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2025深圳中考英語書面表達作文專題復習練習題
1．（2024·廣東深圳·中考真題）假如你是李華，你的作品在“the Beauty of Nature”主題攝影展上獲得了一等獎。你的英語老師邀請你在“英語一分鐘演講”上給同學們做分享。要點如下：
1. 拍攝的時間，地點，內容；
2. 選擇這張照片的原因；
3. 參賽感受。
Dear_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all! Thank You!
2．（2022·廣東深圳·中考真題）假定你是李華，你和同學們拍了一個畢業活動視頻，打算做成視頻日志（vlog），參加主題為“青春飛揚”的國際中學生vlog作品展。請給該視頻寫一段解說詞。
內容包括：
1. 海邊活動：
下午：①沙灘排球；②……；
晚上：搭帳篷；聚餐和清理垃圾；分享會。
2. 活動感言。
注意：
1. 詞數80左右（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）；
2. 要點齊全，可適當發揮；
3. 不得出現真實姓名和校名；
4. 條理清楚，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規范。
參考詞匯：沖浪surf 帳篷tent
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.
Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it. Thank you.
3．（2024·廣東深圳·三模）深圳中小學已獨立開設勞動教育必修課，假如你是校學生會主席李華，請代表廣大學生給校長寫一封關于提升勞動教育課程的信件，談談你對開設勞動課程的建議和理解。
要點提示：
1. 課程內容建議：
①…… ②…… ③……
2. 開設課程的意義：（至少寫3點意義）。
要求：
1. 必須包含以上所有要點，可適當發揮；
2. 80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
3. 文中不得出現真實姓名和校名；
4. 條理清楚，行文連貫，標點正確，書寫規范。
提示詞：
開設run；課程course；木工woodworking；屋頂農場rooftop farm；光榮的glorious
Dear headmaster,
I am Li Hua, the chairman of the Student Union. I am writing to __________________________________
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4．（2024·廣東深圳·模擬預測）假如你是李華，請根據提示，結合自己小區的實際，以“Building a greener community”為題，用英文寫一份倡議書。
參考詞匯：垃圾分類sort out the rubbish；電動車motorbike
小區的現狀 1. 亂扔垃圾； 2. 亂擺放單車和電動車； 3. 樹倒下了，沒有去維護、種植。
具體提議和做法 1. 垃圾分類，扔到正確的垃圾桶； 2. 單車和電動車擺放到專門地方。 …… (自行補充一至兩點)
號召和呼吁 小區是我家，每個人行動起來，共建綠色小區
Building a greener community
As we all know, green mountains and clear water are as good as mountains of gold and silver. It is important for everyone to protect the environment and build a beautiful China.
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5．（2024·廣東深圳·三模）很多同學在暑假期間做過多種多樣的創意性作業，如海報，小調查，Vlog制作等。創意性作業可以幫助同學們發展多種能力。最近，校英文報開展以“My Creative Homework”為主題的征文活動。請你寫一篇文章，講述自身經歷，并提出合理建議。
內容：1.讓你印象最深刻的一次創意性作業（內容、收獲）；
2.對創意性作業的建議（形式或內容、理由）；
3.呼吁同學們重視創意性作業。
要求: 1.80-120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
2.文中不得出現真實姓名及學校名稱；
3.可適當增加細節，以使語句通順、條理清楚、意義連貫；
4.書寫規范，卷面整潔。
My Creative Homework
During the summer vacation, many students completed a variety of creative assignments, such as designing posters, conducting surveys, and making logs.
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6．（2024·廣東深圳·一模）學校學生會正在招募志愿者，為外國來訪學生展示傳統手工制作(如剪紙、風箏、燈籠等)，以弘揚中華傳統文化。假如你是李華，請你用英語給校學生會寫一封自薦信，在信中說明你申請成為志愿者的理由以及你的優勢。
內容提示：
1.你申請志愿者的理由；
2.你的優勢；
3.你當選之后的打算。
參考詞匯： 傳統手工制作 traditional Chinese handicrafts
要求：
1.結構完整，要點齊全，可適當發揮；
2.表達通順，語言規范，書寫清晰；
3.文中不能出現任何真實的人名、校名等信息；
4.詞數80—100詞。文章的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua. Learning that the Student Union is looking for volunteers, I’m writing to apply to become a volunteer. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
7．（2024·廣東深圳·二模）按要求寫作短文。
為了貫徹落實習近平總書記關于教育、體育的重要論述，深圳市教育局印發了《深圳市加強和改進學校體育工作的實施意見》，要求從2024年1月1日起，義務教育階段學校每天開設一節體育課。假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Peter對此十分感興趣，請你給他寫一封郵件，介紹“每天一節體育課”的實施情況，內容包括以下要點:
1. 每天一節體育課的意義；
2. 介紹你校體育課的活動內容；
3. 你對保持健康的其它建議(不少于兩條建議)。
要求：
1. 80詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
2. 文中不得出現真實姓名和校名；
3. 可適當增加細節，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；
4. 標點正確，書面整潔。
參考詞匯：每天一節體育課政策The policy of daily PE class
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you are interested in the policy of daily PE class,
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Do you have other advice to keep healthy Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours
Li Hua
8．（2024·廣東深圳·二模）為促進學生身心健康成長，深圳市中小學正在全面推行“每天一節體育課”。假定你是學校英語報小記者，請就你校體育課開展情況完成一篇新聞報道。
要點：
1.描述學校體育課開設情況：①上課頻率 ②上課形式 ③活動內容；
2.介紹一項最受同學們歡迎的體育活動；
3.總結同學們的感受及看法（分別至少寫1點）。
要求：
1.要點齊全，可適當發揮；
2.文中不得出現真實姓名和校名；
3.條理清晰，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規范；
4.詞數80左右（開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數）。
參考詞匯：
體育PE (Physical Education)
Daily PE Classes at Our School
To improve students’ health, primary schools and junior high schools in Shenzhen have had a daily PE class since the beginning of this term. In our school ______________________________________________________
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9．（2024·廣東深圳·一模）隨著5G、大數據、物聯網、人工智能等的廣泛運用，我們的生活將發生翻天覆地的改變。假設你是陽光中學的學生李華，你校英語報正在舉辦主題為“Our life in 20 years”的征文比賽 ，請你根據以下要點寫一篇征文，要點包括：
1. 高科技的廣泛運用將使我們的未來生活越來越智能化；
2. 暢想未來生活在以下方面的變化：①出行方式；②智能家居；③……
3. 中學生應努力學習，更好地迎接未來的智慧生活。
寫作要求：
1. 80詞左右(開頭已給出，不計入總字數)。
2. 文中不得出現真實姓名及學校名稱。
3. 可適當增加細節，使語句通順，條理清晰、意思連貫。
參考詞匯：
家用電器 electrical appliance 自動化 automatically(adv.) 無人駕駛交通工具 self-driving vehicle
Our life in 20 years
What will our life be like in 20 years Without doubt, our life will _________________________________
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10．（2023·廣東深圳·三模）隨著社會競爭日益激烈，中學生的壓力也日趨增加。對于中學生早上的進校時間是否應該被推遲到八點，大家各抒己見。你認為推遲入校時間的做法好不好？你覺得最合理的入校時間是幾點？請以“When should school begin ”為題寫一篇短文。
要點：
1.中學生是否有充足的睡眠？
2.你是否贊同進校時間推遲到八點。（寫出至少兩點理由）
要求：
1.語句通順，意思連貫，可根據提示適當發揮；
2.文中不得提及個人身份的相關信息，如人名、校名或地名等；
3.詞數80—100，開頭結尾已給出（不計入詞數）。
詞匯：推遲put off；合理的reasonable
When should school begin
Recently, the latest survey released by the China Youth Research Center shows that ___________________
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11．（2023·廣東深圳·二模） 假如你是李華，在端午節來臨之際，你們學校將舉行“傳統節日進校園（Welcome Chinese Traditional Festivals into Our Campus）”之端午節慶祝活動。
請根據以下提示，用英文給你的外國朋友Alex寫一封電子郵件，邀請他參加這次活動。
要點：
活動時間與地點 6月2日下午2:00-5:00；學校大堂
活動內容 1. 觀看關于端午節歷史文化的短片 2. 學做香囊，學包粽子 3. 品嘗各種美味的粽子 4. ……（請你自己補充，至少一個活動）
活動意義 ……（請你自己補充，至少兩點）
要求：
必須包括以上全部要點，可適當增加細節。
1.標點準確，書面整潔；
2.80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞匯內；
3.文中不得出現真實姓名和校名。
參考詞匯： sachet香囊，rice rice dumpling粽子
Dear Alex,
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12．（2023·廣東深圳·二模）假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Tony即將在暑假來深圳研學旅行。請你根據以下提示給他寫一封郵件，幫助他適應在深圳的生活。
內容提示：
（1）歡迎他來深研學旅行；
（2）你的建議：學習一些中國習俗，如使用筷子等；購物時可以使用移動支付；……
（3）你對他的祝福。
要求：
（1）80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數內；
（2）文中不得出現真實姓名和校名；
（3）可適當增加細節，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；
（4）標點正確，書面整潔。
參考詞匯：研學旅行 study trip 移動支付 mobile payment
Dear Tony,
I am so glad that _________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
13．（2023·廣東深圳·二模）深圳是一座“愛閱之城”。假如你是李華，你的外教Sam 發來一封郵件，說他對光明區隨處可見的24小時書香亭 (self-service library) 很感興趣，請你給他寫一封回信，向他介紹書香亭并邀請他參加書香亭推廣活動。
1. 介紹書香亭：
1) 光明區有71臺書香亭，每臺可放置約200本書；
2) 可以從書香亭拿到 網上預借的圖書；
3) ……
2. 你對書香亭的看法；
3. 活動安排：
1) 時間：本周六下午3點；
2) 地點：光明區圖書館。
要求：
1. 80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數內；
2. 文中不得出現真實姓名和校名；
3. 可適當增加細節，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；
4. 標點正確，書面整潔。
提示詞： 預借reserve; 推廣promotion
Dear Sam,
I am so happy to receive your email.__________________________________________________________
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I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
14．（2022·廣東深圳·二模）為落實國家教育部提出的加強中小學勞動教育的實施意見，你們學校安排了豐富多彩的勞動教育課。假如你是李華，你的英國筆友 Linda 對你參加的課程很感興趣，她發來郵件想了解有關情況。請你根據以下提示，給 Linda 回一封郵件。
要點:
1.勞動教育的目的：樹立勞動光榮的觀念、培養良好的勞動習慣等；
2.具體活動：學習傳統手工制作、學做家務等；
3.你對學校開展的勞動教育課的看法。(至少給出兩點)
要求:
1.80 詞左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數內;
2.文中不得出現真實的姓名和學校;
3.包含所有要點，可適當增加細節，使行文連貫;
4.條理清楚，語句通順，標點正確，書面整潔。
參考詞匯：勞動教育 the labor education 勞動課the labor lesson/course 手工課 the manual training lesson/course
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear from you. _________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
15．（2023·廣東深圳·一模）深圳是一座有溫度的城市。3月是學雷鋒月，假如你是學生李華，是深圳市某國際學校的一名學生。下周你所在的學校將舉行一系列“學雷鋒”活動，請根據以下提示，寫一個倡議書，介紹此次活動并號召學校的同學們積極參加，
要點：
1．目的：培養社會責任感，提高交流技巧，幫助有需要的人
2．內容：①看望敬老院老人 ②幫助照顧流浪動物 ③……（補充一點）
3．你的號召與倡議
要求：1.80詞左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數內；
參考詞匯：social 社會的
Dear friends,
Shenzhen is a city which can bring people love and warmth. In March, there will be a great event called “Learning from Leifeng”.
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That’s all. Thank you!
答案解析
1．（2024·廣東深圳·中考真題）假如你是李華，你的作品在“the Beauty of Nature”主題攝影展上獲得了一等獎。你的英語老師邀請你在“英語一分鐘演講”上給同學們做分享。要點如下：
1. 拍攝的時間，地點，內容；
2. 選擇這張照片的原因；
3. 參賽感受。
Dear_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all! Thank You!
【答案】例文：
Dear classmates,
My name is Li Hua, who is interested in photography. Here I would like to share my picture with you.
The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass. If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture. How cute they are!
It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest. Actually, it also shows us the harmony between the animals and nature. Taking part in this competition makes me realize the beauty of nature and let us protect our Earth together!
That’s all! Thank you!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為演講稿；
②時態：以“一般過去時”和“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏信息，可適當補充細節。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，首先介紹演講的主題，即介紹自己在攝影展上獲得一等獎的照片；
第二步，介紹照片拍攝的時間、地點以及內容；
第三步，闡述選擇這張照片的原因；
最后，表達自己的參賽感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①be interested in對……感興趣
②would like to do sth.想要做某事
③harmony和諧
④take part in參加
⑤realize意識到
[高分句型]
①The picture was taken by me in Shenzhen on a sunny morning in April, which shows a beautiful park with colorful flowers and green grass.（which引導定語從句）
②If you are careful enough, you will also find a few birds jumping in the grass in the picture.（If引導條件狀語從句）
③It is such a nice picture that I chose it for the photographic contest.（such a/an adj.+名詞+that從句）
2．（2022·廣東深圳·中考真題）假定你是李華，你和同學們拍了一個畢業活動視頻，打算做成視頻日志（vlog），參加主題為“青春飛揚”的國際中學生vlog作品展。請給該視頻寫一段解說詞。
內容包括：
1. 海邊活動：
下午：①沙灘排球；②……；
晚上：搭帳篷；聚餐和清理垃圾；分享會。
2. 活動感言。
注意：
1. 詞數80左右（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）；
2. 要點齊全，可適當發揮；
3. 不得出現真實姓名和校名；
4. 條理清楚，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規范。
參考詞匯：沖浪surf 帳篷tent
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.
Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it. Thank you.
【答案】例文
Hi, everyone! I am Li Hua. lt’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.
Last Saturday, we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation. In the afternoon, we had a beach volleyball game. Then, we enjoyed the fun of surfing in the sea. Before dark, we picked up the litter on the beach. How meaningful it was! At night, we put up two tents and had a picnic. The food cooked by us was so delicious. Finally, all of us shared our feelings about this fantastic experience. Not only can it promote our friendship, but also it leaves us a valuable experience.
So much for my video. I hope you have enjoyed it.
Thank you.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇解說詞，屬于演講稿寫作；
②時態：時態為“一般過去時”；
③提示：文章開頭以及要點已經給出，按照提示的要點逐點闡述，可以適當增加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，承接短文開頭，引出話題；
第二步，根據提示的要點介紹在海邊的活動，包括下午和晚上的具體活動，要列舉具體的事例；
第三步，抒發活動帶來的感悟并書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①pick up the litter撿垃圾
②not only…but also…不僅……而且……
[高分句型]
①How meaningful it was!（how引導的感嘆句）
②The food cooked by us was so delicious.（過去分詞作定語）
③Not only can it promote our friendship, but also it leaves us a valuable experience.（部分倒裝結構）
3．（2024·廣東深圳·三模）深圳中小學已獨立開設勞動教育必修課，假如你是校學生會主席李華，請代表廣大學生給校長寫一封關于提升勞動教育課程的信件，談談你對開設勞動課程的建議和理解。
要點提示：
1. 課程內容建議：
①…… ②…… ③……
2. 開設課程的意義：（至少寫3點意義）。
要求：
1. 必須包含以上所有要點，可適當發揮；
2. 80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
3. 文中不得出現真實姓名和校名；
4. 條理清楚，行文連貫，標點正確，書寫規范。
提示詞：
開設run；課程course；木工woodworking；屋頂農場rooftop farm；光榮的glorious
Dear headmaster,
I am Li Hua, the chairman of the Student Union. I am writing to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear headmaster,
I am Li Hua, the chairman of the Student Union. I am writing to share some suggestions on running the course.
First, the school can offer paper-cutting and woodworking classes. Second, we can build a rooftop farm on one of the buildings, and teachers can teach us how to plant vegetables and fruits in the farm. Finally, holding some competitions like cooking competition will be a nice choice. We can also invite parents to join in these activities.
Through this course, we students can not only learn some life skills but also take part in social activities. Meanwhile, our school life will become more colourful and meaningful!
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；
②時態：時態以“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：根據提示內容進行寫作，可適當發揮，注意要點齊全，并突出重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，點明主題，表明寫信的目的是提供一些開設課程的建議；
第二步，具體介紹課程內容的建議；
第三步，介紹開設課程的意義。
[亮點詞匯]
①hold some competitions舉辦一些比賽
②take part in參加
③invite sb to do sth邀請某人做某事
④meanwhile同時
[高分句型]
①Second, we can build a rooftop farm on one of the buildings, and teachers can teach us how to plant vegetables and fruits in the farm. (and連接的并列句)
②Finally, holding some competitions like cooking competition will be a nice choice. (動名詞作主語)
4．（2024·廣東深圳·模擬預測）假如你是李華，請根據提示，結合自己小區的實際，以“Building a greener community”為題，用英文寫一份倡議書。
參考詞匯：垃圾分類sort out the rubbish；電動車motorbike
小區的現狀 1. 亂扔垃圾； 2. 亂擺放單車和電動車； 3. 樹倒下了，沒有去維護、種植。
具體提議和做法 1. 垃圾分類，扔到正確的垃圾桶； 2. 單車和電動車擺放到專門地方。 …… (自行補充一至兩點)
號召和呼吁 小區是我家，每個人行動起來，共建綠色小區
Building a greener community
As we all know, green mountains and clear water are as good as mountains of gold and silver. It is important for everyone to protect the environment and build a beautiful China.
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【答案】例文:
Building a greener community
As we all know, green mountains and clear water are as good as mountains of gold and silver. It is important for everyone to protect the environment and build a beautiful China. And I think first we should build a greener community first. Our community has many problems now. First, it is not as green as before. Many people throw rubbish everywhere. Second, some people put bikes or motorbikes as they like, so our community looks a mess. Then, after the typhoon, many trees were down. But we don’t repair them or plant more trees. It is time for us to take action and solve these problems.
First, we’d better sort out the rubbish at home, then we put the rubbish into the right rubbish bins in our community. I think it is easy for us to do that. Second, we can find an area and let all the bikes and motorbikes be here. Please put our bike or motorbike in the right area in order. Third, trees are very important to our environment. We should plant more trees and take care of the trees that were down on the typhoon. The community is our home. Everyone should take action and build a greener and more beautiful community.
Let’s look forward to a greener community!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏表格中信息提示的內容，適當增加細節，并且突出寫作的要點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹小區現狀；
第二步，介紹關于創建綠色社區的具體提議和做法；
第三步，書寫結語。表達希望有一個綠色社區。
[亮點詞匯]
①take action采取行動
②important重要的
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①And I think first we should build a greener community first. (賓語從句)
②We should plant more trees and take care of the trees that were down on the typhoon. (定語從句)
5．（2024·廣東深圳·三模）很多同學在暑假期間做過多種多樣的創意性作業，如海報，小調查，Vlog制作等。創意性作業可以幫助同學們發展多種能力。最近，校英文報開展以“My Creative Homework”為主題的征文活動。請你寫一篇文章，講述自身經歷，并提出合理建議。
內容：1.讓你印象最深刻的一次創意性作業（內容、收獲）；
2.對創意性作業的建議（形式或內容、理由）；
3.呼吁同學們重視創意性作業。
要求: 1.80-120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
2.文中不得出現真實姓名及學校名稱；
3.可適當增加細節，以使語句通順、條理清楚、意義連貫；
4.書寫規范，卷面整潔。
My Creative Homework
During the summer vacation, many students completed a variety of creative assignments, such as designing posters, conducting surveys, and making logs.
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【答案】例文：
My Creative Homework
During the summer vacation, many students completed a variety of creative assignments, such as designing posters, conducting surveys, and making logs. Doing homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class. Doing creative homework makes us more interested in English.
Once our teacher asked us to write a letter to a foreign friend of hers. We were told to introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival in the letter. It not only helped me improve my written skills but also provided a good chance to spread Chinese traditional culture. In my opinion, it’s also a good choice to draw mind maps. It helps us to have a better understanding of the lessons. Besides, we can learn to watch English movies, since most of us love movies.
Creative homework is of great value for us. Let’s try our best to do more creative homework. I hope we’ll become smarter by doing creative homework.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：主要時態為一般現在時和一般過去時；
③提示：根據所給內容要點完成寫作，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，點明自己觀點；
第二步，描述自己經歷；
第三步，提出呼吁和希望。
[亮點詞匯]
①not only... but also不僅……而且
②In my opinion在我看來
③of great value很有價值
[高分句型]
①Doing homework helps us to practice and use what we’ve learned in class.（what引導賓語從句）
②I hope we’ll become smarter by doing creative homework.（省略that的賓語從句）
6．（2024·廣東深圳·一模）學校學生會正在招募志愿者，為外國來訪學生展示傳統手工制作(如剪紙、風箏、燈籠等)，以弘揚中華傳統文化。假如你是李華，請你用英語給校學生會寫一封自薦信，在信中說明你申請成為志愿者的理由以及你的優勢。
內容提示：
1.你申請志愿者的理由；
2.你的優勢；
3.你當選之后的打算。
參考詞匯： 傳統手工制作 traditional Chinese handicrafts
要求：
1.結構完整，要點齊全，可適當發揮；
2.表達通順，語言規范，書寫清晰；
3.文中不能出現任何真實的人名、校名等信息；
4.詞數80—100詞。文章的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua. Learning that the Student Union is looking for volunteers, I’m writing to apply to become a volunteer. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua. Learning that the Student Union is looking for volunteers, I’m writing to apply to become a volunteer.
The reason why I want to be a volunteer of your program is that I love Chinese culture very much and I want to spread Chinese culture and make people from other countries know more about China. Besides, I can have a chance to communicate in English with others and make more friends.
I have many advantages to be a volunteer. First, I am very good at English, so I can talk with them very easily. Second, I am very outgoing. I can have a better communication with foreign students. What’s more, I have similar work experiences as a volunteer in other activities.
I think traditional Chinese culture is important and useful. I am going to show the traditional handicraft, such as paper cutting, kites, lanterns to spread the traditional Chinese culture. If I have the chance, I can make videos to tell international students the history of kites and teach them to make kites. I’m sure they will be very interested in it.
I’m looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇書信作文；
② 時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
。③ 提示：寫作要點已給出，注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中每一項內容，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹你申請志愿者的理由；
第二步，描述你的優勢；
第三步，最后介紹你當選之后的打算。
[亮點詞匯]
①what’s more而且
②such as比如
③be interested in對……感興趣
[高分句型]
①The reason why I want to be a volunteer of your program is that I love Chinese culture very much and I want to spread Chinese culture and make people from other countries know more about China.（why引導定語從句，that引導表語從句）
②I think traditional Chinese culture is important and useful.（省略引導詞that的賓語從句）
③If I have the chance, I can make videos to tell international students the history of kites and teach them to make kites. （if引導的條件狀語從句）
7．（2024·廣東深圳·二模）按要求寫作短文。
為了貫徹落實習近平總書記關于教育、體育的重要論述，深圳市教育局印發了《深圳市加強和改進學校體育工作的實施意見》，要求從2024年1月1日起，義務教育階段學校每天開設一節體育課。假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Peter對此十分感興趣，請你給他寫一封郵件，介紹“每天一節體育課”的實施情況，內容包括以下要點:
1. 每天一節體育課的意義；
2. 介紹你校體育課的活動內容；
3. 你對保持健康的其它建議(不少于兩條建議)。
要求：
1. 80詞左右，文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；
2. 文中不得出現真實姓名和校名；
3. 可適當增加細節，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；
4. 標點正確，書面整潔。
參考詞匯：每天一節體育課政策The policy of daily PE class
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you are interested in the policy of daily PE class,
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Do you have other advice to keep healthy Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you are interested in the policy of daily PE class, I’m writing this email to tell you more details.
As we all know, health is the most important thing in our daily life. It’s necessary to spend enough time exercising outdoors. It is such a great policy that we all benefit a lot from it.
In my school, we do many activities in PE class. For example, we will run or play basketball.
In order to keep healthy, I also eat more vegetables and fruits every day. Besides, I will sleep early to make sure I have enough rest.
Do you have other suggestions on keeping healthy Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時態：時態為一般現在時；
③提示：根據提示內容介紹學校“每天一節體育課”的實施情況，以及對保持健康的建議。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹每天一節體育課的意義；
第二步，介紹你校體育課的活動內容；
第三步，介紹你對保持健康的其它建議。
[亮點詞匯]
①spend time doing sth.花費時間做某事
②benefit from從……中獲益
③in order to為了
④make sure確保
[高分句型]
①It is such a great policy that we all benefit a lot from it. (such...that引導的結果狀語從句)
②In order to keep healthy, I also eat more vegetables and fruits every day. (動詞不定式作目的狀語)
8．（2024·廣東深圳·二模）為促進學生身心健康成長，深圳市中小學正在全面推行“每天一節體育課”。假定你是學校英語報小記者，請就你校體育課開展情況完成一篇新聞報道。
要點：
1.描述學校體育課開設情況：①上課頻率 ②上課形式 ③活動內容；
2.介紹一項最受同學們歡迎的體育活動；
3.總結同學們的感受及看法（分別至少寫1點）。
要求：
1.要點齊全，可適當發揮；
2.文中不得出現真實姓名和校名；
3.條理清晰，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規范；
4.詞數80左右（開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數）。
參考詞匯：
體育PE (Physical Education)
Daily PE Classes at Our School
To improve students’ health, primary schools and junior high schools in Shenzhen have had a daily PE class since the beginning of this term. In our school _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Daily PE Classes at Our School
To improve students’ health, primary schools and junior high schools in Shenzhen have had a daily PE class since the beginning of this term. In our school, students also have a PE class every day.
Besides three regular PE classes, students have one music-based exercise class and one sports game class every week. They can join in colourful sports activities, like basketball, table tennis, rope skipping, swimming and kung fu at school. Among them, one of the students’ favourite sports is basketball. Not only can it offer students a chance to communicate with teammates in sports, but it also helps improve their learning efficiency after playing basketball.
“I’m glad that the daily PE classes enrich my school life as well as reduce my stress.” said Liu Xiaojun, an eighth grader. And most students hold the same idea as Liu. They think they are good for their physical and mental health.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇新聞報道；
②時態：時態主要為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，可適當發揮，注意要點齊全，條理清晰，語句連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，描述學校體育課開設情況；
第二步，介紹一項最受同學們歡迎的體育活動；
第三步，總結同學們的感受及看法。
[亮點詞匯]
①join in加入
②communicate with與……交流
③learning efficiency學習效率
[高分句型]
They think they are good for their physical and mental health.（賓語從句）
9．（2024·廣東深圳·一模）隨著5G、大數據、物聯網、人工智能等的廣泛運用，我們的生活將發生翻天覆地的改變。假設你是陽光中學的學生李華，你校英語報正在舉辦主題為“Our life in 20 years”的征文比賽 ，請你根據以下要點寫一篇征文，要點包括：
1. 高科技的廣泛運用將使我們的未來生活越來越智能化；
2. 暢想未來生活在以下方面的變化：①出行方式；②智能家居；③……
3. 中學生應努力學習，更好地迎接未來的智慧生活。
寫作要求：
1. 80詞左右(開頭已給出，不計入總字數)。
2. 文中不得出現真實姓名及學校名稱。
3. 可適當增加細節，使語句通順，條理清晰、意思連貫。
參考詞匯：
家用電器 electrical appliance 自動化 automatically(adv.) 無人駕駛交通工具 self-driving vehicle
Our life in 20 years
What will our life be like in 20 years Without doubt, our life will ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Our life in 20 years
What will our life be like in 20 years Without doubt, our life will become more and more intelligent with the rapid development and wide application of high technology.
There will be lots of dramatic changes in our life. Firstly, travelling around will be much easier. We can go anywhere by self-driving vehicle. Subsequently, our home will be more comfortable. Robots and smart electrical appliances can work automatically and provide personalized services for the owners. Moreover, schools will have a high-tech makeover. With smart school system and technologies such as VR glasses, learning will become a fun experience.
The remarkable changes in 20 years are not just the above. As students, we should study hard for the future smart life.
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態以“一般將來時”為主；
③提示：根據提示內容進行寫作，可適當增添細節，以使行文連貫，注意無單詞及語法錯誤。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹未來的生活將是什么樣的；
第二步，具體介紹未來生活的變化；
第三步，書寫結語，表達中學生應努力學習，迎接未來的智慧生活。
[亮點詞匯]
①more and more越來越……
②subsequently其次
③provide sth for sb提供某人某物
[高分句型]
①Firstly, travelling around will be much easier. (動名詞作主語)
②With smart school system and technologies such as VR glasses, learning will become a fun experience. (with表伴隨)
10．（2023·廣東深圳·三模）隨著社會競爭日益激烈，中學生的壓力也日趨增加。對于中學生早上的進校時間是否應該被推遲到八點，大家各抒己見。你認為推遲入校時間的做法好不好？你覺得最合理的入校時間是幾點？請以“When should school begin ”為題寫一篇短文。
要點：
1.中學生是否有充足的睡眠？
2.你是否贊同進校時間推遲到八點。（寫出至少兩點理由）
要求：
1.語句通順，意思連貫，可根據提示適當發揮；
2.文中不得提及個人身份的相關信息，如人名、校名或地名等；
3.詞數80—100，開頭結尾已給出（不計入詞數）。
詞匯：推遲put off；合理的reasonable
When should school begin
Recently, the latest survey released by the China Youth Research Center shows that _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
When should school begin
Recently, the latest survey released by the China Youth Research Center shows that middle school students haven’t got enough sleep every night. The issue “When should school begin” has aroused the concern of society.
From my point of view, starting the school day later could benefit students a lot. My reasons are as follows. First, sufficient sleep time enables students’ bodies to get enough rest, which is good for their health. Second, a later start can give students more time to eat breakfast at home. Finally, it also means that lessons finish later so that parents can pick their children up on their way home.
In brief, delaying the school day is helpful not only to students but also to their parents. I think that school beginning at eight o’clock every morning is reasonable.
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇議論文，為材料作文；
② 時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③ 提示：根據所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，可適當發揮。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，整體說明中學生是否有充足的睡眠；
第二步，介紹你是否贊同進校時間推遲到八點并給出理由；
第三步，最后總結文章。
[亮點詞匯]
①from my point of view在我看來
②be good for對……有好處
③in brief總之
[高分句型]
①First, sufficient sleep time enables students’ bodies to get enough rest, which is good for their health.（which引導的非限制性定語從句）
②Finally, it also means that lessons finish later so that parents can pick their children up on their way home.（so that引導的目的狀語從句）
11．（2023·廣東深圳·二模） 假如你是李華，在端午節來臨之際，你們學校將舉行“傳統節日進校園（Welcome Chinese Traditional Festivals into Our Campus）”之端午節慶祝活動。
請根據以下提示，用英文給你的外國朋友Alex寫一封電子郵件，邀請他參加這次活動。
要點：
活動時間與地點 6月2日下午2:00-5:00；學校大堂
活動內容 1. 觀看關于端午節歷史文化的短片 2. 學做香囊，學包粽子 3. 品嘗各種美味的粽子 4. ……（請你自己補充，至少一個活動）
活動意義 ……（請你自己補充，至少兩點）
要求：
必須包括以上全部要點，可適當增加細節。
1.標點準確，書面整潔；
2.80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞匯內；
3.文中不得出現真實姓名和校名。
參考詞匯： sachet香囊，rice rice dumpling粽子
Dear Alex,
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Dear Alex,
I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture. During the Dragon Boat Festival, our school will hold an activity called “Welcome Chinese Traditional Festivals into Our Campus” at 2:00-5:00 p.m. on June 2nd in the school hall.
First, we will watch a short film about the history and culture of the Dragon Boat Festival. And then we will learn how to make sachets and rice dumplings. At last, we will taste all kinds of delicious zongzi. We will watch the dragon boat races, too.
We all love the festival because it’s a good chance to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together.
I hope you can come to celebrate it with us. I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；
②時態：時態為“一般將來時和一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，必須包括以上全部要點，可適當增加細節。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖。直接說明活動主題，并交代時間和地點；
第二步，具體闡述活動內容。按照時間先后“first…；then…；at last…”詳述活動計劃；
第三步，書寫結語。希望Alex能接受這次邀請參加這次活動。
[亮點詞匯]
①be interested in對……感興趣
②look back on回顧
③all kinds of各種各樣的
④look forward to盼望
[高分句型]
①And then we will learn how to make sachets and rice dumplings.（疑問詞+不定式）
②We all love the festival because it’s a good chance to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together.（原因狀語從句）
12．（2023·廣東深圳·二模）假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Tony即將在暑假來深圳研學旅行。請你根據以下提示給他寫一封郵件，幫助他適應在深圳的生活。
內容提示：
（1）歡迎他來深研學旅行；
（2）你的建議：學習一些中國習俗，如使用筷子等；購物時可以使用移動支付；……
（3）你對他的祝福。
要求：
（1）80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數內；
（2）文中不得出現真實姓名和校名；
（3）可適當增加細節，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；
（4）標點正確，書面整潔。
參考詞匯：研學旅行 study trip 移動支付 mobile payment
Dear Tony,
I am so glad that ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】(One possible version)
Dear Tony,
I am so glad that you are going to have a study trip in Shenzhen this summer holiday. To help you live a happy and safe life here, I have some advice for you.
First, you can learn some Chinese customs, such as how to use chopsticks, how to greet people and so on. Second, when you shop, you can pay with mobile payment. Besides, the traffic rules are different from those in the UK. The drivers drive on the right side of the road, so when you cross the road, you should look left.
I hope that you can have a good time in Shenzhen. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；
② 時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③ 提示：寫作要點已經給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點，并結合要點進行適當的發揮。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開篇點題，歡迎他來深圳進行研學旅行；
第二步，具體介紹給他的一些建議；
第三步，表達對他的祝福。
[亮點詞匯]
① and so on 等等
② be different from 與……不同
③ have a good time 玩得開心
④ look forward to 期盼
[高分句型]
① To help you live a happy and safe life here, I have some advice for you.（不定式作目的狀語）
② First, you can learn some Chinese customs, such as how to use chopsticks, how to greet people and so on.（疑問詞+不定式）
13．（2023·廣東深圳·二模）深圳是一座“愛閱之城”。假如你是李華，你的外教Sam 發來一封郵件，說他對光明區隨處可見的24小時書香亭 (self-service library) 很感興趣，請你給他寫一封回信，向他介紹書香亭并邀請他參加書香亭推廣活動。
1. 介紹書香亭：
1) 光明區有71臺書香亭，每臺可放置約200本書；
2) 可以從書香亭拿到 網上預借的圖書；
3) ……
2. 你對書香亭的看法；
3. 活動安排：
1) 時間：本周六下午3點；
2) 地點：光明區圖書館。
要求：
1. 80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數內；
2. 文中不得出現真實姓名和校名；
3. 可適當增加細節，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；
4. 標點正確，書面整潔。
提示詞： 預借reserve; 推廣promotion
Dear Sam,
I am so happy to receive your email._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Sam,
I am so happy to receive your email. Knowing that you are interested in the self-service libraries in Guangming District, I am writing to tell you something about it. There are 71 self-service libraries in Guangming and each of them can hold about 200 books. One of the greatest things about these libraries is that you can borrow books you have reserved online directly from them. What’s more, with the self-service libraries, you can borrow and return books anytime, anywhere.
Personally, the self-service libraries are fantastic. They not only provide convenient access to a wide range of books, but also they create a culture of reading in our community.
A promotion activity about the self-service libraries will be held at 3 p.m. on Saturday in Guangming Library. If you are interested in it, let me know and we can meet up at the library entrance.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點以及開頭，注意要點齊全，語句通順，表述完整。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，承接開頭，開門見山，交代寫作目的，介紹光明區圖書館；
第二步，具體介紹書香亭以及對書香亭的看法；
第三步，介紹書亭推廣活動的具體情況。
[亮點詞匯]
①be interested in對……感興趣
②what’s more其次
③not only...but also...不僅……而且……
[高分句型]
①One of the greatest things about these libraries is that you can borrow books you have reserved online directly from them.（表語從句）
②If you are interested in it, let me know and we can meet up at the library entrance.（if引導的條件狀語從句）
14．（2022·廣東深圳·二模）為落實國家教育部提出的加強中小學勞動教育的實施意見，你們學校安排了豐富多彩的勞動教育課。假如你是李華，你的英國筆友 Linda 對你參加的課程很感興趣，她發來郵件想了解有關情況。請你根據以下提示，給 Linda 回一封郵件。
要點:
1.勞動教育的目的：樹立勞動光榮的觀念、培養良好的勞動習慣等；
2.具體活動：學習傳統手工制作、學做家務等；
3.你對學校開展的勞動教育課的看法。(至少給出兩點)
要求:
1.80 詞左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數內;
2.文中不得出現真實的姓名和學校;
3.包含所有要點，可適當增加細節，使行文連貫;
4.條理清楚，語句通順，標點正確，書面整潔。
參考詞匯：勞動教育 the labor education 勞動課the labor lesson/course 手工課 the manual training lesson/course
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear from you. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear from you. You say you are interested in our labor course. I would like to share something about it with you.
As we know, the labor course is set to educate students to respect and honor hard work, and form good working habits. In our school, we are offered various Chinese traditional manual training courses, such as paper-cutting. We learn to do housework as well. Some teachers teach us to cook several kinds of simple dishes.
In my view, through the labor education, we students can acquire some life skills. Meanwhile, our school life will become more colorful and meaningful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，注意補充兩點對勞動教育課的看法。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖，和筆友分享關于勞動教育課的情況；
第二步，詳細介紹開展勞動教育的目的以及具體的活動內容有哪些；
第三步，表達自己的看法。
[亮點詞匯]
①be interested in對……感興趣
②share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
③form good working habits養成良好的工作習慣
④teach sb. to do sth.教某人做某事
[高分句型]
You say you are interested in our labor course.（省略that的賓語從句）
15．（2023·廣東深圳·一模）深圳是一座有溫度的城市。3月是學雷鋒月，假如你是學生李華，是深圳市某國際學校的一名學生。下周你所在的學校將舉行一系列“學雷鋒”活動，請根據以下提示，寫一個倡議書，介紹此次活動并號召學校的同學們積極參加，
要點：
1．目的：培養社會責任感，提高交流技巧，幫助有需要的人
2．內容：①看望敬老院老人 ②幫助照顧流浪動物 ③……（補充一點）
3．你的號召與倡議
要求：1.80詞左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數內；
參考詞匯：social 社會的
Dear friends,
Shenzhen is a city which can bring people love and warmth. In March, there will be a great event called “Learning from Leifeng”.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
Shenzhen is a city which can bring people love and warmth. In March, there will be a great event called “Learning from Leifeng”. The following is some detailed information about it.
This event will be held in order to develop students’ sense of social responsibility. At the same time, students can improve their communication skills and help people in need.
There are a series activities during the event. Firstly, we will go to old people’s homes and help them clean their rooms. Secondly, some of us will go to take care of homeless animals. We can feed them or play with them. Thirdly, we will hold a book fair to raise money for the poor. Each student need to bring some books that they don’t need any more.
I think this event will be really educational and meaningful. With every effort we make, we can make a big difference! Hope everyone can take part in it!
That’s all. Thank you!
【詳解】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇倡議書；
②時態：時態為“一般將來”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節完整表述內容。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹活動的目的；
第二步，介紹活動的內容。
[亮點詞匯]
①at the same time同時
②make a big difference有很大的影響
③take part in參加
[高分句型]
①This event will be held in order to develop students’ sense of social responsibility.（動詞不定式作目的狀語）
②I think this event will be really educational and meaningfuls.（省略that的賓語從句）

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