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Part 4　Writing
家庭記憶
寫作題目
　　假設你是李華,父親節快到了,請你寫一封關于父親的信給報社,作為報社的宣傳材料。要點如下:
1.介紹父親;
2.父親對自己的影響和幫助;
3.表達自己對父親的感激之情。
注意:
1.詞數80個左右;
2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
思路點撥
遣詞造句
Ⅰ.用本單元所學單詞或短語填空
1.　　　　 vt.& n.尊重;尊敬
2.　　　　　　在某人四十幾歲時
3.　　　　　　處于困境;有麻煩
4.　　　　　　以……為傲
答案　1.respect　2.in one's forties　3.in trouble　4.be proud of
Ⅱ.本單元語塊、語法運用
1.完成句子
第一段:介紹父親并談談父親對自己的影響和幫助
(1)He is always working very hard 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(來養活我們一家人), so his hair has already turned grey 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(在他四十幾歲時).
(2)Others 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(因為他的善良而尊重他).
(3)Over the years, he has never 　　　　 　　　　(抱怨) our living conditions.
(4)Instead, he has made great efforts 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(為了讓我們過上幸福的生活).
(5) When 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(我們陷入困境), he often encourages us to follow our dreams.
第二段:表達自己對父親的感激之情
(6)I 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 (以……為傲) my father.
(7)Following his example, I will 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 (盡我最大的努力)to repay him.
答案　(1)to support our family;in his forties
(2)respect him for his kindness
(3)complained about/of
(4)to make us live a happy life
(5)we are in trouble
(6)am proud of
(7)try my best
2.句式升級
(8)將句(1)升級為含有“so...that...”結構的句子
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(9)將句(2)升級為含被動語態的句子
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(10)將句(3)升級為部分倒裝句
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案　(8)He is always working so hard to support our family that his hair has already turned grey in his forties.
(9)He is respected by others for his kindness.
(10)Over the years, never has he complained about/of our living conditions.
連句成篇
Dear Editor,
I love my dad, who is an engineer in a factory. He is always working so hard to support our family that his hair has already turned grey in his forties. He is respected by others for his kindness. Over the years, never has he complained about/of our living conditions. Instead, he has made great efforts to make us live a happy life. When we are in trouble, he often encourages us to follow our dreams. What's more, he often gives us some useful advice.
I am proud of my father. Following his example, I will try my best to repay him. Happy Father's Day to the world's best dad!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
寫作積累
表達對家人的感激之情的句式
1.I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you in this letter for...我想在這封信中就……向您表達我衷心的感謝。
2.With the deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express...懷著最深切的感激之情,我給您寫這封信以表達……
3.If it had not been for your help/guidance/assistance..., I wouldn't have done sth.
= But for/Without your help/guidance/assistance...,I wouldn't have done sth.如果沒有你的幫助/指導/援助……,我就不會做某事。
4.Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.請接受我對你的幫助的誠摯感謝,對此我將永遠不會忘記。
實戰演練
你校英文報Lovely Family Memories欄目正在征稿。請你用英語寫一篇短文投稿,內容包括:
1.你對家庭的認識;
2.分享一則家人間的感人故事。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
讀后續寫微寫作
情景導入
　　父親和兒子在專業選擇上產生分歧,請根據提示寫一個語段,描述父子之間爭吵并互相諒解的場景。
教材續寫語料
Ⅰ.動作描寫
1.　　　　v.靠近
2.　　　　v.嘆氣
3.　　　　v.道歉
4.　　　　　　　　提高了嗓門
5.　　　　　　　　不假思索地匆匆投入
Ⅱ.心理描寫
6.　　　　v.尊重
7.　　　　以……為傲
Ⅲ.外貌描寫
8.　　　　n.臉頰
答案　1.approach　2.sigh　3.apologise
4.raise one's voice　5.jump in with both feet
6.respect　7.be proud of　8.cheek
微型讀后續寫
Ⅰ.單句寫作
1.“我不敢相信你不理解!”兒子提高了聲音,對父親喊道。
“I can't believe you're not understanding!” the son 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　, 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　.
2.父親深深地嘆了一口氣,走近兒子,把手放在兒子的肩膀上。
　　　　 　　　　, the father 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 and put his hand on his son's shoulder.
3.“我尊重你的選擇,但你選擇了一條不適合你的路,”父親平靜地說,聲音柔和但堅定。
“I 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　, but you're choosing a path that 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　,” the father said calmly, his voice soft but firm.
4.兒子點了點頭,眼淚順著臉頰滾落。
The son nodded, with big tears 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　.
5.兒子,你不必為你的夢想或選擇道歉。
Son, you don't have to 　　　　 　　　　 your dreams or your choices.
6.只要你快樂,你在做你認為好的事,我就會為你感到驕傲。
As long as you're happy and you're doing what you believe in, I'll 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　.
7.答應我在你全心全意投入之前,你會仔細考慮的。
Promise me you'll think it through carefully 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　.
8.兒子擦去眼淚,看著父親的眼睛,眼里充滿了感激之情。
The son wiped away his tears and looked into his father's eyes, 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　.
答案　1.raised his voice;shouting at his father
2.Sighing deeply;approached his son
3.respect your choice;doesn't suit you
4.rolling down his cheeks　5.apologise for
6.be proud of you　7.before you jump in with both feet　8.his eyes filled with gratitude
Ⅱ.連句成篇(注意使用適當的銜接詞)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案　
“I can't believe you're not understanding!” the son raised his voice, shouting at his father. Sighing deeply, the father approached his son and put his hand on his son's shoulder. “I respect your choice, but you're choosing a path that doesn't suit you,” the father said calmly, his voice soft but firm. The son nodded, with big tears rolling down his cheeks. “Son, you don't have to apologise for your dreams or your choices. As long as you're happy and you're doing what you believe in, I'll be proud of you. But promise me you'll think it through carefully before you jump in with both feet,” the father said. The son wiped away his tears and looked into his father's eyes, his eyes filled with gratitude.
答案與分層梯度式解析
Part 4　Writing
實戰演練
One possible version:
　　It's true that the family is an important part of our life. The family not only gives us warmth and comfort, but also support and strength.
Speaking of the lovely memory, one floods back instantly. Once my parents promised to give me a gift if I did well in exams. Unluckily, the result was bad. Instead of criticizing me, my father said,“No problem. Next time you can do better, and the gift is still for you!”I was greatly moved.
Whenever I recall it, a classic saying comes to my mind,“East or west, home is the best.”
1.重點詞匯
①warmth n.溫暖
②comfort n.安慰
③speaking of 談起,提到
④flood v.(感覺或回憶)涌上心頭;涌現
⑤promise to do sth.承諾做某事,保證做某事
⑥instead of 不是;代替
⑦criticize v.批評
⑧recall v.回憶起,回想
2.亮點句型
①It's true that the family is an important part of our life.(It作形式主語,that引導主語從句)誠然,家庭是我們生活的重要組成部分。
②The family not only gives us warmth and comfort, but also support and strength.(“not only...but also...”句型)家庭不僅給了我們溫暖和安慰,也給了我們支持和力量。
③Whenever I recall it, a classic saying comes to my mind, “East or west, home is the best.”(Whenever引導讓步狀語從句)每當我想起這件事,腦海中就會浮現出一句經典的話:“金窩銀窩,不如自己的草窩。”
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