資源簡(jiǎn)介 Part 4 Writing旅行計(jì)劃寫作題目 假定你是英國(guó)人Jack,五月份打算來中國(guó)旅行,請(qǐng)給你的中國(guó)筆友李華寫一封信,要點(diǎn)如下:1.你的旅行計(jì)劃:北京→泰山→杭州;2.征求他的建議。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:the Forbidden City故宮Mount Tai泰山Dear Li Hua, I’m glad to tell you that I’m going to visit China in May. Yours,Jack思路點(diǎn)撥遣詞造句Ⅰ.用本單元所學(xué)單詞或短語填空1. n.景象;視野;視力 2. adj.令人驚奇的;令人驚喜的 3. n.安排;籌備 4. v.欣賞,欽佩 5. 期盼 答案 1.sight 2.amazing 3.arrangement 4.admire 5.look forward toⅡ.本單元語塊、語法運(yùn)用1.完成句子第一部分:介紹旅行計(jì)劃(1)I’m (正計(jì)劃去參觀) Beijing, the capital of China. (2)I am (期盼著欣賞) the Great Wall and the Forbidden City. (3)It is one of the most famous mountains in China and I (已經(jīng)聽說了). (4)I (迫不及待地要欣賞)the amazing sunrise there. (5) (據(jù)說) Hangzhou is a beautiful modern city with (令人驚奇的自然景象), such as the West Lake. 答案 (1)planning to visit (2)looking forward to enjoying (3)have heard it(4)can’t wait to admire (5)It is said that;amazing natural sights2.句式升級(jí)(6)將句(3)改為含that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句的主從復(fù)合句 答案(6)I have heard that it is one of the most famous mountains in China.連句成篇Dear Li Hua, I’m glad to tell you that I’m going to visit China in May. My arrangements are as follows: Firstly, I’m planning to visit Beijing, the capital of China, where I am looking forward to enjoying the Great Wall and the Forbidden City. Then I intend to visit Mount Tai in Shandong Province. I’ve heard that it is one of the most famous mountains in China and I can’t wait to admire the amazing sunrise there. Lastly, I’m going to Hangzhou. It is said that it is a beautiful modern city with amazing natural sights, such as the West Lake. What do you think of my plan I would be grateful if you could give me some advice.Yours,Jack寫作積累關(guān)于旅行的寫作一、常用詞塊go hiking去徒步旅行natural scenery and sights自然風(fēng)光和名勝historical sites歷史遺跡places of interest名勝古跡date back to/date from追溯到take advantage of利用make a reservation預(yù)訂make a journey旅游set out/off出發(fā),動(dòng)身leave for動(dòng)身去某地enjoy the scenery欣賞風(fēng)景a seven-day trip七日游broaden one’s horizons開闊眼界around the corner即將來臨experience different cultures體驗(yàn)不同文化二、常用語句1.精彩開頭I’m pleased to receive your e-mail.我很高興收到你的電子郵件。I’m writing to tell you my travel plan.我寫信告訴你我的旅行計(jì)劃。You asked about my travel to...你問了關(guān)于我去……旅行的情況。We are planning to go on a trip to...我們打算去……旅行。2.主體佳句As for the travel plan, here are the details.至于旅行計(jì)劃,這里是詳細(xì)信息。I’m planning to go to...to see...我打算去……看……I am looking forward to going to..., because...我期待著去……,因?yàn)椤?br/>I’m also planning to visit several other places in...,such as...我還打算游覽……的其他幾個(gè)地方,例如……I strongly advise you to go to...我強(qiáng)烈建議你去……It’s the most amazing sight that I have ever seen.這是我見過的最令人驚奇的景象。I’d like to take the train/plane to go to...我想坐火車/飛機(jī)去……I will book a comfortable hotel in advance.我會(huì)提前訂一家舒適的酒店。3.余味結(jié)尾Tell me your arrival time and the flight number so that I can go and meet you at the airport.告訴我你的到達(dá)時(shí)間和航班號(hào),我好去機(jī)場(chǎng)接你。I’m looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.我期待著你盡快回復(fù)。I’m expecting your coming.我期待著你的到來。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練1 假定你是李華,你10月1日要和兩個(gè)朋友去北京旅游,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表的提示給你的英國(guó)朋友Tom寫一封信,介紹你的旅游計(jì)劃。北京概況 歷史悠久,旅游資源豐富。旅游活動(dòng)安排 1.上午7:00在紅星賓館門口集合,然后乘汽車去天安門廣場(chǎng)和故宮游覽觀光; 2.下午2:00乘汽車到長(zhǎng)城游覽參觀。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:Tiananmen Square 天安門廣場(chǎng);the Forbidden City故宮;the Great Wall 長(zhǎng)城Dear Tom, Yours,Li Hua讀后續(xù)寫寫作題目 閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 Jack and his wife Tonya were sailing around Africa with their friends Max and Sasha. One day they saw a big fishing boat. It was moving fast. “Hello!” they shouted. The men on the boat looked at them angrily. Max looked carefully at the boat.“Something’s wrong with their fishing net,”he said. They got nearer to the net. “What’s that ” said Tonya. “There is something in the net. It’s alive.” Very slowly, they moved nearer.“I can see it now,” said Tonya. “It’s a killer whale—it’s hurt. There’s blood in the water. How can we help it ” “I can see it too. It’s a baby but we must be careful,” said Max.Jack jumped into the water. “I can get the net off its fin,” he said.Jack got the net off the baby killer whale. There was a big cut on its fin. It swam away.Suddenly there were other killer whales near the boat.“Jack! Come back quickly,” shouted Tonya.Jack swam to the boat as fast as he could. “I’m going to call that baby killer whale Lucky,” he said.As they moved away, a storm broke.Jack said, “We must get away from the wind. I can see a town over there. Let’s go.”The town got nearer but the waves got bigger. Suddenly a very big wave hit the boat.“Is everyone OK ” shouted Jack. “Tonya ...She’s not in the boat,” said Sasha. “She’s in the water.”They looked into the cold, dark water, searching for hours. “Tonya! Say something, Tonya. Where are you ” shouted Max.The wind got stronger and the boat was full of water. Another big wave hit the boat. “Jack, do you want us all to die ” said Max. “We can’t do any more. Tonya is wearing a life jacket and she can swim very well. Let’s sail to the town.”Moments later the boat hit a beach. They went out. Max and Sasha lay on the beach. Jack sat near the water, looking at the sea and thinking of Tonya.注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右。At that time, Tonya was five hundred meters away in the sea. Jack was walking along the beach when suddenly he saw someone waving to him. 文本分析初識(shí)文本重點(diǎn)詞匯1.alive adj.活著的2.get away from離開,從……脫身3.wave n.海浪 v.揮手4.be full of...充滿……5.be thinking of sb.惦記/牽掛某人障礙詞匯1.sail v.乘船航行2.net n.網(wǎng)3.fin n.(魚的)鰭4.cut n.傷口5.life jacket救生衣6.hit v.到達(dá)(某地)故事要素深研文本預(yù)測(cè)情節(jié)發(fā)展第一段:那時(shí),Tonya在500米外的海里→Tonya一個(gè)人,十分恐懼,拼命求救→Tonya被“Lucky”所在的虎鯨群救了→Tonya被虎鯨群帶到近岸處。第二段:Jack走在海灘上,突然他看到有人向他揮手→Jack發(fā)現(xiàn)向他揮手的人是Tonya→Tonya上岸后向Jack說明是“Lucky”救了自己→Jack向Lucky表示感謝→Lucky和其他虎鯨游向大海。遣詞造句1.用單詞或短語填空(1) vt.包圍 (2) adj.害怕的 (3) 啟程;出發(fā) (4) 踏上 答案 (1)surround (2)frightened (3)set off/out (4)set foot on2.完成句子(1)Tonya (被……環(huán)繞) the cold seawater, and she was so frightened and just shouted crazily (以尋求幫助). (2)Tonya found herself (從……升起來)the sea. (3) (令人驚訝的是), she was on the back of a big killer whale and there were some other killer whales around her. (4)Tonya set foot on the beach, and then Jack ran towards her and (緊緊地抱住她). (5)Jack walked towards Lucky and stroked its fin, (真誠地說), “Thank you, Lucky!” 答案 (1)was surrounded by;for help(2)rising out of (3)Surprisingly(4)hugged her tightly (5)saying sincerely3.句式升級(jí)(6)用非謂語動(dòng)詞作狀語改寫句(1) (7)用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)改寫句(3) (8)用the moment引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句改寫句(4) 答案 (6)Surrounded by the cold seawater, Tonya was so frightened and just shouted crazily for help. (7)Surprisingly, she was on the back of a big killer whale, with some other killer whales around her. (8)The moment Tonya set foot on the beach, Jack ran towards her and hugged her tightly.連句成篇 At that time,Tonya was five hundred meters away in the sea. Jack was walking along the beach when suddenly he saw someone waving to him. 參考范文 At that time,Tonya was five hundred meters away in the sea. Surrounded by the cold seawater, Tonya was so frightened and just shouted crazily for help. Suddenly, Tonya found herself rising out of the sea. Surprisingly, she was on the back of a big killer whale, with some other killer whales around her. Among them, Tonya saw a small one, who was saved by Jack a few hours ago—Lucky. They set off to catch up with the boat. Jack was walking along the beach when suddenly he saw someone waving to him. Later, he found that it was Tonya! The moment Tonya set foot on the beach, Jack ran towards her and hugged her tightly. Tonya smiled, “Don’t worry. I’m fine. I think we should thank the killer whales who saved my life. Look, the small one is Lucky!” Jack walked towards Lucky and stroked its fin, saying sincerely, “Thank you, Lucky!” Lucky shook its fin and then these killer whales swam away into the vast sea.寫作積累心理描寫—樂觀情緒一、詞匯1.glad/cheerful/delighted/pleased/joyful adj.高興的,快樂的2.content/satisfied adj.滿足的,滿意的3.optimistic adj.樂觀的4.positive adj.積極的5.thrilled/excited adj.非常興奮的/激動(dòng)的6.pleasure/joy/delight n.愉快,快樂7.in a good mood心情好8.over the moon非常高興9.cheer up(使)振作起來,(使)高興起來10.in excitement興奮地11.to one’s delight/joy令某人高興的是12.in high/good spirits興高采烈13.be wild with joy/delight欣喜若狂14.delighted/pleased beyond description高興得無法形容15.be seized by joy充滿了喜悅16.be overcome with happiness沉浸在幸福之中二、句子1.He brightened up and his face broke into a wide smile.他高興起來,臉上綻開燦爛的笑容。2.All the people present were enveloped in an atmosphere of joy.在場(chǎng)的所有人都沉浸在歡樂的氣氛中。3.The sight filled her with childlike excitement.這種情景令她像孩子般興奮起來。4.He was so excited that he could hardly contain himself.他十分激動(dòng),幾乎控制不住自己。5.He rushed into the room, laughing madly and clapping his hands with delight.他沖進(jìn)房間,狂笑著,高興地拍著手。6.Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the box. 當(dāng)她打開盒子時(shí),她激動(dòng)得手發(fā)抖。7.After Steve learned this satisfactory result,a sense of joy and happiness crowded in on him. 史蒂夫聽到這個(gè)令人滿意的結(jié)果后,一種喜悅和幸福的感覺涌上心頭。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練2 閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。 Robert and Henry were friends in the same class. They always played together and went home together. One day, Robert and Henry were going home from school. On turning a corner, Robert cried out,“A fight! Let’s go and see!”“No,” said Henry. “Let’s go home quietly and not meddle with(干涉) this quarrel. We have nothing to do with it and may get into trouble. Also, our parents are expecting to have dinner with us and I don’t want them to worry about me.”“You are a coward(懦夫), and afraid to go,” said Robert, and he ran off. Henry went straight home, and in the afternoon he went to school as usual.But Robert had told other boys that Henry was a coward, and they laughed at him a great deal. From then on, they looked down upon Henry and didn’t want to play with him.Henry was sad but he wasn’t angry with Robert for his rude behaviour, because he knew that they misunderstood him, and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong. Thus, he just ignored the other boys’ laughter and continued to go to school and study as usual. However, Robert didn’t invite Henry to go home together with him anymore.Instead, he had some other boys who also thought Henry was a coward. Every day after school, they didn’t go home directly but went to the river or somewhere else to play games and had a lot of fun.A few days later, Robert was bathing with his new friends in a river, and got out of his depth. He struggled and cried for help, but he failed. The boys who had called Henry a coward got out of the water as fast as they could, and did nothing to help him.注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右。 It seemed as if Robert would be dying. Thus, Robert’s life was saved. 答案與分層梯度式解析UNIT 2 TRAVELLING AROUNDPart 4 Writing實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練1One possible version:Dear Tom, I am planning to go to Beijing together with two friends on October 1. With a long history, Beijing is rich in tourist attractions. Now I’d like to tell you my travel plan.At 7:00 on the morning of October 1, we’ll meet at the gate of Hongxing Hotel,where we’ll take a bus to our travelling destinations. First of all, we’ll go to Tiananmen Square, and then the Forbidden City. At 2 o’clock in the afternoon, we’ll take a bus to the Great Wall.What do you think of my plan Looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,Li Hua 1.重點(diǎn)詞匯①together with與……一起②be rich in有豐富的……③look forward to期待2.亮點(diǎn)句型At 7:00 on the morning of October 1, we’ll meet at the gate of Hongxing Hotel,where we’ll take a bus to our travelling destinations.(where引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)10月1日早上7點(diǎn),我們將在紅星賓館門口集合,在那里我們將乘坐汽車前往我們的旅行目的地。 實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練2寫作指導(dǎo)故事要素 Time one day after school;a few days later when Robert was bathing with his new friendsPlace at a corner;in a riverCharacter Robert, Henry, other boysReason Robert misunderstood Henry, thinking that Henry was a coward.Climax Robert was drowning in the river. He cried for help but the boys got out of the water and did nothing to help him.前文故事情節(jié) Robert和Henry是同班的朋友。他們總是一起玩、一起回家。一天,他們?cè)诨丶业穆飞峡吹接腥舜蚣?Robert想去看看但Henry拒絕了,于是Robert就認(rèn)定Henry是懦夫并告訴了其他男孩。Henry并不生氣,但Robert卻選擇和其他人一起玩而不和Henry玩。幾天后,Robert溺水,其他男孩趕緊從水里出來而不去救他。續(xù)表寫作指導(dǎo)續(xù)寫方向 Para. 1 It seemed as if Robert would be dying.①根據(jù)已給出的續(xù)寫第一段首句可知,本段主要講述Robert溺水后的情景。 ②Robert是否會(huì)得救 誰救的Robert (根據(jù)續(xù)寫第二段首句和正文中講到的Robert對(duì)Henry的誤解可以猜想,續(xù)寫第一段中應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)Henry救Robert的過程及其表現(xiàn)出的勇敢。)Para. 2 Thus, Robert’s life was saved.根據(jù)續(xù)寫第二段首句可知,Robert得救了。因此本段應(yīng)講述Robert得救后的故事。Robert最終明白自己誤會(huì)了Henry,知道了什么才是真正的勇敢,兩人重歸于好。整理思路 續(xù)寫第一段:Robert快要淹死了→Henry恰巧路過→Henry毫不猶豫地跳下水救Robert。 續(xù)寫第二段:Robert得救了→Robert明白了什么是真正的勇敢,兩人誤會(huì)解開→Robert得出感悟。One possible version: It seemed as if Robert would be dying. Just at that moment, Henry happened to pass by. Hearing the screams, Henry ran to the riverside, threw off his clothes and jumped into the water without hesitation. He caught hold of Robert just before he sank. In spite of much danger, he brought Robert to the riverbank with great effort. Thus, Robert’s life was saved. Robert and his new friends were ashamed of themselves for having called Henry a coward.They realized that Henry had true courage. They said sorry to Henry for their rude behaviour and asked for his forgiveness. Henry forgave them happily. He and Robert were friends again and they went home together as usual.From this, Robert learned what true courage was—never being afraid to do good, but always fearing to do evil.17 展開更多...... 收起↑ 資源預(yù)覽 縮略圖、資源來源于二一教育資源庫