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UNIT 5　EDUCATION
Part 6　Writing
看圖寫作
寫作題目
　　如今,隨著智能手機(jī)等電子設(shè)備的普及,人們沉迷于手機(jī)等電子設(shè)備而忽略了和他人的溝通交流。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖寫一篇英語短文,內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:
1.描述圖畫內(nèi)容;
2.針對(duì)圖畫內(nèi)容加以分析;
3.針對(duì)該現(xiàn)象提出自己的看法或建議。
注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
思路點(diǎn)撥
遣詞造句
Ⅰ.用本單元所學(xué)單詞或短語填空
1.　　　　 adj.生動(dòng)的,逼真的
2.　　　　 adj.熱衷的
3.　　　　 adj.顯然的,明顯的
4.　　　　 vt.表明;意味著
5.　　　　 n.傾向
6.　　　　 vt.約束,限制
7.　　　　 adj.寶貴的
8.　　　　　　　　　非常重要
答案　1.vivid　2.enthusiastic　3.obvious 4.imply　5.tendency　6.restrict　7.precious 8.be of great significance
Ⅱ.本單元語塊、語法運(yùn)用
1.完成句子
第一段:描述圖畫內(nèi)容
(1)　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(從生動(dòng)的圖畫中可以看出), a big family get together to have a splendid dinner.
(2)At the table, the young　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(熱衷于玩)with their electronic devices, 　　　　 　　　　(不顧)the elders' obvious awkwardness and disappointment.
第二段:針對(duì)圖畫內(nèi)容加以分析
(3)The picture implies that electronic devices　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　 　　　　(對(duì)我們的生活有不好的影響).
(4)Young addicts 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(傾向于表現(xiàn)出) poor academic performance, which adds to the elders' worry.
第三段:針對(duì)該現(xiàn)象提出自己的看法或建議
(5)As far as I'm concerned, 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(很重要的是限制) the time we spend on electronic devices and value precious face-to-face communication with our family members.
(6)It 　　　　 　　　　(有助于)a harmonious family atmosphere.
答案　(1)As can be seen from the vivid picture
(2)are enthusiastic about playing;regardless of
(3)have bad influence on our lives (4)have a tendency to show 　(5)it is of great significance to restrict　(6)contributes to
2.句式升級(jí)
(7)用分詞短語作狀語改寫句(4)。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(8)把句(5)和句(6)合并成含有非限制性定語從句的主從復(fù)合句。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案　(7)Young addicts have a tendency to show poor academic performance, adding to the elders' worry.　(8)As far as I'm concerned, it is of great significance to restrict the time we spend on electronic devices and value precious face-to-face communication with our family members, which contributes to a harmonious family atmosphere.
連句成篇
　　As can be seen from the vivid picture, a big family get together to have a splendid dinner. But at the table, the young are enthusiastic about playing with their electronic devices, regardless of the elders' obvious awkwardness and disappointment.
The picture implies that electronic devices have bad influence on our lives. Overuse of electronic devices widens the distance between teenagers and their elders. Worse still, young addicts have a tendency to show poor academic performance, adding to the elders' worry.
　　As far as I'm concerned, it is of great significance to restrict the time we spend on electronic devices and value precious face-to-face communication with our family members, which contributes to a harmonious family atmosphere.
寫作積累
關(guān)于看圖寫作的增分佳句
1.開頭:根據(jù)畫面,予以描述
①This is an interesting but thought-provoking picture.這是一幅有趣但是引人深思的圖畫。
②From the picture we can see that...從圖畫上我們可以看到……
③As is vividly shown in the picture...正如畫中生動(dòng)顯示的那樣……
2.主體:分析現(xiàn)象,找出原因
①There are two main reasons. On the one hand...On the other hand...有兩個(gè)主要原因。一方面……另一方面……
②There are three reasons for this phenomenon. To begin with...What's more...Last but not least...產(chǎn)生這個(gè)現(xiàn)象有三個(gè)原因。首先……其次……最后但同樣重要的是……
3.結(jié)尾:總結(jié)問題,提出建議
①We ought to/should...我們應(yīng)該……
②It is suggested/advised that...建議……
③Consequently/As a result...因此……
④In consequence/In brief/To sum up/In conclusion/To summarize/All in all...總之/簡而言之/作為結(jié)論/總之/總的來說……
實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練
請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的圖片寫一篇短文,內(nèi)容包括:
　　1.描述漫畫內(nèi)容及其寓意;
　　2.發(fā)表你的觀點(diǎn)。
注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;
2.開頭語已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
3.可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容,以使行文連貫。
　　As can be seen in the picture, the young tree is supported by a stick while growing.　 　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案與分層梯度式解析
UNIT 5　EDUCATION
Part 6　Writing
實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練
One possible version:
　　As can be seen in the picture, the young tree is supported by a stick while growing. However, once there is no support, the tree breaks off. In fact, it reflects a common phenomenon—many parents take care of their children too much.
In our daily life, some parents often take unnecessary action, which will contribute to an undesirable result in the long run. Children need not only support and care but also challenges of difficulties and experiences of hardships. Too much care is not beneficial to their growth and development.Consequently, it is suggested that parents should give children more space to deal with their own things independently as they grow up.
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