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Part 4　Writing
關于日常飲食的寫作
寫作題目
　　假定你是李華,你的美國網友Jack來信說他的家人都很喜歡吃中餐,向你尋求在中餐館點餐的建議。請你用英語給他寫一封回信,內容主要包括:
1.點餐要適量,避免浪費;
2.蔬菜為主,少油少鹽。
注意:
1.詞數80左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
Dear Jack,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
思路點撥
遣詞造句
Ⅰ.用本單元所學單詞或短語填空
1.　　　　 n.菜肴;烹飪
2.　　　　 n.餐廳
3.　　　　 n.卡路里(熱量單位)
4.　　　　 n.廚師
5.　　　　　　 減少
6.　　　　　　 停止做(或使用、食用)
答案　1.cuisine　2.canteen　3.calorie
4.chef　5.cut down on　6.cut out
Ⅱ.本單元語塊、語法運用
1.完成句子
第一段:表明寫信的目的
(1)I'm very glad 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(收到你的來信).
(2)I know that your family are attracted to Chinese cuisine and wonder 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(如何點餐) in Chinese canteens.
第二段:根據提示給出建議
(3)　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(眾所周知), Chinese 　　　　(餐) is one of the most popular diets.
(4)It can 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(含……多) oil and salt.
(5)You　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(應該盡量避免)the dishes such as lamb kebabs and red braised pork.　
(6)The dishes have　　　　 　　　　(高卡路里).
答案　(1)to receive your letter　(2)how to order dishes　(3)As we all know; cuisine　(4)be high in　(5)should try to avoid
(6)high calories
2.句式升級
(7)用現在分詞作狀語合并句(1)和句(2)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(8)用讓步狀語從句連接句(3)和句(4)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(9)用定語從句合并句(5)和句(6)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案　(7)I'm very glad to receive your letter, knowing that your family are attracted to Chinese cuisine and wonder how to order dishes in Chinese canteens.
(8)As we all know, even if Chinese cuisine is one of the most popular diets, it can be high in oil and salt.
(9)You should try to avoid the dishes which have high calories, such as lamb kebabs and red braised pork.
連句成篇
Dear Jack,
　　I'm very glad to receive your letter, knowing that your family are attracted to Chinese cuisine and wonder how to order dishes in Chinese canteens.
As we all know, even if Chinese cuisine is one of the most popular diets, it can be high in oil and salt. In addition, main dish portions are often quite large, so you'd better order fewer dishes.Besides, you should try to avoid the dishes which have high calories, such as lamb kebabs and red braised pork.
I sincerely hope that you have a good appetite and enjoy Chinese food.
Yours,
Li Hua
寫作積累
關于建議信的增分佳句
1.開頭:寒暄問候,寫作目的
Learning that you are worried about your health, I'd like to write to tell you something about how to keep healthy.得知你擔心自己的健康,我想寫信告訴你關于如何保持健康的事情。
2.主體:提出建議,分條羅列
①Eating lots of fresh vegetables and fruit means a lot to our body.多吃新鮮蔬菜和水果對我們的身體意義重大。
②To keep healthy, we should try to be in a good mood each day.為了保持健康,我們應該盡量每天保持好心情。
3.結尾:總結全文,表達祝愿
I hope that my advice will be of great help to you.希望我的建議對你能很有幫助。
實戰演練
(2024湖南聯考)
假定你是李華,你校英文報的Health and Food欄目正在開展有關健康飲食的活動,向全體同學征稿,請你以“Be a Wise Eater”為題目,用英語寫一篇短文,向該欄目投稿。內容包括:
1.健康飲食的重要性;
2.健康飲食的建議;
3.發出倡議。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
Be a Wise Eater
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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答案與分層梯度式解析
UNIT 3　FOOD AND CULTURE
Part 4　Writing
實戰演練
One possible version:
Be a Wise Eater
　　As the saying goes, “You are what you eat.” Healthy eating is of great importance, because it ensures that our bodies function well.
Firstly, keep a balanced and varied diet by consuming different categories of fresh foods which provide various essential nutrients for our health. Moreover, consistent eating habits are recommended. In addition, eating slowly with a modest amount of food each time is fundamental to healthy eating.
Let's have a healthy diet and be a wise eater from now on. Only in this way will we lead a healthy life.
1.重點詞匯
①ensure v.確保
②various adj.各種各樣的
③essential adj.十分必要的
④moreover adv.此外
⑤lead a(n)...life 過上……生活
2.亮點句型
①Firstly, keep a balanced and varied diet by consuming different categories of fresh foods which provide various essential nutrients for our health.(which引導限制性定語從句)首先,通過食用不同種類的新鮮食物來保持均衡和多樣化的飲食,這些食物為我們的健康提供了各種十分必要的營養。
②Only in this way will we lead a healthy life.(“only+狀語”位于句首的部分倒裝)只有這樣,我們才能過上健康的生活。
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