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Part 4　Writing
關(guān)于藝術(shù)展覽的寫作
寫作題目
　　假定你是李華,想邀請好友Jack一起參加中國剪紙(paper-cutting)藝術(shù)展。請給他寫封信,內(nèi)容包括:
1.展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);
2.介紹中國剪紙。
注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右。
Dear Jack,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
思路點(diǎn)撥
遣詞造句
Ⅰ.用本單元所學(xué)單詞或短語填空
1.　　　　n.展覽
2.　　　　adj.藝術(shù)的
3.　　　　adj.有很大影響力的
4.　　　　　　喜歡
5.　　　　　　尤其;特別
6.　　　　　　值得
答案　1.exhibition　2.artistic　3.influential
4.be fond of　5.in particular　6.be worthy of
Ⅱ.本單元語塊、語法運(yùn)用
1.完成句子
第一段:說明寫信目的以及展覽的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)
(1)Knowing that you 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(喜歡中國傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)), I am writing to invite you to attend a Chinese paper-cutting art exhibition.
(2)It 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(將在藝術(shù)畫廊舉行) from 8:00 am to 5:00 pm next Sunday in our city center.
第二段:介紹中國剪紙
(3)Paper-cutting is a traditional 　　　　 　　　　(藝術(shù)形式) in China.
(4)It has a long history and　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(有很大的藝術(shù)價(jià)值).
(5)People often 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(美化他們的家) with the paper-cutting, 　　　　 　　　　(尤其) during festivals and weddings.
(6)In addition, there are 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(一些有影響力的藝術(shù)家) who will perform how to make the paper-cutting on the spot.
第三段:表達(dá)期望
(7)All in all, it is really 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(值得你的關(guān)注).
答案　(1)are fond of traditional Chinese art　(2)will be held in the art gallery　(3)art form
(4)is of much artistic value　(5)beautify their homes;in particular　(6)some influential artists　(7)worthy of your attention
2.句式升級
(8)用動詞不定式作后置定語合并句(1)和句(2)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(9)把句(3)和句(4)合并為含有定語從句的主從復(fù)合句
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案　(8)Knowing that you are fond of traditional Chinese art, I am writing to invite you to attend a Chinese paper-cutting art exhibition to be held in the art gallery from 8:00 am to 5:00 pm next Sunday in our city center.　(9)Paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China, which has a long history and is of much artistic value.
連句成篇
Dear Jack,
Knowing that you are fond of traditional Chinese art, I am writing to invite you to attend a Chinese paper-cutting art exhibition to be held in the art gallery from 8:00 am to 5:00 pm next Sunday in our city center.
Paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China, which has a long history and is of much artistic value. People often beautify their homes with the paper-cutting, in particular during festivals and weddings. In addition, there are some influential artists who will perform how to make the paper-cutting on the spot.
All in all, it is really worthy of your attention. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
寫作積累
關(guān)于藝術(shù)展覽的寫作
一、說明要舉辦的相關(guān)展覽
1.An international high school student photography show is going to be held in our school.一場國際高中生攝影展將在我校舉行。
2.As scheduled, the activity will be held in the lecture hall at 9:00 a.m. next Wednesday.按照計(jì)劃,活動將于下周三上午9:00在報(bào)告廳舉行。
3.Our school is going to hold an art exhibition, which will start from June 15th and last for three weeks.我們學(xué)校要舉辦一場藝術(shù)展覽,從6月15日開始,持續(xù)三周。
二、表示邀請或者告知
1.As I know, you're always wanting to do something for environmental protection.據(jù)我所知,你一直想為環(huán)境保護(hù)做些事情。
2.On behalf of the student union, I feel greatly honored to invite you to participate in the activity.我很榮幸能代表學(xué)生會邀請你參加這次活動。
3.Knowing that you are a classical music lover, I'd like to invite you to join me for a concert.知道你是一個(gè)古典音樂愛好者,我想邀請你和我一起聽音樂會。
三、說明相關(guān)展覽的目的、內(nèi)容、參與人員、意義等
1.Any student who is interested is welcome to participate.歡迎有興趣的同學(xué)參加。
2.The theme of the show is how to protect the environment.這個(gè)展覽的主題是如何保護(hù)環(huán)境。
3.There are all kinds of activities which can satisfy different students.有各種各樣的活動,可以滿足不同的學(xué)生。
四、表達(dá)期望
1.If you can come, I'm sure you'll have an unforgettable experience.如果你能來,我相信你會有一次難忘的經(jīng)歷。
2.If you are available at that time, I really hope that you will come.如果你到時(shí)候有空的話,我真的希望你能來。
3.Please let me know in advance if you can come and I'm looking forward to your reply.如果你能來,請?zhí)崆案嬖V我,我期待著你的答復(fù)。
實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練
昨天你參觀了學(xué)校舉辦的學(xué)生國畫作品展。請給校英文報(bào)寫一篇宣傳稿,內(nèi)容包括:
1.展覽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);
2.觀展感受;
3.推薦觀展。
注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
讀后續(xù)寫
寫作題目
　　閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
Mother's Gift
I grew up in a small town where the primary school was a ten-minute walk from my house. When the noon bell rang, I would race breathlessly home. My mother would be standing at the top of the stairs, smiling down at me.
One lunchtime when I was in the third grade would always stay with me. I had been picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had rehearsed my lines so hard with me. But no matter how easily I acted at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained that she had written a narrator's(旁白員) part for the play, and asked me to change roles. Her words, kindly expressed, still hurt me, especially when I saw my part go to another girl.
I didn't tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my pain. Instead of suggesting we practise my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard.
It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine was turning green. Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions(蒲公英) on the grass in clusters, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold. I watched my mother casually bend down by one dandelion. “I think I'm going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling it up by the roots. “From now on, we'll have only roses in this garden.”
“But I like dandelions,” I protested. “All flowers are beautiful—even dandelions.”
My mother looked at me seriously. “Yes, every flower gives pleasure in its own way, doesn't it ” she asked thoughtfully. I nodded, pleased that I had won her over. “And that is true of people too,” she added. “Not everyone can be a princess, but there is no shame in that.” Knowing that she had guessed my pain, I started to cry as I told her what had happened. She listened and smiled reassuringly(安慰地).
注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右。
　　“But you will be a beautiful narrator,”she said,　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　After the play,I took home the dandelion.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
文本分析
初識文本
重點(diǎn)詞匯
1.sense v.覺察到
2.casually adv.隨意地,漫不經(jīng)心地
3.dig up挖出
4.protest v.反對;堅(jiān)決地表示
5.shame n.羞恥;丟臉
障礙詞匯
1.rehearse v.背誦;排演,排練
2.vine n.藤蔓;藤
3.cluster n.簇;團(tuán)
4.win over說服,贏得……的支持
長難句
原句　Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions on the grass in clusters, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold.
分析　該句是一個(gè)主從復(fù)合句。as if引導(dǎo)方式狀語從句,從句中使用了虛擬語氣。
譯文　在大樹下,我們可以看到草地上成簇的黃色的蒲公英,仿佛是一位畫家為我們的風(fēng)景增添了一點(diǎn)金色。
故事要素
深研文本
預(yù)測情節(jié)發(fā)展
第一段:她說:“但你會成為一名出色的旁白員。”→媽媽又說了一些鼓勵“我”的話→“我”接受了旁白員的角色,努力排練→“我”在演出前看到了媽媽送的一朵蒲公英,戰(zhàn)勝了緊張→演出成功
第二段:校園劇結(jié)束后,“我”把蒲公英帶回了家→媽媽把這朵蒲公英保存起來留作紀(jì)念→帶給“我”的感觸
遣詞造句
1.用單詞或短語填空
(1)　　　　 a shining smile 帶著燦爛的笑容
(2)be of vital　　　　 至關(guān)重要的
(3)go on 　　　　 上臺
(4)keep...　　　　 陪伴……
(5)　　　　　　 結(jié)果
(6)　　　　　　 注視
(7)　　　　 v.記起,回憶起
(8)　　　　 adj.寶貴的
答案　(1)wear　(2)significance/importance
(3)stage　(4)company　(5)turn out
(6)gaze at　(7)recall　(8)precious
2.完成句子
(9)“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, 　　　　(鼓勵) and 　　　　(安慰) me as she always did.
(10)“The narrator's part is equally important,” my mother added, 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(帶著燦爛的笑容) on her soft face.
(11)Time had　　　　 　　　　(飛逝) and it reached the performance day.
(12)At that very moment, I found a dandelion 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(塞進(jìn)我的口袋里) by my mother to 　　　　 　　　　
　　　　(陪伴我).
(13)Mom carefully 　　　　 　　　　(注視著) the dandelion, gently 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(把它放進(jìn)) a dictionary and smiled as usual.
(14)Though decades have passed, I constantly 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(記起寶貴的午餐時(shí)光) we were together.
(15)I 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(感激) the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
答案　(9)encouraging;comforting
(10)wearing a shining smile　(11)flown by　(12)put into my pocket;keep me company　(13)gazed at;placed it into　(14)recall the precious lunchtime　(15)was grateful for
3.句式升級
(16)用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型強(qiáng)調(diào)時(shí)間狀語改寫句(12)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(17)用形容詞作狀語合并句(14)和句(15)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案　(16)It was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company.　(17)Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we were together, grateful for the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
連句成篇
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,”she said,encouraging and comforting me as she always did. “The narrator's part is equally important,” my mother added, wearing a shining smile on her soft face. I began to accept that the narrator was of vital significance and rehearsed even harder. Time had flown by and it reached the performance day. Before going on stage I still felt nervous, but it was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company. The play turned out to be a great success.
After the play,I took home the dandelion. Mom carefully gazed at the dandelion, gently placed it into a dictionary and smiled as usual. We were perhaps the only people who would keep such a sorry-looking weed. Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we were together, grateful for the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
寫作積累
環(huán)境描寫
一、環(huán)境描寫的手法
1.借助感官(視覺、聽覺、嗅覺、味覺、觸覺)來進(jìn)行環(huán)境描寫。如:After the rain, the lotus flowers in the pond are in full blossom. They give off a faint scent.(借助視覺和嗅覺進(jìn)行描寫)
2.從空間的角度進(jìn)行環(huán)境描寫,例如,由上到下、由遠(yuǎn)及近等方式。如:I saw many kids who were laughing happily on the lawn. Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sky.(采用由下到上的方式進(jìn)行描寫)
二、環(huán)境描寫的素材
the blue sky藍(lán)天;the songs of birds鳥鳴;the rainy evening 雨夜;the green grass綠草;the setting/rising sun落日/冉冉升起的太陽;a gust of wind一陣狂風(fēng);a sea breeze柔和的海風(fēng)
答案與分層梯度式解析
UNIT 1　ART
Part 4　Writing
實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練
One possible version:
A 5-day fantastic Chinese painting exhibition hosted by our school is being held in the School Art Hall.
I paid a visit to the exhibition yesterday, which deeply impressed me by those extraordinary artworks of talented students. The exhibition is not only one of the most unforgettable events for us students but also a platform to display the charm of Chinese culture.
I highly recommend a visit to the exhibition, which will provide both a visual feast and a deep insight into a culture of great diversity. Don't miss it!
1.重點(diǎn)詞匯
①fantastic adj.極好的
②pay a visit to...參觀……
③impress sb. by sth.用某物給某人留下深刻印象
④display v.展示
⑤feast n.盛宴;宴會
2.亮點(diǎn)句型
①I paid a visit to the exhibition yesterday, which deeply impressed me by those extraordinary artworks of talented students.(which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)昨天我參觀了展覽,它用才華橫溢的學(xué)生們的那些非凡的藝術(shù)作品給我留下了深刻的印象。
②The exhibition is not only one of the most unforgettable events for us students but also a platform to display the charm of Chinese culture.(not only...but also...連接兩個(gè)并列的表語)這次展覽不僅是我們學(xué)生最難忘的活動之一,也是展示中國文化魅力的平臺。
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