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Part 6　Writing
介紹最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)
寫作題目
　　假設(shè)你叫李華,你的澳大利亞朋友Emily來信談?wù)摿怂钕矚g的體育運(yùn)動(dòng),并希望了解你最喜歡的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示用英語(yǔ)寫一封回信。要點(diǎn)如下:
1.你最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)是什么;
2.你為什么喜歡這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng);
3.這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)給你帶來什么好處。
注意:
1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
Dear Emily,





Yours,
Li Hua
思路點(diǎn)撥
遣詞造句
Ⅰ.用本單元所學(xué)單詞或短語(yǔ)填空
1.　　　　n.羽毛球
2.　　　　n.運(yùn)動(dòng)員
3.　　　　　　至于……
4.　　　　　　對(duì)……印象深刻
5.　　　　　　優(yōu)秀的技能
6.　　　　　　愛上……
7.　　　　　　　增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)
8.　　　　　　　不但……而且……
答案　1.badminton　2.athlete　3.as for 4.be deeply impressed by　5.excellent skills　6.fall in love with　7.build up one’s body
8.not only...but also...
Ⅱ.本單元語(yǔ)塊、語(yǔ)法運(yùn)用
1.完成句子
第一部分:引出話題,說明寫信目的
(1)　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(至于我最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)), I’d say it’s badminton.
第二部分:介紹自己最喜歡的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)并說明原因
(2)When I 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(觀看運(yùn)動(dòng)員們打羽毛球)at the Olympic Games, I was deeply impressed by their excellent skills and I decided to be just like them.
(3)I 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(愛上了羽毛球) as soon as I started playing it and formed the habit of playing it with my friends at weekends.
(4)Now I am on our school badminton team, and it 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(讓我很自豪).
第三部分:說明該項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)給自己帶來的好處
(5)Playing badminton 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(不僅增強(qiáng)了我的體質(zhì)), but also helps me make a lot of new friends.
答案　(1)As for my favourite sport
(2)watched athletes playing badminton
(3)fell in love with badminton
(4)makes me very proud
(5)not only builds up my body
2.句式升級(jí)
(6)用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)改寫句(2)


(7)用which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句改寫句(4)


(8)用倒裝句改寫句(5)


答案　(6)Watching athletes playing badminton at the Olympic Games, I was deeply impressed by their excellent skills and I decided to be just like them.
(7)Now I am on our school badminton team, which makes me very proud.
(8)Not only does playing badminton build up my body, but it also helps me make a lot of new friends.
連句成篇
基礎(chǔ)篇
Dear Emily,
I am happy to hear from you. As for my favourite sport, I’d say it’s badminton.
When I watched athletes playing badminton at the Olympic Games, I was deeply impressed by their excellent skills and I decided to be just like them. I fell in love with badminton as soon as I started playing it and formed the habit of playing it with my friends at weekends. As time goes by, I have greatly improved my skills. Now I am on our school badminton team, and it makes me very proud.
Playing badminton not only builds up my body, but also helps me make a lot of new friends. It makes my life more enjoyable.
Yours,
Li Hua
提升篇
Dear Emily,
I am so delighted to hear from you. As for my favourite sport, I’d say it’s badminton.
Watching athletes playing badminton at the Olympic Games, I was deeply impressed by their excellent skills and I decided to be just like them. I fell in love with badminton as soon as I started playing it and formed the habit of playing it with my friends at weekends. As time goes by, I have greatly improved my skills. Now I am on our school badminton team, which makes me very proud.
Not only does playing badminton build up my body, but it also helps me make a lot of new friends. It makes my life more enjoyable.
Yours,
Li Hua
寫作積累
關(guān)于體育運(yùn)動(dòng)寫作的增分詞匯
1.參與人員
athlete/player運(yùn)動(dòng)員;referee 裁判;coach 教練;participant 參加者;cheerleader 拉拉隊(duì)隊(duì)員;opponent/rival/competitor 競(jìng)爭(zhēng)對(duì)手;record holder 紀(jì)錄保持者
2.運(yùn)動(dòng)形式
badminton羽毛球;tennis網(wǎng)球;gymnastics 體操;baseball 棒球;field events 田賽項(xiàng)目;track events 徑賽項(xiàng)目;marathon馬拉松賽跑;relay race接力賽
3.體育精神
sportsmanship體育精神;teamwork團(tuán)隊(duì)合作;courage 勇氣,膽量;persistence堅(jiān)持不懈;sports talent 運(yùn)動(dòng)天賦
4.比賽結(jié)果
winner獲勝者;loser失敗者;win first/second place 獲得第一/二名;defeat/beat 打敗;a close game 一場(chǎng)勢(shì)均力敵的比賽;break the record 打破紀(jì)錄;become the pride of the nation 成為國(guó)家的驕傲;bring glory for the country 為國(guó)家?guī)順s譽(yù);set a new world record 創(chuàng)造一項(xiàng)新的世界紀(jì)錄
關(guān)于體育運(yùn)動(dòng)寫作的增分佳句
1.開頭:介紹最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)
①I have chosen to include running in my daily routine.我已經(jīng)選擇在我的日常生活中加入跑步。
②I took part in the 100-meter race, which was my favorite.我參加了一百米賽跑,這是我最喜歡的比賽。
③When it comes to sports, some believe basketball is the most popular one while others like football better.說到體育運(yùn)動(dòng),一些人認(rèn)為籃球是最受歡迎的運(yùn)動(dòng),而其他人更喜歡足球。
2.主體:說明喜歡的原因
①Running provides a sense of freedom and stress relief.跑步提供了一種自由感和緩解壓力的感覺。
②Running offers a perfect way of exercise, which is essential for maintaining a healthy body and mind.跑步提供了一種完美的鍛煉方式,這對(duì)保持健康的身心至關(guān)重要。
③Not only does football give me a lot of happiness, but it also brings me changes.足球運(yùn)動(dòng)不僅給了我很多快樂,還給我?guī)砹烁淖儭?br/>3.結(jié)尾:說明該運(yùn)動(dòng)的好處
①In addition to its physical benefits, swimming is also an effective way to relax.除了對(duì)身體的好處外,游泳也是一種有效的放松方式。
②Now I feel more energetic and regular exercise has given me a sense of accomplishment and pride.現(xiàn)在,我覺得更有活力,有規(guī)律的鍛煉給了我一種成就感和自豪感。
③Taking account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that doing physical exercise is very essential to us.考慮到所有這些因素,我們可以得出結(jié)論:進(jìn)行體育鍛煉對(duì)我們來說是極其重要的。
實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練
假定你是李華,你校英文報(bào)正在征集題目為“My favourite sport”的文章。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文并投稿,要點(diǎn)包括:
1.你最喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)是什么;
2.何時(shí)喜歡上該運(yùn)動(dòng);
3.現(xiàn)在參加該運(yùn)動(dòng)的情況。
注意:
1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
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答案與分層梯度式解析
Part 6　Writing
實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練
One possible version:
My favourite sport
When it comes to my favourite sport,I’d say it’s table tennis.
When I was eight, I seldom did sports and spent most of my leisure time on screens, which made my parents concerned. Then they decided to do something. My father, who had played table tennis for more than twenty years, taught me how to play it. Gradually I developed a great interest in it. Now I often play table tennis with my friends after school. Last week I took part in the table tennis competition held in my school and took second place.
I will keep on playing table tennis not only for my fitness but also for the confidence it brings me.
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