí)，到達(dá)后被校園景觀吸引，參觀學(xué)校歷史博物館，被榮橋人精神打動(dòng)，以及品嘗食堂美食等；
第三步，就如何讓學(xué)校旅行更有意義提出自己的建議，旅行前對(duì)目的地做研究、旅行中做筆記，并強(qiáng)調(diào)這樣做能帶來的收獲，最后總結(jié)此次旅行有趣且有意義。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①attracted吸引
②moved感動(dòng)
③gain獲得
[高分句型]
①It took us two hours to drive there. (It takes sb some time to do句型)
②To make school trips more meaningful, I think we could do some research about the destination before the trip and take notes during the visit. (不定式作目的狀語)
3．例文：
An unforgettable trip to Beijing
I took an unforgettable trip to Beijing last summer vacation. I visited many famous places, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. I was amazed by the beauty and history of these places.
I also tried some delicious food, like Beijing Roast Duck and Peking Noodles. The food was so delicious that I still remember the taste.
What made this trip unforgettable was that I made some new friends. We shared our experiences and had a lot of fun together.
This trip not only broadened my horizons but also gave me a lot of wonderful memories. I will never forget it.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：以“一般過去時(shí)”為主；
③提示：介紹曾經(jīng)去過的地方，分享個(gè)人的經(jīng)歷，避免語法錯(cuò)誤，保持行文連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，引出主題，介紹一次難忘的旅行經(jīng)歷；
第二步，簡要介紹去的地方、時(shí)間、交通方式、游玩的景點(diǎn)以及美食等；
第三步，總結(jié)全文，表達(dá)感受。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①such as比如
②be amazed by對(duì)……感到驚訝
③not only…but also…不僅……而且……
[高分句型]
①The food was so delicious that I still remember the taste.（so…that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句）
②What made this trip unforgettable was that I made some new friends.（what引導(dǎo)的主語從句，that引導(dǎo)的表語從句）
4．例文
China is calling
China, which is also known as “the Divine Land”, is located in Asia continent of the earth. It has become one of the largest modern and international contries in the world. With the development of the economy, you can see that transportation in China is becoming increasingly convenient, and high-speed trains can be seen everywhere. All Chinese welcome you to visit China.
If you enjoy shopping, you should visit Hong Kong. It is called “Shopping Paradise” in China. You won’t feel bored if you walk in this city and many goods will attract. If you enjoy eating delicious food, don’t forget to visit Xi’an and Chongqing where a lot of local snacks will wait for you there.
I will always be in love with my motherland—China!
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，引出“中國在呼喚”的話題；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“你對(duì)祖國的看法、中國的變化、在中國旅游能做什么”等方面進(jìn)行介紹；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語，總結(jié)全文。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①modern現(xiàn)代的
②with the development of隨著……的發(fā)展
③enjoy doing享受做某事
[高分句型]
①China, which is also known as “the Divine Land”, is located in Asia continent of the earth.（which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）
②If you enjoy shopping, you should visit Hong Kong.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）
5．例文
Hi Jack,
I am so glad to receive your email. I can’t wait to see you, too.
It will be very hot in Shanghai next week, so you should bring some T-shirts and shorts as well as some sunscreen. There are a lot of interesting places, and I have made a wonderful travel plan for you. First, we will play in Changfeng Park. We will take many photos with dolphins and seals. Then, we will visit Yu Garden. It is a traditional place. We will buy some small souvenirs. After that, we will travel to Oriental Pearl Tower. It is the highest building in Asia. Finally, we will take a walk at the magnificent Huang Pu River. I believe you will have a good time in Shanghai. I like English local products very much. If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.
I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，寫一封郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般將來時(shí)”為主；
③提示：考生注意根據(jù)提示進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，首先表示自己很開心收到對(duì)方的郵件；
第二步，具體闡述他需要帶的東西以及介紹上海的一些有趣的地方；
第三步，最后介紹自己想要對(duì)方帶什么，以及表達(dá)期待對(duì)方的到來。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①as well as 也
②traditional 傳統(tǒng)的
③souvenirs 紀(jì)念品
④take a walk 散步
⑤magnificent 壯麗的
⑥convenient 方便的
[高分句型]
①I believe you will have a good time in Shanghai.（省略that賓語從句）
②If it is convenient for you, please bring me some.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）
6．例文
I would suggest France as a travel destination. France is located in Western Europe and is famous for its rich culture and history. The Eiffel Tower and the historic castles in the Loire Valley are must-see attractions. I love France because of its delicious food, friendly people, and beautiful scenery. When you visit France, make sure to learn some basic French. Also, try to visit both the cities and the countryside to get a full experience.
I hope you all consider visiting France during your next holiday. I’m sure you will have a wonderful time!
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：文章應(yīng)該包括四個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)；盡量多使用短語和句型；寫作中適當(dāng)使用連接詞，使行文連貫、順暢。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹旅游地的名稱和位置；
第二步，介紹旅游地的特點(diǎn)和吸引人的地方；
第三步，具體闡述自己為什么喜歡這個(gè)地方；
第四步，最后給出一些旅行建議。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①be located in位于
②because of因?yàn)?br/>③make sure確保
④try to do sth努力做某事
[高分句型]
I hope you all consider visiting France during your next holiday.（賓語從句）
7．例文
Dear Mr. Zhang,
For the study tour summer camp held by our school, I’d like to recommend a trip to the museum. Generally speaking, museums stand for art, culture and history. While visiting the museums, we can not only enjoy the splendid rich Chinese art and culture, but also learn from history. When talking about museums, the Palace Museum, which is famous for the Forbidden City, is the best choice for us. It is the best place for us to see exhibitions from the ancient.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：本文的主要時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：根據(jù)題目分析寫作要點(diǎn)完成本篇書面表達(dá)，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，要使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和詞匯，使語意通順，突出重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，寫明你最喜歡的一種設(shè)想；
第二步，寫出你推薦這個(gè)設(shè)想的理由；
第三步，推薦一個(gè)目的地。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① recommend 推薦
② generally speaking 通常來說
③ splendid 非常好的
④ exhibition 展覽
[高分句型]
① While visiting the museums, we can not only enjoy the splendid rich Chinese art and culture, but also learn from history. (not only...but also...引導(dǎo)的并列句)
② When talking about museums, the Palace Museum, which is famous for the Forbidden City, is the best choice for us. (非限制性定語從句)
8．例文
I at home and at school
I like reading very much. I often take out a book and read it quietly when I have free tine at home. Reading makes me happy, because it not only brings me knowledge, but also opens my eyes. But when I am at school, I listen carefully in class, and after class I play with my classmates. My classmates think I am outgoing and easy to get on with. So I have lots of friends.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇話題作文，為記敘文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：本文主要介紹自己在家和在學(xué)校不同的表現(xiàn)，并對(duì)自己的不同表現(xiàn)進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)。注意表達(dá)正確、語意連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步：介紹自己在家的表現(xiàn)，并進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)；
第二步：介紹自己在學(xué)校的表現(xiàn)，并進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)；
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①not only...but also...不僅……而且……
②get on with相處
③listen carefully認(rèn)真聽講
[高分句型]
①I often take out a book and read it quietly when I have free tine at home.(when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句)
②Reading makes me happy, because it not only brings me knowledge, but also opens my eyes. (because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)
9．例文
What am I
I have got lots of hobbies. What I like is to play basketball and draw pictures. But I like playing basketball the best. I usually play basketball with my friends after school. It depends on the weather. The reasons why I like playing basketball are that, basketball can bring me lots of fun. Furthermore, I play basketball in order to keep health. Moreover, I can make many friends when I play basketball. Finally, basketball can learn what is teamwork so that I know how to cooperate with my teammates.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，點(diǎn)題，介紹“我”；
第二步，具體介紹“我”在運(yùn)動(dòng)方面中是怎樣的；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語，總結(jié)全文。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①depends on取決于
②in order to為了
③cooperate with與……合作
[高分句型]
①What I like is to play basketball and draw pictures.（what引導(dǎo)的主語從句）
②Finally, basketball can learn what is teamwork so that I know how to cooperate with my teammates.（what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）
10．例文
The place I want to visit most
Summer holiday is coming. The place I want to visit most is Beijing.
As you know, Beijing is the capital of China and the 2008 Olympic Games was held there. Besides, there are many famous interesting places, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City, the Temple of Heaven and so on. I am excited to go to the Great Wall which is one of the greatest wonders of the world. I’m sure great changes must have taken place in Beijing.
If I have a chance to visit Beijing, I will climb the Great Wall first. I can’t wait.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；
③提示：根據(jù)提示問題以“The place I want to visit most”為題進(jìn)行寫作，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，并突出重點(diǎn)寫作。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，直接點(diǎn)題，表達(dá)最想去的地方是哪里；
第二步，介紹想要去的原因；
第三步，表達(dá)如果有機(jī)會(huì)去參觀，會(huì)在那里做什么。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①the capital of……的首都
②and so on等等
③take place發(fā)生
[高分句型]
①I am excited to go to the Great Wall which is one of the greatest wonders of the world. (which引導(dǎo)定語從句)
②If I have a chance to visit Beijing, I will climb the Great Wall first. (if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句)
11．例文：
My favourite subject
My favorite subject is English. I like it very much because it is not only interesting but also useful. English is an international language spoken by people from all over the world. I can use English to communicate with the foreigners if I study it well. I think it is useful for me. By learning English, I know different culture and customs. I want to learn it well. I like English very much.
【解析】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③ 提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，包括對(duì)英語的喜愛，為什么喜歡，以及學(xué)習(xí)英語的目標(biāo)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，明確主題——我最喜歡的學(xué)科是英語；
第二步，具體闡述為什么喜歡英語，包括它的有趣性和實(shí)用性，以及英語作為國際語言的重要性；
第三步，表達(dá)通過學(xué)習(xí)英語了解不同的文化和習(xí)俗，以及學(xué)習(xí)英語的決心。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① international language 國際語言
② communicate with 與……交流
③ culture and customs 文化和習(xí)俗
[高分句型]
① I like it very much because it is not only interesting but also useful. (because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)
② I can use English to communicate with foreigners if I study it well. (if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句)
12．例文：
My Dream Job
Everyone has his own dream job and each job has its meaning. I also have my dream job. I want to be a teacher when I grow up. I think teachers are great. On the one hand, they teach their students much knowledge. On the other hand, they can learn something new from their students while teaching. What’s more, I think teachers can be forever young by teaching and playing with kids. So I think this job is meaningful.
To make my dream come true, I’m going to study hard and learn something about education. I’m going to start when I graduate from university. I am going to work in Liupanshui, because it’s my hometown and I love it.
I am sure my dream will come true one day.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，根據(jù)提示描述理想的工作，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫，邏輯清晰。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開門見山，介紹理想的工作是什么及原因；
第二步，介紹如何實(shí)現(xiàn)夢想；
第三步，表達(dá)去哪里工作及什么時(shí)候工作；
第四步，書寫結(jié)語。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①on the one hand ... on the other hand一方面……另一方面……
②come true實(shí)現(xiàn)
③meaningful有意義的
[高分句型]
①To make my dream come true, I’m going to study hard and learn something about education.（動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語）
②I am going to work in Liupanshui, because it’s my hometown and I love it.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）
13．例文
Use electricity safely
Using electricity safely is a very important topic in our daily lives.
First, ensure any electrical items are approved standard when purchasing and keep them correctly maintained. Second, unplug electrical items that are not in regular use and
ensure that you unplug and switch off electrical items when you are away from the house for any length of time . Third, don’t use any electrical items in the bathroom unless specifically
designed for use there, such as shavers and electric toothbrushes. But when you use them, make sure not to get them wet and avoid plugging and unplugging with wet hands. The last, always turn
the electrics off at the mains if carrying out any electrical repairs and only attempt repairs if you know what you are doing.
We should use electricity carefully because items left plugged in can be a fire risk and waste energy if left on standby.
【解析】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇說明文；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③ 提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“提示信息”中“應(yīng)該如何用電；安全用電的原因以及安全用電的建議”，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“安全用電是我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪蟹浅Ｖ匾脑掝}。”來引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“如何安全用電以及安全用電的建議”重點(diǎn)介紹安全用電的具體情況；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)“我們應(yīng)該謹(jǐn)慎用電，因?yàn)椴迳想娫吹奈锲啡绻幱诖龣C(jī)狀態(tài)，則可能會(huì)引發(fā)火災(zāi)，并浪費(fèi)能源。”
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① switch off關(guān)上
② make sure not to do sth確保不做某事
[高分句型]
① Third, don’t use any electrical items in the bathroom unless specifically designed for use there, such as shavers and electric toothbrushes.（don’t...祈使句的否定形式，表勸告）
② We should use electricity carefully because items left plugged in can be a fire risk and waste energy if left on standby.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）
14．
My favorite person
My favorite person is my teacher, Ms. Wang. She is a 36-year-old woman. But she is tall and thin with long straight hair. And she often wears black pants and a white shirt. She teaches us English. We all like listening to her. Her classes are very interesting and creative. Because she has different ways of teaching. But she is very strict with us in everything. She is warm-hearted. When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us. We all know she is always ready to help others. In a word, I love Ms. Wang.
【解析】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③ 提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“要點(diǎn)提示”中喜歡的美好事物以及喜歡的理由的介紹。適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開門見山直接介紹最喜歡的人是王老師。
第二步，具體闡述喜歡王老師的理由。
第三步，書寫結(jié)束語。表達(dá)“愛王老師”的想法，首尾呼應(yīng)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① be strict with對(duì)……嚴(yán)格
② in a word總之
③ be always ready to help others樂于助人
④ in trouble處于困難中
[高分句型]
① We all know she is always ready to help others.（know后是省略了that的賓語從句）
② When we are in trouble, she can try her best to help us.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）
③ But she is tall and thin with long straight hair.（with表伴隨）
15．例文
The person I admire most
The most admirable person of mine is my dearest mother. She is an ordinary woman—not very beautiful and a little heavy. But she is very kind and enthusiastic. Although she didn’t receive high education, she knows a lot and often teaches me the essence of life. She always tells me “honesty is the best policy” and “no pain, no gain”. My mother loves me and tries to give me a comfortable environment to study and live in. She also understands me and treats me as a friend. From my mother, I have learnt to be an optimistic person with a strong mind. I love my mother. Although she is ordinary, she is the person I admire most.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，以第三人稱為主。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，首句點(diǎn)題，說明最欽佩的人是媽媽；
第二步，具體闡述欽佩媽媽的原因；
第三步，最后講述從媽媽身上學(xué)到的以及表達(dá)對(duì)媽媽喜愛之情。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①honesty is the best policy誠實(shí)為上策
②try to do sth盡量去做某事
③give sb sth給某人某物
[高分句型]
①Although she didn’t receive high education, she knows a lot and often teaches me the essence of life.（although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句）
②From my mother, I have learnt to be an optimistic person with a strong mind.（with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）
16．例文：
A Gift to My Mother
Mother’s Day is coming. I want to give my mother a surprise. I’ll buy a special gift for her. I know she likes listening to music. But she is too busy every day. She is busy working and taking care of her family, and she has no time to do what she likes. So I want to buy an MP4 for her with my lucky money. I hope she won’t be so tired. She can listen to music after work to relax herself. I think it’s the best gift for her.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般將來時(shí)”；
③提示：根據(jù)所給提示內(nèi)容介紹給媽媽的一件禮物。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，說明在即將來臨的母親節(jié)要送母親一份禮物。
第二步，介紹要送的禮物及原因。
第三步，總結(jié)母親一定會(huì)喜歡這個(gè)禮物的。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①give my mother a surprise給母親一個(gè)驚喜
②be busy doing忙于做某事
③take care of 照顧
[高分句型]
①She is busy working and taking care of her family（and并列了兩個(gè)動(dòng)名詞作賓語）
②I hope she won’t be so tired.（省略that的賓語從句）
17．例文
A different teacher
There are many different people or things in my mind. But my English teacher Mr. Li is very different. He is very friendly to us and always answers our questions patiently.
I remembered there was a sport meeting when I was in Grade 8. He asked me to take part in running race. I told him that I didn’t run fast, so I couldn’t participate in it. The teacher told me that if I wanted to get success, I must try to do it first. After listening to his words, I tried my best to exercise after school. With his encouragement and my persistence, I gained the third prize. What’s more, he is like a friend to me. When I have some trouble, he will give me some useful advice.
I feel very happy to have such a good teacher.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文，為記敘文。
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，根據(jù)題干中的提示介紹一個(gè)與眾不同的人或物，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖，表示對(duì)自己來說英語老師是與眾不同的；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。具體闡述他是什么樣子的以及為什么他是與眾不同的；
第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)“很高興有這樣一位老師”。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①be friendly to對(duì)……友好；
②take part in參加
[高分句型]
①I remembered there was a sport meeting when I was in Grade 8.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）
②The teacher told me that if I wanted to get success, I must try to do it first.（that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句以及if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）
18．例文：
The Hero in My Heart
Yuan Longping is a hero in my heart.
He was born in 1930 and died at the age of 91. Mr. Yuan spent nearly 60 years doing research on better rice in order to make people in the world have enough food. And he was successful! He was honored as Father of Hybrid Rice.
I think Mr. Yuan was a great man. He was so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much. I will never forget him.
As a student, I have decided not to waste any food from now on. Also, I’ll study harder than before so that I can master more knowledge and skills. When I grow up, I’ll work hard for our country like him.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過去時(shí)”；
③提示：本文話題已給出，介紹心目中的英雄，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，直入主題引出自己心目中的英雄；
第二步，詳細(xì)介紹其基本情況并介紹他都做了什么事；
第三步，寫你為什么崇拜他；
第四步，寫你從他身上學(xué)到了什么。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①at the age of在……歲
②in order to為了
③be honored as被授予
④study harder更努力地學(xué)習(xí)
[高分句型]
①I think Mr.Yuan was a great man.（賓語從句）
②He was so selfless and hard-working that I respect him very much.（so...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句）
③I’ll study harder than before so that I can master more knowledge and skills. （so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句）
19．參考范文：
My favourite city
My favourite city is Dalian. It’s in the northeast of China. Now the population of Dalian is more than six million. Dalian is on the coast and it’s especially famous for its sea food. Of course, Dalian is a good place to have a holiday. There, the weather is fine. It’s not hot in summer and not cold in winter. And it has got many interesting places, such as Laohutan Ocean Park, Bangchui Island and Dalian Modern Museum.
Dalian is a beautiful city, and I like it best.
【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于話題作文寫作，要求按照所給的要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇短文，介紹我最喜歡的城市。注意寫作時(shí)要點(diǎn)要齊全，同時(shí)也可進(jìn)行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮。
2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一、三人稱來敘述；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；寫作時(shí)，注意承接上文，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示具體介紹我最喜歡的城市是什么，以及什么讓它成為你最喜歡的城市；文中一定要包含題干中列出的所有要點(diǎn)；可以運(yùn)用一些短語和常用句型為文章增添色彩；注意單詞書寫的準(zhǔn)確度，語法運(yùn)用的準(zhǔn)確度，上下文注意連接的流暢度，以及邏輯合理。
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