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（吉林專用）專題09 書面表達15篇 2024-2025學年八年級英語下學期期末名校真題分類匯編（含答案解析）
學校:___________姓名：___________班級：___________考號：___________
1．（24-25八年級下·吉林長春·期中）成長路上，你一定曾經遇見過很多人，也曾經歷過很多事。這些人或事或多或少的對你產生過影響，讓你發生一些改變，這些變化往往會有助于你的成長。請以“________ made a big difference to me”為題寫一篇英語短文。
要求：1. 簡要介紹使你發生改變的事件。
2. 論述該事件中你的感悟或收獲。
3. 書寫工整，條理清晰，表達準確，不少于80詞。
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2．（24-25八年級下·吉林·期中）假如你是Jack，你的朋友Tom來信告訴你他很擔心考試，而他的父母希望他把所有的時間都用在學習上，不允許他做其他的事情，他很不開心。請你根據以下內容提示，在回信中給他一些建議，幫助他振作起來。
提示：(1)與父母交流自己的感受；
(2)做一些放松心情的事；
(3)合理規劃學習時間。
要求：(1)包含所給提示內容，可適當發揮；
(2)語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；
(3)80—90詞，短文開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have a big problem.
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Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Jack
3．（24-25八年級下·吉林·期中）良好的家庭關系對青少年的健康成長很重要。但現實生活中，不少孩子和父母之間缺乏必要的溝通和交流。作為晚輩，我們應該如何和父母友好相處呢？請根據下面的提示，以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents ”為題寫一篇英語短文。
寫作提示：
（1）主動交流：每天花些時間，與父母談談老師、同學和學校的事；
（2）創造機會：每周至少跟父母一起做件事，比如做飯、逛商店等；
（3）討論問題：遇事多與父母討論，他們會幫你更好地解決問題。
寫作要求：
（1）短文必須包括以上提示內容，可適當發揮；
（2）語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整，詞數：90詞左右；
（3）文中不得出現真實的人名和校名。
How to Get on Well with Our Parents
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4．（24-25八年級下·吉林·期中）禮物是心意的載體，承載著愛與關懷的每一份驚喜。本周你班的英語課將圍繞“我最喜歡的禮物”這一話題進行交流。請根據下列要求寫一篇英語短文，為英語課的交流活動做準備。
要求：
1. 介紹你最喜歡的禮物，你和它之間的故事以及你喜歡它的原因；
2. 適當增加細節，行文連貫；
3. 文中不得出現真實姓名和校名。
My Favorite Gift
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5．（24-25八年級下·吉林·期中）假如你是李華, 你在一個英語演講比賽中取得了優異的成績。你的英語老師邀請你在課堂上分享你提高英語口語的經驗和方法。請你根據以下要點和要求, 寫一篇不少于40詞的發言稿。
要點：1.每天學習新單詞；
2.大聲朗讀練習發音；
3.每天用英語和自己對話
要求:要點齊全；表述通順；簡介得體。
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6．（23-24八年級下·吉林四平·期末）家務是生活的一部分。作為一名家庭成員，分擔家務是一種責任，也是一種幸福。請以“An experience of doing housework”為題，并根據要點和要求，寫一篇英語短文，敘述一次你做家務的經歷，并談談你的體會。
要點：
1. 你這次做家務的原因；
2. 你做家務的過程；
3. 你的心得和感受。
要求：詞數90左右。
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7．（24-25八年級下·吉林白城·階段練習）作為一名中學生，你的學習生活一定非常忙碌。在你的課余生活，你喜歡做些什么呢？ 你想利用課余生活做志愿者幫助他人，還是參加課后培訓班，精進學業呢？請以 “How I Spend My Free Time” 為題，并根據以下寫作提示，談談你的課余生活。
寫作提示：
(1) 做出你的選擇；
(2) 陳述至少三點理由；
(3) 描寫一項你喜歡的其他課余活動。
寫作要求：
(1) 內容包括以上所有提示信息，可適當拓展；
(2) 語句通順，條理清晰，90詞左右。作文的標題及開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
How I Spend My Free Time
I am now a student in Grade 8. I spend a number of time studying. So in my free time, I’d love to do something meaningful. I want to be a volunteer and help others.
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8．（23-24八年級下·吉林白城·期中）每個人都可能得到過社會的幫助，我們應該懂得感恩與回報。學校計劃在6月25日組織一次“走進社區，做一天志愿者（Going into the community and being a volunteer for one day）”活動。
請根據所給信息，以“One-day Voluntary Work”為題寫一篇短文談談你們的活動安排。
活動安排如下：
1.活動地點：光明社區（Guangming Community）；
2.集合時間：上午8:30；
3.集合地點：學校門口，一起乘公共汽車前往；
4.活動內容：幫助清潔工打掃街道；捐贈物資（如生活必需品：daily necessity）；給老人們表演節目，帶來歡樂。
注意事項：
1.80詞左右，開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數內；
2.文章須包含所提供的主要信息，可適當發揮；行文連貫，條理清晰。
One-day Voluntary Work
As middle school students, we should be thankful to people who have helped us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope we will learn to give our love to everyone and society through this activity.
9．（23-24八年級下·吉林·期中）最近從媒體報道的一些家庭事件來看，孩子與父母的關系不和諧，家庭關系緊張是一個普遍的社會問題。針對此現象，某中學英文報社開展了主題為“與父母和諧相處”的征文大賽、作為一名初中生，你很可能也遇到過相同的問題，你是如何看待和解決這個問題的呢？請以“How to Get on Well with Our Parents”為題寫一篇短文參加此次征文大賽。
寫作要點提示：
1. 你在家和父母的關系如何
2. 結合你的經歷，談談你是如何改善與父母的關系的，給出具體的建議，例如：
（1）理解與尊重父母（如傾聽，有禮貌表達想法)
（2）多與父母交流（如分享快樂與傾訴煩惱）
（3）……
寫作要求：短文應緊扣要點，但不要逐字翻譯。
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10．（23-24八年級下·吉林·期中）你的好朋友Tom生病了，沒來上學。請給他寫一封簡短的建議信，向他表示憋問并根據提示告訴他如何恢復并保持身體健康，提示信息可以不全部使用，也可以自己發揮，詞數不少于40詞。
提示：1.去醫院看醫生。2.按時服藥。3.好好休息。4. 多吃水果和蔬菜。5.多喝水。
Dear Tom,
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Yumei
11．（23-24八年級下·吉林·期中）你上個周末是怎么度過的？請根據提示以“My Busy Weekend”為題寫一篇短文。運用過去進行時，告訴大家上周六你在不同的時間段做的事情。
提示：
1. 六點半起床吃早飯；
2. 下午兩點寫作業；
3. 下午四點半拜訪祖父母。
要求：詞數80～90。開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
My Busy Weekend
Last Saturday was my busiest day of the week.
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12．（23-24八年級下·吉林·期末）如今，世界上有很多珍稀動物瀕臨滅絕，如熊貓、鯨魚、大象等。我們應該拯救這些野生動物，創造人與自然和諧共處的美好未來。請以“Protect Endangered Animals”為題，根據以下內容要點，選擇一種瀕危動物，寫一篇英語演講稿，在開學初的“英語節”活動中和大家分享。
內容包括：1. 介紹該瀕危動物的外形等基本情況及其生存現狀；
2. 列舉其瀕危的原因，至少兩點；
3. 提出具體保護措施，至少兩點。
寫作要求：1. 語言流暢，層次清晰，內容可以適當發揮；
2. 詞數在80詞左右，開頭部分已經給出，不計入總詞數；
3. 書寫規范，卷面整潔；
4. 文中不能出現考生姓名和學校名稱。
Protect Endangered Animals
Hello, everyone! Today I am very happy to give a speech. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
13．（23-24八年級下·吉林松原·期末）假設你是 Linda，請以“Changes in My Hometown”為題，介紹一下你家鄉的變化。
內容包括：
1. 這些年來，我的家鄉發生了很大變化；
2. 我的家鄉過去是一個安靜的小城。道路又窄又臟，到處是垃圾。人們住在又小又舊的房子里。人們只能靠步行或騎自行車出行；
3. 后來，政府采取措施改善了這種情況。現在街道寬闊干凈，兩邊綠樹成蔭。人們出行靠公交車或出租車。許多家庭甚至有了私家車。
4. 我認為……（此處請用 1-2 句話適當發揮）
提示詞：narrow 窄的；take action 采取行動；improve 改善
要求：
1. 內容必須包括所有要點；
2. 不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱；
3. 語句通順，字跡工整，時態正確 ；
4. 詞數在80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Changes in My Hometown
There have been great changes in my hometown over the years. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
14．（23-24八年級下·吉林長春·期末）學校即將開展“一器一物，遇見舊時光”英語故事分享會。請你寫一篇不少于80詞的英語短文介紹一件對你而言有意義的物品，講講你和它之間的故事，并說明你認為它有意義的理由。(文中不得出現真實的姓名和校名）
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15．（23-24八年級下·吉林長春·期末）假如你是 Alice，你得知2024長春馬拉松(Marathon)組委會正在招聘志愿者。請根據下面要點和要求，用英語寫一封不少于40詞的申請信。
要點：
1. 擅長英語；
2. 熱愛運動；
3. 樂于助人。
要求：要點齊全；表述通順；簡潔得體。
Dear Sir /Madam,
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Yours truly,
Alice
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《（吉林專用）專題09 書面表達15篇 2024-2025學年八年級英語下學期期末名校真題分類匯編（含答案解析）》參考答案
1．例文
The volleyball match made a big difference to me
Last term, our school held a volleyball match. I was really afraid of joining it because I was not good at volleyball and feared failure. But my friends encouraged me to give it a try. During the training, I faced many difficulties. The coach taught me patiently, and my teammates always supported me. I practiced hard day by day. Finally, we won the match. This experience made me realize that we should be brave to step out of our comfort zone. Challenges can help us grow stronger. It also taught me the importance of teamwork. It truly made a big difference to me.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 時態：時態為“一般過去時”和“一般現在時”；
③ 提示：根據所給提示完成寫作，需介紹使自己發生改變的事件，并論述該事件中的感悟或收獲，不能遺漏信息。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，點明主題，引出使自己發生改變的事件（學校舉辦排球比賽，自己起初害怕參加）；
第二步，敘述事件經過（在朋友鼓勵下參加，訓練中克服困難，最終獲勝）；
第三步，闡述事件帶來的感悟（要勇敢走出舒適區，挑戰能讓人成長，團隊合作很重要）。
[亮點詞匯]
① be afraid of 害怕
② give it a try 試一試
③ step out of 走出
[高分句型]
① I was really afraid of joining it because I was not good at volleyball and feared failure.（because引導原因狀語從句）
② This experience made me realize that we should be brave to step out of our comfort zone.（that引導賓語從句，作realize的賓語）
2．例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you have a big problem. As for your trouble,here are my suggestions.
First, you should communicate with your parents and tell them your feelings. I believe that they can understand you. Second, in order to relax yourself, you can take some exercise and listen to some relaxing music. Last, why not make a more reasonable timetable to study And you should remember that God helps those who help themselves. Therefore, you need work harder for your dream. Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Jack
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封書信；
②時態：時態為一般現在時；
③提示：根據提示信息給朋友一些建議，適當增加細節，突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，引出話題；
第二步，根據提示內容詳細給出自己的建議；
第三步，表達希望。
[亮點詞匯]
①communicate with和……溝通
②in order to為了
[高分句型]
①I believe that they can understand you. (that引導的賓語從句)
②And you should remember that God helps those who help themselves. (that引導的賓語從句，who引導的定語從句)
3．例文
How to Get on Well with Our Parents
For teenagers, it’s important to get on well with our parents.
Firstly, we should spend some time communicating with our parents. For example, we may talk about our teachers, classmates or the things that happen in school. Secondly, we should do something with our parents each week, such as making dinner or going shopping. We’ll improve our relationship with them in this way. Thirdly, we’d better discuss our problems with them. They will help us find better ways to solve them.
It’s not easy to get on well with our parents. So we should learn to be understanding first.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：主要為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作提示已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏任何要點，適當發揮，使上下文連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，說明與父母和睦相處很重要；
第二步，具體闡述如何和父母友好相處；
第三步，說明與父母和睦相處不易，要學會理解父母。
[亮點詞匯]
①get on well with sb.和某人和睦相處
②improve改善
③had better do sth.最好做某事
④understanding善解人意的
[高分句型]
①For example, we may talk about our teachers, classmates or the things that happen in school.（that引導的定語從句）
4．例文
My Favorite Gift I have received many gifts in my life, but the one that stands out most is a hand-made notebook from my best friend.
It was my birthday last year. I had been feeling down because of a quarrel with my parents. My friend knew my mood and decided to cheer me up. She made a beautiful notebook with a cover decorated with colorful stickers. Inside, she wrote a heartfelt note, telling me how much she valued our friendship and wished me a happy birthday.
The notebook is more than a gift. It’s a symbol of our precious friendship. Whenever I look at it, I’m reminded of the warmth and support she has given me. It’s truly the best gift I’ve ever received.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態以“一般現在時”和“一般過去時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏提示，并適當添加細節，注意字母大小寫以及標點符號。
[寫作步驟]
第一步、開篇點題，介紹自己最喜歡的一件禮物；
第二步、介紹自己和它之間的故事；
第三步、介紹自己喜歡它的原因。
[亮點詞匯]
①stand out脫穎而出
②because of因為
③more than不只是
[高分句型]
①Whenever I look at it, I’m reminded of the warmth and support she has given me.(whenever引導的時間狀語從句；省略關系詞的定語從句)
5．例文：
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to share my ways to improve oral English. First, I learn new words every day, which helps me express myself better. Second, I read aloud to practice pronunciation. This makes my speaking clearer. Third, I talk to myself in English daily. It boosts my confidence and fluency. That’s all. Thank you!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為發言稿；
②時態：時態主要為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已明確給出，需涵蓋提高英語口語的具體經驗和方法，包括每天學習新單詞、大聲朗讀練習發音、每天用英語和自己對話，考生需確保要點齊全，表述通順。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明發言意圖。簡要提及自己在英語演講比賽中取得的成績，并引出要分享的提高英語口語的經驗和方法；
第二步，具體闡述內容。按照要點，分別詳細闡述每天學習新單詞、大聲朗讀練習發音以及每天用英語和自己對話這些方法；
第三步，結語表達希望對大家有幫助等。
[亮點詞匯]
①express oneself 表達自己
②boost one’s confidence 增強某人的信心
③daily每日的
[高分句型]
①I learn new words every day, which helps me express myself better. (which引導的非限制性定語從句)
6．例文
An experience of doing housework
It’s meaningful for everyone to do some housework. Last Sunday was Mother’s Day, so I decided to do some housework to show my love to mom.
I got up early to prepare breakfast for my parents. I cooked three eggs, one for each of us. My parents enjoyed the meal happily, though I found one of the eggs was broken and another seemed not to be OK. Then I washed our clothes. With the help of the washing machine, I finished the whole washing task by myself.
In my opinion, doing housework made me very tired, but I felt happy and proud of myself, and I came to understand my parents’ deep love for me. I love doing housework.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時和一般過去時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏提示，并適當添加細節，突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹這次做家務的原因；
第二步，介紹做家務的過程；
第三步，介紹心得和感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①do some housework做家務
②prepare breakfast for準備早餐
③proud of 自豪的
④love doing sth.喜歡做某事
[高分句型]
①Last Sunday was Mother’s Day, so I decided to do some housework to show my love to mom.（so引導的句子）
②My parents enjoyed the meal happily, though I found one of the eggs was broken and another seemed not to be OK.（讓步狀語從句）
③In my opinion, doing housework made me very tired, but I felt happy and proud of myself, and I came to understand my parents’ deep love for me.（并列句）
7．One possible version:
How I Spend My Free Time
I am now a student in Grade 8. I spend a number of time studying. So in my free time, I’d love to do something meaningful. I want to be a volunteer and help others.
First of all, we can put into practice what we have learnt before. For example, when we are asked by a foreigner about the way to some place, we could practice our English. It’s a good chance to improve our ability. What’s more, we could make a lot of friends while we are volunteering. As the saying goes, “At home one relies on one’s parents and outside on one’s friends.” So it is never a bad thing to have more friends. Last but not least, helping people who are in need is a good way to make you feel happy. We will get much feeling of satisfaction.
Besides volunteering, I think reading is also a good way to relax. Recently, my favorite book is Harry Potter: It’s very interesting. All in all, we should do something meaningful in our free time.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作提示已給出，不要遺漏信息，可適當增加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，點明主題。介紹自己在空閑時間做一些有意義的事情；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。具體介紹你的選擇、至少三點理由、描述一項你喜歡的其他課余活動。
第三步，書寫結語。表達自己的感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①put into practice投入練習
②What’s more而且
③all in all總計
[高分句型]
①Last but not least, helping people who are in need is a good way to make you feel happy. (定語從句）
②Besides volunteering, I think reading is also a good way to relax. (賓語從句)
8．例文
One-day Voluntary Work
As middle school students, we should be thankful to people who have helped us. Our school plans to organize an activity called “Going into the community and being a volunteer for one day”. This activity will be held in Guangming Community. We are going to meet at the school gate at 8:30 a.m. on June 25th. And then, we will go there by bus.
Firstly, we will help cleaners sweep the streets to make sure the community is tidy and beautiful. Secondly, we will give away daily necessities to the people in need. What’s more, we will sing and dance for the old to make them happy.
I think such volunteer activities will make our life more meaningful.I hope we will learn to give our love to everyone and society through this activity.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態主要為 “一般將來時”；
③提示：注意時態，且需包含全部題目所給的志愿活動的相關信息，包括活動名稱、地點、集合時間和地點、交通方式，以及具體的志愿活動內容。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹活動背景和基本信息，包括活動名稱、地點、集合時間和地點、交通方式；
第二步，具體闡述志愿活動的內容，如幫助清潔工清掃街道、給有需要的人分發生活用品、為老人表演節目；
第三步，表達自己對志愿活動的看法，認為這種活動讓生活更有意義，并希望通過活動學會關愛他人和社會。
[亮點詞匯]
①make sure確保
②give away分發
③meaningful有意義的
[高分句型]
I think such volunteer activities will make our life more meaningful.（賓語從句）
9．例文
How to Get on Well with Our Parents As a middle school student, I used to argue with my parents over small things, like homework or screen time. But now, our relationship is much better. Here is some of my advice.
We should understand and respect our parents. Parents talk much because they care about us. We are supposed to listen to them. When we want to tell them our opinions, we’d better be in a polite way. We should also talk with them about our happiness and tell them about our problems. When we are free, we’d better help them do some things. We should share everything with our parents. Our parents are like our best friends. They are proud when we do something well and they try their best to help us when we have trouble. We love each other.
Let’s get on well with our parents because they are our parents.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態以“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏提示，并適當添加細節，注意字母大小寫以及標點符號。
[寫作步驟]
第一步、介紹自己在家和父母的關系如何，引出話題；
第二步、結合自己的經歷，給出改善與父母的關系的建議；
第三步、書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①used to do sth.過去常常做某事
②be supposed to do sth.應該做某事
③try one’s best to do sth.盡力做某事
[高分句型]
①When we are free, we’d better help them do some things. (when引導的時間狀語從句)
10．
例文
Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you are ill and can’t come to school. I really hope you’ll get better soon.
First, you should go to the hospital and see a doctor. The doctor can give you the right treatment. Then, make sure to take the medicine on time as the doctor tells you.
Besides, having a good rest is very important. You’d better sleep for at least eight hours a day. Also, you need to eat more fruits and vegetables. They are full of vitamins which can help you recover. And don’t forget to drink plenty of water. It can keep you hydrated.
I believe you’ll be back to school and full of energy soon.
Yumei
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為建議信；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：向生病的朋友表示慰問，并給出恢復和保持身體健康的建議。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開頭表達對朋友生病的遺憾和希望其早日康復的祝愿。
第二步，中間具體給出恢復并保持健康的建議，如看醫生、按時服藥、好好休息、多吃蔬果、多喝水等。
第三步，結尾表達相信朋友很快能返校且充滿活力。
[亮點詞匯]
①make sure確保；務必
②plenty of大量的；充足的
[高分句型]
①They are full of vitamins which can help you recover.（“which”引導的定語從句）
11．例文
My Busy Weekend
Last Saturday was my busiest day of the week. At 6:30 am, I was getting up and having breakfast. In the morning, I was helping my mother clean the house. At 2:00 pm, I was doing my homework because I wanted to finish it early. Later, at 4:30 pm, I was visiting my grandparents. We were chatting happily, and they were telling me interesting stories. In the evening, I was watching a movie with my family. It was a tiring but meaningful day! I really enjoyed my weekend, even though I was busy all day.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②時態：時態主要為“過去進行時”和“一般過去時”。
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏題目要求中每一項內容，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹自己上周六在不同的時間段做的事情；
第二步，書寫結語，表達自己的感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①help sb. do sth.幫助某人做某事
②want to do sth.想要做某事
③in the evening在晚上
[高分句型]
①I was doing my homework because I wanted to finish it early. (because引導的原因狀語從句)
②I really enjoyed my weekend, even though I was busy all day. (even though引導的讓步狀語從句)
12．例文
Protect Endangered Animals
Hello, everyone! Today I am very happy to give a speech. I want to talk something about endangered animals—pandas.
Pandas live in Sichuan, China. They are white and black. They like climbing trees and walking in the forests. They feed on bamboo. They are very cute and lovely. But their situation is becoming very difficult. They are in danger. First, pandas don’t have many babies and baby pandas often die. Second, pandas eat bamboo, but the bamboo forests are getting smaller.
To protect animals is to protect ourselves. So we should make a better life for pandas. We can set up nature parks with lots of bamboo so that pandas can have enough food to eat. It is also a good idea to raise money for them. I hope there will be more pandas in the world.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；
②時態：時態以“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏提示中的要點，可適當添加細節，并突出寫作要點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，承接開頭，引出主題；
第二步，具體介紹瀕危動物的基本情況、生存現狀以及瀕危的原因，比如繁殖困難、食物短缺等；
第三步，給出保護它們的具體的建議，比如建設自然公園等。
[亮點詞匯]
①feed on以……為食
②be in danger處于危險之中
③set up建立
④so that以便于
⑤raise money籌錢
[高分句型]
①We can set up nature parks with lots of bamboo so that pandas can have enough food to eat. (so that引導的目的狀語從句)
②It is also a good idea to raise money for them. (it作形式主語句型)
③I hope there will be more pandas in the world. (省略that的賓語從句)
13．例文
Changes in My Hometown
There have been great changes in my hometown over the years.
My hometown used to be a quiet small town. The roads were narrow and dirty. There was rubbish everywhere. People lived in small old houses. People travelled around on foot or by bike.
Later the government realized the problems and actively took action to improve the situation. Now the streets are wide and clean, with many green trees on both sides. People travel around by bus or taxi. Many families even have their own cars.
I think my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. I hope you can visit it some day.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為一般現在時和一般過去時；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏提示中的要點，可適當添加細節，并突出寫作要點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，總述自己的家鄉發生了很大的變化。
第二步，寫家鄉以前的樣貌。
第三步，寫家鄉后來發生的一些變化。
第四步，寫自己的觀點。
[亮點詞匯]
①used to be過去是
②on foot or by bike步行或騎自行車
③take action采取行動
[高分句型]
①I think my hometown will become more and more beautiful in the future. (賓語從句)
14．參考例文：
The most meaningful thing is a nice watch for me. The watch is yellow, just like a lovely cat. That is the kind I like best.
It has special meaning to me. My grandfather bought it for me as a present on my tenth birthday. It has always been with me. Whatever I do, wherever I go, I take it with me. It is very useful. It works all day and all night and it never feels tired. It tells me exact time and tells me what I should do at different time of the day. With its help, I try to make use of the time instead of wasting the time. It still works very well.
I regard it as my best friend. I think I will take good care of it. Because it always reminds me of the love from my grandfather.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般過去時”和“一般現在時”；
③提示：考生注意根據提示進行書面表達，能夠圍繞主題準確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達自己的思想，進而完成寫作任務。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，先介紹一件對你而言有意義的物品；
第二步，再具體介紹你和它之間的故事；
第三步，書寫結束語，表達這件物品對自己的重要意義及原因。
[亮點詞匯]
①make use of 使用
②instead of 而不是
③regard...as 把……視為
④take good care of 愛護
⑤remind sb of 使某人想起
[高分句型]
①It tells me exact time and tells me what I should do at different time of the day.（what引導的賓語從句）
②I think I will take good care of it.（省略that賓語從句）
15．參考例文：
Dear Sir /Madam,
My name is Alice. I would like to work as a volunteer for the the Marathon.
I’m a 14-year-old girl from middle school in Changchun, where the Marathon will be held. I am good at English. My spoken English is quite good. As a result, I can communicate with foreigners fluently. I’m an outgoing girl and I am always ready to help others. What’s more, I’m especially fond of sports. I know more about the Marathon. I think I am suitable to be a volunteer in the Games. If chosen, I will try my best to provide the best service for every athlete from different countries. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Alice
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏提示中的要點，可適當添加細節，并突出寫作要點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，先介紹自己并表明寫信目的；
第二步，介紹自己的優勢，例如擅長英語、熱愛運動和樂于助人；
第三步，書寫結束語，表達希望得到回復的愿望。
[亮點詞匯]
①as a result 因此
②communicate with 與……溝通
③be ready to do 樂意做某事
④be fond of 喜歡
⑤try one’s best to do sth 盡某人最大的努力做某事
⑥provide sth for sb 為某人提供某物
[高分句型]
①I’m a 14-year-old girl from middle school in Changchun, where the Marathon will be held.（where引導的定語從句）
②If chosen, I will try my best to provide the best service for every athlete from different countries.（if引導的條件狀語從句）
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