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中小學教育資源及組卷應用平臺
中小學教育資源及組卷應用平臺
2024-2025學年八年級英語下冊期末復習專項北師大版
（期末考點培優）專題15 書面表達
學校:___________姓名：___________班級：___________考號：___________
1．研學旅行是通過集體旅行來開展學習和體驗相結合的校外教育活動，深受學生的喜愛，為此，請你給校報英語專欄寫一篇短文，介紹學校開展的研學活動并發表看法。
內容要點如下：
(1) Learn about tea picking;
(2) Observe (觀察) plants and animals;
(3) Plant trees along the river;
(4) Visit places of interest and museums.
注意：
(1) 文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；
(2) 詞數80左右；
(3) 內容連貫，不要逐條翻譯，補充一兩點個人看法；
(4) 開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
參考詞匯：experience v. 體驗 nature n.自然 meaningful adj.有意義的
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students. Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
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2．暑假即將來臨，很多同學已經開始計劃如何度過一個有意義的暑假。假如你是李華，請你以“How to Spend a Safe and Meaningful Holiday”為話題給你的好友Mike寫一封郵件。
要點如下：
1. 嘗試做一些志愿者工作，提高自理能力；
2. 保護自己，遠離河流等危險的地方；
3. 多讀書和鍛煉，增長知識，強健體魄。
注意：
1. 詞數80～100；
2. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3. 郵件的格式、開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。
Dear Mike,
How are you going I’m writing to tell you how I will spend a safe and meaningful holiday.
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How will you spend your holiday I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
3．當你在學習、交友、家庭生活等方面遇到困難或煩惱時，是怎樣應對和處理的呢？請你根據以下提示用英語寫一篇短文，分享一次自己解決煩惱的經歷并談談你的收獲和感悟。
□ What was your trouble □ How did you solve it □ What have you learned from the experience
注意：1.短文須包含以上所有提示，可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
2.文中不得出現真實姓名和個人信息；
3.詞數80左右 (短文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數)。
People always have trouble in their daily life.
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4．提示：每個人都經歷過童年，小時候的一些玩具總是令人難忘的。請以“My Favorite Toy”為題，用英語寫一篇短文，向大家介紹你最愛的玩具以及你喜歡它的原因。
要求：1.根據所給題目，寫一篇短文，詞數不少于 80個；
2.語言流暢，書寫規范，卷面整潔；
3.文中不得使用你的真實姓名，校名，否則以零分計；
4.請將短文寫在答題卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
My Favorite Toy
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5．建設平安校園是我們每個人的責任與義務。作為一名中學生，我們應珍惜自己的生命，注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Li Hua，請你就安全問題，向全校學生寫一封安全倡議書。
提示要點：（1）不帶管制刀具到學校；（2）不獨自下河游泳；（3）不與他人打架；（4）上學放學途中注意交通安全；（5）不吃變質食物；（6）遇緊急情況，立即向警察或老師求助。
參考詞匯：管制刀具：restricted knives；變質食物： spoiled food；緊急情況：emergency；交通安全： pay attention to the traffic
寫作要求：（1）至少寫出提示要點中的3個， 層次清晰，書寫規范。
（2）可適當發揮，80詞左右，開頭、結尾已給出，不計入總詞數（3）嚴禁出現自己的真實姓名和學校等相關信息。
Dear students,
As we know, safety is the most important thing in our daily lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe.
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In a word, following these safeties rules above can make us live in peace.
Yours,
Li hua
6．赤峰文旅火爆出圈，你的筆友Mike來信說他暑假要來赤峰旅行，請你用英文寫一封回信，介紹一些本地的景點和特產，以及一些注意事項。內容包括：1.表示歡迎和期盼。2.介紹一些本地景點和特產。3.注意事項。
參考詞匯：beef jerky（牛肉干）, Double Cooked Pork Slices（鍋包肉）, Asihatu Stone Forest（阿斯哈圖石林），grassland（草原，牧場）
要求：
1)文中不要出現與考生相關的真實信息；
2)適當增加細節，詞數70左右（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to receive your letter.
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I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
7．每個人都經歷過童年，小時候的一些瞬間總是令人難以忘懷，那段無憂無慮、快樂無比的日子在我們的記憶中也將永不褪色 請根據提示以My childhood memory為題寫一篇英語短文，向大家講述你童年發生的故事。
寫作提示：
1. When did it happen
2. What was your memory
寫作要求：
1.內容包含提示要點，可適當發揮；
2.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫工整；
3. 80詞左右。
My childhood memory
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8．每個人在生活中都會遇到困難和壓力。作為初二的學生，Tom在英文交友留言板上發出了一封求助帖。假如你是李華，請你給他寫一封回帖，幫助他走出困境。詞數：80～100，格式和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
I feel very tired these days. I feel really stressed and can’t sleep well. I don’t have many friends at school, so I don’t know whom I can talk to. Also, my parents are very busy. I don’t know how I can communicate with them. Who can help me Tom
Dear Tom,
I have learned that you are facing some problems, so I am writing to help you. Here are some of my suggestions.
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根據以下情境寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）
英語課上，你們班進行了一場有關網絡小說（web novels）的討論，同學們提出了不同的看法。請根據表格提示，寫一篇不少于60詞的英語短文，表述這次討論的內容。
一些同學認為 另一些同學認為 你的看法
1.網絡小說很有趣； 2.能夠開闊視野，提高寫作水平。 1.看網絡小說影響視力； 2.浪費時間，容易沉迷其中，影響學習。 ……
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10．Write at least 60 words on the topic “An unforgettable trip to ________” (以“一次去……的難忘之旅”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出現任何人名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。）
The following points are only for reference:
When and where did you take the trip
What did you do there
Why was the trip unforgettable
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11．減負之后，同學們有了更多的課余時間。你打算如何利用你的課余時間呢？你有什么樣的建議呢 請你根據下圖提示，以“How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful ”為題寫一篇文章。
寫作要求:
1. 寫作內容至少包括導圖提示中的兩點，并給出相關原因。
2. 語言流暢，層次清晰，可以適當發揮。
3. 詞數80-100，書寫規范，卷面整潔。
4. 文中不能出現考生姓名和學校名稱。
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful
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12．在我們成長過程中，我們去過許多不同的地方。有的地方會給我們留下深刻的印象，成為我們心中最美好的回憶。請你根據以下提示要點，寫一篇英語短文，介紹一下你去過的最好的地方。
要點如下：
(1) 去了哪里；
(2) 做了什么；
(3) 你的感受。
注意：
(1) 詞數80-100，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
(2) 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
(3) 文中不能出現真實姓名及學校名稱。
We have all been to many different places. The best place I have ever been to is
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13．假設你是英語校刊Just Ask專欄的編輯李華，收到一封國際生Tom的英文來信。他在信中提出自己在本學期遇到的問題。請根據以下提示寫一封70詞左右的回信。
內容包括：
1.Tom在學習及生活方面遇到的問題；
2.你的建議及理由。
注意：
1.開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；
2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3.文中不得出現真實姓名、學校等信息。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some trouble now.
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I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
14．假如你是Jennifer，中國網友李華在郵件中向你訴說了自己無法與父母和諧相處的煩惱，請根據以下提示，給他回封郵件，并提出解決的建議。
寫作要點：
1. 表達得知近況后的心情（遺憾）并表達對他的理解；
2. 父母與孩子相處過程中會遇到的問題。
(1)父母：過于關注成績 （2）孩子：缺少溝通
3. 提出如何與父母和諧相處的建議。
寫作要求：
1. 不得使用真實的姓名和學校名；
2. 可適當增添細節，行文連貫；
3. 字跡工整，語言精煉，條理清晰。
Dear Li Hua,
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Yours,
Jennifer
15．“讀萬卷書，行萬里路。”你校英語社團將舉辦以“熱愛閱讀”為主題的征文活動。請根據以下提示，以“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”為題寫篇短文，分享你對閱讀的看法，并提出建議。
內容要點：
1. 閱讀給你和同學們帶來了什么好處，如：開闊視野（open one’s eyes）……；
2. 同學們在閱讀中還存在什么問題，如：一些人不愿意閱讀，一些人沒時間閱讀……；
3. 針對存在的問題，提出你的建議。
要求：
1. 參考提示內容，可適當發揮；
2. 語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；
3. 文中不能出現你的真實姓名、校名和地名；
4. 詞數：不少于60詞。（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading has become part of our life.
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16．假如你是 Nancy，今天你班開展了“珍愛地球，保護環境”主體班會活動，通過此次活動，你對環境正在惡化有了深刻的認識。會后，你打算寫一份以“Going green”為主題的倡議書，號召全校同學立刻行動起來，為保護環境而努力。倡議書必須包括下面表格中內容。
steps should shouldn’t
公共交通 1.步行或騎自行車去上學；2.…… ……
節約能源 1.較短時間淋浴；2.…… ……
減少污染 像塑料、紙這些東西被分類，然后被回收 ……
你的希望 ……
注意：
1.文中不得出現真實人名、單位名：
2.補齊要點，適當發揮；
3.詞數在90左右，已給出的文字不計入總詞數。
相關詞匯：交通車輛 transport 減少 reduce
Dear friends,
As we all know, our environment is getting worse and worse. It’s time for us to go green. Here are some simple steps to take.
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Yours,
Nancy
17．一系列的“新”已成為大家關注的熱詞，學校教育也將翻開新的篇章。未來的教室會是什么樣呢？請你以“My Dream Classroom”為題，根據思維導圖提示寫一篇英語短文，向同學們介紹你理想的教室。
My Dream Classroom What will it look like What will make it “new”
How will the students study
What do you think of the dream classroom
注意：1. 可在思維導圖內容提示的基礎上適當拓展信息；
2. 詞數80字左右（短文的開頭已給出，不計入詞數）；
3. 不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人真實信息，否則不予評分。
My Dream Classroom
Hello, everyone! Let me introduce my dream classroom to you.
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18．每個人都會有一個專屬的童年，在這期間，你也許會有一些(個)格外珍惜的物品，它(們)會給你留下比較深刻的回憶。你孩童時代最喜歡并且保留的東西是什么呢 請你根據下面的問題提示寫一篇英語短文，介紹一下吧。
1. What is your favourite thing from childhood which you still have
2. How long have you had it
3. How did you get it Did someone give it to you Who
4. Why do you like it so much Can you say something more about it
寫作要求：
1. 緊扣主題，結合提示信息，適當發揮，語言表達準確、語義通順連貫；
2. 書寫工整，不少于80詞。請考生將題目寫在答題卡相應處；
3. 文中不得出現你的任何真實信息(校名，姓名，地名等)。
My favourite thing from childhood
My favorite thing from childhood is
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19．健康強壯的身體是中學生有效學習的保證，但過多的上網時間搶走了我們的鍛煉時間，垃圾食品威脅著我們的健康。學校廣播站設立了一個《健康論壇》的欄目，號召同學們踴躍投稿。請你根據以下內容要點，以“How to Keep Healthy”為題用英語寫一篇短文向學校廣播站投稿。
內容包括：
1.健康的重要性；
2.如何保持健康 (如健康飲食、有規律地運動、保持良好的生活習慣等)；
3.呼吁大家熱愛健康生活。
注意：
1.詞數為80左右；
2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3.文中不能出現真實姓名及學校名稱；
4.短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
參考詞匯: health (n.健康), a balanced diet (平衡飲食), regularly (adv.有規律地), exercise (v &n,運動、鍛煉)
How to Keep Healthy
As a middle school student, we should live a healthy life
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20．作為新時代的青少年，應當倡導健康生活理念，既要有責任擔當意識，也要有不畏艱難、樂善好施的優秀品質。你校英語網站以“How to Be a Better Person”為題開展征文活動，請根據征稿內容寫一篇短文，要點如下：
1. 健康生活，如：飲食、鍛煉……
2. 牢記責任，如：保護環境……
3. 不畏艱難，如：勇敢面對……
4. 樂善好施，如：參與慈善……
要求：
1. 所寫內容必須包括題目要求的所有信息，可適當發揮；
2. 詞數不少于80詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
3. 不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等信息。
How to Be a Better Person
As a middle school student, I should try my best to be a better person. I will do the following things. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
中小學教育資源及組卷應用平臺
中小學教育資源及組卷應用平臺
21世紀教育網(www.21cnjy.com)
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參考答案及試題解析
1．例文
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students. Our school has also held many study trips. Here are my experiences.
Firstly, we went to pick tea in person and made things by hand to experience life. Secondly, we got close to nature and learnt more knowledge by watching real plants and animals. Then, after we visited some museums as well as places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply. Finally, we saw some meaningful movies and felt the great changes of our country.
In my opinion, the study trip is helpful for us. We can experience different activities and get close to nature. We can also learn more meaningful things. I hope we will have more chances to take part in these study trips.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般過去時”和“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏內容要點中的信息，介紹學校組織的到產茶名地“杭州”開展的研學活動。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，引出這次活動；
第二步，介紹活動中做了什么，體驗并學習到了什么；
第三步，介紹自己的看法及感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①in person 親自
②by hand 用手
③in one’s opinion 在某人看來
④take part in 參加
[高分句型]
①Then, after we visited some museums as well as places of interest, we understood Chinese history and culture more deeply.（after引導的時間狀語從句）
②I hope we will have more chances to take part in these study trips.（賓語從句）
2．例文
Dear Mike,
How are you going I’m writing to tell you how I will spend a safe and meaningful holiday. Firstly, I plan to try some volunteer work, like cleaning up the city parks or visiting the old to cheer them up. I believe through the volunteer work, I can develop my independence. Secondly, I will keep away from the dangerous places like rivers to protect myself. What’s more, I think it’s necessary to develop my body and mind. So I will read more books and get more exercise. Also, I plan to help my parents share the housework, because it’s also our duty to make our homes clean and comfortable. I think my holiday will be colorful.
How will you spend your holiday I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為郵件；
②時態：時態以“一般將來時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節完整表述內容。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開頭已給出，引出本文主題；
第二步，介紹自己的暑假計劃——嘗試做志愿者工作、去保護自己的地方、多讀書和鍛煉。
第三步，總結全文，表達期待收到回信。
[亮點詞匯]
①plan to do sth.計劃做某事
②clean up清理
③keep away from遠離
[高分句型]
①What’s more, I think it’s necessary to develop my body and mind. (賓語從句）
②Also, I plan to help my parents share the housework, because it’s also our duty to make our homes clean and comfortable. (because引導的原因狀語從句）
3．例文
People always have trouble in their daily life. Last week, I failed in the math exam. When my mother knew the result, she felt very unhappy and we argued loudly with each other. I talked to my best friend about this problem. She told me it was wrong for me to talk back to my mother. After that, I said sorry to my mother. My mother also said sorry to me and encouraged me to study hard.
What I have learned from the experience is that when we have problems, we should find someone to talk about them and find some ways to solve them.
【詳解】［總體分析］
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②時態：主要運用“一般過去時”和“一般現在時”。
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏題目要求中每一項內容，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
［寫作步驟］
第一步，開篇點明日常生活中難免遇到麻煩，以自己數學考試失利為切入點，引發讀者共鳴。
第二步，詳細描述與母親的爭執、向朋友求助、彼此道歉和解的過程，展現溝通的重要性。
第三步，總結感悟，升華文章主題。
［亮點詞匯］
①trouble麻煩
②fail in the exam考試失利
③result結果
④argue爭吵
⑤talk to sb. about sth和某人談論某事
⑥talk back頂嘴
⑦encourage鼓勵
⑧solve解決
［高分句型］
①When my mother knew the result, she felt very unhappy and we argued loudly with each other.（When引導的時間狀語從句）
②She told me it was wrong for me to talk back to my mother.（賓語從句）
③What I have learned from the experience is that when we have problems, we should find someone to talk about them and find some ways to solve them.（that引導的表語從句）
4．例文
My Favorite Toy
My favorite toy from childhood is my teddy bear. I have had it since I was a child. My grandmother gave it to me as a birthday gift on my fourth birthday. I love the teddy bear so much because it was very beautiful and cool. It is special to me because my grandmother made it for me by herself. I’ll keep it forever to remind me of my grandmother. The teddy bear has left many good and sweet memories in my heart. I always slept next to it when I was a child. It made me feel safe. I often played with it. It looked like my friend. Thanks to the teddy bear, I didn’t feel lonely. All in all, it may be a bit old but I like it very much.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；
②時態：時態主要為“一般現在時和一般過去時”；
③提示：寫作要圍繞主題，表述你最愛的玩具以及你喜歡它的原因。適當增加細節，表述完整。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，直入主題表述我最喜歡的玩具是什么；
第二步，詳細表述喜歡這個玩具的原因及玩具給自己帶來的影響；
第三步，對文章做出總結。
[亮點詞匯]
①remind sb of使某人想起
②Thanks to多虧
③All in all總之
[高分句型]
①I love the teddy bear so much because it was very beautiful and cool.（because引導的原因狀語從句）
②I always slept next to it when I was a child.（when引導的時間狀語從句）
5．例文
Dear students,
As we know, safety is the most important thing in our daily lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe.
We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents permission. And, we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore, if we meet some emergency, we must call for help from the police or our teachers.
In a word, following these safeties rules above can make us live in peace.
Yours,
Li hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏提示，并適當添加細節，注意字母大小寫以及標點符號。
[寫作步驟]
第一步、開篇點題，引出話題；
第二步、介紹需要注意的安全問題；
第三步、書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①be friendly to sb.對某人友好
②pay attention to注意
③call for help呼救
[高分句型]
①We mustn’t bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems. (because引導原因狀語從句)
6．例文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to receive your letter. Welcome to Chifeng! There are many beautiful places to visit here. You can go to the Asihatu Stone Forest to see the wonderful stones. You can also go to the grassland to enjoy the fresh air and the blue sky. Don’t forget to try our local specialties, such as beef jerky and Double Cooked Pork Slices.
When you come here, you should pay attention to the weather. It can be very hot in summer, so you should bring some light clothes and sunscreen. Also, be careful when you are traveling.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：文章圍繞歡迎 Mike 來赤峰，介紹當地景點、美食及注意事項展開，內容較完整，符合書信交流場景。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表達收到來信的喜悅并歡迎 Mike 來到赤峰，點明當地有許多美麗景點可供游覽；
第二步，具體介紹赤峰值得一去的景點，如阿斯哈圖石林和草原，還推薦了當地特色美食；
第三步，提醒 Mike 來赤峰時要注意天氣情況和旅行安全，最后表達期待其到來。
[亮點詞匯]
①local specialties 當地特色美食
②pay attention to 注意
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①Don’t forget to try our local specialties, such as beef jerky and Double Cooked Pork Slices.（否定祈使句）
② It can be very hot in summer, so you should bring some light clothes and sunscreen.（so 連接的因果關系并列句）
7．例文
My childhood memory
Like many children, I had a happy childhood under the care and love of my parents. My mother took me to the kindergarten and home every day. I thought mother was so kind and healthy that she would never get sick.
But one day, my father went to the kindergarten to get me back. I asked, “Why doesn’t my mother come ” “She is sick, and she is in hospital,” said Father. I felt sad and frightened. Then I began to cry. “Don’t cry, or your mother would worry. You should be a good child.” I seemed to understand my mother was too tired. I made up my mind I would look after my mother from then on.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 時態：時態主要為“一般過去時”；
③ 提示：寫作要點已給出，結合寫作提示的兩個問題，適當增加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，概括的介紹自己童年是快樂的，介紹我認為童年快樂的原因；
第二步，詳細介紹我媽媽生病的經歷；
第三步，總結媽媽生病對我的影響。
[亮點詞匯]
① under the care and love 在照顧和關愛下
② never get sick 從不生病
③ from then on 從那時起
[高分句型]
①I made up my mind I would look after my mother from then on.（賓語從句）
8．例文
Dear Tom,
I have learned that you are facing some problems, so I am writing to help you. Here are some of my suggestions.
First of all, having a good study plan can really help you make better use of your time. This way, you can make sure you’ve got time to relax and sleep enough. It’s important to stay healthy. As for making friends, why not try joining some clubs or groups It’s a good way to meet people who share your interests. Also, remember, a smile can go a long way. It sounds like your parents are pretty busy, but I’m sure they care about you a lot. It’s better to talk with them about how you’re feeling so that they can understand you better.
I really hope the advice can be helpful to you. I hope everything will be better soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件。
②時態：時態主要為“一般現在時”。
③提示：根據求助帖回復。注意行文連貫，邏輯清晰，無拼寫和語法錯誤。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，承接給出的開頭，介紹自己的建議；
第二步，給出有關處理壓力、保證睡眠、交朋友以及與父母溝通的建議；
第三步，希望建議有幫助。
[亮點詞匯]
①First of all首先
②make better use of更好地利用
③make sure確保
[高分句型]
①It’s a good way to meet people who share your interests. (who引導的限制性定語從句)
②I really hope the advice can be helpful to you. (省略that的賓語從句)
9．例文
We have had a discussion about web novels in our class.
Some of my classmates consider that we can read web novels which are very interesting and can also open up our eyes and improve our writing skills. However, others do not agree. They think we shouldn’t do that, because there are too many web novels on the Internet, reading too much on the web is not good for eyesight. What’s worse, it is a waste of time to form the habit of reading network novels, which will not only affect our study but also affect our health.
As for me, I don’t want to spend my limited time on web novels now. If I want, I will do that in summer holidays, and try to achieve balance between physical exercise and reading to protect my eyesight well.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態以“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏提示要點，可適當發揮。
[寫作步驟]
第一步：表明寫作話題——有關網絡小說的討論；
第二步：闡述不同同學的看法；
第三步：表明自己的看法。
[亮點詞匯]
①open up打開
②is good for對……有好處
③not only … but also …不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①Some of my classmates consider that we can read web novels which are very interesting and can also open up our eyes and improve our writing skills. (賓語從句和定語從句）
②They think we shouldn’t do that, because there are too many web novels on the Internet, reading too much on the web is not good for eyesight. (狀語從句)
10．例文：
An unforgettable trip to Beijing
I took an unforgettable trip to Beijing last summer vacation. I visited many famous places, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. I was amazed by the beauty and history of these places.
I also tried some delicious food, like Beijing Roast Duck and Peking Noodles. The food was so delicious that I still remember the taste.
What made this trip unforgettable was that I made some new friends. We shared our experiences and had a lot of fun together.
This trip not only broadened my horizons but also gave me a lot of wonderful memories. I will never forget it.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
②時態：以“一般過去時”為主；
③提示：介紹曾經去過的地方，分享個人的經歷，避免語法錯誤，保持行文連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，引出主題，介紹一次難忘的旅行經歷；
第二步，簡要介紹去的地方、時間、交通方式、游玩的景點以及美食等；
第三步，總結全文，表達感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①such as比如
②be amazed by對……感到驚訝
③not only…but also…不僅……而且……
[高分句型]
①The food was so delicious that I still remember the taste.（so…that引導結果狀語從句）
②What made this trip unforgettable was that I made some new friends.（what引導的主語從句，that引導的表語從句）
11．例文：
How to Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful
Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful？
First, it’s good to help our parents do some housework to show love for them. Second, we will know more about the world by reading. Thirdly, it’s a good chance for us to listen to music and relax ourselves. What’s more, we can visit museums and broaden our horizons. Last but not least, we can take an active part in some special activities as volunteers to help those in need.
In a word, let’s make full use of our spare time and promote ourselves.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：主要時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的每一項提示，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，引出“如何讓我們的業余生活更有意義？”的話題；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從“分擔家務、閱讀書籍、聽音樂、參觀博物館以及做志愿者”等方面闡述。
第三步，書寫結語，呼吁好好利用業余時間。
[亮點詞匯]
①take part in參加
②make full use of充分利用
③in a word總而言之
[高分句型]
① First, it’s good to help our parents do some housework to show love for them. (it作形式主語)
②In a word, let’s make full use of our spare time and promote ourselves. (祈使句)
12．例文
We have all been to many different places. The best place I have ever been to is Yunnan.
I went to Yunnan with my parents by car when I was 10 years old. When we got to Yunnan, we fell in love with its beauty of nature. My father didn’t use to like taking photos. To our surprise, he stopped the car on the way to Gaoli-gongshan Mountain and asked my mother and I to take some photos. We enjoyed different special food there. I also ate the worms as food for the first time.
As long as I have time, I will go to Yunnan again. It has not only beautiful scenery but also delicious food.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態以“一般過去時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不用遺漏寫作要點中的信息，并適當添加內容，使文章語句通順。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開門見山，直接點出自己去過的最美的地方；
第二步，具體介紹自己去云南旅行的經歷；
第三步，書寫結尾，表達感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①fall in love with 愛上
②to my surprise 讓我驚訝的是
③neither...nor... 既不……也不……
[高分句型]
①I went to Yunnan with my parents by car when I was 10 years old.（時間狀語從句）
②As long as I have time, I will go to Yunnan again.（條件狀語從句）
13．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some trouble now.
You mentioned having difficulty with learning Chinese, and I believe that practicing your speaking skills as much as possible could really help. You can also watch some Chinese movies or listen to Chinese songs to improve your listening skills. As for your problem of making friends, you should be more active and try to talk to your classmates. Joining some clubs or taking part in activities is another great way to meet new people. Don’t be afraid to make mistakes. I believe you will make more friends soon.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；
②時態：一般現在時和一般過去時
③提示：寫作要點和開頭部分已給出，考試應注意要求中的內容，充實細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖，表達自己對于Tom所遇到問題的理解心情；
第二步，列舉出Tom所遇到問題，并給出自己的建議和看法；
第三步，希望所提出的建議和方法能夠有所幫助。
[亮點詞匯]
①mention提到，說起，
②have difficulty with 對某事有困難
③as for至于
④take part in 參加
[高分句型]
①You mentioned having difficulty with learning Chinese, and I believe that practicing your speaking skills as much as possible could really help. (并列句，賓語從句)
②I believe you will make more friends soon. (賓語從句)
14．例文：
Dear Li Hua,
How is everything going these days I know that you can’t get on well with your parents. But don’t worry about it. My classmates also have the similar problems to yours. For example, parents often pay more attention to grades. Children don’t like to communicate with parents and can’t understand them well. So they have a quarrel with each other. However, we should understand our parents. Here’s some advice.
First, when you meet something difficult, you should talk about it with your parents. They may understand you and help you. Second, tell your parents that grade is not the most important thing. Life shouldn’t just be about grades. Free time activities like sports and hanging out with friends are important, too. Third, do more chores at home. It can make your parents feel happy.
I hope things will be better for you soon.
Yours,
Jennifer
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件。
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”。
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意提出的建議應確實有效，符合實際且有條理。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖。表明“我知道你和父母相處的不好，不要擔心”，并安慰對方有一些建議，引出下文。
第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。給出具體的建議。
第三步，書寫結語。對于對方的問題有一個美好的祈愿。
[亮點詞匯]
①get on well with與……相處的好
②pay more attention to多關注
③communicate with與……溝通
[高分句型]
①Second, tell your mother that grade is not the most important thing.（祈使句，賓語從句）
15．例文
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading has become part of our life. It brings many benefits to us and our classmates. Firstly, reading can open our eyes and enrich our knowledge. Secondly, it can improve our language skills and creativity. However, some students are not willing to read and some don’t have enough time to read.
To solve these problems, I suggest that we should set aside some time for reading every day. We can start by reading short stories or articles that interest us. Also, we can join a reading club or share books with our friends to make reading more fun.
In a word, reading is very important and beneficial. Let’s enjoy reading and enjoy life.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態以“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應根據提示要點進行書面表達，不要遺漏要點，可適當發揮。應能夠圍繞主題準確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達自己的思想，進而完成寫作任務。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖，引出話題；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。具體分享你對閱讀的看法，并提出具體建議。
第三步，書寫結語，表達愿望。
[亮點詞匯]
①brings benefits to給……帶來好處
②open one’s eyes開闊眼界
③be willing to do sth愿意做某事
④set aside some time for為……留出一些時間
[高分句型]
①However, some students are not willing to read and some don’t have enough time to read. (并列句)
②To solve these problems, I suggest that we should set aside some time for reading every day. (賓語從句)
16．One possible version:
Dear friends,
As we all know, our environment is getting worse and worse. It’s time for us to go green. Here are some simple steps to take.
First, whenever possible, we should take public transportation, walk or ride our bikes to school to reduce the amount of carbon emissions from cars. We’d better not drive our cars if not necessary. Second, we should take a short shower and turn off the lights and electronic devices when they are not in use. It is not advisable to leave the water running and the lights always on. Third, we should sort our rubbish and recycle plastic, paper and other materials to reduce pollution. We’d better not mix different wastes.
Small changes in our daily lives can make a big difference to the environment. Let’s work together to create a cleaner, greener, and more beautiful world for ourselves.
Yours,
Nancy
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇說明文；
②時態：本文以“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：題目要求根據提示寫一篇保護環境的倡議書，主要從公共交通、節約能源和減少污染三方面談談如何保護環境，最后談談自己的希望。寫作時注意適當增加細節，不要遺漏要點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開篇點題（已給出）；
第二步，根據所給要點，依次從公共交通、節約能源和減少污染三方面談談如何保護環境，講述應該做和不應該做的事情；
第三步，最后表達自己的希望。
[亮點詞匯]
①take public transportation 乘坐公共交通
②had better not do 最好不做
③turn off 關掉
[高分句型]
①Second, we should take a short shower and turn off the lights and electronic devices when they are not in use.（when引導的時間狀語從句）
②It is not advisable to leave the water running and the lights always on.（it作形式主語）
17．例文
My Dream Classroom
Hello, everyone! Let me introduce my dream classroom to you.
It will be a large and bright room with large windows and plenty of natural light. The walls will be painted in calming colors like blue and green. What makes it “new” is the advanced technology it will have. There will be interactive whiteboards, tablets for each student, and virtual reality headsets for immersive learning experiences. Students will study in a more engaging and interactive way, using these tools to explore subjects in depth. I believe this dream classroom will make learning more enjoyable and effective for everyone.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；
② 時態：時態為“一般將來時”；
③ 提示：根據所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，可適當發揮。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹你理想中教室的外觀；
第二步，介紹教室中使其“新”的先進技術；
第三步，說明學生將如何利用這些技術進行學習；
第四步，表達你對理想教室的看法。
[亮點詞匯]
①large and bright 寬敞明亮
②natural light 自然光
③interactive whiteboards 互動白板
④virtual reality headsets 虛擬現實頭戴設備
⑤immersive learning experiences 沉浸式學習體驗
[高分句型]
①I believe this dream classroom will make learning more enjoyable and effective for everyone. (省略that的賓語從句)
②Students will study in a more engaging and interactive way, using these tools to explore subjects in depth. (現在分詞作狀語)
18．例文
My favourite thing from childhood
My favorite thing from childhood is my teddy bear. I have had it since I was five years old. My grandmother gave it to me as the birthday gift on my birthday.
I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color. It’s special to me because my grandmother made it for me. She was always kind to me. Her words and the lovely toy bear made me feel better.
The teddy bear has given me many good memories. I remember when I was young, I was afraid of the dark, so I held my teddy bear to feel safe. Whenever I miss my grandmother, I will look at the toy bear, and it makes me feel happy and warm.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態主要為一般過去時和一般現在時；
③提示：寫作時注意圍繞所給問題展開描述，可適當發揮。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹自己孩童時期最喜歡的物品是什么；
第二步，介紹自己擁有該物品多久了，具體描述如何得來的該物品；
第三步，介紹自己喜歡該物品的原因及感想。
[亮點詞匯]
①be kind to...對……友好
②be afraid of...害怕……
[高分句型]
①I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color. (because引導的原因狀語從句)
②I remember when I was young, I was afraid of the dark, so I held my teddy bear to feel safe. (賓語從句及when引導的時間狀語從句)
19．例文：
How to Keep Healthy
As a middle school student, we should live a healthy life. Health is very important to us. Good health can help us enjoy our life more. But how to keep us healthy
First, we should eat healthy food, such as eating more vegetables and fruits. What’s more, we’d better have meals on time. It’s important to keep a balanced diet. Second, we need to exercise regularly to make us strong. We can play basketball or soccer with our friends after school. Finally, it’s necessary to keep good living habits and remember not to stay up late.
If we do like that, we’ll have a happy and healthy life.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：以 “一般現在時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏信息提示的內容，適當增加細節，并且突出寫作要點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，強調健康重要性，引出如何保持健康的話題；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。重點介紹如何保持健康的方法；
第三步，書寫結語，呼吁大家熱愛健康生活。
[亮點詞匯]
①be important to 對……來說是重要的
②such as例如
③keep a balanced diet 保持一個平衡的飲食
④exercise regularly 定期鍛煉
⑤stay up late 熬夜很晚
[高分句型]
①Finally, it’s necessary to keep good living habits and remember not to stay up late. (it作形式主語)
②If we do like that, we’ll have a happy and healthy life. (if 引導條件狀語從句)
20．例文：
How to Be a Better Person
As a middle school student, I should try my best to be a better person. I will do the following things.
First of all, we should have healthy food and we had better do more exercise to build up our bodies. What’s more, it’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment. I can separate the waste into different groups so that it can be recycled in my daily life. Besides, I will not be afraid to face difficulties or challenges any more and try my best to solve problems in life and study. I will never give up trying. Moreover, I will be an honest person and never tell lies. Last but not least, it is necessary to be ready to help others. I can support some charities by donating money or working as a volunteer.
I think the most important thing is to be a useful person. If I start to develop these good habits, I believe I will become a better person and make a difference to the world.
【詳解】[總體分析］
①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；
②時態：時態主要為“一般現在時”；
③提示：文章應該包括所列4個提示要點，要適當補充，使文章內容充實；行文時多用第一人稱，盡量多使用短語和句型；寫作中適當使用連接詞，使行文連貫、順暢。
［寫作步驟］
第一步，介紹作為中學生要盡力去做一個優秀的人，從而引出話題；
第二步，根據所列要點，逐一陳述，適當拓展，介紹自己的做法；
第三步，書寫總結。
［亮點詞匯］
① try one’s best to do sth. 盡某人最大努力去做某事
② give up 放棄
［高分句型］
① What’s more, it’s everyone’s duty to protect the environment. (it作形式主語)
② I think the most important thing is to be a useful person. (賓語從句)
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