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Unit 2　Onwards and upwards
Part 4　Writing
寫一次經(jīng)歷
寫作題目
　　假定你是李華,曾經(jīng)在一所聾啞學(xué)校做過(guò)助教,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英文寫一篇關(guān)于你的助教經(jīng)歷的文章。
1.一位對(duì)生活失去信心的失聰女孩Jean在你的幫助下重拾生活信心;
2.當(dāng)時(shí)你遇到的最大困難是溝通障礙;
3.你是如何克服困難的 你從中學(xué)到了什么
注意:
1.詞數(shù)80左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
思路點(diǎn)撥
遣詞造句
Ⅰ.用本單元所學(xué)單詞填空
1.　　　　　　adj.難堪的,尷尬的
2.　　　　　　adj.令人愉快的,討人喜歡的
3.　　　　　　n.友誼;友好交往
4.　　　　　　adj.心煩意亂的,煩惱的
5.　　　　　　adv.然而,不過(guò)
6.　　　　　　v.鍥而不舍,堅(jiān)持不懈
答案　1.embarrassed　2.delightful
3.companionship　4.upset　5.nevertheless　6.persevere
Ⅱ.本單元語(yǔ)塊、語(yǔ)法運(yùn)用
1.完成句子
第一部分:概述助教經(jīng)歷
(1)On the whole, helping Jean restore her confidence in life is 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(一次愉快的經(jīng)歷).
第二部分:遇到的困難及解決辦法
(2)The biggest difficulty 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(我面對(duì)的)was the communication barriers.
(3)First, I advised her to 　　　　 　　　　(鼓起勇氣)to confront the difficulties instead of 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(逃避它們).
(4)Furthermore, I made every effort to 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 (建立友誼及互相的信任) with her.
(5)Eventually, what mattered most was to 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(堅(jiān)持我正在做的事情).
第三部分:你的收獲
(6)What I get from this experience is that confidence and determination can really 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(有助于我們的成功).
答案　(1)a delightful experience　(2)that I faced　(3)gather courage;escaping from them
(4)establish companionship and mutual trust　(5)persevere in what I was doing
(6)contribute to our success
2.句式升級(jí)
(7)用it作形式主語(yǔ)改寫句(1)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(8)將句(2)改為強(qiáng)調(diào)句
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案　(7)On the whole, it is a delightful experience to help Jean restore her confidence in life.　(8)It was the communication barriers that were the biggest difficulty that I faced.
連句成篇
On the whole, it is a delightful experience to help Jean restore her confidence in life. From my memory, when we first met, she was always upset, which made me embarrassed. Meanwhile, it was the communication barriers that were the biggest difficulty that I faced. Nevertheless, I made it. First, I advised her to gather courage to confront the difficulties instead of escaping from them. Furthermore, I made every effort to establish companionship and mutual trust with her. Eventually, what mattered most was to persevere in what I was doing.
What I get from this experience is that confidence and determination can really contribute to our success and that everyone should be confident about life.
寫作積累
開(kāi)頭:簡(jiǎn)要敘述發(fā)生的事情
1.As scheduled, the...took place at...in..., lasting 2 hours.按計(jì)劃,……于……(時(shí)間)在……(地點(diǎn))舉行,歷時(shí)兩個(gè)小時(shí)。
2.Once I was invited to...but what happened later made me feel...有一次我被邀請(qǐng)去……但后來(lái)發(fā)生的事讓我覺(jué)得……
主體:事件過(guò)程
1.At first I thought...but it turned out to be...which made me feel...起初我以為……但結(jié)果是……這讓我覺(jué)得……
2.Only when I was told that...did I begin to realize what a silly mistake I had made.只有當(dāng)我被告知……時(shí)我才開(kāi)始意識(shí)到我犯了一個(gè)多么愚蠢的錯(cuò)誤。
結(jié)尾:事件結(jié)果
1.Through this meaningful...activity, we learned something that can t be learned in class. 通過(guò)這次有意義的……活動(dòng),我們學(xué)到了在課堂上學(xué)不到的東西。
2.The activity made us have a better understanding of the meaning of... 這次活動(dòng)讓我們更好地了解……的意義。
實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練
假設(shè)你是Tom,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示講述你和父親一起爬山的經(jīng)歷。
1.去年暑假我和父親早晨出發(fā)去爬山;
2.在半路上,下起雨來(lái),我們?nèi)肀涣軡窳?又冷又累;
3.我開(kāi)始抱怨,想要放棄;
4.父親給予我鼓勵(lì)和溫暖;
5.最終我們成功到達(dá)山頂,欣賞了美景。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)80左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案與分層梯度式解析
Unit 2　Onwards and upwards
Part 4　Writing
實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練
One possible version:
I still remember the day when I went climbing with my father in the last summer vacation.
We set off early in the morning. Unluckily, it began to rain on the half way. I got wet all through, feeling cold and tired. So I couldn t help complaining and wanted to give up. Just at that time, my father encouraged me not to give up and put his coat on me softly. He told me, “We won t see the beautiful scenery unless we reach the top.” His words really cheered me up. We got to the top at last and enjoyed the beauty of nature that I had never seen.
1.重點(diǎn)詞匯
①set off 出發(fā)
②on the half way在半路上
③can t help doing sth.禁不住做某事
④complain v.抱怨
⑤give up放棄
⑥cheer sb. up激勵(lì)某人,使某人振作起來(lái)
2.亮點(diǎn)句型
①I still remember the day when I went climbing with my father in the last summer vacation.(when引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句,修飾先行詞the day)我還記得去年暑假我和父親去爬山的那一天。
②I got wet all through,feeling cold and tired.(現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作伴隨狀語(yǔ))我渾身濕透了,覺(jué)得又冷又累。
③We got to the top at last and enjoyed the beauty of nature that I had never seen.(that引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句,修飾先行詞the beauty of nature)我們最終到達(dá)了山頂,欣賞到了我從未見(jiàn)過(guò)的大自然之美。

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