資源簡介 Part 4 Writing讀后續(xù)寫寫作題目 閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。 Jack and his wife Tonya were sailing around Africa with their friends Max and Sasha. One day they saw a big fishing boat. It was moving fast. “Hello!” they shouted. The men on the boat looked at them angrily. Max looked carefully at the boat.“Something's wrong with their fishing net,”he said. They got nearer to the net. “What's that ” said Tonya. “There is something in the net. It's alive.” Very slowly, they moved nearer.“I can see it now,” said Tonya. “It's a killer whale—it's hurt. There's blood in the water. How can we help it ” “I can see it too. It's a baby but we must be careful,” said Max.Jack jumped into the water. “I can get the net off its fin,” he said.Jack got the net off the baby killer whale. There was a big cut on its fin. It swam away.Suddenly there were other killer whales near the boat.“Jack!Get in quickly,” shouted Tonya.Jack swam to the boat as fast as a fish. “I'm going to call that baby killer whale Lucky,” he said.As they moved away, it began to rain harder and harder.Jack said, “We must get away from the wind. I can see a town over there. Let's go.”The town got nearer but the waves got bigger. Suddenly a very big wave hit the boat.“Is everyone OK ” shouted Jack. “Tonya ... She's not in the boat,” said Sasha. “She's in the water.”They looked into the cold, dark water for hours. “Tonya! Say something, Tonya. Where are you ” shouted Max.The wind got stronger and the boat was full of water. Another big wave hit the boat. “Jack, do you want us all to die ” said Max. “We can't stay here any longer. Tonya is wearing a life jacket and she can swim very well. Let's sail to the town.”Moments later the boat hit a beach. They went out. Max and Sasha slept on the beach. Jack sat near the water, looking at the sea and thinking of Tonya. 注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右。 At that time, Tonya was five hundred meters away in the sea. Jack was walking along the beach and suddenly he saw someone waving to him. 文本分析初識文本重點詞匯1.alive adj.活著的2.get away from (得以)離開,脫身3.wave n.波浪 v.揮手4.be full of... 充滿……障礙詞匯1.sail v.(人)乘船航行2.net n.網3.fin n.(魚的)鰭4.cut n.傷口5.life jacket n.救生衣6.hit v.攻擊,襲擊;到達(某地)故事要素深研文本預測情節(jié)發(fā)展第一段:那時,Tonya在500米外的海里→Tonya一個人,十分恐懼,拼命求救→Tonya被“Lucky”所在的虎鯨群救了→Tonya被虎鯨群帶到近岸處。第二段:Jack正沿著海灘走著,突然他看到有人向他揮手→Jack發(fā)現(xiàn)向他揮手的人是Tonya→Tonya上岸后向Jack說明是“Lucky”救了自己→Jack向“Lucky”表示感謝→“Lucky”和其他虎鯨游向大海。遣詞造句1.用單詞或短語填空(1) vt.包圍 (2) adj.害怕的 (3) 啟程;出發(fā) (4) 踏上 答案 (1)surround (2)frightened(3)set off/out (4)set foot on2.完成句子(5)Tonya (被……包圍)the cold sea water, and she was so frightened and just (瘋狂地喊救命). (6)Tonya found herself (正在從海中升起). (7) (令人驚訝的是), she was on the back of a big killer whale and there were some killer whales around her. (8)Tonya (踏上)the beach, and then Jack ran towards her and (緊緊地抱住她). (9)Jack walked towards Lucky and stroked its fin, (真誠地說), “Thank you, Lucky!” 答案 (5)was surrounded by; shouted crazily for help(6)rising out of the sea(7)Surprisingly(8)set foot on;hugged her tightly(9)saying sincerely3.句式升級(10)用含有非謂語動詞作狀語的句子改寫句(5) (11)用含有with的復合結構的句子改寫句(7) (12)用含有the moment引導的時間狀語從句的句子改寫句(8) 答案 (10)Surrounded by the cold sea water, she was so frightened and just shouted crazily for help.(11)Surprisingly, she was on the back of a big killer whale with some killer whales around her.(12)The moment Tonya set foot on the beach, Jack ran towards her and hugged her tightly.連句成篇 At that time, Tonya was five hundred meters away in the sea. Surrounded by the cold sea water, she was so frightened and just shouted crazily for help. Suddenly, Tonya found herself rising out of the sea. Surprisingly, she was on the back of a big killer whale with some killer whales around her. Among them, Tonya saw a small one, who was saved by Jack a few moments ago—Lucky. They set off to catch up with the boat. Jack was walking along the beach and suddenly he saw someone waving to him. Later, he found that it was Tonya! The moment Tonya set foot on the beach, Jack ran towards her and hugged her tightly. Tonya smiled, “Don't worry. I'm fine. I think we should thank the killer whales who saved my life. Look, the small one is Lucky!” Jack walked towards Lucky and stroked its fin, saying sincerely, “Thank you, Lucky!” Lucky shook its fin and then these killer whales swam away into the vast sea.寫作積累心理描寫——高興、激動、興奮一、詞匯1.excitement n.激動;興奮2.thrilled adj.非常興奮的,極為激動的3.cheerful adj.高興的;令人愉快的4.overjoyed adj.狂喜的;無比高興的5.excitedly adv.激動地;興奮地6.happiness n.幸福;快樂7.satisfactory/satisfying adj.令人滿意的8.satisfaction n.滿意;滿足9.touched adj.感動的10.thankful/grateful adj.感謝的;感激的11.dance for/with joy高興得跳起舞來12.in high/cheerful spirits興高采烈13.burst into tears突然哭了起來14.be wild with joy/delight/happiness/be over the moon欣喜若狂15.tears of gratitude/appreciation感激的淚水二、句子1.Delighted and thrilled, I gave a jump in the air and then skipped into the supermarket along with my smiling mother.又高興又激動,我蹦跶了一下,然后蹦蹦跳跳地跟著微笑著的媽媽進了超市。2.Full of happiness/Pleased beyond description/Overjoyed, he jumped up and ran happily around the yard.他高興極了,跳起來,高興地在院子里到處跑。3.Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the box.當她打開盒子時,她激動得手發(fā)抖。4.Then came a happy voice far from where we were, bathing us in extreme joy. Everyone was grinning from ear to ear.這時,一個快樂的聲音從遠處傳來,使我們沉浸在狂喜之中。每個人都笑得合不攏嘴。5.With tears of gratitude rolling down his cheeks, Peter said thankfully, “You've saved me today. I couldn't thank you enough.”感激的淚水順著彼得的臉頰流下,他感激地說:“今天你救了我。我對你感激不盡。”6.He smiled with gratitude as he accepted the flowers given by a small boy.當他接過一個小男孩給的花時,他感激地笑起來。7.After Steve learned this satisfactory result, a sense of joy and happiness swept over/flooded over him.史蒂夫聽到這個令人滿意的結果后,一種喜悅和幸福的感覺涌上心頭。實戰(zhàn)演練 答案見P127閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Robert and Henry were friends in the same class.They always played together and went home together. One day, Robert and Henry were going home from school. On turning a corner, Robert cried out,“A fight! Let's go and see!”“No,” said Henry,“Let's go home quietly and not meddle with(干涉) this quarrel. We have nothing to do with it and may get into trouble. Also, our parents are expecting to have dinner with us and I don't want them to worry aboutme.”“You are a coward(懦夫), and afraid to go,” said Robert, and he ran off. Henry went straight home, and in the afternoon he went to school as usual.But Robert had told other boys that Henry was a coward, and they laughed at him a great deal. From then on, they looked down upon Henry and didn't want to play with him.Henry was sad but he wasn't angry with Robert for his rude behaviour, because he knew that they misunderstood him, and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong. Thus, he just ignored the other boys' laughter and continued to go to school and study as usual. However, Robert didn't invite Henry to go home together anymore. Instead, he had some other boys who also thought Henry was a coward. Every day after school, they didn't go home directly but went to the river or somewhere to play games and had a lot of fun.A few days later, when bathing with his new friends in a river, Robert got out of his depth. He struggled and cried for help, but he failed. The boys who had called Henry a coward got out of the water as fast as they could, but they did nothing to help him. 注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右。 It seemed as if Robert would be dying. Thus, Robert's life was saved. 答案與分層梯度式解析Part 4 Writing實戰(zhàn)演練寫作指導故事要素 Time one day, a few days laterPlace at a corner, in a riverCharacter Robert, Henry, the boysReason Robert misunderstood Henry, thinkingthat Henry was a coward.Conflict Robert was drowning in the river. He cried for help but the boys got out of the water and did nothing to help him.前文故事情節(jié) Robert和Henry是同班的朋友。他們總是一起玩、一起回家。一天,他們在回家路上看到有人打架,Robert想去看看但Henry拒絕了,于是Robert就認定Henry是懦夫并告訴其他男孩他是個懦夫。Henry并不生氣,但Robert卻選擇和其他人一起玩而不和Henry玩。幾天后,Robert在河里溺水,其他男孩趕緊從水里出來而不去救他。續(xù)寫方向 Paragraph 1:It seemed as if Robert would be dying. ①根據(jù)已給出的續(xù)寫首句“It seemed as if Robert would be dying.(Robert好像要死了。)”可知,本段主要講述Robert落水后的情景。 ②Robert是否會得救 誰救了Robert (根據(jù)續(xù)寫第二段首句“Thus, Robert's life was saved.”可以猜想,第一段中應該出現(xiàn)Henry救Robert的過程及表現(xiàn)出的勇敢。)Paragraph 2:Thus, Robert's life was saved. 根據(jù)續(xù)寫第二段首句“Thus, Robert's life was saved.”可知,Robert得救了。因此本段應講述Robert得救后的故事。Robert最終明白自己誤會了Henry,知道了什么才是真正的勇敢,兩人重歸于好。整理思路 續(xù)寫第一段:Robert快要淹死了→Henry恰巧路過→Henry毫不猶豫地下水救Robert。 續(xù)寫第二段:Robert得救了→Robert明白了什么是真正的勇敢,兩人誤會解開→Robert的感悟。One possible version: It seemed as if Robert would be dying. Just at that moment, Henry happened to be passing by. Hearing the screams, Henry ran to the riverside, threw off his clothes and jumped into the water without hesitation. He grabbed Robert just before he was sinking at the last minute. In spite of much danger and with great effort, he brought Robert to the riverbank. Thus, Robert's life was saved. Robert and his new friends were ashamed of having called Henry a coward. They realized that Henry had true courage. They said sorry to Henry for their rude behaviour and asked for his forgiveness. Henry forgave them happily. He and Robert were friends again and they went home together as usual. From this, Robert learned what true courage was—never be afraid to do good, but always fear to do evil.7 展開更多...... 收起↑ 資源預覽 縮略圖、資源來源于二一教育資源庫