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Unit 4　Stage and screen
Part 4　Writing
影評
寫作題目
　　假定你是李華,你校于世界動物日在學校禮堂放映了美國電影《一條狗的回家路》,請你根據表格中的提示,介紹并評價這部電影。
注意:1.詞數80個左右;
2.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
英文名稱 A Dog s Way Home
類型 劇情/冒險
導演 查爾斯·馬丁·史密斯(Charles Martin Smith)
劇情 一條名叫貝拉(Bella)的狗在與主人失散后走上了一條充滿未知的冒險回家路
主題 動物應該被善待;人與狗之間互通的情感;對“家”的追尋與渴望
思路點撥
遣詞造句
Ⅰ.用本單元所學單詞或短語填空
1.　　　　 v.克服(困難)
2.　　　　 n.(書、電影、戲劇的)情節
3.　　　　 adj.令人印象深刻的,特別吸引人的
4.　　　　 adv.完全地,絕對地
5.　　　　　　 放棄
答案　1.overcome　2.plot　3.dazzling
4.absolutely　5.give up
Ⅱ.本單元語塊、語法運用
1.完成句子
第一段:從整體上簡要介紹這部電影的相關信息
(1)A Dog s Way Home is 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 (一部冒險影片).
(2)It 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(由……導演) Charles Martin Smith.
(3)The film tells the story of 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(一條名叫貝拉的狗).
(4)She is separated from her owner accidentally and travels four hundred miles　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(尋找它的家).
第二段:簡要介紹電影情節并對這部電影的某些方面作出評價
(5)On Bella s way home, she 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(克服了各種困難) and even faces the risk of losing her life.
(6)Bella 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(從未放棄) and finally makes her way home.
(7)　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(電影的情節) is touching and dazzling, and the character Bella as a dog arouses the audience s pity.
(8) The friendship 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(貝拉和其他角色之間) is 　　　　 　　　　(絕對溫暖人心的).
第三段:進行總結
(9) Animals are humans friends and should 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(被善待).
(10)May all of the 　　　　 　　　　(被遺棄的狗) find their homes.
答案　(1)an adventure film　(2)is directed by　(3)a dog named Bella　(4)to look for her home　(5)overcomes various difficulties　(6)never gives up　(7)The plot of the film　(8)between Bella and other characters; absolutely heart-warming　(9)be treated kindly
(10)abandoned dogs
2.句式升級
(11)將句(1)和句(2)合并為含有過去分詞短語作定語的句子
(12)將句(3)和句(4)合并為含有定語從句的主從復合句
答案　(11)A Dog s Way Home is an adventure film directed by Charles Martin Smith.
(12)The film tells the story of a dog named Bella who is separated from her owner accidentally and travels four hundred miles to look for her home.
連句成篇
A Dog s Way Home is an adventure film directed by Charles Martin Smith. The film tells the story of a dog named Bella who is separated from her owner accidentally and travels four hundred miles to look for her home.
On Bella s way home, she overcomes various difficulties and even faces the risk of losing her life. However, Bella never gives up and finally makes her way home. The plot of the film is touching and dazzling, and the character Bella as a dog arouses the audience s pity. Besides, the friendship between Bella and other characters is absolutely heart-warming.
Animals are humans friends and should be treated kindly. May all of the abandoned dogs find their homes.
寫作積累
關于影評的常用表達
一、從整體上簡要介紹電影的相關信息
(一)單詞
1.romantic adj.浪漫的
2.realistic adj.寫實的;現實的;實際的
3.moving/touching adj.動人的;感人的
4.classic adj.經典的
(二)短語
1.be directed by由……導演
2.be set in以……為背景
3.be based on基于,以……為基礎
4.be adapted from由……改編
(三)句型
1. ...is the most popular film of the year, whose director is...and whose leading actors are...……是本年度最受歡迎的電影,其導演是……,其主演是……
2.It is a(n) sad/romantic/...film directed by...這是一部悲傷/浪漫/……的電影,導演是……
二、簡要介紹電影情節并對電影的某些方面作出評價
(一)單詞
1.impressive adj.令人印象深刻的
2.reflect vt.顯示;表明;表達;反映
3.pride n.自豪
4.courage n.勇氣
5.judgement n.意見;判斷力
(二)短語
1.set out to do sth.開始做某事
2.long to do sth.渴望做某事
3.turn out結果是,證明是
(三)句型
1.It tells the story of a young man who fights against his destiny and eventually succeeds.它講述了一個年輕人與命運抗爭并最終成功的故事。
2.Set in the US in the late 1990s, the movie reminds many Americans of the period of...這部電影以20世紀90年代末的美國為背景,使許多美國人想起了……時期。
3.In the movie, ...is a naughty boy who always causes trouble for his parents.在這部電影中,……是一個淘氣的男孩,他總是給他的父母惹麻煩。
4.The movie is about the growth of...who is considered...這部電影是關于……的成長的,他/她被認為……
5.The whole story develops in an atmosphere of...and ends in a touching way.整個故事在……的氛圍中展開,并以一種感人的方式結束。
6.The growth of...reflects that many people in our life just complain about...but never...……的成長反映了我們生活中的許多人只是抱怨……卻從不……
三、進行總結
(一)單詞
1.amazing adj.令人驚奇的
2.inspiration n.鼓舞
3.spirit n.精神
(二)短語
1.in summary/all in all總之
2.be regarded as被視作
(三)句型
1.The film, with lovely characters, beautiful background music and interesting plots, is well worth watching.這部電影人物可愛,背景音樂優美,情節有趣,很值得一看。
2.The film is regarded as a great treat for all animation lovers.這部電影被認為是所有動畫愛好者的盛宴。
實戰演練1
假定你是李華,你校英語報于電影周期間征文,主題為“Movie Review”。請你用英語為你喜歡的電影作品寫一篇80詞左右的影評并投稿,內容包括:
1.簡要介紹;
2.作出評價;
3.你的感受。
讀后續寫
寫作題目
閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。
Jenny is a pretty six-year-old girl. Born in a small town in Scotland, she is the apple of her parents eye. One day when Jenny and her mother were checking out at the supermarket, Jenny saw a plastic pearl(珍珠) necklace priced at $2.50. Obviously, Jenny liked it very much. She stared at it for a moment and looked up at her mother. When the mother s eyes and the daughter s eyes met, they both couldn t help laughing knowingly.
Her mother bought the necklace for her on condition that she had to do some housework to pay it off. Jenny agreed. She worked very hard every day, and soon Jenny paid off the necklace. Jenny loved it so much that she wore it everywhere except when she was in the shower. Her mother had told her it would turn her neck green!
Jenny had a very loving daddy. He ran a cake shop in town. Business was slowing down, and the whole family only made ends meet. No matter what troubles he had, the strong man always smiled in front of his wife and child. Every evening, when Jenny went to bed, he would read Jenny her favorite story.
One night when the father finished reading an interesting story, he said, “Jenny, could you give me your necklace ”
“Oh, Daddy! Not my necklace!” Jenny said. “But you can have Rosy, my favorite doll. Remember her You gave her to me last year for my birthday. Okay ”
“Oh no, darling, that s okay,” her father brushed her cheek with a kiss. “Good night, little one.” Jenny held her beloved necklace tightly for fear that it would be taken away.
A week later, her father once again asked Jenny for the necklace after her favorite story.
“Oh, Daddy, not my necklace! But you can have Ribbons, my toy horse. Do you remember her She s my favorite.”
注意:續寫詞數應為150個左右。
“Oh no, darling, that s okay,” her father said and kissed her again on the cheek.
Inside the box was a beautiful, real pearl necklace.
文本分析
初識文本
重點詞匯
1.check out結賬離開
2.can t help doing sth.禁不住做某事
3.pay off付清
4.slow down慢下來,減速
5.make ends meet勉強維持生計
6.for fear that...唯恐……
7.take away拿走,帶走
障礙詞匯
1.the apple of one s eye某人的掌上明珠
2.knowingly adv.心照不宣地;會意地
長難句剖析
原句　Jenny loved it so much that she wore it everywhere except when she was in the shower.
分析　該句為主從復合句。so...that...意為“如此……以至于……”,引導結果狀語從句。
譯文　珍妮非常喜歡它,以至于除了洗澡的時候,她在哪兒都戴著它。
故事要素
深研文本
預測情節發展
Paragraph 1:“哎喲,親愛的,沒關系?！卑职终f道,然后再一次親吻了她的臉頰。(段首句)→經過一番猶豫,珍妮決定把項鏈送給爸爸?！职帜弥粋€盒子來到珍妮的房間準備給她講故事。
Paragraph 2:盒子里是一條漂亮的、真的珍珠項鏈。(段首句)→珍妮看到項鏈后十分開心。→爸爸攢錢為她買了一條真的珍珠項鏈。
遣詞造句
1.用單詞或短語填空
(1)　　　　 adj.明亮的;炯炯有神的
(2)　　　　 v.閃光;閃爍
(3)　　　　 v.想知道;想弄明白
(4)　　　　 v.顫抖
(5)　　　　　　 放棄
(6)　　　　　　 至少
答案　(1)bright　(2)flash　(3)wonder　(4)tremble　(5)give up　(6)at least
2.完成句子
(1)Jenny s 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(明亮的大眼睛) flashed in the dark.
(2)She 　　　　 　　　　(想知道為什么) her father liked her necklace.
(3)Several days later, when Jenny s father came in to read her a story, Jenny was 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(坐在她的床上) and her lips 　　　　 　　　　(在顫抖).
(4)With one hand her father held the plastic pearl necklace and with the other he 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(從他的口袋里掏出一個藍色的盒子).
(5)Jenny almost 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(跳下她的床) when she saw the shiny necklace.　
(6)So he decided 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(戒煙) and use 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(他攢下來的錢) to buy a real necklace for his daughter.
(7)He was waiting for Jenny 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(放棄) the cheap necklace so that he could give her a real one.
(8)The real necklace 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(至少值) $150.
答案　(1)bright big eyes 　(2)wondered why
(3)sitting on her bed; were trembling
(4)pulled a blue box from his pocket
(5)jumped out of her bed　(6)to quit smoking; the money he saved　(7)to give up
(8)was worth at least
3.句式升級
(9)把句(7)和句(8)合并成一個含有which引導的非限制性定語從句的主從復合句
答案　(9)He was waiting for Jenny to give up the cheap necklace so that he could give her a real one, which was worth at least $150.
連句成篇
　　“Oh no,darling, that s okay,”her father said and kissed her again on the cheek. Jenny s bright big eyes flashed in the dark. She wondered why her father liked her necklace. Several days later, when Jenny s father came in to read her a story, Jenny was sitting on her bed and her lips were trembling. “Here, Daddy,” she said, holding out her hand. She opened it and her beloved pearl necklace was inside. She put it into her father s hand. With one hand her father held the plastic pearl necklace and with the other he pulled a blue box from his pocket.
Inside the box was a beautiful, real pearl necklace. Jenny almost jumped out of her bed when she saw the shiny necklace. Her father had learned from his wife how Jenny got the necklace and how she loved it. So he decided to quit smoking and use the money he saved to buy a real necklace for his daughter. He had had it all along. He was waiting for Jenny to give up the cheap necklace so that he could give her a real one, which was worth at least $150.
寫作積累
心理描寫——悲觀情緒
一、單詞
ashamed羞愧的　　　depressed沮喪的
guilty內疚的　　　down情緒低落的
remorseful懊悔的　　　isolated孤獨的
desperate絕望的　　　pessimistic悲觀的
二、短語
fall into despair陷入絕望
cry one s heart out哭得很傷心
with a sinking heart心情沉重
in low spirits情緒低落
down in the dumps悶悶不樂
實戰演練2
閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。
Peter woke up early in the morning. He went downstairs in a hurry and started to have his breakfast as quickly as possible.
“Why are you in such a hurry, early bird ” Mum asked him. “We will have an English spelling test today, Mum,” Peter said. “Mr. White promised to offer prizes to those who get full marks. I ve been studying the word list since last week. Although the words are difficult, I am well prepared for the test.”
Peter reviewed the spelling of each word once more carefully when Dad drove him to school. At last, it was time for the students to have the test. “Responsibility,” Mr. White started. Peter wrote it on his test paper quickly and confidently.
“The second word: contribution,” Mr. White said.
“So easy,” Peter thought. He quickly wrote the word down.
Thirty words later, the test papers were collected by Mr. White. “I am to mark your papers now,” he told the class. After marking the test papers, Mr. White said, “Three of you won a prize today for excellent test scores. Peter, David and Mary scored 100 percent in the spelling test!”
Mr. White praised them. Meanwhile, he gave the three students each a dictionary. Peter s was an English-Chinese dictionary—the one he liked best. Peter was so excited that he held it high when his classmates cheered. “This is my happiest moment,” Peter thought.
After Mr. White gave the test paper back, Peter had a look at the words, feeling proud of his spelling. All of a sudden, the word “contribusion” confused him. It didn t seem right. Peter began to compare them after taking out the word list. “C-o-n-t-r-i-b-u-s-i-o-n,” he whispered. He had spelled it wrong.
“What am I to do ” Peter said to himself. “I expect my classmates to think I m a master of spelling. If I tell Mr. White one of my spelling words is wrong, I ll have to give my prize back, or I will become an example of telling a lie”.
Staring at the red sign “100%” which was written on his test paper, Peter was lost in thought. After a while, he remembered a lesson Mum used to teach him—we ought to be an honest person.
注意:續寫詞數應為150個左右。
Slowly,Peter raised his hand.
Peter looked around and found many of his classmates were smiling at him.
答案與分層梯度式解析
Unit 4　Stage and screen
Part 4　Writing實戰演練1
One possible version:
Leap is a very appealing film whose director is Peter Chan and whose leading actors are Gong Li and Huang Bo. The story took place between 1981 and 2016, during which the Chinese women s volleyball team won nine world championships. The film tells the story about the struggle of three generations of the Chinese women s volleyball team. It is very moving and their spirit of never giving up has inspired so many people.
Leap is definitely an exciting and touching film. The spirit of the Chinese women s volleyball team not only represents the gold medal and honour, but also represents the spirit of our nation, which is worth learning by us.
1.重點詞匯
①championship n.冠軍稱號,冠軍地位
②struggle n.奮斗,努力　
③inspire v.鼓舞,激勵　
④represent v.代表　
⑤be worth doing值得做
2.亮點句型
①The story took place between 1981 and 2016, during which the Chinese women s volleyball team won nine world championships.(during which引導定語從句)故事發生在1981年至2016年之間,在此期間,中國女排贏得了9次世界冠軍稱號。
②The spirit of the Chinese women s volleyball team not only represents the gold medal and honour, but also represents the spirit of our nation, which is worth learning by us.(not only...but also...結構,意為“不但……而且……”;which引導非限制性定語從句)中國女排的精神不僅代表著金牌和榮譽,還代表著我們民族的精神,這值得我們學習。
實戰演練2
寫作指導
情節線 情感線
時間 in an English spelling test 緊張、 興奮 自信 高興、 興奮、 驕傲 困惑、 猶豫 堅定 感謝 興奮
地點 at school
人物 Peter, Peter s mum, Peter s dad, Mr. White, Peter s classmates
背景 今天的英語課上將進行單詞拼寫測驗,獲得滿分的同學可獲得獎品
開端 彼得準備充分,信心滿滿地參加測驗
發展 老師批閱試卷后,彼得、戴維和瑪麗獲得了滿分,彼得得到了夢寐以求的獎品——英漢詞典
高潮 但彼得拿到試卷后發現自己竟然拼錯了一個單詞,他猶豫是否要告訴老師實情,此時他想起來他的媽媽曾教他要做個誠實的孩子
Para. 1 慢慢地,彼得舉起了手。(段首句)
根據材料的最后及續寫第一段段首句可知彼得要承認錯誤。 ①彼得如何承認自己的錯誤 ②老師作何反應(是批評還是表揚),向同學們說了什么
Para. 2 彼得向四周望去,發現許多同學正朝他微笑。(段首句)
①老師做了什么 他收回彼得的詞典了嗎 ②彼得的心情如何
One possible version:
Slowly,Peter raised his hand. “Mr. White, I didn t score 100 percent in the test. I misspelled a word.” He stood up and handed his teacher the dictionary he liked best and his test paper. “I spelled ‘contribution’ with ‘s-i’ instead of ‘t-i’.” Peter could feel his classmates looking at him with surprise as he walked back to his desk. Mr. White held up Peter s test paper. “Class,” he said, “Peter did something even more important than spelling every word correctly in a test.” Mr. White smiled at Peter. “He taught us all a lesson on being honest.”
Peter looked around and found many of his classmates were smiling at him.“Peter, I want you to have this dictionary because you set a good example for all of us,” Mr. White said. Peter took the dictionary from his teacher and expressed his thanks to Mr. White. Meanwhile, he couldn t wait to show it to Mum and tell her one of his best days ever.
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