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Part 4　Writing
關(guān)于健康生活的寫作
寫作題目
　　假設(shè)你是李華,你的英國(guó)筆友John寫信告訴你,近日他由于沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲,健康受到了很大影響。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封回信,為他提供一些建議。
注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右。
Dear John,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
思路點(diǎn)撥
遣詞造句
Ⅰ.用本單元所學(xué)單詞或短語填空
1.　　　　adj.充滿活力的;精力充沛的
2.　　　　adj.身體的
3.　　　　n.自制力
4.　　　　　　下定決心
答案　1.dynamic　2.physical　3.discipline　4.make up one's mind
Ⅱ.本單元語塊、語法運(yùn)用
1.完成句子
第一段:引出寫信目的
(1)I'm sorry to hear that you are addicted to online games and that it has greatly affected your 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(身心健康).
(2)To help you 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(擺脫) them, I'm willing to give you some advice.
第二段:提出避免沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲的建議
(3)First,you should 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(控制) the time that you spend on online games.
(4)To form a regular habit of getting up and going to bed can also help you　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(變得更好).
(5)As long as you 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(下定決心) and have discipline, any bad habit can be kicked.
第三段:表達(dá)美好祝愿
(6)I hope that you can keep away from online games and 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(做一個(gè)積極樂觀、充滿活力的學(xué)生).
答案　(1)physical and mental health　(2)get rid of　(3)take control of　(4)change for the better　(5)make up your mind　(6)be a positive and dynamic student
2.句式升級(jí)
(7)用so...that...結(jié)構(gòu)改寫句(1)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案　(7)I'm sorry to hear that you are so addicted to online games that it has greatly affected your physical and mental health.
連句成篇
Dear John,
I'm sorry to hear that you are so addicted to online games that it has greatly affected your physical and mental health. To help you get rid of them, I'm willing to give you some advice.
First, you should take control of the time that you spend on online games. Besides, to form a regular habit of getting up and going to bed can also help you change for the better. As long as you make up your mind and have discipline, any bad habit can be kicked.
I hope that you can keep away from online games and be a positive and dynamic student.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
寫作積累
關(guān)于健康生活的寫作
一、常用詞匯
1.work out/take exercise鍛煉
2.have a balanced diet均衡飲食
3.develop a good habit養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣
4.go to bed early and get up early早睡早起
5.unhealthy living habits不健康的生活習(xí)慣
6.go to school without breakfast不吃早餐就去上學(xué)
7.keep/stay physically and mentally healthy保持身心健康
二、常用句式
1.There is no doubt that a balanced diet is beneficial to our health.毫無疑問,平衡膳食有益于我們的健康。
2.As we all know, good health lays the foundation for our future development.眾所周知,身體健康為我們未來的發(fā)展奠定基礎(chǔ)。
3.When it comes to keeping healthy, playing sports enjoys widespread popularity among people.當(dāng)談到保持健康時(shí),進(jìn)行體育運(yùn)動(dòng)在人們中廣受歡迎。
4.It is known to all that health is very important, without which we can hardly enjoy our life.眾所周知,健康是非常重要的,沒有它,我們很難享受生活。
5.Generally speaking, keeping a balanced diet and taking exercise regularly are recognized as healthy lifestyles.一般來說,保持平衡膳食和定期鍛煉被認(rèn)為是健康的生活方式。
6.Besides, we should take a positive attitude towards people around us so that we can keep mentally healthy.此外,我們應(yīng)該以積極的態(tài)度對(duì)待我們周圍的人,這樣我們才能保持心理健康。
實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練
假定你是李華,你的外國(guó)筆友David來信,向你訴說體重問題帶來的煩惱。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封回信,提出自己的建議。要點(diǎn)如下:
1.注重體育鍛煉;
2.注意健康飲食;
3.保障心理健康。
注意:
1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;
2.開頭已為你寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you are worried about your weight problem.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
答案與分層梯度式解析
UNIT 2　HEALTHY LIFESTYLE
Part 4　Writing
實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練
One possible version:
Dear David,
I am sorry to hear that you are worried about your weight problem. Here are some of my ideas about it, which I hope will be of some help.
It is important to make exercise a part of everyday activities, which will help you lose weight and offer some other benefits. A balanced diet is as important as exercising, because the right balance between fruit,vegetables, proteins and fats keeps you healthy and strong. Above all, good mental health is necessary, leading you to have an active life all along.
I hope everything will be fine.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重點(diǎn)詞匯
①be of some help 有所幫助
②lose weight 減肥
③balanced adj.均衡的;平衡的
④above all最重要的是
⑤have an active life過著積極的生活
2.亮點(diǎn)句型
①It is important to make exercise a part of everyday activities, which will help you lose weight and offer some other benefits.(It作形式主語,動(dòng)詞不定式短語“to make...”作真正的主語;which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)重要的是使運(yùn)動(dòng)成為日常活動(dòng)的一部分,這將有助于你減肥,并提供一些其他的好處。
②Above all, good mental health is necessary, leading you to have an active life all along.(現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語)最重要的是,良好的心理健康是必要的,它使你始終過著積極的生活。
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