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Unit 1　Food matters
Part 4　Writing
介紹食物
寫作題目
　　假如你是李華,你的英國朋友John對中國的傳統美食很感興趣,請你寫一封電子郵件向他簡單介紹一種中國傳統美食——餃子,包括以下內容:
　　1.歷史:大約一千八百年;
　　2.文化習俗:新年食物,表達對未來的祝愿;
　　3.做法:蒸、煎、煮等。
注意:
　　1.詞數80左右;
　　2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
Dear John,










Yours,
Li Hua
思路點撥
遣詞造句
Ⅰ.用本單元所學單詞填空
1.　　　　 vi.(根據情況)變化,變更;相異,不同 vt.變更,改變
2.　　　　 v.蒸;散發蒸汽 n.水蒸氣;蒸汽動力;水汽
3.　　　　 vt.& vi.用沸水煮;(使)沸騰
4.　　　　 vt.& vi.油炸,油煎
答案　1.vary　2.steam　3.boil　4.fry
Ⅱ.本單元語塊、語法運用
1.完成句子
第一段:引入主題,向John介紹一種中國傳統美食——餃子
(1)I 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(很高興介紹) a traditional Chinese food—dumplings to you.
第二段:介紹餃子的相關文化習俗和做法
(2)As the Spring Festival marks the start of a new year, people choose to eat dumplings 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　
　　　　(表達他們對……的愿望) the future.
(3)Traditionally, family members get together 　　　　 　　　　
　　　　(包餃子) on Chinese New Year’s Eve.
(4)Ways of cooking dumplings 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　
　　　　 　　　　(因地而異) in China.
(5)Generally, they are steamed, boiled or fried in a pan. Some are dipped in vinegar, 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(而有些是帶湯一起上的).
第三段:邀請John品嘗餃子
(6)I promise to treat you to a big meal of dumplings 　　　　
　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(當你來中國時).
答案　(1)am delighted to introduce　(2)to express their wishes for　(3)to make dumplings(4)vary from place to place　(5)while some are served with soup　(6)when you come to China
2.句式升級
(7)用it作形式主語、動詞不定式作真正的主語改寫句(3)


答案
(7)It is a tradition for family members to get together to make dumplings on Chinese New Year’s Eve.
連句成篇
Dear John,
I am delighted to introduce a traditional Chinese food—dumplings to you.
Dumplings date back to some 1,800 years ago. As the Spring Festival marks the start of a new year, people choose to eat dumplings to express their wishes for the future. It is a tradition for family members to get together to make dumplings on Chinese New Year’s Eve. Ways of cooking dumplings vary from place to place in China. Generally, they are steamed, boiled or fried in a pan. Some are dipped in vinegar, while some are served with soup.
I promise to treat you to a big meal of dumplings when you come to China.
Yours,
Li Hua
寫作積累
關于美食介紹的增分佳句
1.開頭:美食名稱
①I’m pleased to know you intend to learn to cook Chinese cuisine during your gap year. I think...is your best choice.我很高興知道你打算在間隔年學習做中國菜。我認為……是你最好的選擇。
②I’m quite glad that you take great interest in traditional Chinese food and now I’m writing to introduce a popular Chinese food to you.我很高興你對中國傳統食物如此感興趣,現在我寫信給你介紹一種很受歡迎的中國食物。
③As we all know, ...is one of the most typical foods during the Spring Festival and is regarded as a symbol of reunion.眾所周知,……是春節期間最典型的食物之一,被視為團聚的象征。
2.主體:制作過程
①I feel it a great honour to be here and introduce a traditional Chinese food..., which is made of...我很榮幸能在這里介紹一種中國傳統食物……,它是由……制成的。
②The way of making it is no less fantastic. Firstly...Next...Finally...制作它的方法同樣奇妙。首先……接下來……最后……
③As one of the most popular dishes in China,...is made up of...作為中國最受歡迎的菜肴之一,……由……組成。
3.結尾:推薦理由,邀請體驗
①It’s a fast meal because it not only is cooked quickly, but also requires a minimal amount of preparation.這是一頓快餐,因為它不僅煮得快,而且需要極少的準備。
②I suggest you try it in a Chinese restaurant or you learn to make it yourself.我建議你去中餐館試試,或者自己學著做。
③Welcome to China and I hope you will experience our food culture in person.歡迎來到中國,我希望你能親身體驗我們的飲食文化。
實戰演練
假如你是李華,你的外教Peter對中國飲食文化非常感興趣,他想請你推薦一款中國傳統美食,請給他寫一封信,內容包括:
1.美食名稱;
2.簡要描述;
3.推薦理由。
注意:
1.詞數80左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
Dear Peter,










Yours,
Li Hua
讀后續寫
寫作題目
　　閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。
I’ve lived in this neighborhood for years, but I still remember the first person I met when I moved here, and that was Linda who had black wavy hair, naughty big eyes and a smile on her face all the time. I think she was about ten when I first met her.
She was very fond of trees and spent all her spare time collecting leaves and sticking them on a brochure. She remembered exactly when and where she had picked up a particular leaf and whether it was a sunny, windy or rainy day. Because I was interested in seeing what she had collected, I was her best friend or sister, Belle.
Later, Linda went to a boarding school outside the town. She would come home only during vacations. That is to say, we couldn’t see each other as often as we used to. But we would make full use of every opportunity to visit the small forest near our home to collect her favorite leaves, and meanwhile, I could listen to her wonderful descriptions of the trees.
You must be wondering why I am talking about Linda. You see, something fantastic happened last week. I was standing on the balcony(陽臺) looking at the budding blossoms of the trees. As usual, I remembered Linda whom I had not seen for many years. Two years ago, I got some information about Linda from an old neighbor. She had settled down in France and had a daughter,who resembles her. I wondered whether she still stuck to her hobby of collecting leaves. I was so lost in thought that I did not hear that the doorbell rang at first. Then it rang again and again. Two short rings, one long ring and two short rings. Suddenly it dawned on me that it was how Linda used to ring the bell. I ran to the door.
注意:續寫詞數應為150個左右。
　　I opened the door and found“Linda” standing there.









　　“Hello, Belle! I’m Amy, Linda’s daughter.”









文本分析
初識文本
重點詞匯
1.naughty adj.頑皮的;淘氣的
2.be fond of喜歡
3.stick v.粘貼
4.make full use of充分利用
5.meanwhile adv.與此同時
6.as usual像往常一樣
7.settle down定居
8.stick to堅持
障礙詞匯
1.brochure n.小冊子
2.boarding school寄宿制學校
3.resemble v.看起來像
4.dawn on使開始理解,使開始明白
長難句
原句　I’ve lived in this neighborhood for years, but I still remember the first person I met when I moved here, and that was Linda who had black wavy hair, naughty big eyes and a smile on her face all the time.
分析　本句為but連接的并列復合句。前一分句為簡單句;后一分句為第一個and連接的并列復合句。I met為省略了引導詞的定語從句,修飾先行詞the first person;when引導時間狀語從句;who引導定語從句,修飾先行詞Linda。
譯文　我已經在這個社區住了很多年了,但我仍然記得我搬到這里時遇到的第一個人,那就是琳達,她有黑色的卷發,調皮的大眼睛,臉上總是帶著微笑。
故事要素
深研文本
預測情節發展
第一段:“我”打開門,發現“琳達”站在那兒→作者仔細打量面前這個女孩→女孩雖然和記憶中的琳達很像,但年齡對不上→作者猜想女孩是琳達的女兒。
第二段: “你好, 貝爾! 我是埃米,琳達的女兒。” →女孩叫琳達出來→作者與琳達重聚,兩人見面很激動→三人一起去小森林里撿落葉,重溫友誼。
遣詞造句
1.在橫線上填入適當的單詞
(1)　　　　 sth. in one’s arms 抱著某物
(2)call 　　　　 大聲叫喊
(3)succeed 　　　　 doing sth.成功做了某事
(4)　　　　 n.激動;興奮
(5)　　　　 n.陪伴
答案　(1)hold　(2)out　(3)in　
(4)excitement　(5)company
2.完成句子
(1)The girl was with the same black wavy hair, the same naughty big eyes, and the same smile, and she 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(抱著兩本小冊子).
(2)She was about 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(和……年齡一樣大) Linda when I had met her for the first time.
(3)I remembered that I 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(從……了解到) my neighbor that Linda had a daughter.
(4)Her daughter 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(長得很像)her.
(5)Then Amy called out to someone 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(躲在一棵樹后), “Come out now. We have 　　　　 　　　　
　　　　 　　　　(成功使她大吃一驚)!”
(6)You cannot 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(想象我們感受到的激動).
(7)We 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(見到彼此) after so many years.
(8)That afternoon, the three of us 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　
　　　　(去散步) in the small forest.
(9)We collected different leaves and 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(享受友誼和陪伴的快樂).
答案　(1)held two brochures in her arms　(2)the same age as　(3)had learned from　(4)looked so much like　(5)hiding behind a tree; succeeded in surprising her　(6)imagine the excitement we felt　(7)saw each other　(8)went for a walk　(9)enjoyed the pleasure of friendship and company
3.句式升級
(10)把句(3)和句(4)合并為含有who引導的定語從句的句子


(11)把句(6)和句(7)合并為含有when引導的時間狀語從句的句子


(12)把句(8)和句(9)合并為含有現在分詞短語作伴隨狀語的句子


答案
(10)I remembered that I had learned from my neighbor that Linda had a daughter who looked so much like her.
(11)You cannot imagine the excitement we felt when we saw each other after so many years.
(12)That afternoon, the three of us went for a walk in the small forest, collecting different leaves and enjoying the pleasure of friendship and company.
連句成篇
　　I opened the door and found“Linda” standing there.









　　“Hello, Belle! I’m Amy, Linda’s daughter.”







參考范文
I opened the door and found“Linda” standing there. The girl was with the same black wavy hair, the same naughty big eyes,and the same smile, and she held two brochures in her arms. She was about the same age as Linda when I had met her for the first time. She couldn’t be Linda! I remembered that I had learned from my neighbor that Linda had a daughter who looked so much like her. I was sure the girl was her daughter.
“Hello, Belle! I’m Amy, Linda’s daughter.” What a wonderful surprise! Then Amy called out to someone hiding behind a tree, “Come out now. We have succeeded in surprising her!” Here came Linda. You cannot imagine the excitement we felt when we saw each other after so many years. That afternoon, the three of us went for a walk in the small forest, collecting different leaves and enjoying the pleasure of friendship and company.
寫作積累
與“head”相關的描寫
1.He hung/lowered/bent/bowed his head in shame.他羞愧地低下了頭。
2.They nodded their heads in agreement.他們點頭表示同意。
3.He put/held his head in his hands, greatly upset.他雙手抱頭,十分沮喪。
4.She shook her head sadly.她難過地搖搖頭。
5.Hearing this question,Tod shook his head angrily.聽到這個問題,托德生氣地搖了搖頭。
6.I turned my head from time to time, and saw if I was being followed.我時不時轉頭,看看是否有人跟著我。
與“face”相關的描寫
1.A bright smile appeared on/spread across his face.他的臉上露出了燦爛的笑容。
2.Her face lit up/brightened up/glowed when I gave her the present.我給她禮物時,她的臉上煥發出了光彩。
3.His face suddenly grew serious.他的表情突然變得嚴肅起來。
4.He buried his face in his hands.他雙手掩面。
5.Hearing my words, his face burned with shame.聽到我的話,他的臉因羞愧而發燙。
6.He was going red in the face and breathing with difficulty.他臉紅了,費力地喘著氣。
答案與分層梯度式解析
Unit 1　Food matters
Part 4　Writing
實戰演練
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I know you are enthusiastic about Chinese food and drinks, so I’m writing to recommend a popular Chinese drink for breakfast—soybean milk.
Just like tofu, soybean milk can also date back to the Han Dynasty. Its white color makes it look like milk, but it is actually made from beans. When heated, it gives off a refreshing smell. Additionally, it is not only delicious but also nutritious since it’s rich in vegetable protein.
If you are interested, why not have a try I’m sure you’ll fall in love with it.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重點詞匯　
①be enthusiastic about... 熱衷于……　②date back to... 追溯到……　③give off 散發出(氣味、熱、光等)　
④be rich in... 富含……
2.亮點句型
①When heated, it gives off a refreshing smell.(When引導時間狀語從句,省略了主語和be動詞)加熱時,它散發出一種清爽的氣味。
②Additionally, it is not only delicious but also nutritious since it’s rich in vegetable protein. (since引導原因狀語從句)此外,它不僅美味而且營養豐富,因為它富含植物蛋白。
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