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Part 4　Writing
描寫一個堅持不懈的人
寫作題目
　　假定你是李華,你報名參加了學校舉辦的主題為“The person I respect most”的英文演講比賽。請你以我國農業科學家袁隆平的事跡為素材寫一篇演講稿,內容包括:
1.基本信息:1930年出生于北京;
2.主要貢獻:培育出雜交水稻;
3.身上的優秀品質。
注意:
1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.開頭已給出,不計入總詞數。
參考詞匯: 雜交水稻hybrid rice
Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'd like to share the person I respect most with you.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
思路點撥
遣詞造句
Ⅰ.用本單元所學單詞或短語填空
1.　　　　n.困境;逆境
2.　　　　n.耐久力;忍耐力
3.　　　　n.堅持不懈;毅力;韌性
4.　　　　n.奉獻;承諾;保證
5.　　　　　　對……充滿熱情
答案　1.adversity　2.endurance
3.perseverance　4.commitment
5.be enthusiastic about
Ⅱ.本單元語塊、語法運用
1.完成句子
第二段:介紹其基本信息和貢獻
(1)Born in Beijing in 1930, Yuan Longping 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(被稱作) the “father of hybrid rice”.
(2)He 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(對……極富熱情) his major course when he was in college.
(3)He 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(克服了許多困境) and he never gave up 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(不管什么挑戰) might lie ahead. Eventually, he developed the hybrid rice.
(4)Hybrid rice has a high output and helps feed people 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(國內外的).
第三段:介紹其優秀品質
(5)Yuan Longping is distinguished for his 　　　　 　　　　(出色的忍耐力).
(6)He did agricultural research with one hundred percent 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(奉獻和毅力).
(7)His virtues 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(對……產生了深刻的影響) people.
答案　(1)is known as　(2)was hugely enthusiastic about　(3)overcame a number of adversities;no matter what challenges　(4)at home and abroad　(5)outstanding endurance　(6)commitment and perseverance　(7)have a deep influence on
2.句式升級
(8)用such...that...改寫句(4)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(9)把句(6)和句(7)合并為一個含有非限制性定語從句的復合句
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案　(8)Hybrid rice has such a high output that it helps feed people at home and abroad.　(9)He did agricultural research with one hundred percent commitment and perseverance, whose virtues have a deep influence on people.
連句成篇
　　Hello, everyone! I'm Li Hua. I'd like to share the person I respect most with you.
Born in Beijing in 1930,Yuan Longping is known as the “father of hybrid rice”. He was hugely enthusiastic about his major course when he was in college. He overcame a number of adversities and he never gave up no matter what challenges might lie ahead. Eventually, he developed the hybrid rice. Hybrid rice has such a high output that it helps feed people at home and abroad.
Yuan Longping is distinguished for his outstanding endurance. He did agricultural research with one hundred percent commitment and perseverance, whose virtues have a deep influence on people.
寫作積累
描寫勵志人物的常用詞塊
1.insist on/persevere in堅持
2.be devoted to/be committed to致力于
3.be able to do/be equal to doing能勝任做
4.do not give up/refuse to acknowledge defeat不放棄/不服輸
5.heart and soul/with one hundred percent commitment全心全意地
實戰演練
假定你們班本周英語課前“一分鐘演講”的主題為“A Strong-willed Person”。請你寫一篇演講稿, 內容包括:
1.你要介紹的人及理由;
2.這個人對你的啟發。
注意:
1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
　　Good morning, everyone!
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　That's all. Thank you.
答案與分層梯度式解析
UNIT 4　ADVERSITY AND COURAGE
Part 4　Writing
實戰演練
One possible version:
Good morning, everyone!
Today I'd like to talk about a strong-willed person—J.K. Rowling.
When Rowling began the first Harry Potter story, she was too poor to own a typewriter or afford the heating at home, so she had to spend hours in a cafeteria, writing by hand. Rowling was so determined that she overcame all the difficulties and completed the novel in several years. Then after a total of twelve rejections, her first novel was finally published, leading her to great success.
J.K. Rowling is my idol, whose strong will always encourages me to carry on whenever I encounter challenges.
That's all. Thank you.
1.重點詞匯
①determined adj.堅決的;堅定的
②overcome v.克服;解決
③rejection n.拒絕
④carry on繼續做;繼續行進
⑤encounter v.遭遇,遇到
2.亮點句型
①Rowling was so determined that she overcame all the difficulties and completed the novel in several years.(“so...that...”引導結果狀語從句)羅琳是如此堅定,她克服了所有困難,在幾年內完成了這部小說。
②J.K. Rowling is my idol, whose strong will always encourages me to carry on whenever I encounter challenges.(whose引導非限制性定語從句;whenever引導讓步狀語從句)J.K.羅琳是我的偶像。無論何時我遇到挑戰,她的堅強的意志一直鼓勵我繼續(前進)。
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