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Unit 1　 Food for thought
Part 4　Writing
寫作題目
　　假如你是李華,最近你收到Lucy的來信,信中Lucy詢問如何做蛋炒飯,請你就此用英文寫一封回信。
注意:1.詞數80個左右;
2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。



思路點撥
遣詞造句
Ⅰ.用本單元所學單詞填空
1.　　　　 adj.自制的,家里做的
2.　　　　 n.烹飪法,食譜
3.　　　　 n.盤,碟
4.　　　　 n.指點,建議
5.　　　　 adj.令人高興的,令人滿意的
答案　1.homemade　2.recipe　3.plate　4.tip
5.satisfying
Ⅱ.本單元語塊、語法運用
1.完成句子
第一段:介紹回信的目的
(1)I m 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(很高興收到) your letter.
(2)You told me you liked the　　　　 　　　　(家里做的食物) and asked me about 　　　　 　　　　(食譜) for egg fried rice.
第二段:簡要介紹操作過程
(3)First,　　　　 　　　　(打雞蛋) into a bowl and stir them.
(4)　　　　(倒) some oil into a wok and heat the oil.
(5)　　　　(加入) rice and eggs.
(6)You 　　　　 　　　　(最好)stir-fry them for two minutes.
(7)They 　　　　 　　　　(被炒煳).
第三段:表達希望
(8)I hope 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(我的建議是令人滿意的).
答案　(1)glad to receive　(2)homemade food; the recipe　(3)crack eggs　(4)Pour　(5)Add
(6)had better　(7)get burnt　(8)my tips are satisfying
2.句式升級
(9)用動詞不定式作表語改寫句(3)


(10)用in case合并句(6)和句(7)


答案　(9)The first step is to crack eggs into a bowl and stir them.
(10)You had better stir-fry them for two minutes in case they get burnt.
連句成篇
Dear Lucy,
I m glad to receive your letter. You told me you liked the homemade food and asked me about the recipe for egg fried rice. Now I d like to tell you the process.
The first step is to crack eggs into a bowl and stir them. After that, pour some oil into a wok and heat the oil. Then add rice and eggs and you had better stir-fry them for two minutes in case they get burnt. Finally, add salt and serve them onto a plate.
I hope my tips are satisfying.
Yours,
Li Hua
寫作積累
介紹食物制作過程的表達
　　一、常用詞匯
1.烹飪技法和過程:
select(選擇);prepare(準備);stir(攪拌);cut up(切碎);mix(混合);soften(軟化);fry(炸,煎);boil(煮);steam(蒸);slow fire(文火);add...to...(把……添加到……中);pour...into...(把……倒進……里);dish up(盛于盤中)
2.烹飪用的器皿和材料:
pot(鍋);wok(炒鍋);plate(盤子);dish(盤子,碟子);bowl(碗);spoon(勺子);ingredient(原料); soy sauce(醬油);salt(鹽);cooking wine(料酒);oyster sauce(蠔油);pepper(胡椒粉)
3.過渡語:
to begin with(首先);next(接下來);for a while(一會兒);then(然后);meanwhile(與此同時);finally(最后)
二、精彩句型
1.I d like to introduce the famous Chinese dish...you mentioned in your last letter.我想介紹一下你在上封信中提到的那道著名的中式菜肴……
2.You are supposed to prepare some..., including...你應該準備一些……,包括……
3.Before you start cooking, you d better put the meat into water and boil it to make it...在你開始烹飪之前,你最好把肉放在水里煮,使它……
4.Next, pour the ingredients into the pot, covering them with the...you ve prepared.接下來,把食材倒入鍋中,用你已經準備好了的……蓋上它們。
5.Cook it for at least two hours until you find...煮至少兩個小時,直到你發現……
6.You can add some...to...in terms of your taste such as...你可以根據你的口味在……中加一些……,例如……
實戰演練
假定你是李華,你的留學生朋友 Fred 想學習浙江名菜“東坡肉”的做法。請你給他寫封郵件,向他介紹這道菜的做法。
1.菜名:東坡肉(Dongpo s Braised Pork)。
2.原料:帶皮的五花肉(streaky pork) 600克、大蔥(green onion)、姜(ginger)、醬油(soy sauce)、黃酒(yellow rice wine)、冰糖(rock candy)。
3.制作步驟:(1)將五花肉放入水中煮3分鐘;(2)將肉切成塊;(3)鍋內放入大蔥、姜,把肉塊放在大蔥、姜上面,并加入配料;(4)用文火煮約兩個小時。
注意:1.詞數80個左右;
2.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數;
3.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
Dear Fred,
I m delighted to introduce the recipe for Dongpo s Braised Pork to you.




That s all about the recipe for the dish. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
讀后續寫微寫作
情景導入
　　英語測驗剛剛結束,Lily擔心會考不好,心理壓力很大。她的朋友Lucy耐心安慰、開導她。請根據提示寫一個語段,描述Lucy具體是怎么做的以及Lily心情的變化和考試的最終結果。
教材續寫語料
Ⅰ.心理描寫
1.　　　　 adj.糟糕的
2.　　　　 adv.略微,稍微
3.　　　　 modal v.敢于
4.　　　　 adv.原先,最初
Ⅱ.場景描寫
5.　　　　 adj.似奶油的,光滑細膩的
Ⅲ.情感描寫
6.　　　　 adv.難以置信地,非常地
7.　　　　 adj.令人滿意的
答案　1.horrible　2.slightly　3.dare
4.originally　5.creamy　6.incredibly
7.satisfying
微型讀后續寫
Ⅰ.單句寫作
1.英語考試后,莉莉感覺很糟糕,承受著精神上的壓力。
After the English exam, Lily 　　　　 　　　　 and suffered from mental pressure.
2.起初,她不敢核對老師給的答案。
Originally, she 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 the answers given by the teacher.
3.然后,她最好的朋友露西耐心地安慰她,并邀請她去她家吃一些自制的點心。
Then, her best friend Lucy 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 and invited her to have some homemade snacks at her home.
4.露西的媽媽做的布丁光滑細膩,非常美味,吃完后她感到了些許放松。
The puddings made by Lucy s mother were so creamy and delicious that she 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 after having it.
5.第二天,難以置信的是,她得了全班最高分,這是一個令人非常滿意的結果。
　　　　, she got the highest mark in the class the next day, which was 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　.
答案　1.felt horrible　2.dared not check
3.comforted her patiently　4.felt slightly relaxed
5.Incredibly; a quite satisfying result
Ⅱ.連句成篇(注意使用適當的銜接手段)









答案　After the English exam, Lily felt horrible and suffered from mental pressure. Originally, she dared not check the answers given by the teacher. Then, her best friend Lucy comforted her patiently and invited her to have some homemade snacks at her home. The puddings made by Lucy s mother were so creamy and delicious that she felt slightly relaxed after having it. Incredibly, she got the highest mark in the class the next day, which was a quite satisfying result.
答案與分層梯度式解析
Unit 1　 Food for thought
Part 4　Writing
實戰演練
One possible version:
Dear Fred,
I m delighted to introduce the recipe for Dongpo s Braised Pork to you.
First, prepare 600 g streaky pork with skin on and a proper amount of green onions, ginger, soy sauce, yellow rice wine and rock candy. Second, boil the pork in water for 3 minutes, take it out and cut it into large cubes. Next, put the green onions and ginger into the pot and put the pork cubes on them. After that, add other ingredients such as soy sauce, yellow rice wine and rock candy to the pot. The most important step is to boil the mixture in the pot for about two hours over the slow fire. Finally, a delicious dish is ready.
That s all about the recipe for the dish. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重點詞匯
①proper adj.合適的
②amount n.數量
③boil v.用沸水煮
④step n.步驟
2.亮點句型
The most important step isto boil the mixture in the pot for about two hours over the slow fire.(動詞不定式作表語)最重要的一步是用文火煮鍋里面的混合物大約兩個小時。
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