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Section Ⅴ
寫作項目——Write an introduction to a park
課時跟蹤檢測
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寫作項目——Write an introduction to a park
本單元的寫作任務(wù)是要求學(xué)生聯(lián)系自身經(jīng)歷，為自己喜歡的公園寫一篇短文。該文體屬于說明文，要求使用生動的語言對某一地點或某一環(huán)境進(jìn)行具體的描述。這種寫作形式旨在引導(dǎo)學(xué)生探究人與自然、人與社會的和諧發(fā)展
|由教材學(xué)寫作|
一、學(xué)寫作架構(gòu)
閱讀課文，總結(jié)本課的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)如下：
二、學(xué)邏輯表達(dá)
在介紹說明對象時，要遵循一定的順序才能將事物介紹得明白清楚。在寫作時，一定要構(gòu)思好先寫什么，再寫什么，從哪些角度進(jìn)行介紹。如本課文采取了“總—分”的敘述結(jié)構(gòu)，先從概要介紹入手，再分段敘述三個有代表性的主題公園，即迪士尼樂園、多莉山公園和珠海長隆海洋王國。這三個公園各具特色，都圍繞著“好玩，不僅僅是好玩”(fun and more than fun)這個主題，在用文字吸引讀者的同時，
啟發(fā)讀者對這些主題公園所含文化意義的更多思考：在迪士尼樂園“讓你兒時的夢想成真”(make your childhood dreams come true)；在多莉山公園“快樂體驗美國東南部的歷史文化”(have fun learning all about America's historical southeastern culture)；在長隆海洋王國“既能長知識又有樂趣”(both educational and fun)。統(tǒng)領(lǐng)在主題公園大主題下的三個小語段雖然具有相對獨立的內(nèi)容，但在語言敘述風(fēng)格上都簡練有力，筆調(diào)輕松，在結(jié)尾都用了呼吁人們前來游玩的句式，直接發(fā)出號召。這樣的敘述方式是在直接與讀者交流，更容易感染和打動讀者。
三、學(xué)寫作手法
此類寫作為了突出說明對象的特點，有時會采用疑問句引入主題，引發(fā)讀者強(qiáng)烈的閱讀興趣。如本文首段提供了一個描述“選擇”情境的行文模式： Which ... would you like to ... There are various kinds of ... with different ... for almost everything ... Some ... are famous for ..., others for ... Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible ... that will appeal to you!
作者先描述不同類型的主題公園及其特色，然后試圖說服讀者去參觀這些公園，最后用一句總結(jié)性的評價來吸引讀者。這種寫作手法旨在使讀者對所描述的主題公園產(chǎn)生興趣和期待。
仿寫訓(xùn)練/運用上面寫作手法翻譯下面語段
當(dāng)你餓了的時候你喜歡去哪家餐館？這條街上有各種各樣(飲食風(fēng)格)的餐館，可以滿足幾乎所有口味。有些餐館以美味的中餐而聞名，有些以西餐而聞名，也有些以其當(dāng)?shù)氐奶厣劽２还苣阆矚g哪一個，不管你喜歡什么，總會有一家很棒的、能夠吸引你的餐館！
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Which restaurant would you like to go when you feel hungry There are various kinds of restaurants on this street for almost every appetite. Some restaurants are famous for their tasty Chinese food, some for Western-style food, and others for their local specialities. Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible one that will appeal to you!
四、學(xué)亮點表達(dá)
文章使用了很多描述性詞匯，使說明對象的特點鮮明，給讀者留下深刻的印象。如文章在介紹迪士尼樂園活動的多樣化時，使用了“adorable, wander around, fantasy amusement park, see”等詞匯生動地描繪了迪士尼樂園中的各種場景和體驗，讓人們感受到這個游樂場的夢幻、冒險、歡樂和放松的氛圍。介紹多莉山主題公園時，使用了old-fashioned, rare, superb old wooden, longest, smallest等詞匯具體地描繪了多莉山主題公園的獨特性，將讀者帶入一個充滿歷史韻味和獨特體驗的場景中。
仿寫訓(xùn)練/完成句子
①___________________________________________________
_______________ are all the possible choices.
品嘗當(dāng)?shù)匦〕浴⑿蕾p自然美景或享受漂流都是可能的選擇。
②Its karst cave has a strange shape, and _____________________
_________ is among them.
它的溶洞形狀奇特，世界上最長的溶洞就在其中。
Tasting the local snacks, admiring the nature beauty or
enjoying the drift
the longest karst cave in
the world
體裁 地點介紹類說明文
時態(tài) 一般現(xiàn)在時
人稱 第三人稱
|寫作項目指導(dǎo)|
Write an introduction to a park ——寫一篇介紹公園的說明文
第一步：構(gòu)思謀篇
寫作要點 首段：概括介紹該景點的地理位置、歷史背景等方面的信息
中段：介紹該景點的特色尾段：介紹旅游景點的注意事項
續(xù)表
注意 事項 1.描寫事物或場所要抓住其主要特征，弄清楚從哪些方面進(jìn)行描述以更好地使其區(qū)別于其他的事物或場所
2.描寫要有順序：由上到下，由表及里，由遠(yuǎn)及近，由總體到局部，由主到次
3.表現(xiàn)手法要多種多樣，語言要生動，切忌平鋪直敘，要用最短的篇幅給讀者留下最深刻的印象
第二步：要點表達(dá)
第一部分：介紹地理位置等基本信息　
1．The West Lake ____________________________ the west of Hangzhou.
西湖位于杭州的西部。
2．____________________, Beijing is the political，economic and cultural center of the country.
作為中國的首都，北京是中國的政治、經(jīng)濟(jì)和文化中心。
is located in/lies in/is situated in
As the capital of China
第二部分：介紹主要特色或活動項目　
1．Wolong Nature Reserve _____________________ pandas.
臥龍自然保護(hù)區(qū)是熊貓的家園。
2．Beijing _________________ tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of interest.
北京有很多旅游景點，有許多世界聞名的名勝古跡。
is home to/is the home of
is rich/abundant in
第三部分：發(fā)出倡議或推薦　
1．_____________________, come to the theme park! You can appreciate the fascinating Jiangnan history and culture here.
如果你想玩得開心，那就來這個主題公園吧！在這兒你能欣賞江南迷人的歷史和文化。
2．Jiuzhaigou is a place you have to visit and the extraordinary view will_________________________.
九寨溝是一個你不得不去的地方，非同尋常的景色會讓你不愿意離開。
If you want to have fun
make you unwilling to leave
[針對練筆]
假定你是李華，請你向校英語報投稿，介紹青島方特主題公園。
根據(jù)提示完成短文，選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)木渥硬⒄J(rèn)真抄寫在文中空白處。
Qingdao Fangte Fantasy Kingdom is the fourth generation of theme park, which ①______________________________________________
__________.As a result, it creates a magical world.
shows the characteristics of the theme with
advanced
technology
The main park ②_____________________________________， such as amusement projects, leisure and landscape projects.For example, many big performances combined with a giant 3D screen ③________________________ to explore the secrets of life evolution.What's more, there are so many kinds of delicious food that ④_____________________________________.
⑤__________________________________________________________________！
Come to Qingdao Fangte Fantasy Kingdom to start your
dream journey
contains more than 200 theme projects
it will surely satisfy any particular taste
take visitors on a journey
|寫作素材儲備|
一、寫作常用句式
1．介紹公園的功能或特點
①The theme of the park is ...
②You will enjoy doing/seeing ...
③It is known/famous for ...
④It is home to ...
2．介紹公園的地理位置
①It is located/situated in the centre of ...
②It lies in (to) the south/east of ...
③On the top of ... stands ...
3．介紹公園的面積
①It has/covers an area of ...square kilometers.
② ... with an area of ... square kilometers.
4．介紹公園的歷史
①It has a long history of ... years.
② ... with a history of ...years.
③ ... has witnessed too much ...in history.
④ ... dates back to/dates from ...
5．介紹交通方式
①You can reach the building/museum by ...
②You can get there a little more quickly by ...
二、寫作優(yōu)美語段
1．自然環(huán)境描寫
It was the cool, gray dawn, and there was peace deep in the woods.Not a leaf stirred; not a sound disturbed great Nature's meditation.Dewdrops stood upon the leaves and grasses.A white layer of ashes covered the fire, and a thin blue breath of smoke rose straight into the air.
涼爽的、灰蒙蒙的黎明時分，樹林深處一片寧靜。葉子紋絲不動，沒有任何聲音打擾大自然的沉思。露珠還掛在樹葉和草上。火上覆蓋著一層白色的灰燼，一縷青煙直直地飄向空中。
2．公園景物描寫
The park was a picturesque scene with its colorful flowers, towering trees, and tranquil lake. The sun-dappled paths twisted and turned through the woods, inviting travelers to explore. Butterflies fluttered amongst the vibrant blossoms, while squirrels were jumping around the branches. The serene environment soothed all who entered, and the park was a symbol of natural beauty and harmony.
公園里姹紫嫣紅，樹木參天，湖水寧靜，景色如畫。陽光斑駁的小路蜿蜒曲折地穿過樹林，吸引著游客去探索。無數(shù)的蝴蝶在生機(jī)勃勃的花叢中飛舞，松鼠在樹枝間蹦蹦跳跳。寧靜的環(huán)境安撫了所有來客，公園是自然之美與和諧的象征。
02
課時跟蹤檢測
一、寫作專項訓(xùn)練
Ⅰ.完成語段(12分)
①_________________________________ (位于河南省東部), Kaifeng is known as one of the Seven Ancient Capitals of China. It is also an excellent tourist city of China. ②_____________________________ (最吸引人的地方之一) is the Qingming River Park，③____________________________________________ (它是一個大型的歷史和文化主題公園). The Daxiangguo Temple ④__________________________
___________________________ (因其神奇的傳說而聞名國內(nèi)外). Besides, there is one place ⑤ ______________ (你不能錯過)while visiting Kaifeng — the Kaifeng House. ⑥__________________________________ (憑借其有趣的歷史故事), it attracts millions of people there every year.
Located in the east of Henan Province
One of the most attractive places
which is a large historical and cultural theme
park
is famous both at home and
you can't miss
With its interesting historical stories
abroad for its magical legends
Ⅱ.應(yīng)用文寫作(15分)
假定你是李華，上周末你和父母一起去了你所在城市的兒童公園(the Children's Park)。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點寫一篇80詞左右的短文介紹該公園：
1．公園位于城市南部，占地500畝；
2．走進(jìn)公園，你可以看到不同種族的孩子們手牽手的雕像；
3．中間是一個湖，湖的周圍有各種各樣的樹和花；
4．少年宮在東面，那里有各種展覽，西面是兒童玩耍的地方，那里有許多娛樂設(shè)施。
參考范文：
I went to the Children's Park with my parents last weekend.The park is in the south of our city, covering an area of 500 mu.
Entering the park, you can see statues of children in different races, hand in hand.In the middle is a lake, around which there are all kinds of trees and flowers.The Children's Palace lies to the east, in which all kinds of exhibitions are on show.In the west is a place for children to play, where there are many entertainment facilities.
We had a very good time at the Children's Park.
Ⅲ.讀后續(xù)寫(25分)( )
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
Nature, while beautiful, could also be unpredictable and merciless. But most importantly we bear in mind that in the darkest times, there's always a light at the end of the tunnel, just like Mrs. Evans' cabin light.
One bright summer day, my friend Peter and I decided to venture into the unexplored trails of the Great Smoky Mountains. Blessed with rich biodiversity and fascinating landscapes, the national park seemed a perfect getaway. Little did we know that our casual hike would soon turn into an unexpected personal incident, forever engraved in our memories.
We set off early in the morning, equipped with our backpacks and a map that was supposed to guide us through the winding trails. The sun was up, casting long shadows on the forest floor as we set off on our journey. We trekked (艱難行走), laughed, and marveled at the beauty of nature around us.
As we trekked through the dense forests, taking in the natural wonders around us, we couldn't help but feel a sense of adventure flowing through our veins. The trail was rugged and uneven, but we persevered through the challenging landscape.
Midway through our expedition, we came across a breathtaking waterfall, its glistening waters pouring down the rocks in a quiet and peaceful melody. We sat down by the water's edge, taking a moment to get lost in the beauty of nature. The cool mist from the waterfall enveloped us, and we felt refreshed and energetic.
As the day wore on, we ventured deeper into the wilderness, eager to explore every corner of this natural paradise. We were so absorbed in the beauty of nature that we just didn't notice our way and it seemed that we could not find the way back to the familiar part of the forest. Panicking, we struggled to find our way back but the dense vegetation and winding trails only served to confuse us further. We tried to remember any possible signs that might lead us back. No sooner had we celebrated our return to the clear trails than something worse happened.
注意：1. 續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；
2．請按如下格式作答。
Suddenly, the weather took an abrupt turn._________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Just when we were about to give up, a faint light flashed in the distance._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
參考范文：
Suddenly, the weather took an abrupt turn. Dark clouds gathered in the sky, and a heavy downpour followed. The comforting forest sounds quickly proved a terrifying symphony of thunder and wind. The trail that was once so clear became a muddy mess, making it impossible to go on. We tried to consult our map, but it was too late; we got lost in the wilderness. Hours passing, our attempts to find the trail turned out to be in vain. With the cold creeping in, despair started to set in.
Just when we were about to give up, a faint light flashed in the distance. Curiosity overpowered our fear, and we decided to follow it. When we drew nearer, we saw a small log cabin, lights shining from its windows. Knocking on the door, an elderly woman welcomed us with a warm smile. We were told she was a retired ranger who had chosen to live her later years in the heart of the mountains. She offered us shelter for the night, and the next morning, guided us back to the main trail. This incident strengthened our friendship and taught us the importance of resilience and hope. The experience was beyond expectation, terrifying, but enlightening all the same.
二、閱讀拓展訓(xùn)練
Banff National Park is Canada's firstborn national park and was recognized in 1885.Located in the Rocky Mountains of Alberta，Banff includes 6,641 square kilometers of glaciers and ice fields，thick coniferous forest，and alpine (高山的) scenery.The Icefields Parkway spreads from Lake Louise，connecting to Jasper National Park in the north.Provincial forests and Yoho National Park are neighbors to the west while Kootenay National Park is situated to the south.The main commercial center of the park is the town of Banff, in the Bow River Valley.
The Canadian Pacific Railway was contributory in Banff's early years，building the Banff Springs Hotel and Chateau Lake Louise Hotel in the park and attracting tourists through widespread advertising.In the early 20th century，roads were built in Banff，at times by prisoners of World War Ⅰ，and through Great Depression-era public works projects.As Banff has over three million visitors annually，the health of its ecology has been endangered.In the mid-1990s, Parks Canada launched a two-year study to preserve ecological integrity.
Banff National Park has a subarctic climate(副極地氣候) with three ecoregions.The forests feature lodgepole pine at lower heights and Engelmann spruce at higher ones below the tree line, above which are chiefly rocks and ice.Mammal species such as the grizzly bear, cougar, wolverine, moose and bighorn sheep are found along with hundreds of bird species.Reptiles (爬行動物) are also found but only a restricted number of species have been recorded.
The mountains were formed from sedimentary rocks (沉積巖) which were pushed east over newer rock formations，between 80 and 55 million years ago.Over the previous few million years，glaciers have at times covered most of the park，but today are found only on the mountainsides though they include the Columbia Icefield, the largest continuous glacial mass in the Rockies.Erosion from water and ice has _______ the mountains into their existing shapes.
語篇解讀：本文是一篇說明文。文章從發(fā)展歷史、生物多樣性以及地質(zhì)風(fēng)貌等方面介紹了加拿大第一座國家公園——班夫國家公園。
molded
1．What can we infer about Banff National Park
A．It was built mainly by prisoners.
B．It is the oldest national park in Canada.
C．It is connected to three other provincial parks.
D．It failed to satisfy visitors' demand for commercial activities.
√
解析：細(xì)節(jié)理解題。根據(jù)第一段第一句可知，班夫國家公園是加拿大第一座國家公園，即它是加拿大最古老的國家公園。
2．What was a contribution of the Canadian Pacific Railway
A．Building roads in Banff.
B．Constructing hotels in Banff.
C．Preserving the ecology of Banff.
D．Providing multiple railway lines to Banff.
√
解析：細(xì)節(jié)理解題。根據(jù)第二段第一句可知，加拿大太平洋鐵路公司的貢獻(xiàn)是在班夫建設(shè)了兩家酒店。
3．What is paragraph 3 mainly about
A．The biodiversity of Banff.
B．People's limited knowledge of reptiles.
C．The complex climate system of Banff.
D．The mammals' severe living conditions.
√
解析：段落大意題。第三段提到班夫國家公園屬于副極地氣候，分為三個生態(tài)區(qū)，里面有各類植物、哺乳動物，還有數(shù)百種鳥類和爬行動物。由此可知，本段主要描述了班夫的生物多樣性。
4．What does the underlined word “molded” most probably mean
A．Stuck.　　　　　　 B．Broken.
C．Formed. 　 D．Followed.
√
解析：詞義猜測題。根據(jù)最后一段第一句話及畫線詞所在句中的Erosion可知，水和冰的侵蝕讓山形成了當(dāng)前的形狀。故畫線詞與form為同義詞。Section Ⅴ　Writing
寫作項目——Write an introduction to a park
本單元的寫作任務(wù)是要求學(xué)生聯(lián)系自身經(jīng)歷，為自己喜歡的公園寫一篇短文。該文體屬于說明文，要求使用生動的語言對某一地點或某一環(huán)境進(jìn)行具體的描述。這種寫作形式旨在引導(dǎo)學(xué)生探究人與自然、人與社會的和諧發(fā)展。
|由教材學(xué)寫作|
一、學(xué)寫作架構(gòu)
閱讀課文，總結(jié)本課的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)如下：
二、學(xué)邏輯表達(dá)
在介紹說明對象時，要遵循一定的順序才能將事物介紹得明白清楚。在寫作時，一定要構(gòu)思好先寫什么，再寫什么，從哪些角度進(jìn)行介紹。如本課文采取了“總—分”的敘述結(jié)構(gòu)，先從概要介紹入手，再分段敘述三個有代表性的主題公園，即迪士尼樂園、多莉山公園和珠海長隆海洋王國。這三個公園各具特色，都圍繞著“好玩，不僅僅是好玩”(fun and more than fun)這個主題，在用文字吸引讀者的同時，啟發(fā)讀者對這些主題公園所含文化意義的更多思考：在迪士尼樂園“讓你兒時的夢想成真”(make your childhood dreams come true)；在多莉山公園“快樂體驗美國東南部的歷史文化”(have fun learning all about America's historical southeastern culture)；在長隆海洋王國“既能長知識又有樂趣”(both educational and fun)。統(tǒng)領(lǐng)在主題公園大主題下的三個小語段雖然具有相對獨立的內(nèi)容，但在語言敘述風(fēng)格上都簡練有力，筆調(diào)輕松，在結(jié)尾都用了呼吁人們前來游玩的句式，直接發(fā)出號召。這樣的敘述方式是在直接與讀者交流，更容易感染和打動讀者。
三、學(xué)寫作手法
此類寫作為了突出說明對象的特點，有時會采用疑問句引入主題，引發(fā)讀者強(qiáng)烈的閱讀興趣。如本文首段提供了一個描述“選擇”情境的行文模式： Which ... would you like to ... There are various kinds of ...with different ...for almost everything ...Some ...are famous for ..., others for ...Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible ...that will appeal to you!
作者先描述不同類型的主題公園及其特色，然后試圖說服讀者去參觀這些公園，最后用一句總結(jié)性的評價來吸引讀者。這種寫作手法旨在使讀者對所描述的主題公園產(chǎn)生興趣和期待。
當(dāng)你餓了的時候你喜歡去哪家餐館？這條街上有各種各樣(飲食風(fēng)格)的餐館，可以滿足幾乎所有口味。有些餐館以美味的中餐而聞名，有些以西餐而聞名，也有些以其當(dāng)?shù)氐奶厣劽２还苣阆矚g哪一個，不管你喜歡什么，總會有一家很棒的、能夠吸引你的餐館！
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四、學(xué)亮點表達(dá)
文章使用了很多描述性詞匯，使說明對象的特點鮮明，給讀者留下深刻的印象。如文章在介紹迪士尼樂園活動的多樣化時，使用了“adorable, wander around, fantasy amusement park, see”等詞匯生動地描繪了迪士尼樂園中的各種場景和體驗，讓人們感受到這個游樂場的夢幻、冒險、歡樂和放松的氛圍。介紹多莉山主題公園時，使用了old fashioned, rare, superb old wooden, longest, smallest等詞匯具體地描繪了多莉山主題公園的獨特性，將讀者帶入一個充滿歷史韻味和獨特體驗的場景中。
①____________________________________________________ are all the possible choices.
品嘗當(dāng)?shù)匦〕浴⑿蕾p自然美景或享受漂流都是可能的選擇。
②Its karst cave has a strange shape, and __________________________________________ is among them.
它的溶洞形狀奇特，世界上最長的溶洞就在其中。
|寫作項目指導(dǎo)|
Write an introduction to a park
——寫一篇介紹公園的說明文
第一步：構(gòu)思謀篇
體裁 地點介紹類說明文
時態(tài) 一般現(xiàn)在時
人稱 第三人稱
寫作要點 首段：概括介紹該景點的地理位置、歷史背景等方面的信息中段：介紹該景點的特色尾段：介紹旅游景點的注意事項
注意事項 1.描寫事物或場所要抓住其主要特征，弄清楚從哪些方面進(jìn)行描述以更好地使其區(qū)別于其他的事物或場所2.描寫要有順序：由上到下，由表及里，由遠(yuǎn)及近，由總體到局部，由主到次3.表現(xiàn)手法要多種多樣，語言要生動，切忌平鋪直敘，要用最短的篇幅給讀者留下最深刻的印象
第二步：要點表達(dá)
第一部分：介紹地理位置等基本信息
1．The West Lake __________________________________ the west of Hangzhou.
西湖位于杭州的西部。
2．__________________________________， Beijing is the political，economic and cultural center of the country.
作為中國的首都，北京是中國的政治、經(jīng)濟(jì)和文化中心。
第二部分：介紹主要特色或活動項目
1．Wolong Nature Reserve __________________________________________ pandas.
臥龍自然保護(hù)區(qū)是熊貓的家園。
2．Beijing ________________________ tourist attractions and enjoys many world famous places of interest.
北京有很多旅游景點，有許多世界聞名的名勝古跡。
第三部分：發(fā)出倡議或推薦
1．________________________， come to the theme park! You can appreciate the fascinating Jiangnan history and culture here.
如果你想玩得開心，那就來這個主題公園吧！在這兒你能欣賞江南迷人的歷史和文化。
2．Jiuzhaigou is a place you have to visit and the extraordinary view will _________________.
九寨溝是一個你不得不去的地方，非同尋常的景色會讓你不愿意離開。
[針對練筆]
假定你是李華，請你向校英語報投稿，介紹青島方特主題公園。
根據(jù)提示完成短文，選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)木渥硬⒄J(rèn)真抄寫在文中空白處。
Qingdao Fangte Fantasy Kingdom is the fourth generation of theme park, which ①______________________________________.As a result, it creates a magical world.
The main park ②__________________________________________， such as amusement projects, leisure and landscape projects.For example, many big performances combined with a giant 3D screen ③__________________________________________ to explore the secrets of life evolution.What's more, there are so many kinds of delicious food that ④__________________.
⑤________________________________！
A．Come to Qingdao Fangte Fantasy Kingdom to start your dream journey
B．contains more than 200 theme projects
C．it will surely satisfy any particular taste
D．shows the characteristics of the theme with advanced technology
E．take visitors on a journey
|寫作素材儲備|
一、寫作常用句式
1．介紹公園的功能或特點
①The theme of the park is ...
②You will enjoy doing/seeing ...
③It is known/famous for ...
④It is home to ...
2．介紹公園的地理位置
①It is located/situated in the centre of ...
②It lies in (to) the south/east of ...
③On the top of ...stands ...
3．介紹公園的面積
①It has/covers an area of ...square kilometers.
②...with an area of ...square kilometers.
4．介紹公園的歷史
①It has a long history of ...years.
②... with a history of ...years.
③... has witnessed too much ...in history.
④ ... dates back to/dates from ...
5．介紹交通方式
①You can reach the building/museum by ...
②You can get there a little more quickly by ...
二、寫作優(yōu)美語段
1．自然環(huán)境描寫
It was the cool, gray dawn, and there was peace deep in the woods.Not a leaf stirred; not a sound disturbed great Nature's meditation.Dewdrops stood upon the leaves and grasses.A white layer of ashes covered the fire, and a thin blue breath of smoke rose straight into the air.
涼爽的、灰蒙蒙的黎明時分，樹林深處一片寧靜。葉子紋絲不動，沒有任何聲音打擾大自然的沉思。露珠還掛在樹葉和草上。火上覆蓋著一層白色的灰燼，一縷青煙直直地飄向空中。
2．公園景物描寫
The park was a picturesque scene with its colorful flowers, towering trees, and tranquil lake. The sun dappled paths twisted and turned through the woods, inviting travelers to explore. Butterflies fluttered amongst the vibrant blossoms, while squirrels were jumping around the branches. The serene environment soothed all who entered, and the park was a symbol of natural beauty and harmony.
公園里姹紫嫣紅，樹木參天，湖水寧靜，景色如畫。陽光斑駁的小路蜿蜒曲折地穿過樹林，吸引著游客去探索。無數(shù)的蝴蝶在生機(jī)勃勃的花叢中飛舞，松鼠在樹枝間蹦蹦跳跳。寧靜的環(huán)境安撫了所有來客，公園是自然之美與和諧的象征。
Section Ⅴ
由教材學(xué)寫作
三、Which restaurant would you like to go when you feel hungry There are various kinds of restaurants on this street for almost every appetite. Some restaurants are famous for their tasty Chinese food, some for Western style food, and others for their local specialities. Whichever and whatever you like, there is an incredible one that will appeal to you!
四、①Tasting the local snacks, admiring the nature beauty or enjoying the drift　②the longest karst cave in the world
寫作項目指導(dǎo)
第一部分
1．is located in/lies in/is situated in　2.As the capital of China
第二部分
1．is home to/is the home of　2.is rich/abundant in
第三部分
1．If you want to have fun　2.make you unwilling to leave
針對練筆
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一、寫作專項訓(xùn)練
Ⅰ.完成語段(12分)
①______________________________________ (位于河南省東部), Kaifeng is known as one of the Seven Ancient Capitals of China. It is also an excellent tourist city of China. ②__________________________________ (最吸引人的地方之一) is the Qingming River Park, ③____________________________________________ (它是一個大型的歷史和文化主題公園). The Daxiangguo Temple ④__________________________________________________(因其神奇的傳說而聞名國內(nèi)外). Besides, there is one place ⑤__________________________________ (你不能錯過)while visiting Kaifeng — the Kaifeng House. ⑥____________________(憑借其有趣的歷史故事), it attracts millions of people there every year.
Ⅱ.應(yīng)用文寫作(15分)
假定你是李華，上周末你和父母一起去了你所在城市的兒童公園(the Children's Park)。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容要點寫一篇80詞左右的短文介紹該公園：
1．公園位于城市南部，占地500畝；
2．走進(jìn)公園，你可以看到不同種族的孩子們手牽手的雕像；
3．中間是一個湖，湖的周圍有各種各樣的樹和花；
4．少年宮在東面，那里有各種展覽，西面是兒童玩耍的地方，那里有許多娛樂設(shè)施。
Ⅲ.讀后續(xù)寫(25分)
閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。
Nature, while beautiful, could also be unpredictable and merciless. But most importantly we bear in mind that in the darkest times, there's always a light at the end of the tunnel, just like Mrs. Evans' cabin light.
One bright summer day, my friend Peter and I decided to venture into the unexplored trails of the Great Smoky Mountains. Blessed with rich biodiversity and fascinating landscapes, the national park seemed a perfect getaway. Little did we know that our casual hike would soon turn into an unexpected personal incident, forever engraved in our memories.
We set off early in the morning, equipped with our backpacks and a map that was supposed to guide us through the winding trails. The sun was up, casting long shadows on the forest floor as we set off on our journey. We trekked (艱難行走), laughed, and marveled at the beauty of nature around us.
As we trekked through the dense forests, taking in the natural wonders around us, we couldn't help but feel a sense of adventure flowing through our veins. The trail was rugged and uneven, but we persevered through the challenging landscape.
Midway through our expedition, we came across a breathtaking waterfall, its glistening waters pouring down the rocks in a quiet and peaceful melody. We sat down by the water's edge, taking a moment to get lost in the beauty of nature. The cool mist from the waterfall enveloped us, and we felt refreshed and energetic.
As the day wore on, we ventured deeper into the wilderness, eager to explore every corner of this natural paradise. We were so absorbed in the beauty of nature that we just didn't notice our way and it seemed that we could not find the way back to the familiar part of the forest. Panicking, we struggled to find our way back but the dense vegetation and winding trails only served to confuse us further. We tried to remember any possible signs that might lead us back. No sooner had we celebrated our return to the clear trails than something worse happened.
注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；　2.請按如下格式作答。
Suddenly, the weather took an abrupt turn.
Just when we were about to give up, a faint light flashed in the distance.
二、閱讀拓展訓(xùn)練
Banff National Park is Canada's firstborn national park and was recognized in 1885.Located in the Rocky Mountains of Alberta，Banff includes 6,641 square kilometers of glaciers and ice fields，thick coniferous forest, and alpine (高山的) scenery.The Icefields Parkway spreads from Lake Louise，connecting to Jasper National Park in the north.Provincial forests and Yoho National Park are neighbors to the west while Kootenay National Park is situated to the south.The main commercial center of the park is the town of Banff, in the Bow River Valley.
The Canadian Pacific Railway was contributory in Banff's early years，building the Banff Springs Hotel and Chateau Lake Louise Hotel in the park and attracting tourists through widespread advertising.In the early 20th century，roads were built in Banff，at times by prisoners of World War Ⅰ，and through Great Depression era public works projects.As Banff has over three million visitors annually，the health of its ecology has been endangered.In the mid 1990s, Parks Canada launched a two year study to preserve ecological integrity.
Banff National Park has a subarctic climate(副極地氣候) with three ecoregions.The forests feature lodgepole pine at lower heights and Engelmann spruce at higher ones below the tree line, above which are chiefly rocks and ice.Mammal species such as the grizzly bear, cougar, wolverine, moose and bighorn sheep are found along with hundreds of bird species.Reptiles (爬行動物) are also found but only a restricted number of species have been recorded.
The mountains were formed from sedimentary rocks (沉積巖) which were pushed east over newer rock formations，between 80 and 55 million years ago.Over the previous few million years，glaciers have at times covered most of the park，but today are found only on the mountainsides though they include the Columbia Icefield, the largest continuous glacial mass in the Rockies.Erosion from water and ice has molded the mountains into their existing shapes.
1．What can we infer about Banff National Park？(　　)
A．It was built mainly by prisoners.
B．It is the oldest national park in Canada.
C．It is connected to three other provincial parks.
D．It failed to satisfy visitors' demand for commercial activities.
2．What was a contribution of the Canadian Pacific Railway？(　　)
A．Building roads in Banff.
B．Constructing hotels in Banff.
C．Preserving the ecology of Banff.
D．Providing multiple railway lines to Banff.
3．What is paragraph 3 mainly about？(　　)
A．The biodiversity of Banff.
B．People's limited knowledge of reptiles.
C．The complex climate system of Banff.
D．The mammals' severe living conditions.
4．What does the underlined word “molded” most probably mean？(　　)
A．Stuck.　　　 B．Broken.
C．Formed. D．Followed.
UNIT 3　課時檢測(五)
一、寫作專項訓(xùn)練
Ⅰ.①Located in the east of Henan Province
②One of the most attractive places
③which is a large historical and cultural theme park
④is famous both at home and abroad for its magical legends
⑤you can't miss　⑥With its interesting historical stories
Ⅱ.應(yīng)用文寫作(參考范文)
I went to the Children's Park with my parents last weekend.The park is in the south of our city, covering an area of 500 mu.
Entering the park, you can see statues of children in different races, hand in hand.In the middle is a lake, around which there are all kinds of trees and flowers.The Children's Palace lies to the east, in which all kinds of exhibitions are on show.In the west is a place for children to play, where there are many entertainment facilities.
We had a very good time at the Children's Park.
Ⅲ.讀后續(xù)寫(參考范文)
Suddenly, the weather took an abrupt turn. Dark clouds gathered in the sky, and a heavy downpour followed. The comforting forest sounds quickly proved a terrifying symphony of thunder and wind. The trail that was once so clear became a muddy mess, making it impossible to go on. We tried to consult our map, but it was too late; we got lost in the wilderness. Hours passing, our attempts to find the trail turned out to be in vain. With the cold creeping in, despair started to set in.
Just when we were about to give up, a faint light flashed in the distance. Curiosity overpowered our fear, and we decided to follow it. When we drew nearer, we saw a small log cabin, lights shining from its windows. Knocking on the door, an elderly woman welcomed us with a warm smile. We were told she was a retired ranger who had chosen to live her later years in the heart of the mountains. She offered us shelter for the night, and the next morning, guided us back to the main trail. This incident strengthened our friendship and taught us the importance of resilience and hope. The experience was beyond expectation, terrifying, but enlightening all the same.
二、閱讀拓展訓(xùn)練
語篇解讀：本文是一篇說明文。文章從發(fā)展歷史、生物多樣性以及地質(zhì)風(fēng)貌等方面介紹了加拿大第一座國家公園——班夫國家公園。
1．選B　細(xì)節(jié)理解題。根據(jù)第一段第一句可知，班夫國家公園是加拿大第一座國家公園，即它是加拿大最古老的國家公園。
2．選B　細(xì)節(jié)理解題。根據(jù)第二段第一句可知，加拿大太平洋鐵路公司的貢獻(xiàn)是在班夫建設(shè)了兩家酒店。
3．選A　段落大意題。第三段提到班夫國家公園屬于副極地氣候，分為三個生態(tài)區(qū)，里面有各類植物、哺乳動物，還有數(shù)百種鳥類和爬行動物。由此可知，本段主要描述了班夫的生物多樣性。
4．選C　詞義猜測題。根據(jù)最后一段第一句話及畫線詞所在句中的Erosion可知，水和冰的侵蝕讓山形成了當(dāng)前的形狀。故畫線詞與form為同義詞。
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