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Unit 4　Looking good, feeling good
Part 4　Writing
對整形手術(shù)發(fā)表看法
寫作題目
　　最近,社會上的整形醫(yī)院越來越多,一些人,尤其是年輕人,熱衷于整形手術(shù)。請你對此現(xiàn)象發(fā)表看法,并對自己的觀點(diǎn)加以論證。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)80個左右;
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
Should young people have plastic surgery
Recently, plastic surgery hospitals have sprung up all over the society. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
思路點(diǎn)撥
遣詞造句
Ⅰ.用本單元所學(xué)單詞或短語填空
1.　　　　 n.美,美麗;美人,美好的東西
2.　　　　 n.影響
3.　　　　　　整形手術(shù)
4.　　　　　　此外
答案　1.beauty　2.effect　3.plastic surgery　4.in addition
Ⅱ.本單元語塊、語法運(yùn)用
1.完成句子
第一段: 引出整形手術(shù)的話題
(1)Some people, especially young people,　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(渴望接受) plastic surgery.
(2)In this regard, I want to 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(表達(dá)我的觀點(diǎn)).
第二段:發(fā)表看法并對自己的觀點(diǎn)加以論證
(3)I don’t 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(贊同這一社會趨勢) that young people go for plastic surgery.
(4)Plastic surgery deepens the bad effect of　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(以貌取人).
(5)The beautiful appearance of a person cannot　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(彌補(bǔ))the lack of inner beauty.
第三段:表達(dá)希望
(6) I hope young people can 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(做慎重的決定) on plastic surgery.
答案　(1)are eager to have　(2)express my views　(3)agree with the social trend
(4)judging people by appearance　(5)make up for　(6)make a careful decision
2.句式升級
(7)將句(3)和句(4)合并為含原因狀語從句的句子
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(8)用no matter how將句(5)改寫為主從復(fù)合句
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案　(7)I don’t agree with the social trend that young people go for plastic surgery, because it deepens the bad effect of judging people by appearance.
(8)No matter how beautiful the appearance of a person is, it cannot make up for the lack of inner beauty.
連句成篇
Should young people have plastic surgery
　　Recently, plastic surgery hospitals have sprung up all over the society. Some people, especially young people, are eager to have plastic surgery. In this regard, I want to express my views.
I don’t agree with the social trend that young people go for plastic surgery, because it deepens the bad effect of judging people by appearance. In addition, according to the news about the death caused by plastic surgery in recent years, a large number of irregular plastic surgery hospitals in the society cannot guarantee the life safety. I think true beauty comes from the heart. No matter how beautiful the appearance of a person is, it cannot make up for the lack of inner beauty.
Therefore, I hope young people can make a careful decision on plastic surgery.
寫作積累
表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的增分佳句
1.引出話題
①Recently the problem of...has been brought into focus. 最近……問題引起了關(guān)注。
②Recently our class has had a heated discussion about... 最近,我們班就……展開了熱烈的討論。
③Nowadays...has become a problem we have to face.現(xiàn)在……已成為我們不得不面對的問題。
2.發(fā)表看法并加以論證
①Every coin has two sides and...is no exception. It has both advantages and disadvantages.事物都有兩面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
②As the old saying goes,...老話說,……
③There are different opinions among people as to...Some people think that...關(guān)于……人們有不同的觀點(diǎn)。一些人認(rèn)為……
④Today...have brought a lot of harm to our daily life. First,... Second,... What makes things worse is that...現(xiàn)在……給我們的日常生活帶來了許多危害。首先,……其次,……使事情更為糟糕的是……
3.總結(jié)
①From what has been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that...通過以上討論,我們可以有把握地得出結(jié)論……
②From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看來,如果……會更好。
③In a word, it is not a good way to judge a person by appearance.總之,以貌取人不是一個好方法。
④In my opinion/As far as I am concerned, a person’s appearance does not always reflect his character.在我看來/就我而言,一個人的外表并不總是反映他的性格。
實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練1
現(xiàn)如今,整形手術(shù)越來越受年輕人的歡迎。他們認(rèn)為改善外表可以使他們增加自信。但是,整形手術(shù)有很多弊端:手術(shù)費(fèi)用高、存在健康風(fēng)險、整形效果不一定令人滿意等。結(jié)論:年輕人沒有必要接受整形手術(shù),內(nèi)在美比外在美更重要。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100個左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。
Plastic surgery: beauty or beast
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

讀后續(xù)寫
寫作題目
閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
Jack and his wife Tonya were sailing around Africa with their friends Max and Sasha. One day they saw a big fishing boat. It was moving fast. “Hello!” they shouted. The men on the boat looked at them angrily. Max looked carefully at the boat.
“Something is wrong with their fishing net,”he said. They got nearer to the net. “What’s that ” said Tonya. “There is something in the net. It’s alive.” Very slowly, they moved nearer.
“I can see it now,” said Tonya. “It’s a killer whale—it’s hurt. There’s blood in the water. How can we help it ” “I can see it too. It’s a baby but we must be careful,” said Max.
Jack jumped into the water. “I can get the net off its fin,” he said.
Jack got the net off the baby killer whale. There was a big cut on its fin. It swam away. Suddenly there were other killer whales near the boat.
“Jack!Get in quickly,” shouted Tonya.
Jack swam to the boat as fast as he could. “I’m going to call that baby killer whale Lucky,” he said.
As they moved away, it began to rain harder and harder.
Jack said, “We must get away from the wind. I can see a town over there. Let’s go.”
The town got nearer but the waves got bigger. Suddenly a very big wave hit the boat.
“Is everyone OK ” shouted Jack. “Tonya ... She’s not in the boat,” said Sasha. “She’s in the water.”
They looked into the cold, dark water for hours. “Tonya! Say something, Tonya. Where are you ” shouted Max.
The wind got stronger and the boat was full of water. Another big wave hit the boat. “Jack, do you want us all to die ” said Max. “We can’t do any more. Tonya is wearing a life jacket and she can swim very well. Let’s sail to the town.”
Moments later the boat hit a beach. They went out. Max and Sasha lay on the beach. Jack sat near the water, looking at the sea and thinking of Tonya.
注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右。
At that time, Tonya was five hundred meters away in the sea.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　

Jack was walking along the beach when suddenly he saw someone waving to him.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
文本分析
初識文本
重點(diǎn)詞匯
1.alive adj.活著的
2.get away from(得以)離開,脫身
3.wave n.波浪 v.揮手
4.be full of...充滿……
5.think of想到;考慮到;關(guān)心
障礙詞匯
1.sail v.(人)乘船航行
2.net n.網(wǎng)
3.fin n.(魚的)鰭
4.cut n.傷口
5.life jacket救生衣
6.hit v.到達(dá)(某地);撞擊
故事要素
深研文本
預(yù)測情節(jié)發(fā)展
第一段:那時,Tonya在500米外的海里→Tonya一個人,十分恐懼,拼命求救→Tonya被“Lucky”所在的虎鯨群救了→Tonya被虎鯨群帶到近岸處。
第二段:Jack正沿著海灘走著,這時他突然看到有人向他揮手→Jack發(fā)現(xiàn)向他揮手的人是Tonya→Tonya上岸后向Jack說明是“Lucky”救了自己→Jack向“Lucky”表示感謝→“Lucky”和其他虎鯨游向大海。
遣詞造句
1.用單詞或短語填空
(1)　　　　vt.包圍
(2)　　　　adj.害怕的
(3)　　　　　　啟程;出發(fā)
(4)　　　　　　踏上
答案　(1)surround　(2)frightened　 (3)set off/out　(4)set foot on
2.完成句子
(5)Tonya 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(被冰冷的海水包圍著), and she was so frightened and shouted crazily for help.
(6)Tonya 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(發(fā)現(xiàn)自己正在升起) out of the sea.
(7)　　　　(令人驚訝的是), she was on the back of a big killer whale and 　　　　 　　　　(有) some killer whales around her.
(8)Tonya set foot on the beach, and then Jack ran towards her and 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(緊緊地抱住她).
(9)Jack walked towards Lucky and stroked its fin, 　　　　 　　　　(真誠地說), “Thank you, Lucky!”
答案
(5)was surrounded by the cold seawater
(6)found herself rising
(7)Surprisingly;there were
(8)hugged her tightly
(9)saying sincerely
3.句式升級
(10)用非謂語動詞作狀語改寫句(5)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(11)用with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)改寫句(7)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
(12)用the moment引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句改寫句(8)
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
答案
(10)Surrounded by the cold seawater, she was so frightened and shouted crazily for help.
(11)Surprisingly, she was on the back of a big killer whale with some killer whales around her.
(12)The moment Tonya set foot on the beach, Jack ran towards her and hugged her tightly.
連句成篇
At that time, Tonya was five hundred meters away in the sea. Surrounded by the cold seawater, she was so frightened and shouted crazily for help. Suddenly, Tonya found herself rising out of the sea. Surprisingly, she was on the back of a big killer whale with some killer whales around her. Among them, Tonya saw a small one, who was saved by Jack a few moments ago—Lucky. They set off to catch up with the boat.
Jack was walking along the beach when suddenly he saw someone waving to him. Later, he found that it was Tonya! The moment Tonya set foot on the beach, Jack ran towards her and hugged her tightly. Tonya smiled, “Don’t worry. I’m fine. I think we should thank the killer whales who saved my life. Look, the small one is Lucky!” Jack walked towards Lucky and stroked its fin, saying sincerely, “Thank you, Lucky!” Lucky shook its fin and then these killer whales swam away into the vast sea.
寫作積累
心理描寫——樂觀情緒
一、詞匯
1.happy/glad/cheerful/delighted/pleased/joyful adj.高興的,快樂的
2.positive adj.積極的
3.content/satisfied adj.滿足的,滿意的
4.optimistic adj.樂觀的
5.excited adj.激動的,興奮的
6.thrilled adj.非常興奮的
7.pleasure/joy/delight n.愉快,快樂
8.be in a good mood 心情好
9.be over the moon 欣喜若狂
10.cheer up(使)振作起來,(使)高興起來
二、句子
1.He brightened up and his face broke into a wide smile.
他高興起來,臉上綻開燦爛的笑容。
2.All the people present were enveloped in an atmosphere of joy.
在場的所有人都沉浸在歡樂的氣氛中。
3.The sight filled her with childlike excitement.
這種情景令她像孩子般興奮起來。
4.He was so excited that he could hardly contain himself.
他十分激動,幾乎控制不住自己。
5.He rushed into the room, laughing madly and clapping his hands with delight.
他沖進(jìn)房間,狂笑著,高興地拍著手。
實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練2
(2024湖南長沙第一中學(xué)入學(xué)考試)
閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
In the first and second grades, I was extremely shy. I had friends, but I just couldn’t be very outgoing, even if I knew someone well. I was even quieter with strangers, so I wasn’t very good at meeting new people. I was afraid that I would do or say something wrong.
So in our school’s annual grand play, I usually sat in a secluded(僻靜的) corner to watch the performance alone. I hoped to sit in the background and watch the actors sweat in front of all those pairs of eyes.
One day in the third grade, my teacher Mrs. Sally called me into her office and said, “Oh, Mary, you’re great at memorizing things, and you have such a sweet personality. Perfect for Jenny!” But I bowed my head and dared not speak. The teacher saw this and then said, “Of course, plenty of girls would love the role, and I could find somebody else. But I hope you could try it for me. I had you in mind for Jenny while writing the play! If you really don’t want to, I won’t force you. It’s your choice.”
My mind was spinning(快速旋轉(zhuǎn)) faster than the windmill(風(fēng)車) on the school playground. Mrs. Sally, whom I loved and admired, wanted me to play this role. She believed in me. My eyes moved across the room to a poster I had never noticed before. It showed a shooting star and read, “If you reach for the stars, you might at least grab a piece of the moon.” I looked into Mrs. Sally’s shining blue eyes and said, “Okay, I’ll try.” I realized it was time to throw off my shy mask and show the world who I really was.
In the following five months, the teacher taught me how to put on make-up, memorize lines, create costumes and so on. Gradually, I mastered(掌握) my lines and songs.
注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右。
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答案與分層梯度式解析
Unit 4　Looking good, feeling good
Part 4　Writing
實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練1
One possible version:
Plastic surgery: beauty or beast
Nowadays,plastic surgery is becoming increasingly popular among young people,because they believe they can gain self-confidence by improving appearance.
However,there is no doubt that it has many disadvantages. First of all, plastic surgery is very expensive. In addition,any kind of surgery carries potential health risk. Plastic surgery is no exception. Finally, people might not get satisfactory results from it. After all, no one can make sure that the results of plastic surgery will be exactly what the patient has expected.
In conclusion,there is no need for young people to have plastic surgery. Inner beauty is more important than external beauty.
1.重點(diǎn)詞匯
①in addition另外　②satisfactory adj.令人滿意的;夠好的;可以的　③after all畢竟,終究　④make sure確保 ⑤in conclusion總之
2.亮點(diǎn)句型
①Nowadays, plastic surgery is becoming increasingly popular among young people, because they believe they can gain self-confidence by improving appearance.(because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句;動詞believe后是賓語從句)如今,整形手術(shù)在年輕人中越來越流行,因?yàn)樗麄兿嘈趴梢酝ㄟ^改善外貌來增加自信。
②After all, no one can make sure that the results of plastic surgery will be exactly what the patient has expected.(that引導(dǎo)賓語從句;what引導(dǎo)表語從句)畢竟,沒有人能保證整形手術(shù)的結(jié)果正是患者期望的樣子。
實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練2
寫作指導(dǎo)
情節(jié)線 情感線
故事要素 Time in the first and second grades;one day in the third grade;in the following five months 害羞 膽怯 下定決心 充滿信心/緊張 緊張不安 冷靜 幸福
Place in Mrs. Sally’s office
Character Mrs. Sally and I
情節(jié) Period 1 在一年級和二年級時,作者非常害羞,在學(xué)校一年一度的盛大演出中,她通常會獨(dú)自坐在一個僻靜的角落里觀看演出。
Period 2 三年級的一天,作者喜愛和欽佩的Sally老師認(rèn)為作者很適合演一部劇中的Jenny這一角色,希望作者參加演出。作者猶豫過后決定甩掉害羞的面具,向全世界展示真正的自己。
Period 3 在接下來的五個月里,老師教作者化妝、記臺詞、制作戲裝等。漸漸地,她掌握了臺詞和歌曲。
續(xù)寫方向 Para. 1 The big day came at last. ①現(xiàn)場是什么樣的 ②作者上臺之前的心情是如何變化的
Para. 2 At that time, Mrs. Sally came backstage for her final check and noticed my nervousness. ①Sally老師注意到了作者的緊張,她是如何鼓勵作者的 ②作者能否成功地完成演出,感受如何
One possible version:
The big day came at last. I jogged all the way to the school hall. The stage was lit by bright spotlights in all directions. Looking back on five months of practice, I seemed to have confidence in myself. I found a new person inside me, a daring and outgoing person who had been hidden all along. However, when I was about to go on stage, my heart was pounding so hard that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
At that time,Mrs. Sally came backstage for her final check and noticed my nervousness. “It doesn’t matter how you do tonight,” she said. “You’ve already shown how wonderful you are.” Her warm words were like a ray of sunshine. I calmed down and then walked onto the stage. When I finished my performance, the audience burst into applause. The scene made me feel myself floating in an ocean of happiness. I knew that all this was due to the encouragement from my teacher, who helped me find the confidence to succeed.

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