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2025新人教版八年級英語上冊全冊作文范文匯總
Unit 1 Happy Holiday
請根據下表提供的信息,以“My Winter Vacation”為題,用英語寫一篇介紹自己寒假經歷的短文。80詞左右。
時間 去年寒假
地點 北京
活動 參觀故宮博物院,爬長城,品嘗北京烤鴨
感受 學到很多歷史知識,玩得很開心
作文范文:
My Winter Vacation
Last winter vacation, I went to Beijing with my family. It was an amazing trip.
First, we visited the Palace Museum. The ancient buildings there were so beautiful that①I was deeply attracted by their long history. Then we climbed the Great Wall. Standing on it, I could see the beautiful scenery around. It was really a wonderful experience. Besides,② we also tasted the famous Beijing Roast Duck. It was so delicious!
I really had a great time during this winter vacation. I not only had fun but also learned a lot about Chinese history.③
①“so…that…”結構生動地描繪出故宮建筑的精美,增強了語言表現力;
②Besides使句子過渡自然,豐富了文章內容;
③結尾總結全面,體現了旅行的收獲。
這篇習作結構清晰,按照時間和活動順序,完整地講述了作者寒假在北京的經歷。文中運用了went to、visited、climbed、tasted等一般過去時的動詞(短語),準確體現時態。be attracted by、wonderful等詞語的運用提升了文章檔次,使描述更加生動形象。
Unit 2 Home Sweet Home
假如你是吉米,你的好朋友薩姆要搬進新居,他想向你咨詢關于臥室裝修的建議。請根據郵件內容和你所學的關于顏色的知識回復郵件,表達你的建議。
Hi, Jimmy,
You know my family will move into a new flat next spring. We’re decorating it now. I want to make my bedroom a comfortable place because I often feel tired and stressed after school. What colour should I paint the wall What can make me feel energetic Could you please offer me some advice
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Sam
作文范文:
Dear Sam,
I’m so glad that you will move into a new flat with your own bedroom.①
A bedroom should make you feel relaxed②, so I think it might be a good idea to paint the wall light blue. Blue can bring peace② to your mind and body③. As a middle school student, you always have much pressure and feel stressed easily. So blue is the best colour. As too much schoolwork makes you feel tired easily, you need energetic②colors in the bedroom.③You’d better put some green plants in your bedroom.You can also hang some pictures of nature②on the wall. It’s also a good idea to put some flowers by the window. They can make the room full of life②and make you feel energetic.
I hope my advice will be helpful and that you will enjoy your new life!④
Yours,
Jimmy
①文章開篇引出話題,薩姆搬到了一個有自己臥室的新住房,讓讀者迅速了解信件的核心內容。這種開門見山的方式使文章結構清晰,便于讀者跟隨作者的思路。
②文章使用了relaxed、peace、energetic、nature、full of life等詞語,生動地描述了臥室應具備的氛圍,同時也傳遞出一種積極的生活態度。
③文章運用了簡單句、復合句等多種句式,讀起來富有節奏感。
④結尾處的you will enjoy your new life表達了作者對薩姆的美好祝愿,使整封郵件充滿了溫暖和正能量。
作文結構清晰,情感真摯,從顏色選擇到自然裝飾均給出具體建議。語法規范,句式多樣,如As引出原因,建議部分通過“You’d better ...”和“You can also …”提供多樣的方案。全文銜接流暢,既展現 出對收信人生活狀態的理解,又給出具體可行的建議,語言簡潔實用。
Unit 3 Same or Different
假如你是李華,你的美國筆友Kelly想了解你和你最好的朋友的一些情況,請你根據下面的表格,給Kelly回一封電子郵件,告訴她你和你最好的朋友的相同和不同之處。
你和你最好的朋友的異同 外貌
性格
愛好
學習
要求:
靈活運用所學的形容詞、副詞的原級和比較級(至少6句);
詞數80左右,使用電子郵件的格式,開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
作文范文:
Dear Kelly,
How’s it going I’m writing to tell you something about my best friend and me.
Li Sisi is my best friend. She’s as tall as① me, but she’s thinner than I am. We both have long straight hair, but mine is longer than hers. We both like dancing, but I dance better than her. She’s more outgoing than I am.
That’s why she has more friends than me. She’s talented in language, so②she’s better at English than me. She often helps me with English.
A friend is easier lost than found. I will value our friendship.③
I hope we can be best friends too.
Yours,
Li Hua
①用“as…as…”結構來介紹兩人的相同點;
②連詞so表示因果關系,豐富了文章的句式;
③這兩句表達了作者對于交朋友的看法,表明了自己與好朋友之間的深厚情感。
這篇短文運用了“總分總”的“三段式”寫作結構,要點齊全,語言流暢,全面介紹了自己與好朋友的相關情況。文中的“as...as...”、than、both like、be talented in、be better at、“help sb. with”等結構是亮點。
Unit 4 Amazing Plants and Animals
假如你是一條藍鯨,請用第一人稱簡單對自己的體重、飲食和習性等進行介紹。
內容包括:
●體重約200噸
●喜歡吃海洋里的小動物
●是世界上最大、最重的動物
要求:
詞數不少于80;
文中至少使用一處最高級。
作文范文:
A Blue Whale
Hello, everyone!① My name is Belly, a blue whale. I am the largest and heaviest animal on earth.
I am heavy and I can weigh as much as②about 200 tons, but I love to swim for people to watch. They think it is one of the most beautiful things②for them.
I live in all oceans except the Arctic Ocean. My favourite food is some of the tiniest animals in the ocean. I can eat around four tons of these animals a day.
Besides③, I have a long life and I can live up to 90 years.
Do you love me, a lovely blue whale ④ Come to me!
①用“Hello, everyone!”營造出了一種親切感。
②“as…as…”、one of the most beautiful things等短語的使用使描述準確。
③Besides使文章邏輯清晰。
④結尾處的疑問句可以引起讀者興趣,使文章結構更加完整。
文章語義流暢,結構完整,邏輯清晰。最高級、Besides、“as...as...”的使用使文章亮點頻出。
Unit 5 What a Delicious Meal!
如今有很多“美食博主”在網絡上分享各種美食及做法。假如你最喜歡的一道菜是“檸檬鳳爪(Lemon Chicken Feet)”,你也想拍攝自己的美食vlog并發布在網絡上。請你根據以下提示,為你的視頻寫一份英語文案。80詞左右。
制作原料
chicken feet 2 lemons 3 chillies garlic
調味品
vinegar soy sauce sugar salt
制作步驟: 雞爪剪掉指甲(nails)后洗凈,煮大約15分鐘; 將辣椒、大蒜切碎,檸檬切片后放入碗中,并加入醋、醬油、糖和鹽; 雞爪放入碗中,和配料混合均勻,放入冰箱冷藏5~6小時后方可享用。
作文范文:
How to Cook Lemon Chicken Feet
Lemon Chicken Feet are my favourite food and today I’d like to share my way of making it with you!①
To cook this tasty dish,we need to prepare some chicken feet, 2 lemons, 3 chillies, some garlic and some seasonings, including vinegar, soy sauce, sugar and salt②. First③, cut off all the chicken nails and wash the chicken feet. Next③, cook them for about 15 minutes. Then③, cut up the chillies and garlic, and cut the lemons into thin pieces. After that③, put them all in a large bowl and add some seasonings. Finally③, put the chicken feet in the bowl and mix them well. Oh, there’s one more thing. Don’t forget to put the dish in the fridge.④ It’ll be ready in about 5 — 6 hours.
It’s very easy to make this dish. Do you want to give it a try ⑤
①開頭直入主題,點出喜歡的美食并表明要分享烹飪它的方法,簡潔明了。
②這個介詞短語對前文提到的seasonings進行補充說明,豐富了內容細節。
③在描述烹飪步驟時,運用了First、Next、Then、After that、Finally等連接詞語,將各個步驟清晰地串聯起來,使文章條理清晰。
④這兩句話以口語化的表達自然地補充了一個重要步驟,增加了文章的親切感。
⑤用簡單的話語總結并發起互動,引導讀者嘗試制作,使文章更具交流性。
這篇習作整體結構清晰,采用“總——分——總”的結構,先表明要分享烹飪方法,接著詳細闡述制作步驟,最后總結并互動。語法正確,句型結構簡單易懂,連接詞語運用恰當,很好地完成了介紹烹飪方法的任務,語言表達流暢自然,適合同學們學習和模仿。
Unit 6 Plan for Yourself
新學期來臨,你校英語社團發起了“Resolutions for the New Term”的交流活動。假設你是劉軍,請你根據下表中的信息提示,寫一篇發言稿。
Resolutions for the new term Ways to keep resolutions
get more exercise run every day
improve English keep a diary in English
… …
注意:
短文必須包括表中所有內容,可適當增加細節;
文中不得出現真實的姓名和校名等信息;
詞數70—90;
短文開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。
作文范文:
Resolutions for the New Term
Hello, everyone! I am Liu Jun. Here are my resolutions for the new term.
First, I want to get more exercise. I’m going to① run every day because it helps me stay healthy and energetic②. Second, I plan to① improve my English. I will keep a diary in English to practise writing. I think it’s a good way to learn new words and improve my grammar②. Finally, I hope to① read more books. I’m going to visit the library every weekend and finish at least one book each month.
I believe if I stick to these plans, I will have a great term!③
Thanks!
①使用I’m going to、I plan to、I hope to明確表達行動計劃,緊扣主題 ;
②適當增加細節(如stay healthy and energetic和learn new words and improve my grammar),使內容更豐富;
③結尾的“I believe if I stick to these plans, I will have a great term!”簡潔有力,總結全文并展現信心。
這篇習作運用了“總——分——總”的寫作結構,要點齊全,語言流暢,清晰地展示了新學期的目標 及實現計劃。分述部分層次分明,結合表格提示要點,并增加“閱讀更多書籍”這一要點內容,每個目標都包含具體行動,邏輯清晰,內容充實。在語言方面,文章靈活運用了be going to結構,準確表達未來的計劃,緊扣主題。
Unit 7 When Tomorrow Comes
假如你喜歡的英文雜志正在舉辦以“My Life in 20 Years”為題的征文活動,你對此非常感興趣。請寫一篇短文參加此次征文活動。
作文范文:
My Life in 20 Years
In 20 years, I think my life will be better and better and I’m always working hard for a bright future.①
I love my family, so I will take good care of my parents. I will spend more time staying with them because I’ll have more free time.②
Besides,③ my family, I will also get together with my friends more often. We will talk about the past school life and travel around together.
As for my job, I’m going to be a reporter. I think I will work much harder and take on more new challenges. ④ I will try my best to do every task well.
I think my life in 20 years will be exciting and wonderful. And I will work harder to make it come true.
①開篇點題,說明作者正為了未來努力。
②該句含有because引導的原因狀語從句,并運用了spend time doing sth.結構,豐富了文章的結構。
③使用Besides自然地引出了朋友的話題。
④該句含有省略that的賓語從句,work much harder及take on more new challenges展示了作者努力工作的態度。
這篇短文運用了“總——分——總”的寫作結構,要點齊全,語言流暢,詳細介紹了20年后的生活。because、spend more time doing sth.、Besides、come true等表明了作者靈活運用所學知識的能力,這些結構也是文中的亮點。
Unit 8 Let’s Communicate!
假設你是陽光中學的學生會主席李華,你們學校將舉辦一場關于“如何與孩子更好地溝通”的講座。請你以學生會的名義寫一封90詞左右的邀請函,邀請家長們參加。
內容包括:
講座時間、地點和主題;
講座內容簡介(如:如何避免爭吵、如何保持冷靜等);
表達對家長參與講座的期待。
參考詞匯:lecture; improve relationships; practical advice; misunderstandings
作文范文:
25th June 2025
Dear parents,
We are excited to invite you① to a special lecture on “How to Communicate Better with Your Children”. It will be held at our school hall on 26th June, 2025.①
The lecture will be given by Dr Zhang. He will share practical advice on how to stay calm, avoid arguments, and build stronger relationships with your children. You will also have the chance to ask questions face to face and get helpful answers.②
We believe③this lecture will help you understand your children better and reduce misunderstandings. Let’s work together to create a happier family environment!③
We look forward to seeing you there!④
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Student Union President
①以熱情的語氣開篇,直接點明講座的主題、時間和地點,簡潔明了。
②詳細介紹講座內容,突出實用性和互動性,吸引家長參與。
③通過We believe和Let’s work together等結構,增強說服力和號召力。
④以期待收尾,呼應開頭,體現禮貌和誠意。
本文采用“總——分——總”結構,層次清晰。內容緊扣題目要求,覆蓋communication、misunderstanding及face to face等核心詞語。語言簡潔流暢,句式靈活,符合邀請函的交際功能。全文無冗余信息,達到高分作文“要點全、邏輯順、語言準”的標準。
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