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Unit 3　On the move
Part 4　Writing
運動故事
寫作題目
　　有一家英語網站正在征集以“A Sports Story”為主題的故事,請按以下要點用英文寫一篇關于你的運動故事:
1.幾年前,你忙于學習,沒有時間進行鍛煉。
2.后來你意識到要保持學習和鍛煉的平衡。在空閑時間,你喜歡有規律的鍛煉,尤其是騎行。
3.騎行不僅能鍛煉你的身體,還能減輕你的焦慮,開闊你的視野。
4.你希望能代表你們城市參加各種騎行比賽。
注意:1.詞數80個左右;
2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
思路點撥
遣詞造句
Ⅰ.用本單元所學單詞或短語填空
1.　　　　 n.緊張,焦慮
2.　　　　 adj.參加的,參與的
3.　　　　 n.平衡,均衡
4.　　　　　　 愛上
5.　　　　　　 盡情地
答案　1.tension　2.involved　3.balance
4.fall in love with　5.to one s heart s content
Ⅱ.本單元語塊、語法運用
1.完成句子
第一段:介紹故事的背景
(1)Several years ago, because I was 　　　　 　　　　(忙于) my study, I had no time to 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(進行鍛煉).
(2)Later, I realized that I should 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(保持平衡) between study and exercise.
(3)In my spare time, I 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(喜歡上) taking regular exercise, especially cycling, and it 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 (讓我的生活更豐富多彩).
第二段:介紹騎行的好處
(4)Cycling not only 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 (強健了我的身體), but also 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(減輕了我的焦慮).
(5)Besides, I reached many tourist attractions, which 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(開闊了我的眼界).
(6)I had chances to 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 (接近大自然) and enjoy beautiful scenery 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 (盡情地).
第三段:表達期望
(7)I hope to take part in all kinds of cycling competitions 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(代表我的城市).
答案　(1)occupied with; be involved in exercising
(2)keep a balance　(3)fell in love with; made my life more colorful　(4)built up my body; reduced my tension　(5)broadened my horizons　(6)get close to nature; to my heart s content　(7)on behalf of my city
2.句式升級
(8)用含有非謂語動詞的句子改寫句(1)
Several years ago, 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　, I had no time to be involved in exercising.
(9)用含有非限制性定語從句的句子改寫句(3)
In my spare time, I fell in love with taking regular exercise, especially cycling, 　　　　 　　　　 my life more colorful.
(10)將句(4)轉換成倒裝句
　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 build up my body, but it also reduced my tension.
(11)用含有現在分詞短語作狀語的句子改寫句(6)
I had chances to get close to nature,　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 to my heart s content.
答案　(8)occupied with my study　(9)which made　(10)Not only did cycling　(11)enjoying beautiful scenery
連句成篇
Several years ago, occupied with my study, I had no time to be involved in exercising. Later, I realized that I should keep a balance between study and exercise. In my spare time, I fell in love with taking regular exercise, especially cycling, which made my life more colorful.
I think cycling was beneficial to me. Not only did it build up my body, but it also reduced my tension. Besides, I reached many tourist attractions, which broadened my horizons. What s more, I had chances to get close to nature, enjoying beautiful scenery to my heart s content.
I hope to take part in all kinds of cycling competitions on behalf of my city.
寫作積累
與運動相關的亮點表達
(一)單詞
1.favourite adj.特別喜愛的
2.achieve vt.達到,取得,實現
3.energetic adj.精力充沛的,充滿活力的
4.benefit n.益處
5.effective adj.有效的
(二)短語
1.by accident偶然地,意外地
2.build up增強
3.come true實現
4.be good for對……有好處
5.be beneficial to/be of benefit to對……有益處
(三)句式
1.Though there are different kinds of sports, swimming is my favourite.雖然有不同種類的運動,但游泳是我最喜歡的。
2.Of all the sports, I like basketball best.在所有的運動中,我最喜歡籃球。
3.Swimming is a really fantastic sport, which makes me feel relaxed.游泳是一項非常棒的運動,它使我感到放松。
4.There is no doubt that doing more exercise is good for people s physical and mental health.毫無疑問,多運動對人們的身心健康有好處。
實戰演練
假定你是校英語角的成員,本周你將參加英語口語學習交流活動,這次活動將要討論的主題是“運動”。請你提前準備一篇發言稿,內容包括:
1.你喜歡的運動;
2.運動帶給你的好處。
注意:1.詞數80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
讀后續寫微寫作
情景導入
　　你打算周末拿著父母給的零花錢出去吃喝玩樂,但當你經過父母房間的時候,聽到了他們的對話,才知道家里缺錢。請根據提示寫一個語段,描述你的心理活動及事情的后續情況。
教材續寫語料
Ⅰ.情感描寫
1.　　　　v.(持續而隱隱地)作痛
2.　　　　adj.滿是汗的,被汗水濕透的
Ⅱ.心理描寫
3.　　　　v.說服,勸服
4.　　　　n.緊張,焦慮
5.　　　　v.消失,不見
6.　　　　n.滿足,滿意
7.　　　　v.鼓舞,激勵
答案　1.ache　2.sweaty　3.persuade
4.tension　5.disappear　6.content　7.inspire
微型讀后續寫
Ⅰ.單句寫作
1.直到那時,我才知道了真相——我的家庭需要錢。
Only then did I know the truth—my family was 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 money.
2.我用汗淋淋的手緊緊地攥著鈔票,心痛不已。
Wrapping my 　　　　 　　　　tightly around the bills,　　　　 　　　　　　　　 greatly.
3.我感到很羞愧,手開始顫抖。
Shame conquered me as my hands 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　.
4.我說服了自己把錢交給我的家人。
I 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　the money to my family.
5.我的緊張感消失了,我對自己很滿意。
The 　　　　I felt　　　　,and I 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 myself.
6.我學到的是成長的真正意義,從那時起我受到了激勵,更加努力學習。
What I learned was the true meaning of growing up and from then on I 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 harder.
答案　1.in need of　2.sweaty hands; my heart ached　3.started to tremble　4.persuaded myself to give　5.tension; disappeared; was content with　6.was inspired to study
Ⅱ.連句成篇(注意使用適當的銜接手段)

答案　Only then did I know the truth—my family was in need of money. Wrapping my sweaty hands tightly around the bills, my heart ached greatly. Shame conquered me as my hands started to tremble. I persuaded myself to give the money to my family. Reaching into my pocket, I took out the money and gave it to my dad. The tension I felt disappeared, and I was content with myself. What I learned was the true meaning of growing up and from then on I was inspired to study harder.
答案與分層梯度式解析
Unit 3　On the move
Part 4　Writing
實戰演練
One possible version:
Dear fellows,
I like sports very much. Among all sports, swimming is my favourite.
When I was young, my parents often took me to the swimming pool near our home and taught me how to swim. At first, I was afraid of water and didn t dare to jump into the water. But later, I overcame my fear of water and fell in love with swimming. While swimming, I m just like a lively and free fish. I really enjoy that great feeling. What s more, swimming makes me stronger and healthier. To be honest, swimming can benefit us a lot, so let s enjoy this sport.
That s all. Thank you!
1.重點詞匯
①overcome vt.克服
②fear n.恐懼,擔心
③to be honest說實話
2.亮點句型
①When I was young, my parents often took me to the swimming pool near our home and taught me how to swim.(When引導時間狀語從句;“疑問詞+不定式”作賓語)我小時候,我的父母經常帶我去我家附近的游泳池教我如何游泳。
②While swimming, I m just like a lively and free fish.(狀語從句的省略)在游泳的時候,我就像一條活潑自由的魚。
③What s more, swimming makes me stronger and healthier.(make+賓語+賓語補足語)而且,游泳使我更強壯、更健康。
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