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Part 4　Writing
大眾媒體的利弊
寫作題目
　　假定你是李華,在今年的寒假期間,你的好友Tom迷上了網絡新聞,請你幫他分析一下網絡新聞的利弊,用英文給他寫一封建議信。內容包括:
1.獲取最新新聞,減少紙張的使用等;
2.存在虛假信息,易誤導大眾;
3.建議。
注意:1.詞數80個左右;
2.開頭已給出,不計入總詞數;
3.可適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
Dear Tom,
I heard that you were addicted to the Internet news.　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
思路點撥
遣詞造句
Ⅰ.用本單元所學單詞或短語填空
1.　　　　v.發布
2.　　　　adj.批評的,批判性的;關鍵的
3.　　　　adj.錯誤的,不真實的
4.　　　　　　很多;許多
答案　1.release　2.critical　3.false
4.dozens of
Ⅱ.本單元語塊、語法運用
1.完成句子
第一段:表明寫信目的
(1)I'm writing to tell you that the news　　　　 　　　　 　　　　　　　　(網絡上發布的)has both advantages and disadvantages.
第二段:介紹網絡新聞的利弊并提出建議
(2)With the help of the Internet, we can use our mobile phones or other devices to get 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(很多資料)in a short time.
(3)　　　　 　　　　(另外), by reading the Internet news, we can reduce the use of paper, and it is beneficial to the environment.
(4)However, the Internet news is also flooded with　　　　 　　　　 (虛假信息)and it 　　　　 　　　　(誤導人們)easily.
(5)Therefore, you should be　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 (有批判能力的新聞讀者)and you won't be tricked.
答案　(1)released on the Internet　(2)dozens of materials　(3)In addition　(4)false information;misleads people　(5)a critical news reader
2.句式升級
(6)用which引導的非限制性定語從句改寫句(3)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(7)用which引導的非限制性定語從句改寫句(4)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(8)用so that改寫句(5)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案　(6)In addition, by reading the Internet news, we can reduce the use of paper, which is beneficial to the environment.
(7)However, the Internet news is also flooded with false information, which misleads people easily.
(8)Therefore, you should be a critical news reader so that you won't be tricked.
連句成篇
Dear Tom,
I heard that you were addicted to the Internet news. I'm writing to tell you that the news released on the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages.
With the help of the Internet, we can use our mobile phones or other devices to get dozens of materials in a short time. In addition, by reading the Internet news, we can reduce the use of paper, which is beneficial to the environment.However, the Internet news is also flooded with false information, which misleads people easily.Therefore, you should be a critical news reader so that you won't be tricked.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
寫作積累
關于網絡新聞媒體的話題詞匯和句式
話題詞匯:
(1)種類、手段及現狀
①media n.媒體,傳媒
②online adj.聯網的　adv.在網上
③Internet n.互聯網
④website n.網站
⑤update v.更新;給……提供最新消息
⑥post v.發帖子
⑦comment v.發表評論
⑧popularity n.流行,普及
⑨obtain vt.獲得,贏得
⑩get around(新聞或消息)傳開
arouse wide attention引起廣泛關注
(2)利弊、作用及未來
①advantage n.有利條件,優勢
②disadvantage n.不利因素
③outweigh vt.比……重要
④positive adj.積極的
⑤negative adj.消極的
⑥have an effect/influence/impact on對……有影響
句式:
(1)開頭
①As we can see, the online news media enjoys great popularity among people, especially young people.
正如我們看到的,網絡新聞媒體在人們中非常受歡迎,特別是在年輕人中。
②It is clear that the online news media is becoming increasingly popular among Internet users all over the world.
很明顯,網絡新聞媒體在全世界的互聯網用戶中越來越受歡迎。
(2)主體
①One of the advantages of the online news media is that it can satisfy people's need for relevant information anytime and anywhere.
網絡新聞媒體的優勢之一就是它能滿足人們隨時隨地了解相關信息的需要。
②On the one hand, the online news media allows people to release news information freely. On the other hand, it provides a whole new platform for people to interact.
一方面,網絡新聞媒體允許人們自由發布新聞信息。另一方面,它為人們提供了一個全新的互動平臺。
③Another negative aspect is that it can make false news spread more quickly than any other traditional media.
另一個消極的方面是,它可以使假新聞傳播得比任何其他傳統媒體更快。
④The online news media has more advantages over other traditional news media.
網絡新聞媒體比其他傳統新聞媒體更具優勢。
⑤Compared with the traditional news media, the online news media has many advantages.
與傳統新聞媒體相比,網絡新聞媒體有很多優勢。
⑥The online news media makes it easy for people to interact with others.
網絡新聞媒體使人們與他人的交流變得容易。
(3)結尾
①With the improvement in people's understanding of the online news media, it will play a more important part in people's life.
隨著人們對網絡新聞媒體認識的提高,它將在人們的生活中扮演更重要的角色。
②The online news media will go hand in hand with other forms of the news media.
網絡新聞媒體將與其他形式的新聞媒體攜手并進。
實戰演練
假設你是紅星中學高二學生李華。你的英國好友Jim聽說直播購物(live-stream shopping)在中國很流行,發來郵件詢問相關信息。請你給他回復郵件,內容包括:
1.你是否通過直播進行過購物;
2.你對直播購物的看法或感受。
注意:1.詞數80個左右;
2.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
Dear Jim,
You're quite right about live-stream shopping being popular in China.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
How about your live-stream shopping in Britain Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
讀后續寫
寫作題目
　　閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。
Emily White was born seventeen years ago with so many birth problems in her body. Some of her organs, bones and muscles were out of shape. No one expected her to survive. She did make it but with her strange body figure, everyone could recognize her, even from a distance.
In Emily White's hometown, there was a yearly outdoor performance in the school auditorium(禮堂). It had been performed for so many years and actually had become one of the most important events of the Christmas season for many people in the town. Many people tried out each year for it but so many were turned away. It could only include the most excellent people in the field.
Emily had a beautiful singing voice. Last year she went to Mrs. Owens—her music teacher—to ask to join in the performance. Without letting her sing, Mrs. Owens took a look at Emily's body and said, “Child, you just don't fit. Everyone would stare at you and that would make you uncomfortable. It would make them uncomfortable, too.”
Without singing a single note, Emily was sent back through the door of the choral(合唱的)room. Hurt and upset, she decided never to try out again. But Mrs. Owens then retired.
This year, there came a new music teacher, Mr. Butler. He heard about Emily and suggested that she have a try.
Emily didn't want to be rejected again, so she hesitated a little about it. As Emily struggled, the door was pushed open and Mr. Butler called, “Emily, you're next.” Although kind of nervous, Emily did as Mr. Butler told her to do. Mr. Butler sat by the piano to accompany Emily. When Emily finished her testing performance, she thanked Mr. Butler and knew the result would be posted on the door of the choral room the next day.
Emily couldn't sleep that night. She was suffering from the feelings that she didn't fit and the great need to be accepted. By the next morning, her stomach was even in pain because of stress.
注意:續寫詞數應為150個左右。
The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　Finally, the day of the performance came.　 　　　 　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
文本分析
初識文本
重點詞匯
1.out of shape走形的;不健康,身體不好
2.make it幸免于難,渡過難關
3.recognize v.認出
4.performance n.表演
5.try out for...參加……選拔(或試演)
6.turn away把……拒之門外
7.reject vt.拒絕接受,不予考慮
8.hesitate vi.猶豫,遲疑不決
9.struggle vi.掙扎
10.suffer from...因……受苦
11.in pain感到痛苦
障礙詞匯
accompany vt.為……伴奏
長難句
原句　She did make it but with her strange body figure, everyone could recognize her, even from a distance.
分析　該句是一個并列復合句,but連接兩個并列分句。第二個分句中with her strange body figure作原因狀語。
譯文　她的確活了下來,但由于她奇怪的體形,每個人甚至從遠處都能認出她。
故事要素
深研文本
預測情節發展
第一段:第二天,Emily緊張地看合唱室門上的名單(首句信息)→Emily被選上→Emily心情復雜,興奮之余流露出不自信→Mr. Butler對Emily說了一番話,引導Emily接下來堅定信心,刻苦訓練。
第二段:終于到了演出那天(首句信息)→Emily走上表演舞臺后,觀眾因她的外表而產生不好的反應→Emily不受影響,全身心投入表演→Emily演出成功,觀眾的態度發生轉變→Emily戰勝自己,完成蛻變。
遣詞造句
1.在橫線上填入適當的單詞
(1)to one's 　　　　讓某人驚訝的是
(2)　　　　adj.神秘的
(3)remain 　　　　保持冷靜
(4)with all one's 　　　　全心全意地
(5)come 　　　　遇到
(6)be used 　　　　 sth.習慣于某事
(7)　　　　 one's breath 屏息
(8)break 　　　　突然開始做某事
答案　(1)surprise　(2)mysterious　(3)calm
(4)heart　(5)across　(6)to　(7)hold　(8)into
2.完成句子
(9)She was 　　　　(喜出望外)but 　　　　(懷疑的).
(10)She hit her hand hard 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(卻發現)she wasn't dreaming.
(11)Then Mr. Butler walked out of the room　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(帶著笑容).
(12)Emily was 　　　　 　　　　(深受鼓舞), and she 　　　　
　　　　(堅定地點點頭)and promised to practice hard for the performance.
(13)　　　　 　　　　 (一出現) on the stage, she was 　　　　
　　　　(受到) scornful eyes.
(14)The audience 　　　　 　　　　(爆發)thunderous applause.
(15)Mr. Butler was touched, and he gave Emily　　　　 　　　　
　　　　(一個大大的擁抱).
(16)Then he knew that Emily had 　　　　 　　　　(戰勝了她自己).
答案　(9)overjoyed;doubtful　(10)only to find　(11)with a smile　(12)greatly encouraged;nodded determinedly　(13)Upon/On appearing;greeted with　(14)broke into　(15)a big hug　(16)overcome herself
3.句式升級
(17)用形容詞作狀語合并句(9)和句(10)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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(18)把句(11)改寫成倒裝句
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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(19)用過去分詞作狀語改寫句(12)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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(20)用so...that...結構改寫句(15)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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(21)把句(16)改寫成強調句,強調時間狀語
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
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答案　(17)Overjoyed but doubtful, she hit her hand hard only to find she wasn't dreaming　(18)Then out of the room walked Mr.Butler with a smile　(19)Greatly encouraged, Emily nodded determinedly and promised to practice hard for the performance　(20)Mr. Butler was so touched that he gave Emily a big hug
(21)It was then that he knew that Emily had overcome herself
連句成篇
The next day,Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room. To her surprise, on top of the list was her name! Overjoyed but doubtful, she hit her hand hard only to find she wasn't dreaming. Then out of the room walked Mr. Butler with a smile. “Emily, we had another piece of good news for you,” he said in a mysterious voice. “We choose you to be the lead singer. Do you believe in yourself ” Greatly encouraged, Emily nodded determinedly and promised to practice hard for the performance.
Finally,the day of the performance came. Upon appearing on the stage, she was greeted with scornful eyes. But remaining calm, she began to sing with all her heart. Who knew how many such situations she had come across She was really used to it. When she finished her song, there was a moment of silence, as if the world were holding its breath. Suddenly, the audience broke into thunderous applause. Mr. Butler was so touched that he gave Emily a big hug. It was then that he knew that Emily had overcome herself.
寫作積累
與“神態描寫”相關的表達
1.臉上激動的表情:an expression of excitement on one's face
2.堅定的眼神:a determined look
3.滿足的微笑/神情:a smile/look of satisfaction
4.燦爛的微笑:a brilliant smile
5.拉著長臉:draw a long face
6.怒視某人:glare at sb.
7.極度憤怒的神情:a look of burning anger
8.因憤怒而顫抖:tremble with anger
9.一絲微笑浮上她的臉龐。A smile appeared on her face.
10.她眼中含滿淚水。Her eyes were filled with tears.
11.She looked up with a puzzled look on her face.她抬起頭,滿臉困惑。
12.I can tell from his gloomy expression that the situation is bad.從他憂郁的表情我能看出情況不容樂觀。
13.Wretched, the little boy was in low spirits at the thought of parting from his friends.這個小家伙愁眉苦臉的,一想到即將和朋友分別就情緒低落。
14.Raising his eyebrows, he pretended to be surprised.他揚起眉毛假裝很驚訝的樣子。
15.Knowing that their team had won the game, they grinned from ear to ear.當得知他們的隊伍贏得比賽時,他們笑得合不攏嘴。
16.She totally couldn't contain her inner delight, beaming at the new-born baby.她完全控制不住內心的歡喜,對著新生兒眉開眼笑。
17.Hearing his answer, they guffawed.聽到他的回答,他們哄堂大笑。
18.He forced a smile but the pale face revealed his panic.他勉強笑了一下,但蒼白的臉色透露了他的不安。
19.He chuckled, reaching out his hand and patting his son's shoulder.他輕聲笑了起來,伸手輕輕拍了拍兒子的肩膀。
答案與分層梯度式解析
Unit 1　The mass media
Part 4　Writing
實戰演練
One possible version:
Dear Jim,
You're quite right about live-stream shopping being popular in China.I'd like to share something about it with you.
I often buy things through live-stream shopping. For me, purchasing products through live-stream shopping has already become a habit. First, it's a more time-saving alternative than going to malls. Second, the live broadcasts enable us to communicate with the seller face-to-face, which is an advantage over only browsing the introduction pages. It's just like shopping in the real stores. Third, it enables consumers to have a more intuitive and comprehensive understanding of the products. More importantly, it has also created millions of jobs and boosted e-commerce and the express industry.
How about your live-stream shopping in Britain Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重點詞匯
①share sth. with sb. 與某人分享某物?、趐urchase vt.購買　
③alternative n.可供選擇的事物　④intuitive adj.直覺的;易懂的;有直覺力的?、輈omprehensive adj.全面的
2.亮點句型
Second, the live broadcasts enable us to communicate with the seller face-to-face, which is an advantage over only browsing the introduction pages.(which引導非限制性定語從句)第二,現場直播可以讓我們和賣家面對面交流,這比只瀏覽介紹頁面有優勢。
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