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2025-2026學(xué)年七年級(jí)英語(yǔ)上冊(cè)單元復(fù)習(xí)考點(diǎn)培優(yōu)譯林版（2024）Unit 3 Welcome to our school!
專(zhuān)題15 書(shū)面表達(dá)
學(xué)校:___________姓名：___________班級(jí)：___________考號(hào)：___________
1．假如你是李梅，你的英國(guó)網(wǎng)友Mary給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件詢問(wèn)你們教室的情況，請(qǐng)你仔細(xì)閱讀并用英語(yǔ)給她回郵件。
Li Mei, How’s it going I need to give a report about the classrooms in the world next week. Can you tell me something about your classroom I’m looking forward to your reply (回信). Thank you so much. Yours, Mary
提示問(wèn)題：
1．What do you have in the front of the classroom
2．What do you have in the middle of the classroom
3．What do you have at the back of the classroom
4．What do you often do in your classroom
5．What do you think of your classroom
參考詞匯：
blackboard, smart whiteboard, desk, chair, notice, study hard, clean…
要求：
1．請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示問(wèn)題，選擇使用參考詞匯完成郵件，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2．語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書(shū)寫(xiě)工整；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4．詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）
Dear Mary,
I’m writing to tell you something about our classroom.
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Yours,
Li Mei
2．某英文周刊正在組織以“My Middle School Life”為題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，談?wù)勀愕闹袑W(xué)生活吧！
內(nèi)容提示：
How is your daily routine like
What is your favourite subject
Which club are you in
Something more about your middle school life.
注意：文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)信息；詞數(shù)80詞左右；標(biāo)題已給出；不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
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3．假如你是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的李華，最近你參加了一個(gè)國(guó)際友好交流活動(dòng)。現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封郵件向你的英國(guó)新朋友 Linda 介紹你的學(xué)校生活。
1.文中不能出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
2.內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，全文連貫通順，省略號(hào)部分可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3.詞數(shù)60詞左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已在答題卡上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Linda,
I am Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School.
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What’s your school life like Hope to hear from you soon!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
4．某英文周刊正在組織以“My Middle School Life”為題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，談?wù)勀愕闹袑W(xué)生活吧！
內(nèi)容提示：
How is your daily routine like
What is your favourite subject
Which club are you in
Something more about your middle school life.
注意：文中不得透露個(gè)人真實(shí)信息；詞數(shù)80詞左右；標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已給出；不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
My Middle School Life
Hello, everyone. I’d like to share my middle school life with you.
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5．假定你是李華，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)報(bào)正以“I Love My School”為題征稿。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖示寫(xiě)一篇短文向校英語(yǔ)報(bào)投稿。
要求：
1. 文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
2. 詞數(shù)：60左右。
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6．同學(xué)們進(jìn)入初中已經(jīng)一個(gè)學(xué)期了， 對(duì)學(xué)校也有了一些了解。請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹你的學(xué)校。詞數(shù)70詞左右。文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名等相關(guān)信息。
內(nèi)容包括：
1. 你最喜歡去的一個(gè)地方， 介紹它在學(xué)校的具體位置和喜歡的原因；
2. 你最喜歡的一個(gè)俱樂(lè)部及喜歡的原因；
3. 你對(duì)老師和同學(xué)的印象。
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7．最近學(xué)校在評(píng)選“學(xué)生最喜愛(ài)的老師”。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你以My Favourite teacher為題介紹一下你最喜歡的老師。內(nèi)容包括他/她帶什么課？周幾有他/她的課？以及你喜歡他/她的原因。
要求：
1.結(jié)構(gòu)完整，內(nèi)容豐富，語(yǔ)法時(shí)態(tài)正確；
2.字?jǐn)?shù)在80—100字，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。
內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：
1. Who is your favorite teacher What subject does he/ she teach
2. When do you have his/ her class
3. Why is he/ she your favorite teacher
參考詞匯: helpful, care about sb, friendly, interesting, vivid(生動(dòng)的), warmhearted(熱心的).
My Favourite teacher
There is a selection activity in our school. It is “who is your favourite teacher”. I like many teachers. If I can choose only one, that is
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8．根據(jù)要求完成大作文，并將答案寫(xiě)在答題卡 (紙) 的相應(yīng)位置。
學(xué)校是我們生活學(xué)習(xí)的主要場(chǎng)所。假如你是Peter，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給你的朋友Flora寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，介紹你的學(xué)校及學(xué)校生活。
內(nèi)容包括：
1. What’s your school like
2. What’s your favorite place in your school Why
3. How about your school life
4. How do you like your school and your school life
注意：
1. 文中要包含所給的提示信息，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)；
2. 詞數(shù)70～80詞，所給的詞不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3. 要求字跡工整，語(yǔ)句通順，條理清晰；
4. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校，班級(jí)和姓名。
Dear Flora,
Thanks for your email. I’d like to tell you something about
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Yours,
Peter
9．學(xué)校是我們成長(zhǎng)的搖籃，學(xué)生們都愛(ài)自己的學(xué)校。請(qǐng)以“Being proud of our school”為題，根據(jù)下面表格中的信息介紹自己學(xué)校的情況。
Being proud of our school
What does your school look like the environment (環(huán)境)… buildings...
What activities do you have at school clubs make... colourful
What about the teachers and students knowledgeable learn... from... friendly work hard help...
What about the school safety rules give at least (至少) two rules
要求：1.不得使用真實(shí)的人名和校名。2.包含以上所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容完整，行文連貫。3.字跡工整，語(yǔ)言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，條理清楚。4.詞數(shù)不少于80，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Being proud of our school
Schools are the cradles of our growth. We are proud of our school.
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10．假設(shè)你是桑迪，請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封電子郵件給你的筆友溫迪，向她介紹你的學(xué)校生活。
學(xué)校環(huán)境 不大，但非常美麗
班級(jí)數(shù)量 30個(gè)
所在班級(jí) 七年級(jí)（2）班
朋友 很多，一起上課
科目 語(yǔ)文、英語(yǔ)……，最?lèi)?ài)……
愛(ài)好特長(zhǎng) 會(huì)畫(huà)畫(huà)，愛(ài)打排球……
空閑時(shí)間的安排 去閱覽室……
個(gè)人感想 學(xué)校生活非常有趣……
要求：
1.表達(dá)中必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。
2.詞數(shù)80左右，已給出部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Wendy,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
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All the best,
Sandy
11．假設(shè)你是學(xué)校English Club新錄取的成員滕飛 (TengFei)，下周你將在社團(tuán)迎新見(jiàn)面會(huì)上用英語(yǔ)作自我介紹。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿。
要求：1. 內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括表格內(nèi)所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2. 詞數(shù)60左右，首句和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名等個(gè)人信息。
English Name Peter
Age 13
Class Class 2, Grade 7
English Teacher Miss Liu
Favorite Color Red
Hobby Reading books
Hello, everyone! I am TengFei,
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Thank you for listening!
12．假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給你在英國(guó)的筆友Daniel寫(xiě)一封信，介紹你的學(xué)校和校園生活等情況。
提示：
1. What’s in your school
2. What’s your school life like
3. What do you think of your school and school life
4....
注意事項(xiàng)：
1.詞數(shù)80左右（文章開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；
3.根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)作，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Dear Daniel,
I want to tell you something about my school and my school life.
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Yours,
Li Hua
13．你叫韓風(fēng)，每周六是你們一家人的家庭溝通日。你已經(jīng)進(jìn)入初中2個(gè)多月了，所以今天是以“初中生活”為主題的溝通日。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下對(duì)話的內(nèi)容，以短文形式描述一下你的初中生話。
Dad: Han Feng, how do you like your school
Han Feng: Dad, it’s very beautiful.
Mum: Do you make new friends
Han Feng: Yes, mum. And they are so nice. We often help each other.
Mum: How about your teachers
Han Feng: They are also nice to me.
Dad: What do you like to do in your school
Han Feng: …
要求：
1. 包含對(duì)話中的所有要點(diǎn)，至少添加一項(xiàng)自己的內(nèi)容；
2. 字跡工整，卷面內(nèi)容流暢；
3. 開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
4. 不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和真實(shí)信息；
5. 字?jǐn)?shù)不少于60字。
My name is Han Feng. My family has a Communication Day every Saturday. Today is Saturday. I tell my parents a lot of things about my junior high school life.
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14．假如你是李華，David Brown是你新交的一個(gè)美國(guó)筆友。請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)一封電子郵件向他介紹你的家人和學(xué)校。
你的家人和朋友 你的學(xué)校
1. 爸爸很帥氣，最喜歡每周打籃球 2. 媽媽漂亮友善，她總是給我們?cè)谕砩献x故事 3. 妹妹聰明且安靜 4. 我的朋友…… 1. 有很多現(xiàn)代化大樓 2. 教學(xué)樓對(duì)面是操場(chǎng)，我們每天在那里做運(yùn)動(dòng) 3. 學(xué)生中心在圖書(shū)館的前面 4. 教室很大，前面有智能白板，后面有黑板 5.你對(duì)學(xué)校生活的感受……
要求：
1. 內(nèi)容要包括所有提示，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
智能白板 smart whiteboard 黑板 blackboard 學(xué)生中心 Student Centre
2. 不少于60詞 (開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)) 。
3. 文中不要出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)人名或校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。
Dear David,
I’m so happy that we can be friends. Now let me introduce (介紹) my family and school to you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
15．假如你是李明，近期你校舉辦了“最美教師”大賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)要求及提示，以“My Favourite Teacher”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文來(lái)介紹你最敬愛(ài)的老師。
要求：（1）短文必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
（3）詞數(shù)60左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。
My Favourite Teacher
Mr. Wang is my favourite teacher in school.
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16．假如你是李華，以“My school life”為題，介紹你的學(xué)校生活，要點(diǎn)如下：
基本情況 來(lái)自北京，13歲，在淮安上學(xué)。
學(xué)校生活 1.學(xué)校又大又現(xiàn)代。 2.周一至周五上課，住得離學(xué)校近，步行上學(xué)。 3.老師……，同學(xué)……，課程……
空余時(shí)間 1.經(jīng)常閱讀，了解世界。 2.愛(ài)好運(yùn)動(dòng)，周末與同學(xué)們練習(xí)打網(wǎng)球。 3.……
理想 ……
要求：（1）語(yǔ)言通順，條理清晰，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；
（2）要點(diǎn)完整，省略號(hào)部分可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
（3）80詞左右。開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
（4）文中不得提及真實(shí)校名、人名等信息。
My school life
Dear everyone,
I’m glad to be here and tell you something about my school life in Huai’an.
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I enjoy my colorful school life in Huai’an very much.
17．假如你是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你收到美國(guó)筆友 Stephen 發(fā)來(lái)的電子郵件，請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)給他寫(xiě)一封回信。
要求：
1.包含全部要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2.詞數(shù) 70 詞左右；
3.文中不得提及真實(shí)校名、人名等信息。
Dear Li Hua, I’m glad to know that you are a new student at Sunshine Middle School. I want to know about your school life. What’s your school like What about your teachers and classmates Can you tell me something about your best friend What do you usually do in your free time Write to me soon. Yours, Stephen
Dear Stephen,
Thank you for your letter.
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Best wishes
Li Hua
18．學(xué)校是我們學(xué)習(xí)的天地，也是我們成長(zhǎng)的樂(lè)園。我們每天在校園里學(xué)習(xí)和生活。請(qǐng)你以“My school”為題，并根據(jù)下面的表格內(nèi)容用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文介紹一下自己的學(xué)校。
學(xué)校 大、漂亮、干凈
學(xué) 校 的 建 筑 物 及 位置 兩座教學(xué)樓，一個(gè)圖書(shū)館，一個(gè)運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)，一個(gè)體育館，一個(gè)學(xué)校大廳，一個(gè)音樂(lè)廳，一座科學(xué)樓，一座藝術(shù)大樓，一個(gè)食堂…… 圖書(shū)館在體育館的后面，食堂在科學(xué)樓的前面，藝術(shù)大樓在運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)的旁邊……
老師和同學(xué) 善良友好、互相幫助
注意：
(1) 短文須包含表格中的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
(2) 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名；
(3) 詞數(shù)60個(gè)左右。
My school
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19．假如你是我校七年級(jí)1班的李華，被選為我校七年級(jí)學(xué)生代表，接待來(lái)自英國(guó)賽德伯學(xué)校交流師生的來(lái)訪。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格中的內(nèi)容提示，用英文向他們介紹你自己和你的學(xué)校生活。
自我介紹 來(lái)自七(1)班，愛(ài)好（舉一例并說(shuō)明理由）
學(xué)校介紹 有30個(gè)班。又大又漂亮。（自主發(fā)揮一點(diǎn)）
老師和同學(xué) 各自主發(fā)揮一點(diǎn)
學(xué)校活動(dòng) ……舉一例
你的感受 ……
要求：1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
2. 語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
3. 詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Hello, everyone.
Welcome to our school. My name is Li Hua.
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20．你徜徉在溫暖如家的初中校園已有兩個(gè)多月的時(shí)間，近期，你校將舉辦一場(chǎng)以“My School, My Home”為主題的演講比賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下流程圖和提示寫(xiě)一篇英文演講稿參賽。
注意事項(xiàng)：
1. 演講稿內(nèi)容根據(jù)流程圖自擬，要求語(yǔ)句通順、意思連貫、符合題意；
2. 詞數(shù)80左右，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3. 演講稿中不得使用真實(shí)的個(gè)人及學(xué)校信息。
My School, My Home
Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to stand here and give you a short talk. Today my topic is “My school, my home”.
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That’s all. Thanks for listening!
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參考答案及試題解析
1．Dear Mary,
I’m writing to tell you something about our classroom.
Our classroom is a lively space. In the front of the classroom, we have a blackboard and a smart white board for teaching. In the middle of the classroom, we have desks and chairs which are arranged for us to study. At the back of the classroom, we have a notice board to keep us updated. We often study hard in our classroom. I think our classroom is clean and tidy.
I hope this information is helpful for your report. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行書(shū)面表達(dá)，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。應(yīng)能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，引出話題；
第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。具體介紹教室的情況以及對(duì)教室的評(píng)價(jià)。
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)自己的收獲和感悟。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①in the front of在……的前部
②be helpful for對(duì)……有幫助
③study hard努力學(xué)習(xí)
④look forward to期待……
[高分句型]
①I(mǎi)n the middle of the classroom, we have desks and chairs which are arranged for us to study. (定語(yǔ)從句)
②I think our classroom is clean and tidy. (賓語(yǔ)從句)
2．例文
My Middle School Life
Hello, everyone. I’d like to share my middle school life with you.
I usually get up at 6:30 and have breakfast at seven. I have eight lessons from 8 a.m. to 5 p.m. After school, I often do my homework and exercise. As for my favourite subject, English always comes first because I’m interested in it. And I’m in the English club because I can make new friends with the same hobby. Besides, there are many activities in my school, such as the reading corner and the sports meeting.
All in all, my school life is busy but interesting.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)介紹自己的中學(xué)生活，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意行為連貫，表述完整。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，引出主題，表達(dá)介紹自己的中學(xué)生活；
第二步，從日常作息、最喜歡的科目、加入的俱樂(lè)部等方面具體介紹自己的中學(xué)生活；
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，進(jìn)行總結(jié)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①share sth with sb和某人分享某物
②get up起床
③be interested in對(duì)……感興趣
④such as例如
[高分句型]
①As for my favourite subject, English always comes first because I’m interested in it. (because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句)
②Besides, there are many activities in my school, such as the reading corner and the sports meeting. (there be句型)
3．參考范文：
Dear Linda,
I am Li Hua from Sunshine Middle School. I am happy to share my school life with you. Our school is big and clean, with modern buildings and clean roads. The teachers are kind and really care about our study and daily life. My classmates are friendly and always ready to help each other. In my free time, I enjoy reading and playing football.
What’s your school life like Hope to hear from you soon.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇電子郵件
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③ 提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫(xiě)作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題，不要犯語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語(yǔ)意連貫。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，介紹學(xué)校信息；
第二步，介紹老師和同學(xué)的情況；
第三步，介紹自己的愛(ài)好。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① share sth with sb和某人分享某事
② care about關(guān)心
③ help each other互相幫助
[高分句型]
The teachers are kind and really care about our study and daily life. （and并列句）
4．例文
My Middle School Life
Hello, everyone. I’d like to share my middle school life with you.
I usually get up at 6:30 and have breakfast at seven. I have eight lessons from 8 a.m. to 5 p.m. After school, I often do my homework and exercise. As for my favourite subject, English always comes first because I’m interested in it. And I’m in the English club because I can make new friends with the same hobby. Besides, there are many activities in my school, such as the reading corner and the sports meeting.
All in all, my school life is busy but interesting.
【解析】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③ 提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山提出將分享自己的中學(xué)生活；
第二步，從日常生活、最喜歡的學(xué)科、加入的俱樂(lè)部等方面具體介紹；
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，表達(dá)自己的感受。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①as for至于
②be interested in對(duì)……感興趣
③all in all總而言之
[高分句型]
①And I’m in the English club because I can make new friends with the same hobby.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句)
5．One possible version：
I Love My School
I’m Li Hua from Class 1 Grade 7. I’m 12. My birthday is on January 10th. My favorite school place is the sports field. It’s behind the classroom building. I can exercise there. It’s relaxing. My favorite subject is maths. Because it’s interesting and I’m good with numbers. And my math teacher, Mr. Hu is great fun. I join the book club this term. Because I like reading and making friends. We can share many good books there. I love my school.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，介紹自己的基本信息。
第二步，介紹最喜歡的地方、科目參加的俱樂(lè)部等。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①be good with擅長(zhǎng)和……打交道
②like reading喜歡閱讀
③make friends交朋友
[高分句型]
①I(mǎi)t’s behind the classroom building. (介詞短語(yǔ)作表語(yǔ))
②Because it’s interesting and I’m good with numbers. (and連接的并列句)
6．例文；
After one semester in middle school, I’ve got to know our school quite well. There’s a place I really like, which is the library. It’s on the second floor of the school building. I love it because it has lots of books, and I can read different kinds of stories there. My favorite club is the Science Club. We do experiments and learn about new things every week. It’s so exciting to see how things work and discover new ideas. My teachers are kind and patient. They always help me when I have questions. My classmates are friendly and fun. We play and study together. I really enjoy being part of this school community.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；
③提示：注意不要遺漏寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，首先介紹自己最喜歡去的一個(gè)地方，并說(shuō)明它在學(xué)校的具體位置和喜歡的原因。
第二步，介紹最喜歡的俱樂(lè)部及喜歡的原因。
第三步，介紹對(duì)老師和同學(xué)的印象并書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，表達(dá)對(duì)學(xué)校生活的感受。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①get to know認(rèn)識(shí)，了解
②lots of許多
③different kinds of不同種類(lèi)的……
[高分句型]
①I(mǎi) love it because it has lots of books, and I can read different kinds of stories there.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）
②They always help me when I have questions.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）
7．例文：
My Favourite teacher There is a selection activity in our school. It is “who is your favourite teacher”. I like many teachers. If I can choose only one, that is Miss Wang. She is my favorite teacher. She is my English teacher. She is a young and beautiful girl with a pair of glasses. I have her class every Wednesday and Friday. I like her because she helped me learn English. In the past, I had a lot of difficulties in listening and speaking. I talked to Miss Wang and she gave me some suggestions. For listening, she told me to catch some key words. For speaking, she asked me to use simple words and sentences. With her help, I improved a lot.
I think Miss Wang is very kind and helpful. I like her best. What about your favourite teacher
【解析】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③ 提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“提示信息”中“我最喜歡的老師是誰(shuí)，他/她的課的上課時(shí)間以及喜歡的原因”，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖；
第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。從“王老師是我最喜歡的老師，她所教的科目，上課時(shí)間，喜歡她的原因”重點(diǎn)介紹我最喜歡的老師的具體情況；
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)“你能告訴我你最喜歡的老師嗎？”
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① with a pair of glasses帶著一副眼鏡
② in the past在過(guò)去
[高分句型]
① I like her because she helped me learn English.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）
② I think Miss Wang is very kind and helpful.（賓語(yǔ)從句）
8．例文
Dear Flora,
Thanks for your email. I’d like to tell you something about my school and my school life. I hope you’re having a great day! I’d like to share my school with you. It’s a large and beautiful school. My favorite place is the school library because I can read interesting books there.
I have six or seven classes every day. I have music classes on Wednesday and I enjoy playing the guitar. During the break time, I can have a good rest and I can also play soccer with my classmates. I really love my school. And I enjoy my school life because it’s exciting and fun.
Yours,
Peter
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：主要時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的每一項(xiàng)提示，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖是介紹自己的學(xué)校以及學(xué)校生活；
第二步，具體介紹自己的學(xué)校以及學(xué)校生活；
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，表達(dá)自己的感受。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①share sth. with sb.與某人分享某物
②play the guitar彈吉他
③have a good rest好好休息
[高分句型]
①M(fèi)y favorite place is the school library because I can read interesting books there. (because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句)
②During the break time, I can have a good rest and I can also play soccer with my classmates. (含有and的并列句)
9．One possible version:
Being proud of our school
Schools are the cradles of our growth. We are proud of our school. The environment in our school is beautiful. There are a lot of trees and flowers everywhere. Our school is very big with a few tall buildings. We have a big playground, a library and so on. We have fun at school. We have many interesting school activities. After class we play games and do lots of sports. We also have some clubs. School activities make our school life colourful. In our school, the teachers are knowledgeable and the students are friendly. We learn much from our teachers. The students work hard and often help each other. There are many school safety rules in our school. We mustn’t ride at school. We should walk on the right side of the stairs.
We love our school.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：主要時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示內(nèi)容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一闡述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步：表明寫(xiě)作意圖。借用“我們?yōu)槲覀兊膶W(xué)校感到驕傲”來(lái)引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容。
第二步：具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。依照提示信息的要點(diǎn)——學(xué)校的外貌、活動(dòng)、老師和學(xué)生情況、校園安全規(guī)則等均要一一闡述。
第三步：書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)“我們愛(ài)我們的學(xué)校。”的美好情愫。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①have fun玩得開(kāi)心
②work hard努力學(xué)習(xí)
③school safety rules學(xué)校安全規(guī)則
[高分句型]
①I(mǎi)n our school, the teachers are knowledgeable and the students are friendly. (and表并列）
②There are many school safety rules in our school. (there be句型)
10．One possible version:
Dear Wendy,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
My school is not big but very beautiful. There are thirty classes in it. I’m in Class 2, Grade 7. I have many good friends at school. We have lessons together. We have many subjects like Chinese, English, Art and Music. My favourite subject is Art. I can draw a lot of nice pictures. After class, my friends and I like to play volleyball or tennis. In my free time, I often go to the reading room to read books there. My school life is very interesting. I love my school.
All the best,
Sandy
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：主要時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的每一項(xiàng)提示，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖是介紹自己的學(xué)校生活；
第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。從“班級(jí)數(shù)量、學(xué)校環(huán)境、朋友、所在班級(jí)、愛(ài)好特長(zhǎng)以及空閑時(shí)間的安排”等方面闡述。
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，表達(dá)個(gè)人感想。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①like to do sth.喜歡做某事
②play volleyball打排球
③reading room閱覽室
[高分句型]
①I(mǎi)n my free time, I often go to the reading room to read books there. (不定式作目的狀語(yǔ))
11．例文：
Hello, everyone! I am TengFei. I am a new member of the English club of our school. My English name is Peter. I’m 13 years old. I am in Class 2, Grade 7. My English teacher is Miss Liu. My favorite color is red because it is the color of the fire. I am friendly and kind. I like to go to the library to read books on weekends. I want to be friends with everyone.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇發(fā)言稿；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：材料表格所給內(nèi)容不得遺漏，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，和大家打招呼，并介紹個(gè)人基本信息；
第二步，介紹自己的喜好和性格；
第三步，表達(dá)想和大家成為朋友的愿望，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①a member of……的成員
②on weekends在周末
③want to do sth.想要做某事
[高分句型]
①M(fèi)y favorite color is red because it is the color of the fire.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）
②I like to go to the library to read books on weekends.（不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)）
12．例文
Dear Daniel,
I want to tell you something about my school and my school life.
My school has two thousand students. There are six buildings in the school. They are two classroom buildings, a library, a science building, a dining hall and a gym. There are a lot of clubs in our school. I go to the Reading Club every Tuesday. There is a sports festival and an art festival every year. Most of the classes are very interesting, and my teachers are very kind. After school I often play basketball with my friends on sports field.
My school is very nice and my school life is colourful and interesting.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇書(shū)信作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；
③提示：寫(xiě)作提示已給出，考生應(yīng)注意既要介紹你的學(xué)校又要介紹你的校園生活，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使上下文連貫。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，介紹你的學(xué)校；
第二步，介紹你的校園生活；
第三步，談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?br/>[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①a lot of許多的
②interesting有趣的
③kind友善的
④play basketball打籃球
⑤colourful豐富多彩的
[高分句型]
①There are six buildings in the school.（There be句型）
13．例文
My name is Han Feng. My family has a Communication Day every Saturday. Today is Saturday. I tell my parents a lot of things about my junior high school life.
My school is very beautiful. I like it very much. I make some new friends at school. They are very nice and friendly and we often help each other. My new teachers are also very nice. There are a lot of clubs at school, such as the Singing Club, the Chess Club, the Football Club and so on. I like playing football, so I join the Football Club. I often play football with my friends at school. It makes me very happy.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，介紹自己的學(xué)校生活；
第二步，介紹自己的朋友和老師；
第三步，介紹學(xué)校的俱樂(lè)部和自己的愛(ài)好。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①a lot of許多
②such as例如
③like doing sth.喜歡做某事
[高分句型]
I like playing football, so I join the Football Club.（so引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句）
14．例文
Dear David,
I’m so happy that we can be friends. Now let me introduce my family and school to you. My father is very handsome. He likes playing basketball every week. My mother is beautiful and friendly. She likes cooking delicious food for us. My sister is smart and quiet. I have many friends at school. We often study and play together. My school is great. There are many modern buildings. The playground is opposite the teaching building. We do sports there every day. The Student Centre is in front of the library. The classrooms are very big. There is a smart whiteboard in the front and a blackboard in the back.
I really enjoy my school life. The teachers are kind and the classmates are friendly. We have a lot of interesting activities and classes. I love my school very much.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；
②時(shí)態(tài)：本文應(yīng)使用“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)應(yīng)注意題干給出的要點(diǎn)并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，借用文章開(kāi)頭，介紹寫(xiě)電子郵件的意圖；
第二步，根據(jù)題干表格的要點(diǎn)，描述自己的家人，朋友還有學(xué)校的相關(guān)情況；
第三步，描述自己對(duì)學(xué)校生活的感受，并收尾。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①do sports做運(yùn)動(dòng)
②in front of在……前面
③play basketball打籃球
[高分句型]
①There are many modern buildings. (there be句型)
②The teachers are kind and the classmates are friendly. (并列句)
15．例文
My Favourite Teacher
Mr. Wang is my favourite teacher in school. He is my Chinese teacher and he comes from China. He is 35 years old. He wears glasses and has big eyes and a small nose. His hair is short. He likes reading and drawing in his free time. And he is good at drawing Chinese paintings. He is creative and helpful. We all like him a lot because his class is interesting. He also often helps us with our studies.
He is a good teacher.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：根據(jù)圖示介紹王老師的個(gè)人信息、外貌、愛(ài)好以及其他一些方面；注意適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，承接開(kāi)頭，介紹王老師的基本信息；
第二步，介紹王老師的外貌；
第三步，介紹王老師的愛(ài)好和其他一些方面；
第四步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①come from 來(lái)自
②in one’s free time 在某人空閑的時(shí)間
③be good at 擅長(zhǎng)
④help sb with sth 在某方面幫助某人
[高分句型]
We all like him a lot because his class is interesting.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句）
16．例文
My school life
Dear everyone,
I’m glad to be here and tell you something about my school life in Huain’an.
I come from Beijing. I’m 13 years old. I go to school in Huain’an. The school is big and modern. My classroom is on the first floor. I have classes at school from Monday to Friday. I live near the school, so I go to school on foot. My teachers are kind and my classmates are friendly. My courses are interesting and I don’t have much homework. I often read books. I think this is a good way to understand the world. My hobby is sports. I practice playing tennis with my classmates on weekends. I have a dancing class on Saturday afternoon. I love talking about festivals with my friends. I like the Spring Festival best because I can receive lucky money. I sometimes visit museums and sometimes have a picnic in the park with my parents. I want to be a teacher in the future.
I enjoy my colorful school life in Huain’an very much.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“提示信息”中“我的個(gè)人情況，學(xué)校生活，空閑時(shí)間我的愛(ài)好和理想”，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。借用“我很高興來(lái)到這里，告訴你我在淮安的學(xué)校生活。”來(lái)引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；
第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容。從“我的個(gè)人情況，學(xué)校生活，空閑時(shí)間我的愛(ài)好和理想”重點(diǎn)介紹我的學(xué)校生活；
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)“我非常喜歡我在淮安豐富多彩的學(xué)校生活。”
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①on foot步行
②practice doing sth.練習(xí)做某事
[高分句型]
①I(mǎi) think this is a good way to understand the world.（省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句）
②I like the Spring Festival best because I can receive lucky money.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）
17．例文：
Dear Stephen,
Thank you for your letter. My school is big and beautiful. There is a classroom building, a library and a school hall in it. The classrooms are clean and bright. We’re happy to study there. My teachers and classmates are very nice. I like them very much. My best friend is Alice. She is tall and slim. She is good at Maths and she wants to be a doctor when she grows up.
In my free time, I like listening to music. It makes me happy. I also go swimming to keep fit.
This is about my new school life. I think it is very interesting. Write to me and tell me about yours.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】［總體分析］
①題材：本文是一封回信，是一篇電子郵件。
②時(shí)態(tài)：主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”。
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏題目要求中每一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
［寫(xiě)作步驟］
第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。開(kāi)頭感謝對(duì)方來(lái)信，引出要介紹自己的學(xué)校生活。
第二步，具體闡述。分別介紹學(xué)校情況、朋友情況和自己課余生活，詳細(xì)描述學(xué)校建筑、朋友特點(diǎn)以及自己課余活動(dòng)的感受和目的。
第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)。請(qǐng)求對(duì)方回信分享其學(xué)校生活。
［亮點(diǎn)詞匯］
①keep fit 保持健康
②listen to music 聽(tīng)音樂(lè)
③grow up 長(zhǎng)大
④be good at擅長(zhǎng)
［高分句型］
I think it is very interesting.（賓語(yǔ)從句）
18．例文
My school
My school is very big, beautiful and clean. There are many buildings in my school, such as two classroom buildings, a library, a sports field, a gym, a school hall, a music hall, a science building, an art building and a dining hall. The library is behind the gym. The dining hall is in front of the science building. The art building is next to the sports field.
My school life is very interesting. At school, I can do many interesting activities. My teachers and classmates are very kind and friendly. We love and help each other. I am very happy here every day.
I like my school very much.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，簡(jiǎn)要交代學(xué)校的干凈和漂亮；
第二步，詳細(xì)介紹學(xué)校的建筑及位置；
第三步，介紹學(xué)校的老師和同學(xué)。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①friendly友好的
②in front of在……前面
③such as例如
[高分句型]
There are many buildings in my school, such as two classroom buildings, a library, a sports field, a gym, a school hall, a music hall, a science building, an art building and a dining hall.（there be句型）
19．例文
Hello, everyone.
Welcome to our school. My name is Li Hua. I study in Class 1, Grade 7. I like playing basketball because it helps me stay healthy and teaches me teamwork. Our school has 30 classes and the school is both large and beautiful. There are many green trees and flowers in the school. The teachers here are kind and my classmates are friendly. There are all kinds of clubs in our school. Doing activities after class makes me very happy.
My school life is wonderful. I always have a good time here.
【解析】[總體分析]
②題材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”。
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，包括：注意行文連貫、邏輯清晰、無(wú)拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步：介紹個(gè)人信息；
第二步：介紹學(xué)校信息及老師同學(xué)；
第三步：闡述你的感想。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①like doing sth喜歡做某事
②have a good time玩得開(kāi)心
[高分句型]
①I(mǎi) like playing basketball because it helps me stay healthy and teaches me teamwork. (because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句)
①There are many green trees and flowers in the school.（There be 句型）
20．例文：
My School, My Home
Good morning, everyone! I’m glad to stand here and give you a short talk. Today my topic is “ My school, my home”.
There are a lot of buildings in our school, like bright classrooms and a modern library. There is also a big playground. The library has all kinds of books. It is the perfect place for us to read and study. We can also borrow books from the library and read them at home. The best part of my school is the big playground. We can play basketball, football, tennis and many other sports.
Teachers and classmates are all friendly and helpful. They are all nice to me. I like them very much. My school is my second home. I love my school. I hope it can be better in the future.
That’s all. Thanks for listening!
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇講稿；
②時(shí)態(tài)：本文應(yīng)使用“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；
③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，應(yīng)注意不要遺漏題干中每一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。
[寫(xiě)作步驟]
第一步，借用文章開(kāi)頭，介紹演講的主題；
第二步，根據(jù)題干中圖片的要點(diǎn)，詳細(xì)描述學(xué)校的建筑，老師和同學(xué)，以及在學(xué)校可以做的體育活動(dòng)等信息；
第三步，感謝聆聽(tīng)，并收尾。
[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
①a lot of很多
②in the future在未來(lái)
[高分句型]
There are a lot of buildings in our school, including bright classrooms and a modern library.（there be句型）
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