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Section Ⅴ　 Writing
寫作項目——Write a description of someone you admire
本單元的寫作任務是“介紹你欽佩的人”，為人物介紹類文章，屬于記敘文的范疇，主要介紹人物的生平經歷、精神品格、典型事跡等。寫作時要抓住人物的典型事例和行為來刻畫人物特征，并把握好時間、地點、人物、事件等記敘文的要素。本類型的寫作旨在引導學生關注優秀人物及其對社會的貢獻，學習優秀人物的責任擔當、無私奉獻的品質以及堅韌不拔的意志，樹立正確的人生觀與價值觀。
|由教材學寫作|
一、學寫作架構
　閱讀課文，總結本課的篇章結構如下：
二、學寫作手法
人物介紹類寫作在介紹人物的主要事跡時一般會有明顯的時間線索，如本文第二至四段中以時間順序客觀陳述了愛因斯坦的人生關鍵經歷，閱讀時，應抓住這些表示時間的關鍵信息，如第二段中on 14 March 1879, When he was 16, in 1896 and graduating in 1900；第三段中After two years, in 1905, In 1922；第四段中 in 1933, After spending time in Europe, Following that等。通過這些時間線索，梳理人物的故事脈絡，進而了解愛因斯坦的重要經歷和突出成就，從而受到鼓舞，為科學探索而付出不懈的努力。
三、學亮點表達
人物介紹類寫作在描述人物的某些特點或成就時，作者可能會使用適當的情感詞匯，如使用形容詞、副詞等來表達對人物的尊重、欽佩或其他情感，增強描述的生動性和形象性。如課文中使用 the greatest scientist in modern physics，one of the smartest men，the most well known being ..., a courageous and kind figure, exceptional scores等詞匯形象地表達了愛因斯坦在近代物理學方面的影響力和地位以及人們對他愛戴的原因。
She is a _______________， _______________， ________________ and renowned person.Her ____________ qualities make her __________.People all adore her.
她是一個勇敢、善良、聰明、出名的人。她的優秀品質使她出名。人們都崇拜她。
四、學細節描寫
He had a thick moustache and long white hair, which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock.
賞析：句中黑體部分從胡子、頭發兩方面描寫了愛因斯坦的典型外貌特征。同時，句中還使用了as though引導的從句，且該從句使用了比喻修辭格。一個頭發豎直、可愛但又略顯古怪的愛因斯坦形象躍然紙上，令人印象深刻。
①There is still a heart of loving beauty ________________________.
她滄桑的面容下依然保持著一顆愛美的心。
②He was a kind old man with ____________， ____________， and _______________.
他是一位和藹善良的老人，長著灰白色的胡子，有一雙藍色的眼睛和小鳥都喜歡的聲音。
|寫作項目指導|
Write a description of someone you admire
——介紹一位你欽佩的人
第一步：構思謀篇
體裁 人物介紹類文章
時態 描寫人物的外貌、性格、愛好等常用一般現在時，而介紹人物的出生時間及地點、教育背景、工作經歷和主要事跡則常用一般過去時
人稱 以第三人稱為主
寫作要點 1.開頭：先總體描寫，即對該人物進行簡要介紹，如年齡、性別、出生地、職業、教育背景、外表、性格特點和特長愛好等。2.主體：詳細介紹人物的特點及事跡，重點突出人物的優秀品行，可以按照時間順序或在事件中的主次地位進行描述。3.結尾：對此人的評價或感想。
第二步：要點表達
第一部分：開頭引出人物
①The person I admire most is Qian Xuesen, ______________________ “the father of China's space program”．(用同位語)
我最敬佩的人是錢學森，一位被譽為“中國航天之父”的著名科學家。
②Of all the outstanding people, I admire Tu Youyou the most, ______________________ for her great achievements in curing malaria.(用定語從句)
在所有杰出的人中，我最欽佩的是屠呦呦，她是第一位因在治療瘧疾方面取得的巨大成就而獲得諾貝爾獎的中國科學家。
第二部分：介紹人物的生平及成就
1．介紹人物的生平
①________________________ on September 12th, 1980, he is one of the best basketball players in China.
他1980年9月12日出生于上海，是中國最好的籃球運動員之一。
②The scientist, who was born in 1930, __________________ swimming at an early age.
出生于1930年，這位科學家從小就對游泳感興趣。
2．介紹人物的主要經歷及貢獻
①________________ Beijing University in 1993, he worked as a teacher in Wuhan University.
他1993年畢業于北京大學，在武漢大學任教。
②He has ____________________ researching on rice.他把他的一生奉獻給了水稻研究。
第三部分：結尾表達人物的影響及評價
①________________________________， he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.(分詞短語作狀語)
他為我們樹立了一個偉大的榜樣，他是一個優秀的人，完全值得我們的欽佩和尊重。
②__________________________________ is his famous philosophy of life, _______________________.(主語從句，定語從句)
令我印象最深的是他著名的人生哲學，這激勵我做一個正直的人。
[針對練筆]
假定你是李華，你校英文校報正在征集關于我國明代醫學家李時珍的文章。請你寫一篇短文投稿。
根據括號內的漢語提示補全短文。
①__________________________________ (被稱為著名的醫藥學家) in the Ming Dynasty, Li Shizhen was born in 1518.He wrote a book called Ben Cao Gang Mu, ②____________________________________________________ (它是一本中草藥集) including about 2,000 Chinese herbs.③________________________ (為了完成這項工作), he visited mountains, ④________________________ (拜訪普通大眾), tasted different kinds of herbs and even did experiments by himself.It took him 27 years to finish the task, and his book ⑤_____________________________________________ (被認為是對中醫藥發展的巨大貢獻)．
|寫作素材儲備|
一、“人物介紹”類寫作佳句
1．介紹人物的出生日期、出生地、出身及外貌特征：
①He had fair hair and blue eyes.
②Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809.
③She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair.
④Sue was a young woman who was studying art.
⑤He is a good looking and kind hearted man.
2．介紹人物的事跡及成就
①During her career life, she obtained many championships, including four Olympic championships.
②When he was still a boy, he showed great interest in literature.
③His stories, most of which are short ones, give people surprising endings.
④He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers.
3．介紹人物的影響及人們對此人的評價：
①He became famous for his new theory.
②The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.
③We regard him as our role model.
④Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.
⑤Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.
二、人物描寫精彩語段
1．肖像描寫
When the young man on board saw this person approach, he left his station by the pilot, and, hat in hand, leaned against the ship's side. He was a fine, tall, slim young fellow of eighteen or twenty, with black eyes, and hair as dark as a raven's wing.His whole appearance showed his calmness and resolution.
甲板上的這個年輕人看到有人走近時，他從領航員身邊走開了，恭恭敬敬地，斜靠在船沿上。他是一個儀表堂堂、個子高高、身材瘦削的小伙子，年齡十八、二十歲的樣子，一雙黑色的眼睛，頭發烏黑。他整個外形表現出鎮定與剛毅。
2．神態描寫
Her eyes lit up when she walked into the room.A smile lit up her face.The smile spread across her face, which lit up her gloomy afternoon.
當她走進房間時，眼前一亮。她臉上露出了笑容。笑容在她臉上散開，這點亮了她陰郁的下午。
3．性格描寫
Axel Aleman, who is from Sheridan High School, is a friendly and generous person and he always cares more about others than himself.
Axel Aleman 來自 Sheridan 高中，他友好、慷慨。他總是關心別人勝過關心自己。
Section Ⅴ
由教材學寫作
三、courageous/brave; kind/kind hearted; intelligent；
good; well known
四、①under her wrinkled face
②gray beard; blue eyes; a voice that the birds loved
寫作項目指導
第一部分
①a famous scientist known as
②who is the first Chinese scientist awarded the Nobel Prize
第二部分
1．①Born in Shanghai　②had a passion for
2．①Graduating from　②devoted all his life to
第三部分
①Having set a great example to us　②What impresses me most; which inspires me to be a man of integrity
針對練筆
①Known as a famous medical scientist
②which is a collection of Chinese herbs
③In order to finish the task　④called on ordinary people
⑤is considered to be a great contribution to the development of Chinese medicine
5 / 5(共50張PPT)
Writing
Section Ⅴ
寫作項目——Write a description of someone you admire
課時跟蹤檢測
Contents 目錄
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寫作項目——Write a description
of someone you admire
本單元的寫作任務是“介紹你欽佩的人”，為人物介紹類文章，屬于記敘文的范疇，主要介紹人物的生平經歷、精神品格、典型事跡等。寫作時要抓住人物的典型事例和行為來刻畫人物特征，并把握好時間、地點、人物、事件等記敘文的要素。本類型的寫作旨在引導學生關注優秀人物及其對社會的貢獻，學習優秀人物的責任擔當、無私奉獻的品質以及堅韌不拔的意志，樹立正確的人生觀與價值觀。
|由教材學寫作|
一、學寫作架構
　閱讀課文，總結本課的篇章結構如下：
二、學寫作手法
人物介紹類寫作在介紹人物的主要事跡時一般會有明顯的時間線索，如本文第二至四段中以時間順序客觀陳述了愛因斯坦的人生關鍵經歷，閱讀時，應抓住這些表示時間的關鍵信息，如第二段中on 14 March 1879, When he was 16, in 1896 and graduating in 1900；第三段中After two years, in 1905, In 1922；第四段中 in 1933, After spending time in Europe, Following that等。通過這些時間線索，梳理人物的故事脈絡，進而了解愛因斯坦的重要經歷和突出成就，從而受到鼓舞，為科學探索而付出不懈的努力。
三、學亮點表達
人物介紹類寫作在描述人物的某些特點或成就時，作者可能會使用適當的情感詞匯，如使用形容詞、副詞等來表達對人物的尊重、欽佩或其他情感，增強描述的生動性和形象性。如課文中使用 the greatest scientist in modern physics，one of the smartest men，the most well-known being ..., a courageous and kind figure, exceptional scores等詞匯形象地表達了愛因斯坦在近代物理學方面的影響力和地位以及人們對他愛戴的原因。
仿寫訓練/完成句子
She is a ________________，__________________，__________，
and renowned person.Her ______ qualities make her___________.People
all adore her.
她是一個勇敢、善良、聰明、出名的人。她的優秀品質使她出名。人們
都崇拜她。
good
well known
courageous/brave
kind/kind-hearted
intelligent
四、學細節描寫
He had a thick moustache and long white hair, which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock.
賞析：句中黑體部分從胡子、頭發兩方面描寫了愛因斯坦的典型外貌特征。同時，句中還使用了as though引導的從句，且該從句使用了比喻修辭格。一個頭發豎直、可愛但又略顯古怪的愛因斯坦形象躍然紙上，令人印象深刻。
仿寫訓練/完成句子
①There is still a heart of loving beauty ______________________.
她滄桑的面容下依然保持著一顆愛美的心。
②He was a kind old man with_____________,_____________, and
_________________________.
他是一位和藹善良的老人，長著灰白色的胡子，有一雙藍色的眼睛和小鳥都喜歡的聲音。
under her wrinkled face
gray beard
blue eyes
a voice that the birds loved
|寫作項目指導|
Write a description of someone you admire
——介紹一位你欽佩的人
第一步：構思謀篇
體裁 人物介紹類文章
時態 描寫人物的外貌、性格、愛好等常用一般現在時，而介紹人物的出生時間及地點、教育背景、工作經歷和主要事跡則常用一般過去時
人稱 以第三人稱為主
寫作 要點 1.開頭：先總體描寫，即對該人物進行簡要介紹，如年齡、性別、出生地、職業、教育背景、外表、性格特點和特長愛好等。
2.主體：詳細介紹人物的特點及事跡，重點突出人物的優秀品行，可以按照時間順序或在事件中的主次地位進行描述。
3.結尾：對此人的評價或感想。
續表
第二步：要點表達
第一部分：開頭引出人物
①The person I admire most is Qian Xuesen, __________________________
“the father of China's space program”．(用同位語)
我最敬佩的人是錢學森，一位被譽為“中國航天之父”的著名科學家。
a famous scientist known as
②Of all the outstanding people, I admire Tu Youyou the most, ___________________________________________________ for her great achievements in curing malaria.(用定語從句)
在所有杰出的人中，我最欽佩的是屠呦呦，她是第一位因在治療瘧疾方面取得的巨大成就而獲得諾貝爾獎的中國科學家。
who is the first Chinese scientist awarded the Nobel Prize
第二部分：介紹人物的生平及成就
1．介紹人物的生平
①________________ on September 12th, 1980, he is one of the best basketball players in China.
他1980年9月12日出生于上海，是中國最好的籃球運動員之一。
②The scientist, who was born in 1930, ____________________
swimming at an early age.
出生于1930年，這位科學家從小就對游泳感興趣。
Born in Shanghai
had a passion for
2．介紹人物的主要經歷及貢獻
①________________ Beijing University in 1993, he worked as a teacher in Wuhan University.
他1993年畢業于北京大學，在武漢大學任教。
②He has ____________________ researching on rice.
他把他的一生奉獻給了水稻研究。
Graduating from
devoted all his life to
第三部分：結尾表達人物的影響及評價
①_____________________________, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect.(分詞短語作狀語)
他為我們樹立了一個偉大的榜樣，他是一個優秀的人，完全值得我們的欽佩和尊重。
②______________________ is his famous philosophy of life, ______
_______________________________.(主語從句，定語從句)
令我印象最深的是他著名的人生哲學，這激勵我做一個正直的人。
Having set a great example to us
What impresses me most
which
inspires me to be a man of integrity
[針對練筆]
假定你是李華，你校英文校報正在征集關于我國明代醫學家李時珍的文章。請你寫一篇短文投稿。
根據括號內的漢語提示補全短文。
①_________________________________ (被稱為著名的醫藥學家) in the Ming Dynasty, Li Shizhen was born in 1518.He wrote a book called Ben Cao Gang Mu, ②__________________________________ (它是一本中草藥集) including about 2,000 Chinese herbs.
Known as a famous medical scientist
which is a collection of Chinese herbs
③________________________ (為了完成這項工作), he visited mountains, ④________________________ (拜訪普通大眾), tasted different kinds of herbs and even did experiments by himself.It took him 27 years to finish the task, and his book ⑤____________________
__________________________________________________ (被認為是對中醫藥發展的巨大貢獻)．
In order to finish the task
called on ordinary people
is considered to be a
great contribution to the development of Chinese medicine
|寫作素材儲備|
一、“人物介紹”類寫作佳句
1．介紹人物的出生日期、出生地、出身及外貌特征：
①He had fair hair and blue eyes.
②Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809.
③She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair.
④Sue was a young woman who was studying art.
⑤He is a good-looking and kind-hearted man.
2．介紹人物的事跡及成就
①During her career life, she obtained many championships, including four Olympic championships.
②When he was still a boy, he showed great interest in literature.
③His stories, most of which are short ones, give people surprising endings.
④He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers.
3．介紹人物的影響及人們對此人的評價：
①He became famous for his new theory.
②The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader.
③We regard him as our role model.
④Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.
⑤Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.
二、人物描寫精彩語段
1．肖像描寫
When the young man on board saw this person approach, he left his station by the pilot, and, hat in hand, leaned against the ship's side. He was a fine, tall, slim young fellow of eighteen or twenty, with black eyes, and hair as dark as a raven's wing.His whole appearance showed his calmness and resolution.
甲板上的這個年輕人看到有人走近時，他從領航員身邊走開了，恭恭敬敬地，斜靠在船沿上。他是一個儀表堂堂、個子高高、身材瘦削的小伙子，年齡十八、二十歲的樣子，一雙黑色的眼睛，頭發烏黑。他整個外形表現出鎮定與剛毅。
2．神態描寫
Her eyes lit up when she walked into the room.A smile lit up her face.The smile spread across her face, which lit up her gloomy afternoon.
當她走進房間時，眼前一亮。她臉上露出了笑容。笑容在她臉上散開，這點亮了她陰郁的下午。
3．性格描寫
Axel Aleman, who is from Sheridan High School，is a friendly and generous person and he always cares more about others than himself.
Axel Aleman 來自 Sheridan 高中，他友好、慷慨。他總是關心別人勝過關心自己。
02
課時跟蹤檢測
一、寫作專項訓練
Ⅰ.完成句子(10分)
1．___________________________________________________, it must be Confucius, China's most famous educator, philosopher, and political theorist.
說到中國歷史上我最喜歡的人物，那一定是孔子，中國最著名的教育家、哲學家和政治理論家。
When it comes to my favourite figure in Chinese history
2．To help more people to get enough food, Yuan Longping ________
_________________________________________.
為了幫助更多的人獲得足夠的糧食，袁隆平致力于提高雜交水稻的產量。
3．More importantly, Yuan Longping was willing to share his achievement with others,__________________________________________.
更重要的是，袁隆平愿意與他人分享他的成就，這有助于消除世界饑餓。
devoted
himself to improving the output of hybrid rice
which contributes to ridding the world of hunger
4．___________________ makes him successful and his commitment has inspired me a lot.
正是他的奉獻精神使他取得了成功，他的奉獻精神激勵了我很多。
5．I sincerely hope that everyone can learn from the person you admire and ____________________________________________.
我真誠地希望每個人都能向你欽佩的人學習，從而為整個世界作出巨大的貢獻。
It is his devotion that
thus make great contributions to the whole world
Ⅱ.應用文寫作(15分)
請根據以下內容寫一篇文章介紹中國科學家錢學森。
1．1911年出生于上海，1935年赴美留學，成績優異；
2．1939年在美國獲航空、數學博士學位；
3．于1955年回到祖國；
4．為新中國的航天事業做出巨大的貢獻，被譽為“新中國航天之父”；
5．2009年于北京去世。
注意：寫作詞數應為80左右。
參考詞匯：航空航天科學技術aerospace science and technology；博士學位doctorate
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參考范文：
Qian Xuesen, regarded as the “Father of China's Space Program”， was born in 1911 in Shanghai.In 1935, Qian went to America for further study.In 1939, he obtained his doctorates in aerospace science and mathematics in the US.He succeeded in coming back to China in 1955.After that, he devoted himself to aerospace science and technology and contributed a lot to the cause of China's aerospace.In 2009, he passed away in Beijing.Because of the love for his country and the great achievements, he has received respect and admiration from home and abroad.
Ⅲ.讀后續寫(25分)
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
On Nov.18, 1995, Itzhak Perlman, the violinist, came to give a concert on stage at Avery Fisher Hall at Lincoln Center in New York City.
If you have ever been to a Perlman concert, you know that getting on stage is no small achievement for him.He was stricken with polio (小兒麻痹) as a child, so he has braces on both legs and walks with the aid of two crutches (腋杖)．To see him walk across the stage one step at a time, painfully and slowly, is an awesome sight.Then he sits down, slowly, puts his crutches on the floor, undoes the clasps on his legs, tucks one foot back and extends the other foot forward.Then he bends down and picks up the violin, puts it under his chin, nods to the conductor and proceeds to play.
By now, the audience is used to this practice.They remain silent while he undoes the clasps on his legs.They wait until he is ready to play.
But this time, something went wrong.Just as he finished the first few bars, one of the strings on his violin broke.You could hear it snap — it went off like gunfire across the room.
I here was no mistaking what that sound meant.
People who were there that night thought to themselves：“We figured that he would have to get up, put on the clasps again, pick up the crutches and limp his way off stage — to either find another violin or else find another string for this one.”
But he didn't.Instead, he waited a moment, closed his eyes and then signaled the conductor to begin again.The orchestra began, and he played from where he had left off.And he played with such passion and such power and such purity as they had never heard before.
Anyone knows it is impossible to play a symphonic work with just three strings.But that night, he was seen modulating, changing, and recomposing the piece in his head.He was detuning the strings to get new sounds they had never made before.
注意：1.續寫詞數應為150左右；
2．請按如下格式作答。
When he finished, there was an awesome silence in the room.
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He has prepared all his life to make music on a violin of four strings.
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參考范文：
When he finished, there was an awesome silence in the room. And then people rose and cheered.There was an extraordinary outburst of applause from every corner of the hall.We were all on our feet, screaming and cheering, doing everything we could to show how much we appreciated what he had done with just three strings on the stage.We were all astonished by his excellent skills and brilliant performances.
He has prepared all his life to make music on a violin of four strings. All of a sudden, in the middle of a concert he found himself with only three strings; so he made music with three strings.The music he made that night with just three strings was more beautiful, more sacred, more memorable, than any that he had ever made before, when he had four strings.Perhaps our task in this fast-changing world is to make music, at first with all that we have, and then, when that is no longer possible, to make music with what we have left.
二、閱讀拓展訓練
With fingers and wrists wrapped in medicated tape, Zhang Guimei, founder and principal of the first free high school for girls in China, was presented with the July 1 Medal on Tuesday.
Zhang met her husband in Dali and worked as a teacher in a local school.Unfortunately, her husband died of cancer not long after their marriage.Sadly, Zhang decided to leave this familiar place.Therefore, she volunteered to teach at a middle school in Huaping, a poverty-stricken county located in the mountains.
Over time, Zhang witnessed the gender gap in education in relatively poor rural areas.Urban and rural students already faced unequal access to quality education, and the traditional belief of male superiority worsened rural girls' situation.She discovered many girls were pulled out of class for many reasons just before the College Entrance Exam.
In 2002, Zhang came up with an idea to found a free high school for girls.In 2008, with help from the Party, the local government and personal donations, she founded the Huaping All-Girls High School.With the goal of never letting a girl fall behind in schooling, she often works overtime despite of illnesses.She has walked to almost every household deep in the mountains, talking to the parents about the importance of education for girls.
The efforts paid off.Over the past 13 years, her school has sent 1,800 girls to university.“A cultured, responsible mother won't let her daughter drop out of school，” Zhang said.
語篇解讀：本文是一篇記敘文。文章主要講述了全國第一所免費女子高中的創始人兼校長張桂梅的事跡。她致力于縮小貧困地區教育的性別差距，最終得到了回報。
1．What probably made Zhang Guimei decide to leave the local school in Dali
A．Her loss of husband.
B．Her desire for exploration.
C．Her love for teaching.
D．Her eagerness for adventure.
√
解析：細節理解題。根據第二段中“Unfortunately, her husband died of cancer not long after their marriage.Sadly, Zhang decided to leave this familiar place.”可知，失去丈夫讓張桂梅決定離開大理當地的那所學校。
2．What can we learn about the Huaping All-Girls High School
A．It was founded in 2002.
B．It accepts both boys and girls.
C．It was founded with the help of the local government alone.
D．It aimed to narrow down the gender inequality in education.
√
解析： 推理判斷題。根據第三段首句及第四段首句可知，華坪女高旨在縮小教育中的性別不平等。
3．Which of the following words can best describe Zhang Guimei
A．Determined.　　　　　　 B．Pessimistic.
C．Economical. D．Outspoken.
√
解析：推理判斷題。根據第四段前兩句及最后一句可知，張桂梅2002年提出建立華坪女高的想法，直到2008年才得以建成，她幾乎訪遍每家每戶，講述女孩接受教育的重要性，所以她是一個有決心的人。
4．What's the main idea of the text
A．A free high school for girls was successfully set up.
B．A woman with illnesses faces ups and downs in life.
C．The gender gap in education in rural China is bridged.
D．A woman's devotion to girls' education finally paid off.
√
解析：主旨大意題。根據全文內容，并結合最后一段內容可知，本文主要講述了全國第一所免費女子高中的創始人兼校長張桂梅的事跡，她致力于縮小貧困地區教育的的性別差距，最終得到了回報，故D項能夠總結本文大意。UNIT 1　課時檢測(五)　Writing
一、寫作專項訓練
Ⅰ.完成句子(10分)
1．________________________________________， it must be Confucius, China's most famous educator, philosopher, and political theorist.
說到中國歷史上我最喜歡的人物，那一定是孔子，中國最著名的教育家、哲學家和政治理論家。
2．To help more people to get enough food, Yuan Longping __________________________.
為了幫助更多的人獲得足夠的糧食，袁隆平致力于提高雜交水稻的產量。
3．More importantly, Yuan Longping was willing to share his achievement with others,
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________.
更重要的是，袁隆平愿意與他人分享他的成就，這有助于消除世界饑餓。
4．______________________ makes him successful and his commitment has inspired me a lot.
正是他的奉獻精神使他取得了成功，他的奉獻精神激勵了我很多。
5．I sincerely hope that everyone can learn from the person you admire and
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________.
我真誠地希望每個人都能向你欽佩的人學習，從而為整個世界作出巨大的貢獻。
Ⅱ.應用文寫作(15分)
請根據以下內容寫一篇文章介紹中國科學家錢學森。
1．1911年出生于上海，1935年赴美留學，成績優異；
2．1939年在美國獲航空、數學博士學位；
3．于1955年回到祖國；
4．為新中國的航天事業做出巨大的貢獻，被譽為“新中國航天之父”；
5．2009年于北京去世。
注意：寫作詞數應為80左右。
參考詞匯：航空航天科學技術aerospace science and technology；博士學位doctorate
Ⅲ.讀后續寫(25分)
閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。
On Nov.18, 1995, Itzhak Perlman, the violinist, came to give a concert on stage at Avery Fisher Hall at Lincoln Center in New York City.
If you have ever been to a Perlman concert, you know that getting on stage is no small achievement for him.He was stricken with polio (小兒麻痹) as a child, so he has braces on both legs and walks with the aid of two crutches (腋杖)．To see him walk across the stage one step at a time, painfully and slowly, is an awesome sight.Then he sits down, slowly, puts his crutches on the floor, undoes the clasps on his legs, tucks one foot back and extends the other foot forward.Then he bends down and picks up the violin, puts it under his chin, nods to the conductor and proceeds to play.
By now, the audience is used to this practice.They remain silent while he undoes the clasps on his legs.They wait until he is ready to play.
But this time, something went wrong.Just as he finished the first few bars, one of the strings on his violin broke.You could hear it snap — it went off like gunfire across the room.
I here was no mistaking what that sound meant.
People who were there that night thought to themselves：“We figured that he would have to get up, put on the clasps again, pick up the crutches and limp his way off stage — to either find another violin or else find another string for this one.”
But he didn't.Instead, he waited a moment, closed his eyes and then signaled the conductor to begin again.The orchestra began, and he played from where he had left off.And he played with such passion and such power and such purity as they had never heard before.
Anyone knows it is impossible to play a symphonic work with just three strings.But that night, he was seen modulating, changing, and recomposing the piece in his head.He was detuning the strings to get new sounds they had never made before.
注意：1.續寫詞數應為150左右；
2．請按如下格式作答。
When he finished, there was an awesome silence in the room.
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
He has prepared all his life to make music on a violin of four strings.
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
二、閱讀拓展訓練
With fingers and wrists wrapped in medicated tape, Zhang Guimei, founder and principal of the first free high school for girls in China, was presented with the July 1 Medal on Tuesday.
Zhang met her husband in Dali and worked as a teacher in a local school.Unfortunately, her husband died of cancer not long after their marriage.Sadly, Zhang decided to leave this familiar place.Therefore, she volunteered to teach at a middle school in Huaping, a poverty stricken county located in the mountains.
Over time, Zhang witnessed the gender gap in education in relatively poor rural areas.Urban and rural students already faced unequal access to quality education, and the traditional belief of male superiority worsened rural girls' situation.She discovered many girls were pulled out of class for many reasons just before the College Entrance Exam.
In 2002, Zhang came up with an idea to found a free high school for girls.In 2008, with help from the Party, the local government and personal donations, she founded the Huaping All Girls High School.With the goal of never letting a girl fall behind in schooling, she often works overtime despite of illnesses.She has walked to almost every household deep in the mountains, talking to the parents about the importance of education for girls.
The efforts paid off.Over the past 13 years, her school has sent 1,800 girls to university.“A cultured, responsible mother won't let her daughter drop out of school，” Zhang said.
1．What probably made Zhang Guimei decide to leave the local school in Dali？(　　)
A．Her loss of husband.
B．Her desire for exploration.
C．Her love for teaching.
D．Her eagerness for adventure.
2．What can we learn about the Huaping All Girls High School？(　　)
A．It was founded in 2002.
B．It accepts both boys and girls.
C．It was founded with the help of the local government alone.
D．It aimed to narrow down the gender inequality in education.
3．Which of the following words can best describe Zhang Guimei？(　　)
A．Determined.　　　 B．Pessimistic.
C．Economical. D．Outspoken.
4．What's the main idea of the text？(　　)
A．A free high school for girls was successfully set up.
B．A woman with illnesses faces ups and downs in life.
C．The gender gap in education in rural China is bridged.
D．A woman's devotion to girls' education finally paid off.
UNIT 1　課時檢測(五)
一、寫作專項訓練
Ⅰ.1.When it comes to my favourite figure in Chinese history
2．devoted himself to improving the output of hybrid rice
3．which contributes to ridding the world of hunger
4．It is his devotion that
5．thus make great contributions to the whole world
Ⅱ.應用文寫作(參考范文)
Qian Xuesen, regarded as the “Father of China's Space Program”， was born in 1911 in Shanghai.In 1935, Qian went to America for further study.In 1939, he obtained his doctorates in aerospace science and mathematics in the US.He succeeded in coming back to China in 1955.After that, he devoted himself to aerospace science and technology and contributed a lot to the cause of China's aerospace.In 2009, he passed away in Beijing.Because of the love for his country and the great achievements, he has received respect and admiration from home and abroad.
Ⅲ.讀后續寫(參考范文)
When he finished, there was an awesome silence in the room. And then people rose and cheered.There was an extraordinary outburst of applause from every corner of the hall.We were all on our feet, screaming and cheering, doing everything we could to show how much we appreciated what he had done with just three strings on the stage.We were all astonished by his excellent skills and brilliant performances.
He has prepared all his life to make music on a violin of four strings. All of a sudden, in the middle of a concert he found himself with only three strings; so he made music with three strings.The music he made that night with just three strings was more beautiful, more sacred, more memorable, than any that he had ever made before, when he had four strings.Perhaps our task in this fast changing world is to make music, at first with all that we have, and then, when that is no longer possible, to make music with what we have left.
二、閱讀拓展訓練
語篇解讀：本文是一篇記敘文。文章主要講述了全國第一所免費女子高中的創始人兼校長張桂梅的事跡。她致力于縮小貧困地區教育的性別差距，最終得到了回報。
1．選A　細節理解題。根據第二段中“Unfortunately, her husband died of cancer not long after their marriage.Sadly, Zhang decided to leave this familiar place.”可知，失去丈夫讓張桂梅決定離開大理當地的那所學校。
2. 選D　推理判斷題。根據第三段首句及第四段首句可知，華坪女高旨在縮小教育中的性別不平等。
3．選A　推理判斷題。根據第四段前兩句及最后一句可知，張桂梅2002年提出建立華坪女高的想法，直到2008年才得以建成，她幾乎訪遍每家每戶，講述女孩接受教育的重要性，所以她是一個有決心的人。
4．選D　主旨大意題。根據全文內容，并結合最后一段內容可知，本文主要講述了全國第一所免費女子高中的創始人兼校長張桂梅的事跡，她致力于縮小貧困地區教育的的性別差距，最終得到了回報，故D項能夠總結本文大意。
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