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中小學教育資源及組卷應用平臺
中小學教育資源及組卷應用平臺
2024-2025學年六年級英語下學小升初高頻考點培優
(山西專版)專題24 書面表達
學校:___________姓名：___________班級：___________考號：___________
1．書面表達。
根據所給信息，介紹一下這位著名人物，不少于5句話。
Name: Liu Yang Country: China Born: in October, 1978 When: June,2012 Spaceship: Shenzhou IX She did a lot of work there. She is the first Chinese female(女性)astronaut.
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2．書面表達。
從父輩們的過去到我們的現在，再到日新月異的未來，生活中的變化翻天覆地。請根據表格中的信息提示，用不同的時態描述生活中的變化，不少于5句話。
In the past Now In the future
washed clothes by hand use a washing machine will not need to be cleaned
watched black and white TV watch colour TV will have AI interactive(互動) TV
wrote letters write emails …
There are great changes in our lives. In the past, people washed clothes by hand. Now people ________. In the future, clothes will ______________. In the past,
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3．書面表達。
當前地球上野生動物的數量在逐漸減少，它們的生存已經受到了嚴重威脅，我們應該怎樣保護它們呢？請以”How to protect wild animals”為題，寫一篇短文。
要求：
(1)句型結構正確；
(2)首字母大寫，標點符號正確；
(3)不少于5句話。
How to protect wild animals
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4．書面表達。
請根據情景編一段Betty、媽媽和售貨員之間的對話。不少于3個來回。
情景：在星期五的晚上，Betty和媽媽去超市購物。媽媽想為Betty買一條連衣裙。Betty不喜歡粉色的裙子，她喜歡紫色的裙子。最后她們買了紫色的裙子。這條裙子165元。
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5．書面表達。
親愛的同學們，你們作為中國的新一代，有責任也有義務向世界展現我們祖國的魅力。而北京這座古老而現代的城市，無疑是一張最具代表性的名片。 現在請你們根據思維導圖，用英文描述一下美麗的首都城市北京吧。(不少于6句話。)

Beijing
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6．書面表達。
爭創全國文明城市，共建和諧美好家園。我們的家鄉正在創辦衛生文明縣城，作為其中的一員，我們也要做力所能及的事。請你根據要點提示，寫一寫我們應該怎么做吧。(不要出現真實姓名，60詞左右)
要點提示：
（1）. 在學校經常打掃自己的桌椅，保持教室干凈整潔，不要在樓梯上玩耍。
（2）. 在公交車上不要吃東西，要保持安靜，給老人讓座。
（3）. 在公園不踩草坪，不隨地吐痰，要把垃圾扔進垃圾桶里。
（4）. 可展開思路，適當發揮。
參考詞匯：tidy (整潔的) stairs (樓梯) spit (吐痰) bin (垃圾桶)
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7．書面表達。
假設你叫米蘭，請根據參考內容，給你的筆友Dale寫一封信，詳細介紹一下你的家庭。
參考內容：
單詞：family, photo, friend, dear
短語：thanks for, a picture of, here is
句型：1. There are. people in my family.
2. Let me tell you something about my family.
3. I have a happy family.
要求：（1）. 參考提示內容，可適當發揮；
（2）. 書信格式正確，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；
（3）. 文中不得出現任何真實信息；
（4）. 詞數不少于40詞。
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8．書面表達。
時光飛逝，你的六年生活就要結束,即將升入初中,請你以“My school in the future”為題，寫一寫你對初中學校的期待。
要求：不少于5句話；可參考方框里的詞匯，文中不得出現真實的人名或校名。
have a swimming pool have a lot of clubs; have a lot of books and magazines in the library have chess and cooking lessons
My school in the future
I am going to be a junior high school student. I hope my school will
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9．書面表達。
同護藍天碧水圣地，共創衛生文明家園。近日來，盂縣人民在創建衛生文明城市方面做了很多工作。作為新時代的小公民，你們能為盂縣的創建衛生文明城市工作做出哪些貢獻呢？請根據提示，用英文描述一下你們能做的事情吧！(不少于6句話)
One county one health
Yu County (盂縣) is our home. We should keep our home clean.
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10．書面表達。
“Better changes, better me!” 小學幾年里一直陪伴我們學習的小伙伴們都長高了，更能干了！請你也回顧一下自己的小學生活，根據下面的成長相冊，以“My changes”為題寫一篇英語短文，描述自己在外貌、性格、能力、喜好(季節、食物、課堂……)等方面的小變化。
要求：
（1）. 主題明確，語句通順，行文流暢；
（2）. 50詞左右，文章開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
My changes
How time flies! I changed a lot. Before,
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Better changes, better me! Thanks to my parents and teachers!
11．書面表達。(以下兩項小練筆，任選其一作答。)
（1）.親愛的同學們，請以“我的愛好”為題介紹一下你自己吧！要求：不少于5句話。
（2）.親愛的同學們，請以“我的家庭”為題介紹一下你的家庭吧！要求：不少于5句話。
我選擇的題目是：___________________
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12．陽泉是一座美麗的城市。現在請你們想一想，我們可以做些什么事情讓陽泉變得更加美好呢？不少于 40 詞
提示詞：reuse old things, grow a lot of trees, put rubbish in the bin
Better city, better life.
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13．同學們，上個周末過得怎么樣？請你和大家分享一下你上個周末做過些什么事或去過了什么地方，并把它寫下來。
要求：（1）. 條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，標點正確，書寫規范。 （2）. 不少于6句話。
Last weekend
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14．寫作。
好朋友是一生的財富。當朋友有困難的時候，給他提出好的建議，當他快樂的時候，與他分享喜悅。請你根據提示，參照例句，寫一篇短文，字數不少于30詞，句子通順，書寫工整。
Name Feeling(感受) Should do
John ill see a doctor stay in bed
Amy angry take a deep breath count to ten
Zhang Peng happy sing and dance share happiness
Oliver sad read stories sing
Mike worried listen to music go to bed
If John feels ill, he should see a doctor and stay in bed.
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15．書面表達。
寒假即將到來，請制定你的寒假計劃，度過一個有意義的假期吧！
參考短語: exercise more, read more books, study often, eat healthy food and eat better, spend more time with family and friends… (不少于 5 句話)
Winter holiday is coming. I am going to
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My winter holiday will be great!
16．寫作。
動物是自然界賜予我們的寶貴財富，也是地球生態平衡的重要一環。珍愛動物，就是珍愛我們自己的生存環境。請以“My Favourite Animal”為題，寫一種你最喜歡的小動物，想一想，它有什么外貌特征及生活習性。
要求：書寫規范，語句通順，語言連貫，不少于5句話且不少于30個詞。
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17．書面表達。時光荏苒，6年的小學時光已悄然離去，請你結合以下提示，對比過去及現在的你，向即將要成為你初中新朋友作簡單自我介紹，同時并想象一下你的未來，說一說你的理想。(要求：不少于六句話，可適當拓展寫作。)
（1）. What did you look like in the past
（2）. How much do you weigh now
（3）. How tall are you
（4）. What’s your favourite sport
（5）. What’s your favourite subject
（6）. What would you like to be in the future
要求：語句通順，條理清楚，書寫工整。不少于6句話。
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18．書面表達。
同學們，你們即將結束自己的小學生活，并于今年的九月份，開啟自己的中學生活，請根據提示用英語寫一篇短文和大家分享一下即將開啟的中學生活吧。要求不少于五句話。
say goodbye to our school meet new friends meet new teachers No. 1 Middle School learn many new things study Chinese, English, maths, history and music
My Middle School
We are going to leave our primary school soon. We are going to
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中小學教育資源及組卷應用平臺
中小學教育資源及組卷應用平臺
21世紀教育網(www.21cnjy.com)
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參考答案與試題解析
1．范文：
Liu Yang is a famous Chinese astronaut. She was born in October, 1978. In June, 2012, she flew into space in the spaceship Shenzhou IX. She did a lot of important work there. Liu Yang is the first Chinese female astronaut. She makes all Chinese people proud. We should learn from her hard-working spirit.
【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目要求按照所給信息介紹著名人物，注意時態是一般現在時，用第三人稱并要符合句子數量要求。
2.參考詞匯與句型：
參考單詞：Chinese astronaut中國航天員，female astronaut女航天員，important重要的，proud自豪，spirit精神
參考句型：She was...；she flew...；She did...；We should...
2． There are great changes in our lives. In the past, people washed clothes by hand. Now people use a washing machine. In the future, clothes will not need to be cleaned. In the past, people watched black and white TV. Now people watch colour TV. In the future, people will have AI interactive TV. In the past, people wrote letters. Now people write emails. In the future, people will probably use holographic communication to stay in touch, making communication more vivid and real.
【解析】1. 題干解讀：該題目要求按照表格中的信息提示寫一篇關于過去、現在和未來生活中的變化。注意描述過去的生活用一般過去時，描述現在的生活用一般現在時，描述將來的生活用一般將來時，并要符合句子數量要求。
2. 參考詞匯與句型：
參考詞匯：washed clothes by hand用手洗衣服，black and white TV黑白電視，colour TV彩色電視，AI interactive TV人工智能互動電視，washing machine洗衣機
參考句型：There are...；Now people use...；people will...
3．參考范文：
How to protect wild animals
Wild animals are in danger now. There were many pandas, South China tigers and blue whales in the wild in the past. But there are only a few now. We should do something to help them. We should stop killing them. We should plant more trees. We should keep water and air clean.
【解析】1. 題干解讀：該題目要求以”How to protect wild animals”為題寫一篇短文，主要闡述我們怎樣保護野生動物。注意文章時態是一般現在時，并滿足句數的要求。
2. 參考詞匯與句型：
參考詞匯：wild animals野生動物，in danger處于危險中，South China tigers東北虎，panda熊貓，blue whale藍鯨，plant種植
參考句型：Wild animals are…；There were…；We should…
4．Betty: Wow! Mum, look! What a pretty dress! I like it very much.
Mum: Which one, the pink one or the purple one
Betty: I like the purple one. Can I try it on
Shopkeeper: Sure, here you are.
Betty: Thank you.
Mum: It’s just right for you.
Betty: How much is it
Shopkeeper: It’s 165 yuan.
Mum: OK. Here is the money.
Shopkeeper: Thank you.
【解析】1. 題干解讀：該題目要求根據情景編一段Betty、媽媽和售貨員之間的對話。主要內容寫媽媽想為Betty買一條連衣裙。Betty不喜歡粉色的裙子，她喜歡紫色的裙子。最后她們買了紫色的裙子。這條裙子165元。注意文章為一般現在時態并要寫3個來回。
2. 參考詞匯和句型：
參考單詞：dress連衣裙，purple紫色的，try on試穿，how much多少錢
參考句型：What a pretty…；Can I try it on ；How much is it
5．范文
Beijing
Beijing is a very big and beautiful city. It is the capital of China. It’s in the north of China. The city is clean and safe. There are many famous places in Beijing. Tourists can visit the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, Tian’anmen Square and some famous parks. Tourists can taste Beijing Roast Duck. It is very delicious. People in Beijing like eating dumplings too. Welcome to Beijing.
【解析】1. 題干解讀：該題要求根據思維導圖用第三人稱描述北京這座城市，包括北京的建筑、人文、地理位置、環境狀況等，時態為一般現在時，注意語句通順，結構合理，不少于6句話。
2. 參考詞匯和參考句型：
參考詞匯：big and beautiful又大又漂亮，the capital of China中國的首都，north北方，clean and safe又干凈又安全，famous places著名的地方，the Great Wall長城，the Palace Museum故宮，Tian’anmen Square天安門廣場，Beijing Roast Duck北京烤鴨
參考句型：Beijing is...；It is...；There are...；Tourists can visit...；People in Beijing like...
6．參考答案
Better city, better life
To make our city a better place, we should do many things. At school, we should often clean our desks and chairs. We also should keep our classroom tidy. Don’t play on the stairs. On the bus, we shouldn’t eat food. We should keep quiet and give our seats to old people. In the park, we shouldn’t walk on the grass or spit. We should put the rubbish into the bin.
【解析】1. 題干解讀：該題目要求根據提示寫短文。然后再闡述應該做和不應該做的事情。注意文章為一般現在時態并要符合單詞字數要求。
2. 參考詞匯與句型：
參考單詞：clean打掃，tidy整潔的，stairs樓梯，keep quiet保持安靜，spit吐痰，rubbish垃圾
參考句型：We should/shouldn’t …
7．范文：
Dear Dale,
I’m Amy. Thanks for your letter. I’m so happy. Here is a picture of my family. Let me tell you something about my family. There are four people in my family. My father is a doctor. He is helpful. My mother is a teacher. She is kind. And this is my brother. He is older than me. I have a happy family. I love them very much.
Yours,
Amy.
【解析】1.題干解讀：該題要求用第一人稱描述自己的家人，包括家人的職業以及性格等，時態為一般現在時，注意語句通順，結構合理。
2. 參考詞匯和參考句型：
參考詞匯：family家庭，photo照片，friend朋友，dear親愛的，thanks for因……而感謝，a picture of一張……的照片，here is這是
參考句型：There are…in my family；Let me tell you something…；My father is…；My mother is…；I have a…
8．范文：
My school in the future I am going to be a junior high school student. I hope my school will have a swimming pool, I like swimming. I hope my school will have a lot of clubs, I like playing football. I hope my school will have a lot of books and magazines in the library, I like reading books. I hope my school will have chess and cooking lessons, I like playing chess and cooking.
【解析】1. 題干解讀：該題目要求用第一人稱介紹自己對初中學校的期待。闡述希望學校內有什么設施及俱樂部和課程等。注意文章為一般現在時和一般將來時，同時要符合字數要求。
2. 參考詞匯與句型：
參考詞匯：swimming pool游泳池，clubs俱樂部，magazines雜志，cooking lessons烹飪課
參考句型：I hope my school will have…；I like…
9．范文
One county one health
Yu County is our home. We should keep our home clean. We shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. We should throw rubbish in the bin. We can pick up the rubbish in the park at weekend. We can help the street cleaners sweep the streets. We can plant a lot of trees. Trees can make the air clean. We can help the blind cross the street. We can also give our seats to old people. And we should reuse some old things. We must work hard. Yu County will be better and better.
【解析】1. 該題目是同護藍天碧水圣地，共創衛生文明家園。近日來，盂縣人民在創建衛生文明城市方面做了很多工作。根據圖片提示，用英文描述一下作為新時代的小公民，你們能為盂縣的創建衛生文明城市工作做的事情，時態是一般現在時。要求：語句通順，不少于6句話。
2. 參考詞匯及參考句型：
參考詞匯：home家，clean干凈的，throw rubbish everywhere到處扔垃圾，pick up the rubbish撿起垃圾，sweep the streets掃街道，plant trees植樹，cross the street過馬路，give our seats to old people給老人讓座，reuse some old things循環利用舊物品
參考句型：We should…；We shouldn’t…；We can…；We must…
10．范文：
My changes
How time flies! I changed a lot. Before, I was short and thin. I couldn’t ride a bike and didn’t like to play badminton. But I’m tall and strong now. I’m very different. Before, I was quiet. But now, I’m very active. I have many friends. We often play sports together. I can ice-skate very well in winter. I like swimming in summer. It’s good exercise for me.
Better changes，better me! Thanks to my parents and teachers!
【解析】1. 題干解讀：該題目要求以“My changes”為題寫一篇英語短文，。然后再描述自己在外貌、性格、能力、喜好(季節、食物、課堂……)等方面的小變化。注意文章為一般現在時態和一般過去時態并要符合單詞字數要求。
2. 參考詞匯與句型：
參考單詞：short矮的，quiet安靜的，tall高的，active活躍的，ride a bike騎自行車，play badminton打羽毛球，ice-skate滑冰
參考句型：Before, I was …； I couldn’t …；But I’m …；We often …； I can ...；I like ...
11． My Family
There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and me. My father is tall and strong. He is a policeman. My mother is thin and beautiful. She is a nurse. My sister and I are students. We are in the same school.
【解析】1. 題干解讀：該題目要求從以下兩項小練筆，任選其一作答。如果以以“我的家庭”為題，那么可以闡述家里有幾口人，都有誰，家人的特點及職業等。注意文章為一般現在時態并要符合句子數量要求。
2. 參考詞匯與句型：
參考單詞：strong強壯的，policeman警察，beautiful漂亮的，nurse護士，student學生
參考句型：There are …；They are …；My father/mother is …；He/She is …
12．范文：
Better city, better life.
How can we make our city better We shouldn’t smoke. We should reuse old things. We should grow a lot of trees. We should put rubbish in the bin. We should give our seats to old people. We believe our city will be better in the future. Our lives will be better too.
【解析】1. 題干解讀：該題目要求寫一寫做些什么事情能讓陽泉變得更加美好。注意文章為一般現在時態并要符合單詞字數要求。
2. 參考詞匯與句型：
參考單詞：smoke吸煙，reuse old things重復使用舊東西，grow a lot of trees種很多樹，put rubbish in the bin把垃圾放進垃圾桶，believe相信，in the future在未來
參考句型： We shouldn’t …； We should …
13．范文：
My name is Sam. I’m a student. I was busy last weekend. I did my homework at home on Saturday morning. I went to the park on foot on Saturday afternoon. I cleaned my room on Sunday morning. On Sunday afternoon I visited my grandparents. At night, I watched TV with my parents. I was very tired but I was very happy.
【解析】1. 題干解讀：該題目要求以“Last weekend”為題，寫一篇短文。然后再闡述周六、周日分別做的事情。注意文章主要為一般過去時態并要符合句子數量要求。
2. 參考詞匯與句型：
參考單詞：Saturday周六，Sunday周日，busy忙碌的，do my homework做作業，go to the park去公園，clean my room打掃房間，visit my grandparents看望祖父母，watch TV看電視
參考句型：I was …； I … on …；On … I ...； At night, I …
14．范文：
If John feels ill, he should see a doctor and stay in bed. If Amy feels angry, she should take a deep breath and count to ten. If Zhang Peng feels happy. He should sing and dance and share happiness. If Olive feels sad. He should read stories and sing. If Mike feels worried. He should listen to music and go to bed.
【解析】1.題干分析：該題目要求介紹當朋友有困難的時候，給他提出好的建議，當他快樂的時候，與他分享喜悅。注意文章為一般現在時態，單詞數量要符合要求。
2.參考詞匯與句型：
參考詞匯：ill生病的；see a doctor看醫生；stay in bed臥床休息；angry生氣的；take a deep breath做深呼吸；count to ten數到十；happy高興的；sing and dance唱歌跳舞；sad傷心的；read stories讀故事；worried擔心的；
參考句型：If Amy feels…；she should…；
15．范文：
Winter holiday is coming. I am going to live a healthy life. I am going to eat healthy food and eat better. In order to keep healthy, I am going to exercise more. I am going to get good grades by reading more books. Besides, I am going to spend more time with family and friends.
My winter holiday will be great!
【解析】題干解讀：改題目要求寫一個寒假計劃，度過一個有意義的假期。注意文章主要為一般將來時態，并符合句子數量要求。
參考詞匯和句型：
參考詞匯：exercise more多鍛煉，read more books多讀書，eat healthy food and eat better吃健康的食物和吃得更好，spend more time with family and friends花更多時間和家人朋友在一起
參考句型：I am going to...； My winter holiday will...
16． My Favourite Animal
Dogs are my favourite animal. They have got four legs. And they can swim in the water. Dogs are very clever. They can help people do a lot of things. They can play with children. Some can help blind people. And some can help the policemen. Dogs are our friends.
【解析】1.題干解讀：該題目要求以“My Favourite Animal”為題，寫一篇短文。注意文章的時態為一般現在時，并且書寫規范，符合句子數量要求。
2.參考詞匯及句型：
參考單詞：favourite最喜歡的，have got有，swim游泳，clever聰明的，play with和……玩，blind盲的，policemen警察
參考句型：Dogs are…；And they can…；They can…
17．范文：
Hello, I’m your new classmate. I’m thirteen years old. I was thin and short before. But now I’m fat and tall. I’m 1.5 meters tall now and I weigh 50 kilograms. My favourite sport is basketball. I can play it very well. I like English best. I’m good at it. I would like to be an English teacher in the future. What about you, my friend
【解析】1. 題干解讀：本題要求向你的初中新朋友作簡單的自我介紹，需要結合以下提示，對比過去及現在，并說一下自己理想。可以適當拓展寫作，語句通順，條理清楚，書寫工整。注意時態可以用一般現在時及一般過去時并要符合句子數量要求。
2. 參考詞匯與句型：
參考詞匯：new classmate新同學；… years old……歲；thin and short又瘦又矮；fat and tall又胖又高；… meters tall ……米高；weigh … kilograms重……公斤；my favourite sport我最喜歡的運動；like … best最喜歡……；be good at擅長；would like to be想要成為；in the future在未來
參考句型：I’m … ；I was …；I can …；I like … best；What about …
18．范文：
My Middle School
We are going to leave our primary school soon. We are going to study in No. 1 Middle School in September. We are going to say goodbye to our school. We are going to meet new friends and new teachers. We are going to study Chinese, English, maths, history and music. We are going to learn many new things.
【解析】1. 題干解讀：該題目要求寫一篇短文和大家分享一下即將開啟的中學生活。然后再闡述在中學將要遇到的人和學習的節目。注意文章為一般將來時態并要符合句子數量要求。
2. 參考詞匯與句型：
參考單詞：September九月，say goodbye to our school跟我們學校說再見，meet new friends結識新朋友，meet new teachers認識新老師，learn many new things學習很多東西，study Chinese, English, maths, history and music學習語文、英語、數學、歷史和音樂
參考句型：We are going to …；
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