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Unit1　Wish you were here
Part 4　Writing
邀請信
寫作題目
　　假定你是李華,你打算國慶節期間去武漢旅游。請你給來自新西蘭的交換生Terry發郵件邀請他與你同游,內容包括:
1.邀請Terry與你同游;
2.你的旅游計劃;
3.表達希望。
注意:
1.詞數80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
Dear Terry,
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
思路點撥
遣詞造句
Ⅰ.用本單元所學單詞或短語填空
1.　　　　 v.嘗,品嘗,體驗
2.　　　　　　除了……外(還)
3.　　　　　　去,前往
4.　　　　　　不足為奇,毫不奇怪
答案　1.sample　2.apart from　3.make one's way to　4.come as no surprise　
Ⅱ.本單元語塊、語法運用
1.完成句子
第一段:說明寫信目的——邀請對方同游武漢
(1)I am writing to 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(邀請你去)with me.
第二段:介紹旅游計劃
(2)　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(除了欣賞) the beautiful scenery, I also plan to make my way to the Yangtze River.
(3)　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(這一點不足為奇) that this trip can broaden my horizons.
(4)This trip can 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(幫助我減輕壓力).
(5)In addition, I will spare the time to 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(品嘗當地的小吃).
第三段:表達希望,期待回復
(6)Please let me know 　　　　 　　　　(你的決定).
答案　(1)invite you to go　(2)Apart from enjoying　(3)It will come as no surprise
(4) help me reduce stress
(5)sample the local snacks
(6)your decision
2.句式升級
(7)用not only...but also...合并句(3)和句(4),并使用倒裝語序
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(8)用讓步狀語從句改寫句(6)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案
(7)It will come as no surprise that not only can this trip broaden my horizons, but it can also help me reduce stress.
(8)Whatever/No matter what your decision is, please let me know.
連句成篇
Dear Terry,
How are you I intend to travel to Wuhan during the National Day holiday. I am writing to invite you to go with me.
According to my plan, I will stay in Wuhan for five days. Apart from enjoying the beautiful scenery, I also plan to make my way to the Yangtze River. It will come as no surprise that not only can this trip broaden my horizons, but it can also help me reduce stress. In addition, I will spare the time to sample the local snacks.
It will be pleasant to travel to the city with you. Please take my invitation into account.Whatever your decision is, please let me know. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
寫作積累
關于邀請信的增分佳句
　　1.開頭:簡要說明活動并邀請對方
①An English speaking contest of our school will be held on August 6.我們學校有一場英語演講比賽將在8月6號舉行。
②There will be a party in my garden on Sunday.周日,在我的花園里會舉行一場聚會。
③I'm writing to invite you to...我寫信是邀請你……
④It's my pleasure to invite you to...我很榮幸邀請你……
2.主體:介紹活動
①We will start at 8:00 a.m. and arrive there at 9:00.我們將會在上午八點出發,九點到達那里。
②Remember to take water and lunch with you.記得帶上水和午餐。
③The next place of interest you cannot miss is the Summer Palace.下一個你不能錯過的名勝是頤和園。
④As a symbol of ancient Chinese civilization, it is one of the world's oldest and most magnificent man-made scenes.作為中國古代文明的象征,它是世界上最古老、最壯麗的人造景觀之一。
⑤I'm sure that you will enjoy yourself there.我保證你在那里會過得很愉快。
3.結尾:表達希望,期待對方回復
①Will you be available during that time Please contact me at 1234567 at your earliest convenience.那期間你有空嗎 請方便時盡快給我打電話,號碼是1234567。
②Would you please let me know as soon as possible if you can accept my invitation 請盡快告訴我你能否接受我的邀請好嗎
③Looking forward to your early reply.期待你的早日回復。
④We will feel much honored if you can come.如果你能來,我們會感到非常榮幸。
⑤We are looking forward to your coming.我們期待著你的到來。
⑥I am longing to see you soon.我渴望盡早見到你。
實戰演練
假設你是李華,你打算和幾位朋友在國慶節期間去三亞旅游。請給你的外國朋友Mike發一封電子郵件介紹這次旅游計劃,并邀請他一起旅游。旅游計劃需包括:
1.出行時間安排;
2.主要活動。
注意:
1.詞數80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫;
3.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
參考詞匯:篝火晚會 campfire party
Dear Mike,
How is everything going 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
讀后續寫
寫作題目
　　閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。
Mother's gift
I grew up in a small town where it was a ten-minute walk from my house to the primary school. When the noon bell rang, I would race breathlessly home. My mother would be standing at the top of the stairs, smiling down at me.
When I was in the third grade, I had been picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had rehearsed my lines so hard with me. But no matter how easily I acted at home, as soon as I stepped on the stage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained that she had written a narrator's(旁白員) part for the play, and asked me to change roles. Her words, kindly expressed, still hurt me, especially when I saw my part go to another girl.
I didn't tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my pain. Instead of suggesting we practise my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard.
It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine was turning green. Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions(蒲公英) in the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold. I watched my mother casually bend down by one dandelion. “I think I'm going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling it up by its roots. “From now on, we'll have only roses in this garden.”
“But I like dandelions,” I protested. “All flowers are beautiful—even dandelions.”
My mother looked at me seriously. “Yes, every flower gives pleasure in its own way, doesn't it ” she asked thoughtfully. I nodded, pleased that I had won her over. “And that is true of people too,” she added. “Not everyone can be a princess, but there is no shame in that.” Knowing that she had guessed my pain, I started to cry as I told her what had happened. She listened and smiled reassuringly(安慰地).
注意:續寫詞數應為150個左右。
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,”she said,　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　After the play, I took home the dandelion.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
文本分析
初識文本
重點詞匯
1.sense vt.覺察到
2.bunch n.串,束,扎
3.casually adv.隨意地,漫不經心地
4.dig up挖出
5.protest v.反對;堅決地表示
6.shame n.羞恥;丟臉
障礙詞匯
1.rehearse v.排演,排練
2.vine n.藤蔓;藤
3.win over說服,贏得……的支持
長難句剖析
原句　Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions in the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a bit of gold.
分析　本句為主從復合句。as if引導方式狀語從句,從句中使用了虛擬語氣。
譯文　在大樹下,我們可以看到草地上一簇簇黃色的蒲公英,仿佛是一位畫家為我們的風景增添了一點金色。
故事要素
深研文本
預測情節發展
第一段:
她說:“但你會成為一名出色的旁白員。”→媽媽又說了一些鼓勵“我”的話→“我”接受了旁白員的角色,努力排練→“我”在演出前看到了媽媽送的一朵蒲公英,戰勝了緊張→演出成功。
第二段:
話劇演出結束后,“我”把蒲公英帶回了家→媽媽和“我”一起把這朵蒲公英封存起來留作紀念→這件事帶給“我”的感觸。
遣詞造句
1.用單詞或短語填空
(1)　　　　 a shining smile帶著燦爛的笑容
(2)be of vital　　　　至關重要
(3)go on　　　　上臺
(4)keep...　　　　陪伴……
(5)　　　　　　結果是
(6)　　　　　　注視
(7)　　　　 v.記起,回憶起
(8)　　　　 adj.寶貴的
答案　(1)wear　(2)significance/importance(3)stage　(4)company　(5)turn out　(6)gaze at　(7)recall　(8)precious
2.完成句子
(1)“The narrator's part is equally important,” my mother added, 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(帶著燦爛的笑容)on her gentle face.
(2)At that very moment, I found a dandelion 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(放進我口袋里) by my mother to 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(陪伴我).
(3)Mom carefully gazed at the dandelion, gently placed it into a dictionary and 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(像往常一樣微笑).
(4)Though decades have passed, I 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(總是記起寶貴的午餐時光) we spent together.
(5)I 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(感激) the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
答案　(1) wearing a shining smile　(2) put into my pocket; keep me company　(3)smiled as usual　(4)constantly recall the precious lunchtime　(5)was grateful for
3.句式升級
(6)把句(2)改寫為強調時間狀語的強調句
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　(7)把句(4)和句(5)合并為用形容詞短語作狀語的句子
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　答案　(6)It was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company.
(7)Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we spent together, grateful for the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
連句成篇
　　“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, encouraging and comforting me as she always did. “The narrator's part is equally important,” my mother added, wearing a shining smile on her gentle face. I began to accept that the narrator part was of vital significance and rehearsed even harder. Time had flown by and it reached the performance day. Before going on stage I still felt nervous, but it was at that very moment that I found a dandelion put into my pocket by my mother to keep me company. The play turned out to be a great success.
　　After the play, I took home the dandelion. Mom carefully gazed at the dandelion, gently placed it into a dictionary and smiled as usual. “We were perhaps the only people that would keep such a sorry-looking weed.” Though decades have passed, I constantly recall the precious lunchtime we spent together, grateful for the smiles on my mother's face and her kindness.
寫作積累
環境描寫
一、環境描寫的分類
1.自然環境描寫。如:
The country is very green in spring.
2.社會環境描寫。如:
This small village was filled with flames of war at that time.
二、環境描寫的手法
1.借助感官(視覺、聽覺、嗅覺、味覺、觸覺)來進行環境描寫。如:
After the rain, the lotus flowers in the pond are in full blossom. They give off a faint scent.(借助視覺、嗅覺進行描寫)
2.從空間的角度進行環境描寫,如由上到下、由遠及近等方式。如:
I saw many kids who were laughing happily on the lawn. Then I glanced up and saw a pair of kites, red with long blue tails, soaring in the sky.(采用視覺上的由下到上的方式進行描寫)
三、環境描寫的素材
the blue sky藍天;the songs of birds鳥鳴;the fragile flowers嬌嫩的花;the raining evening雨夜;the green grass青草;the fragrant roses芬芳的玫瑰;the setting/rising sun落日/冉冉升起的太陽;a gust of wind一陣狂風;the drooping branches of the weeping willow垂柳的低垂枝條;the soft and cool wind輕柔且涼爽的風
答案與分層梯度式解析
Part 4　Writing
實戰演練
One possible version:
Dear Mike,
How is everything going My friends and I have decided to go on a trip to Sanya during China's National Day holiday. I'm writing to tell you about our travel plan and invite you to join us.
We are leaving for Sanya by airplane the day before the holiday begins. We will start sightseeing on October 1st when we will visit some places of interest. In the following days, we will climb the mountains, swim near the beach, go diving and have a campfire party, through which I'm sure we will have a lot of fun being together.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重點詞匯
①sightseeing n.觀光　②place of interest名勝　③go diving去潛水
2.亮點句型
①We will start sightseeing on October 1st when we will visit some places of interest.(定語從句)我們將于10月1日開始觀光,屆時我們將參觀一些名勝。
②In the following days, we will climb the mountains, swim near the beach, go diving and have a campfire party, through which I'm sure we will have a lot of fun being together.(非限制性定語從句;賓語從句)在接下來的日子里,我們將爬山、在海灘附近游泳、去潛水、舉辦篝火晚會,通過這些活動,我相信我們會在一起玩得很愉快。
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