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Part 4　Writing
運(yùn)動與健康
寫作題目
　　最近,你校英文報正在舉辦主題為“One hour of exercise a day makes a lifetime of health”的征文活動。假定你是李華,請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容用英語寫一篇短文投稿。
1.你對征文主題的理解;
2.你喜歡的運(yùn)動;
3.該運(yùn)動給你帶來的好處。
注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;
2.開頭已寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);
3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
　　Nowadays, doing sports is becoming more and more popular.






思路點(diǎn)撥
遣詞造句
Ⅰ.用本單元所學(xué)單詞或短語填空
1.　　　　adj.積極的;正面的;樂觀的
2.　　　　n.壓力;緊張
3.　　　　　　　趕快;快來
4.　　　　　　　有作用或影響
5.　　　　　　　鍛煉;計算出;解決
6.　　　　　　　放棄;投降
7.　　　　　　　喪失信心;泄氣
答案　1.positive　2.stress　3.come along　4.make a difference　5.work out　6.give up　7.lose heart
Ⅱ.本單元語塊、語法運(yùn)用
1.完成句子
第一部分:對征文主題的理解
(1)　　　　 　　　　(鍛煉)can 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(對……產(chǎn)生很大影響)us.
(2)Doing sports can help us 　　　　 　　　　 (減輕壓力)and offer us opportunities 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(交朋友).
第二部分:喜歡的運(yùn)動及帶來的好處
(3)My favorite sport is basketball and it makes me 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 (更加健康和樂觀).
(4)　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(通過打籃球), I have learned how to 　　　　 　　　　(與……打交道) others and have realized the importance of teamwork.
(5)Losing games teaches me never to 　　　　 　　　　(放棄) or 　　　　 　　　　(失去信心).
第三部分:號召人們積極參加運(yùn)動
(6)　　　　 　　　　(快來吧)! Let’s do sports together and 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(享受健康的生活)!
答案　(1)Working out;make a big difference to　(2)reduce stress;to make friends
(3)healthier and more positive　(4)By playing basketball;deal with　(5)give up;lose heart　(6)Come along;enjoy a healthy life
2.句式升級
(7)用not only...but also...改寫句(2)


(8)用附加疑問句改寫句(6)


答案　(7)Doing sports can not only help us reduce stress but also offer us opportunities to make friends.　(8)Come along!Let’s do sports together and enjoy a healthy life, shall we
連句成篇
　　Nowadays, doing sports is becoming more and more popular. Working out can make a big difference to us. One hour of exercise a day makes a lifetime of health. Doing sports can not only help us reduce stress but also offer us opportunities to make friends.
My favorite sport is basketball and it makes me healthier and more positive. By playing basketball, I have learned how to deal with others and have realized the importance of teamwork. Losing games teaches me never to give up or lose heart. In short,I benefit a lot from basketball.
Come along! Let’s do sports together and enjoy a healthy life, shall we
寫作積累
運(yùn)動與健康
鋪平墊穩(wěn)開頭句
1.As the proverb goes,“No one knows the value of health until he loses it.”有句諺語這樣說:“直到失去了健康,人們才知道它的價值。”
2.As we all know,health is very important to everybody.But do you really know how to stay healthy 我們都知道,健康對每個人都很重要。但是你真的知道如何保持健康嗎
3.In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. As we all know, it is important for us to keep healthy. Now, I will give you some advice on how to keep fit.你在信中問我如何保持健康。眾所周知,保持健康對我們來說很重要。現(xiàn)在,我給你一些關(guān)于如何保持健康的建議。
亮點(diǎn)出彩篇中句
1.I become interested in outdoor activities and begin to take part.我變得對戶外活動感興趣,并開始參與其中。
2.I became fond of jogging and kept going jogging every morning.我變得喜歡慢跑,并且每天早上都堅持慢跑。
3.I started to work out regularly in order to stay fit/healthy.為保持健康,我開始有規(guī)律地鍛煉。
4.I used to eat fast food a lot and was overweight.我過去經(jīng)常吃快餐,而且超重。
5.I cut out unhealthy food from my diet and have more vegetables.我日常飲食不再吃不健康的食物,并且吃更多的蔬菜。
6.Doing sports can strengthen my body and is good for my mental and physical health.運(yùn)動可以強(qiáng)壯我的身體,對我的身心健康有好處。
7.Doing sports regularly can help me feel energetic and improve my study efficiency.經(jīng)常運(yùn)動可以幫助我感到精力充沛,并且提高我的學(xué)習(xí)效率。
8.Only by keeping healthy can we do well in our study and work.只有通過保持健康我們才能在我們的學(xué)習(xí)和工作中表現(xiàn)良好。
9.Doing sports is one of the best ways to keep fit.做運(yùn)動是保持健康最好的方法之一。
10.They can not only build up our bodies but also help us study more efficiently.它們不僅能增強(qiáng)我們的體質(zhì),而且能幫助我們更高效地學(xué)習(xí)。
11.In fact, regular and proper exercise is the key to keeping healthy.事實上,經(jīng)常且合適的鍛煉是保持健康的關(guān)鍵。
12.I realize that it makes great sense for students to do more exercise.我意識到學(xué)生多參加鍛煉很有意義。
13.Instead of eating less, I eat a balanced diet and spare one hour a day to take exercise.我均衡飲食并且每天抽出一個小時的時間鍛煉,而不是少吃。
14.In my spare time, I often work out, building up my strength.在閑暇時間, 我經(jīng)常鍛煉, 增強(qiáng)我的體力。
15.To my delight,I have lost weight and feel healthier and stronger than before.令我高興的是,我減輕了體重,感到比以前更健康和強(qiáng)壯了。
韻味無窮結(jié)尾句
1.If you can do what is listed above, I believe you can keep healthy. 如果你能做到上面列出的,我相信你可以保持健康。
2.I hope you can take these pieces of advice into consideration. I’m looking forward to hearing from you. 我希望你能考慮這些建議。我期待著收到你的來信。
3.Don’t hesitate and go into action, and you will benefit a lot from playing a sport.不要猶豫了,行動起來吧,你會從參與體育運(yùn)動中獲益良多。
實戰(zhàn)演練
健康的生活習(xí)慣對于成長中的我們是非常重要的,請以“How to Keep Healthy”為題,談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br/>提示:1.均衡的飲食;
2.鍛煉身體;
3.保持好心情。
注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;
2.字跡工整,語言流暢,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,邏輯清晰;
3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
How to Keep Healthy






讀后續(xù)寫微寫作
情景導(dǎo)入
　　一天下午,你和爸爸在森林游玩時突然遇到一只野兔。你們決定追趕它,但天色已晚,你們不幸迷路了。請你根據(jù)提示使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語寫一個語段,描述迷路的過程和迷路后你的沮喪、恐懼等心情以及爸爸的態(tài)度和做法,要體現(xiàn)爸爸的正能量。
教材續(xù)寫語料
Ⅰ.心理描寫
1.　　　　　　喪失信心;泄氣
2.　　　　adj.肯定的,確信的;樂觀的
3.　　　　v.決定
Ⅱ.動作描寫
4.　　　　vt.追蹤;跟蹤
5.　　　　v.出汗;流汗
6.　　　　　　解決
7.　　　　　　獲得成功;準(zhǔn)時到達(dá)
答案　1.lose heart　2.positive　3.determine
4.track　5.sweat　6.work out　7.make it
微型讀后續(xù)寫
Ⅰ.單句寫作
1.當(dāng)看到那只野兔時,爸爸和我決定去追蹤它。
When seeing the wild rabbit, my father and I 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 it.
2.它的速度如此之快,以至于它消失在了森林里。
So fast was it that 　　　　 　　　　 in the forest.
3.正是在那時我們意識到陽光正迅速消失在樹木之間。(強(qiáng)調(diào)句型)
　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 we realized that the sunlight was quickly disappearing among the trees.
4.迷路了,我極度恐懼,汗流浹背。
Lost,I was 　　　　 　　　　 and sweated heavily.
5.我用顫抖的聲音說:“爸爸,我們怎么解決這個麻煩呢 ”
I said in a trembling voice,“Dad,how can we 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 ”
6.爸爸回答:“別灰心!我確信我們會成功回家!”
Dad answered, “Don’t 　　　　 　　　　! I’m 　　　　 　　　　 we will 　　　　 　　　　 home!”
答案　1.determined to track　2.it disappeared
3.It was then that　4.extremely frightened
5.work out the trouble　6.lose heart;positive that;make it
Ⅱ.連句成篇(注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~)






答案　When seeing the wild rabbit,my father and I determined to track it. But so fast was it that it disappeared in the forest. It was then that we realized that the sunlight was quickly disappearing among the trees.Lost,I was extremely frightened and sweated heavily.I said in a trembling voice,“Dad,how can we work out the trouble ”However, Dad answered,“Don’t lose heart! I’m positive that we will make it home!”
答案與分層梯度式解析
UNIT 3　SPORTS AND FITNESS
Part 4　Writing
實戰(zhàn)演練
One possible version:
How to Keep Healthy
　　Nowadays, more and more people care about their health. Different people have different ways to keep healthy.
In my opinion, there are basic principles of keeping healthy, such as a balanced diet, proper exercise and a good mood. A balanced diet is necessary for our growth; proper exercise can strengthen our body and keep diseases away from us;keeping a good mood is also essential for us to keep fit.
In short, we have different methods of keeping healthy. If we know the importance of health, we can find good ways to keep fit.
1.重點(diǎn)詞匯
①principle n.原則;準(zhǔn)則　②strengthen v.使強(qiáng)健;加強(qiáng);鞏固　③essential adj.完全必要的; 極其重要的
④in short總之
2.亮點(diǎn)句型
If we know the importance of health, we can find good ways to keep fit. (if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句;不定式短語to keep fit作后置定語,修飾名詞ways) 如果我們知道健康的重要性,我們就能找到保持健康的好方法。
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