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Unit 1　Back to school
Part 4　Writing
學校俱樂部
寫作題目
　　為了豐富同學們的課外活動,校學生會決定成立一個騎行俱樂部(cycling club)。假如你是學生會主席,請根據以下提示,用英語寫一份書面通知。
1.俱樂部提供每周一次的基礎訓練,有老師指導;
2.參加俱樂部的好處(內容自擬);
3.注意事項:器材自備,活動免費;
4.如何加入俱樂部:9月20日前到5號樓6層602室報名。
注意:1.詞數80個左右;
2.通知應包括以上所有信息;
3.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
NOTICE
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
思路點撥
遣詞造句
Ⅰ.用本單元所學單詞填空
1.　　　　v.改善
2.　　　　n.機會,時機
答案　1.improve　2.opportunity
Ⅱ.本單元語塊、語法運用
1.完成句子
第一段:介紹騎行俱樂部的成立及其好處
(1)The students' union wants our school life　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(更加豐富多彩), and therefore has decided to 　　　　 　　　　(成立) a cycling club.
(2)The cycling club will 　　　　 　　　　
　　　　(提供基礎訓練) once a week under the guidance of teachers.
(3)The ideal opportunity will help you 　　　　 　　　　　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(改善身心健康).
第二段:介紹加入騎行俱樂部的方式和注意事項
(4)So, if you 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(對我們俱樂部感興趣), don't hesitate to come to sign up in Room 602, 6th Floor, Building 5 before September 20.
(5)Activities in our club are　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(免費), but you have to get the equipment ready by yourself.
第三段:呼吁同學們加入騎行俱樂部
(6)　　　　 　　　　(加入我們) now!
答案　(1)to be more colorful;set up
offer basic training　(3)improve both physical and mental health　
(4)are interested in our club　(5)free of charge　(6)Join us
2.句式升級
(7)用in order to和make的復合結構改寫句(1)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(8)把句(7)和句(2)合并成含有定語從句的主從復合句
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案　(7)In order to make our school life more colorful, the students' union has decided to set up a cycling club.
(8)In order to make our school life more colorful, the students' union has decided to set up a cycling club, which will offer basic training once a week under the guidance of teachers.
連句成篇
NOTICE
In order to make our school life more colorful, the students' union has decided to set up a cycling club, which will offer basic training once a week under the guidance of teachers. The ideal opportunity will help you improve both physical and mental health.
So, if you are interested in our club, don't hesitate to come to sign up in Room 602, 6th Floor, Building 5 before September 20. By the way, activities in our club are free of charge, but you have to get the equipment ready by yourself.
Join us now!
The Students' Union
寫作積累
關于學校活動通知的增分佳句
　　1.開頭:表明目的
　　①In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school will organize...旨在鼓勵學生進行戶外運動,我校將組織……
　　②Aimed at helping more students get interested in..., our school will...旨在幫助更多的學生對……產生興趣,我們學校將……
　　2.主體:活動內容及好處
　　①The event will be held in the playground from...o'clock to...o'clock.本次活動將于……點到……點在操場上舉行。
②We usually organize activities from eight o'clock to ten o'clock on Saturday mornings.我們通常在星期六上午8點到10點組織活動。
　　③Not only can the activity broaden our minds, but it also improves our taste.這次活動不僅可以拓寬我們的思路,而且提高我們的品味。
　　3.結尾:加入方式并呼吁同學們加入
　　①If you want to join the club, please fill in the form presented to you and give it to me before...If you need any help, please don't hesitate to contact me.如果你想加入俱樂部,請填寫給你的表格,并在……前交給我。如果你需要任何幫助,請盡管與我聯系。
　　②You can visit our school website and sign up online. Meanwhile, you can turn to the students' union for the same purpose. The deadline is...So don't miss it.你可以訪問我們學校的網站并在線報名。同時,你也可以向學生會求助。截止日期是……所以不要錯過它。
　　③The club is open to whoever is interested in..., but remember to send your application form to the office by...俱樂部對任何對……感興趣的人開放,但記得把你的申請表在……之前寄到辦公室。
實戰演練
假定你是太極拳(tai chi)俱樂部的負責人李華,請給對太極拳感興趣的交換生好友Martin寫一封郵件,邀請他加入該俱樂部,內容包括:
1.太極拳和俱樂部簡介;
2.練習太極拳的好處;
3.報名方式及截止日期。
注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右;
2.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
Dear Martin,
I'm writing to invite you to join our school's Tai Chi Club.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Yours,
Li Hua
答案與分層梯度式解析
Unit 1　Back to school
Part 4　Writing
實戰演練
One possible version:
Dear Martin,
I'm writing to invite you to join our school's Tai Chi Club. It is known that tai chi originates from traditional Chinese culture,which is famous for its graceful movements. Not only is it an ancient martial art but it is also an effective way of keeping fit. In order to encourage students to take outdoor exercise, our school set up Tai Chi Club three years ago. We usually organize activities from eight o'clock to ten o'clock on Saturday mornings. If you want to join the club, please fill in the form presented to you and give it to me before November 27. If you need any help, please don't hesitate to contact me.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重點詞匯
①originate v.起源　②movement n.運動,轉動;活動;移動　③effective adj.有效的　④encourage v.鼓勵
⑤hesitate v.猶豫
2.亮點句型
①It is known that tai chi originates from traditional Chinese culture,which is famous for its graceful movements.(that引導主語從句,It作形式主語;which引導非限制性定語從句)眾所周知,太極拳起源于中國傳統文化,以其優美的動作而聞名。
②Not only is it an ancient martial art but it is also an effective way of keeping fit.(not only...but also...連接兩個并列分句,部分倒裝)它不僅是一種古老的武術,也是一種保持健康的有效方式。

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