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2025-2026學年七年級英語上冊單元復習考點培優仁愛科普版（2024）Unit 1 Let's Be Friends!
專題15 書面表達
學校:___________姓名：___________班級：___________考號：___________
1．課后托管服務實施后，為使學校生活更加豐富多彩并營造濃厚的學習氛圍，你校決定成立讀書社團（book club）。假設你是 Teng Fei, 想申請加入讀書社團，請你根據以下思維導圖提示，用英文向讀書社團負責人 Miss Gao 寫一封自薦信。
寫作要求:
1. 內容包括以上信息，可在思維導圖內容提示的基礎上適當拓展信息；
2. 不得使用真實姓名和校名；
3. 至少60詞左右（短文開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）。
Dear Miss Gao,
I am Teng Fei.
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2．“有朋自遠方來，不亦樂乎？”假如你是李華，請你在“友誼橋”英語主題班會上從運動飲食習慣，彼此異同點等方面，介紹你從加拿大而來的好友Jack。內容提示如下：
How often does he exercise or eat vegetables
What’s his favorite food/sport..
What are your similarities and differences
要求：文中不得透露個人真實姓名和學校；詞數60—80；標題和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
My Best Friend
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I have a best friend.
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3．朋友在我們的生活中起著重要的作用。假如你校將舉行“My Best Friend”為題的英語演講比賽，你對此很感興趣。請你根據以下提示，寫一篇演講稿介紹你的朋友。
Name Zhang Li
Family Four members
Hobby Play the guitar
Favourite subject PE and Chinese
Club Music
Birthday June 18th, 2012
要求：
1．文中須包含表格中的所有信息，可適當發揮；
2．文中不得涉及真實的人名、校名和地名；
3．詞數60左右（已給出開頭，不計總詞數）。
My Best Friend
Good morning, everyone. Today I’d like to
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4．音樂無界，愛無限，當搖滾遇上二胡，一場意外的音樂盛宴就要開始了，假如你喜歡搖滾樂，而你的爺爺喜歡二胡，那么兩種音樂會碰撞出什么獨特的魅力呢？請以“There is so much fun in music.”為主題，用英語寫一篇短文，介紹自己和爺爺的愛好。內容包括：
1．我和爺爺各自的愛好，有一天腦海中靈光一閃：“何不將彼此的音樂融合在一起呢；我可以為我們創作一首歌”；
2．我們學校每年秋天都會舉辦一屆藝術節；
3．在藝術節上每個人都隨著我們的音樂舞動起來，一起享受我們的愛好，這感覺太棒了！
注意：
1．詞數為70左右
2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；
3．文中不能出現真實姓名及學校名稱；
4．開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Grandpa and I have different hobbies. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．某英文周刊正在組織以“My Middle School Life”為題的征文活動。請你根據以下內容提示，談談你的中學生活吧！
內容提示：
How is your daily routine like
What is your favourite subject
Which club are you in
Something more about your middle school life.
注意：文中不得透露個人真實信息；詞數80詞左右；標題和開頭已給出；不計入總詞數。
My Middle School Life
Hello, everyone. I’d like to share my middle school life with you.
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6．假如你是李華，學校即將舉辦“用英語講好校園故事”的活動，需要選出一名“形象大使”。請以“Wonderful Me”為題，根據以下內容提示，寫一篇競選稿，從個人信息、校園環境和學校生活等方面推介自己。
內容要點如下：
How old are you
What’s your school like
How do you spend your school day
Something more about yourself.
注意：文中不得透露個人真實姓名和學校；詞數90詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Wonderful Me
Dear teachers and students,
I feel glad to be here today and I want to be the “School Spokesman”.
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7．假如你是泗陽某中學七年級學生李紅，英文名叫Jenny，最近結識一位國外中學生Nora。請你根據下表內容，用英文寫一封信， 向她介紹你自己的生活情況和中國的節日文化。
自我介紹 1.年齡：12歲
2.外貌：苗條，長發，戴眼鏡；
3.愛好：最喜歡漢服，寬松，舒適，彰顯我國傳統文化；
生活方式 1.食物：有健康的飲食習慣，吃……，拒絕……。
2.休息：不熬夜，保證充足睡眠；
3.理財：平時管好自己的零花錢，養成消費好習慣；
節日 我國有許多傳統節日，最喜歡重陽節，因為……
要求：
1.詞數不少于 80個；
2.內容須包括所給要點，可適當發揮，條理清楚、語句連貫、書寫工整；
3.文中不得出現真實的姓名、校名和地名等信息。
Dear Nora,
I’m glad to meet you! Now let me introduce myself to you. My name is Li Hong.
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Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Jenny
8．假如你是英國學生Tom，在山東交流學習。請你根據表格內容，給你在英國的表哥Peter寫一封電子郵件，介紹你的好朋友Li Ming，以及你們近期做的事情。
外貌 李明和你一樣高，比你更外向，更風趣。
喜好 和你一樣喜歡運動，每周鍛煉三、四次；都喜歡看電影，李明還喜歡看新聞。
上周末活動 周六你們一起去參觀了山東博物館，拍了許多照片；周日去了紅星電影院(the Red Star Cinema)看電影，因為那里有最舒適的座位和最好的服務。
要求：
1.語言流暢，條理清晰，可適當發揮；
2.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入字數；
3.卷面干凈整潔，70詞左右。
Dear Peter,
How’s it going with you Now I’m studying in China. I have a good friend, Li Ming.
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Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Tom
9．本學期即將結束，你是否已經開始規劃新學期的學習生活呢？你校英語俱樂部舉辦了一場題為“Plans for My New Term”的演講比賽，假設你是李華，參加了本次演講比賽，請根據以下信息完成一篇演講稿。
個人簡介 ● 學習認真，擅長唱歌。 ● 樂于助人(舉例說明)。
生活習慣 ● 喜歡吃肉，不喜歡蔬菜，很少運動。 ● 喜歡購物，特別喜歡時尚。
個人計劃 ● 想改變生活方式，學會理財(舉例說明) ● 希望和同學們舉辦一次時裝秀，幫助貧困地區的孩子。
要求：
1. 不少于100詞，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
2. 語句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整。
3. 內容必須包括以上所有要點，須按照要求適當發揮。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’m glad to be here to give the speech. Our new term is coming soon. And I have my new-term plan. First, I would like to introduce myself to all of you.
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Thanks for your listening.
10．假如你是李華，準備邀請你的好朋友Mike來家里度過周末。請你以“My Best Friend”為題向父母介紹Mike的情況，方便父母提前了解并做好準備。
要求：
1. 語言流暢，條理清晰，可適當發揮。
2. 文中不要出現真實的人名、校名；
3. 不少于70詞。
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11．假如你是李華，學校音樂俱樂部正在招募新成員。請你根據以下表格中的提示內容，用英語給該俱樂部的負責人Mrs. Brown寫一封電子郵件，向她介紹自己并申請加入該俱樂部。
Name Li Hua
Age 13
Class Class 4, Grade 7
Why I love music ◆Exciting ◆My parents are both music lovers
What I can do ◆Sing ◆Play the violin ◆Play the guitar
要求: 1.參考提示內容，可適當發揮；
2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；
3.文中不得出現你的任何真實信息(姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.詞數：不少于50詞(開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數）。
Dear Mrs. Brown,
I’m writing this email to you because I want to
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Yours,
Li Hua
12．根據要求完成短文寫作。
假如你是李華，校英語報正在開展“認識我的好友”主題征文活動，請根據以下提示信息，寫一篇文章投稿。
要求：
（1）不少于60詞；文章所給開頭不計入總詞數；
（2）包含表格中給出的關鍵信息；
（3）文中不能出現真實姓名和學校。
Name Tony
Age 11 years old
Birthday April 20th
Favorite subject and reason (原因) English, useful, interesting
Personal talents and club participation (個人特長及加入俱樂部情況) sing, dance, music club
Transportation (交通方式) to school rides his bike to school,10 minutes.
Daily routine (日常活動) do his homework after dinner, go to bed at around 9:30
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13．假如你叫Li Hua，朋友叫Zhao Le，請根據下列提示寫一篇短文介紹你自己和你的朋友。
Name: Li Hua Age: 13 From: Chongqing Look: tall, strong Like: running, playing football Character (性格): helpful, kind Name: Zhao Le Age: 13 From: Chendu Look: thin, short Like: drawing, playing football Character: quiet, nice
要求：
1.文中須包含所有要點提示，可以適當發揮；
2.文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱；
3.詞數80詞左右。
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14．你尚未謀面的朋友Jack計劃寒假來中國旅游。請你根據以下關鍵詞信息，寫信給Jack介紹自己和家鄉福建，并分享我們春節的習俗。
self-introduction (自我介紹) Class 2, Grade 7; tall and strong; play basketball
my hometown, Fujian south of China; summer-hot; winter-warm
our traditions (傳統) of the Spring Festival couplets; jiaozi; lucky money
要求：
(1)書寫規范，條理清楚，語意連貫；
(2)詞數70左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad that you plan to visit China in winter holidays. Let me share something about myself and my hometown, Fujian, with you and I am sure you will want to come soon.
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Yours,
Wang Junfeng
15．Bob是你的好朋友，請根據提示寫一篇短文介紹一下他。
年齡 12
生日 6月2日
家人 爺爺、奶奶、爸爸、媽媽、妹妹
喜歡的科目；喜歡的老師 生物；王老師
愛好 彈吉他、下國際象棋
俱樂部 象棋（周二）；音樂（周五）
日常活動 6: 30 a.m. 起床 7: 00 a.m. 上學 4: 00 p.m.鍛煉 9: 00 p.m.洗漱 10: 00 p.m. 睡覺
要求: 1.條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順；2.詞數不少于70。
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16．每個人都離不開朋友，朋友是雨中遞來的傘，是支援的手，是善意的笑臉。友誼讓我們的生活變得更精彩更有意義。假如你是李華，你校英文周刊正以“My New Friend”為題征稿，請你根據以下要點提示以，用英語寫一篇短文投稿，介紹你的新朋友。
參考信息：
要求：
1. 80詞左右。
2. 文中不能出現自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱。
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17．初中生活的第一學期即將結束，你是否結交了一些好朋友呢？假如你是Tony，你有一個好朋友Peter。請以“My friend”為題，利用下表中的信息，將你朋友Peter介紹給大家。
Name: Peter King Age: 14
Nationality(國籍): UK Birthday: August the second
Family member: father, mother, Peter School: No. 3 Middle School
Class: 2 Grade: 7
Hobbies: playing all kinds of sports Lunch: vegetables and beef (healthy)
Like: geography Dislike: maths
My Friend
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18．假如你是王復興，你的英國新筆友 Alice想了解你的相關信息，請根據下列表格，給 Alice寫一封電子郵件，介紹你自己：
姓名 王復興 來自 陜西
年齡 12 生日 9月3日
性格 外向 愛好 閱讀和拉小提琴
最喜歡的科目 語文 最喜歡的上學日 周二（有語文課）
生活方式 健康，上午七點起床，下午打一小時網球，晚上九點半睡覺。
要求：
1. 必須包含以上要點，可適當發揮；
2. 不少于60詞，作文開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；
3. 提示詞: 陜西 Shaanxi, 外向的 outgoing, 健康的 healthy.
Hi, Alice,
Thanks for your last email! You want to know something about me. Now let me tell you.
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Welcome to China! Hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Wang Fuxing
19．學校要舉辦“我參與，我快樂，Everyone is NO.1”為主題的英語活動，要求學生們通過介紹自己找到興趣愛好相同的人，并進行分組。假如你是期中一員，請根據下列提示寫一篇英語短文做自我介紹。
Name Bob Brown /
Age 13 /
Favorite Color Green /…
Food vegetable and fruit /…
Month April /…
Sport Basketball /. …
Subject English /…
要求：
1. 必須包含表格中所有要點，并適當拓展：
2. 文中不得出現真實的人名，校名；
3. 詞數在70-110之間，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。
Good morning, everyone! I’m very glad to introduce myself (介紹自己) here.
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That’s all. Thank you.
20．學校Book Club要招募新成員，假設你是Teng Fei，請根據你的情況 (從你申請加入此俱樂部所具備的相關能力、相關愛好、期待等方面) 寫一份申請書加入吧！
Book club Do you like reading books Are you free on Fridays after school Join our book club! It’s more than reading! You can act out stories and make new friends too! You can learn a lot here and enjoy your time! We will have fun together in the school library then! Email Linda @ for more information!
注意：
(1) 書寫規范；
(2) 詞數60詞左右 (開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數)。
Dear Linda,
I’m Teng Fei, a 13-year-old boy from Class 1, Grade 7. I want to join the book club.
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Can I join the club
Yours,
Teng Fei
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參考答案及試題解析
1．例文
Dear Miss Gao,
I am Teng Fei. I want to join the book club. My name is Tang Fei. I’m 13 years old. I’m in Class Eight, Grade Seven. I like reading, in my spare time, I read a lot of books. If I join a book club, I can act out stories, discuss books and share my thoughts about them. I think reading not only broadens my horizons, but also increases my knowledge. So I’m looking forward to joining the book club. I look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Teng Fei
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封書信；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的介紹要點，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖，作者想要加入讀書俱樂部；
第二步，具體闡述自己的基本信息；
第三步，期盼收到回信。
[亮點詞匯]
①in my spare time在我的空閑時間
②a lot of許多
③look forward to期待某事
[高分句型]
①If I join a book club, I can act out stories, discuss books and share my thoughts about them. (if引導的條件狀語從句)
②I think reading not only broadens my horizons, but also increases my knowledge. (not only...but also句型)
2．例文
My Best Friend
Hello, I’m Li Hua. I have a best friend.
He is Jack and from Canada. He has a lot of healthy habits. For example, he exercises 4 times a week and he likes playing basketball best. Besides, he eats vegetables and fruit every day. So he has a healthy body. He likes playing basketball.
As friends, we have a lot of things in common. He is as hard-working as me. And we both like English very much. However, we are also different. He is more outgoing but I am quiet. He is thinner and taller than me.
In my opinion, Jack is my best friend because he always gives me a helping hand when I am in trouble. I really hope that our friendship can last forever.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：介紹自己最好的朋友。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開頭表明自己有一個最好的朋友叫杰克，來自加拿大。
第二步，中間詳細描述杰克的健康習慣、喜好、與自己的共同點和不同點。
第三步，結尾表明杰克是最好的朋友的原因，并希望友誼長存。
[亮點詞匯]
①a lot of 許多
②in common 共同的；共有的
③give sb. a helping hand 幫助某人
④bring out the best in sb. 使某人展現出最好的一面
[高分句型]
①His favorite foods are fruit and vegetables because he doesn’t want to gain weight. (原因狀語從句)
②He is as hard-working as me. (使用“as...as...” 結構，比較兩人的勤奮程度。)
3．例文
My Best Friend
Good morning, everyone. Today I’d like to introduce my best friend. Her name is Zhang Li. She has a happy family. There are four members in her family. They are her parents, her brother and herself. She has many hobbies. She likes playing the guitar best. She has many subjects this term, but she likes PE and Chinese best. She is also good at music so she joins a music club. Her birthday is on June 18th. We often celebrate her birthday together.
This is my good friend. Do you like her
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；
②時態：一般現在時；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點，并適當添加細節，突出重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹好朋友的家庭基本信息；
第二步，介紹好朋友的興趣愛好、校園生活與生日；
第三步，書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①like doing sth.喜歡做某事
②be good at擅長
③celebrate慶祝
[高分句型]
There are four members in her family. (there be句型)
4．例文
Grandpa and I have different hobbies. I enjoy listening to rock music, which has loud guitars and fast beats. Grandpa, on the other hand, loves to play the erhu, a traditional Chinese instrument that makes beautiful, soft sounds.
One day, I had a great idea. “Why don’t we mix our music together ” I said. “I can write a song for us.” Grandpa thought it was a wonderful plan.
Our school has an art festival every autumn. We decided to play our special song there. We practiced hard, trying to make the rock and erhu sounds fit together well.
When the festival came, we played our song. People started dancing and smiling. They loved it! It felt so good to see everyone enjoying our music. There is so much fun in music, bringing people together in new and exciting ways.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，描述了自己與爺爺因音樂愛好不同而引發的創意融合故事；
②時態：時態主要為“一般現在時”，敘述過去事件時可能會用到“一般過去時”；
③提示：寫作要點包括介紹自己和爺爺的愛好、提出音樂融合的想法、學校藝術節及藝術節上的音樂體驗。考生需圍繞這些要點展開，適當添加細節，展現音樂融合的獨特魅力和帶來的快樂。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作主題。通過“Grandpa and I have different hobbies.”直接引出主題，即自己和爺爺有著不同的音樂愛好；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。首先介紹自己和爺爺的愛好；接著描述音樂融合的想法；然后提及學校藝術節；
第三步，書寫結語。通過描述藝術節上的反響來總結全文，強調音樂帶來的樂趣。
[亮點詞匯]
①on the other hand另一方面
②mix...together把……混合在一起
③fit together很好地配合
④bring...together使……聚集
[高分句型]
①We decided to play our special song there.（動詞不定式作賓語）
②We practiced hard, trying to make the rock and erhu sounds fit together well.（現在分詞短語作伴隨狀語）
5．例文
My Middle School Life
Hello, everyone. I’d like to share my middle school life with you.
I usually get up at 6:30 and have breakfast at seven. I have eight lessons from 8 a.m. to 5 p.m. After school, I often do my homework and exercise. As for my favourite subject, English always comes first because I’m interested in it. And I’m in the English club because I can make new friends with the same hobby. Besides, there are many activities in my school, such as the reading corner and the sports meeting.
All in all, my school life is busy but interesting.
【解析】[總體分析]
① 題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③ 提示：寫作要點已給出，可適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖。開門見山提出將分享自己的中學生活；
第二步，從日常生活、最喜歡的學科、加入的俱樂部等方面具體介紹；
第三步，書寫結語，表達自己的感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①as for至于
②be interested in對……感興趣
③all in all總而言之
[高分句型]
①And I’m in the English club because I can make new friends with the same hobby.(because引導的原因狀語從句)
6．例文
Wonderful Me
Dear teachers and students,
I feel glad to be here today and I want to be the “School Spokesman”. I am Li Hua, a seventh grader. I am now 13 years old and my birthday is on December 24th.
My school is big and beautiful. There are two classroom buildings and a teachers’ building. The teachers are nice. The classes are fun and the students are friendly. Usually, I get up at 6:40 a.m. The classes start at 8:00 a.m. and finish at 5:30 p.m. At 9:30 p.m., it’s time for me to go to bed.
I really enjoy my new school life. I hope everyone can make good use of time and have a good day.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇競選稿；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：根據提示要點進行寫作，可適當發揮，注意行文連貫，表述完整并重點突出。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，承接開頭，介紹自己的基本信息；
第二步，介紹自己的學校信息及如何度過學校的一天；
第三步，書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①get up起床
②go to bed去睡覺
③make good use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①I am now 13 years old and my birthday is on December 24th. (and連接的并列句)
②I hope everyone can make good use of time and have a good day. (賓語從句)
7．例文
Dear Nora,
I’m glad to meet you! Now let me introduce myself to you. My name is Li Hong. My English name is Jenny. I’m 12 years old. I’m slim. I have long hair and wear glasses. I like hanfu most because they are loose and comfortable. They also show the traditional culture of our country.
I have a healthy lifestyle. I eat healthy food and say no to unhealthy food. To make sure I get enough sleep, I don’t stay up too late. I can manage my pocket money well. I have good spending habits.
There are many traditional festivals in China. My favourite festival is the Double Ninth Festival, because it’s a time to show respect and love for our elders.
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Jenny
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：根據所給提示完成寫作，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤；注意上下文之間的邏輯關系，語意連貫。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，介紹自己的年齡、外貌和愛好；
第二步，介紹自己的生活方式；
第三步，介紹自己最喜歡的傳統節日。
[亮點詞匯]
①introduce sb. to...把某人介紹給……
②stay up too late熬夜
[高分句型]
①To make sure I get enough sleep, I don’t stay up too late.（動詞不定式表目的）
②My favourite festival is the Double Ninth Festival, because it’s a time to show respect and love for our elders.（原因狀語從句）
8．例文
Dear Peter,
How’s it going with you Now I’m studying in China. I have a good friend, Li Ming. He is as tall as me but he is more outgoing and funnier than me. Li Ming and I both like sports. We exercise three or four times every week. Also, we both like watching movies. Besides, he likes watching news because he can find out what is going on around the world.
Last Saturday, Li Ming took me to visit Shandong Museum and we took quite a few photos. On Sunday, we went to the Red Star Cinema to watch a movie because it had the most comfortable seats and the best service.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Tom
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”和“一般過去時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的介紹要點，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖，提出介紹自己的好朋友Li Ming；
第二步，具體闡述Li Ming的長相外貌以及喜好；
第三步，介紹自己和Li Ming近期的活動。
[亮點詞匯]
①find out查明
②around the world全世界
③quite a few相當多
[高分句型]
①Besides, he likes watching news because he can find out what is going on around the world. (because引導的原因狀語從句)
②He is as tall as me but he is more outgoing and funnier than me. (含than的形容詞比較級句型)
9．例文
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. I’m glad to be here to give the speech. Our new term is coming soon. And I have my new-term plan. First, I would like to introduce myself to all of you.
I study hard and I am good at singing. I am helpful. I help my mum cook meals. I can also read newspapers for my grandpa. However, I acknowledge my unhealthy habits, such as a preference for meat over vegetables and a lack of physical activity. I also enjoy shopping, particularly keeping up with the latest fashion trends.
This new term, I am determined to transform my lifestyle for better health. I plan to eat more vegetables and engage in regular exercise. I plan to learn how to manage money. For example, rather than eating out, I can choose to cook at home. I hope to hold a fashion show with my classmates to help children in poor areas.
Thanks for your listening.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；
②時態：時態以“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏提示，并適當添加細節，注意字母大小寫以及標點符號。
[寫作步驟]
第一步、開篇點題，進行自我介紹；
第二步、介紹自己的生活習慣；
第三步、介紹自己的個人計劃并書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①be good at擅長
②such as例如
③a lack of缺乏
④keep up with跟上
⑤be determined to決定
[高分句型]
①I also enjoy shopping, particularly keeping up with the latest fashion trends.(enjoy doing句型)
10．例文
My Best Friend
I have a good friend named Mike. Let me tell you something about him. He is a 12-year-old boy wearing glasses. He is as tall as me but he is stronger than me because he is good at sports. Mike is much more outgoing than me, so he enjoys making friends and helping others. He has a healthy eating habit. His favorite food is noodles. He drinks juice every day and hardly drinks cola, but he also likes to drink milk. He likes playing basketball best. He plays it three times a week, he is the best basketball player in the class. Mike is the most popular in our class. He is my best friend!
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏思維導圖提示的內容，適當增加細節，并且突出寫作的要點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖，介紹好友Mike的基本情況；
第二步，介紹好友Mike的性格、飲食習慣、興趣愛好等；
第三步，談談對好友Mike的評價。
[亮點詞匯]
①as tall as和……一樣高
②be good at擅長
③enjoy doing sth.喜歡做某事
④make friends交朋友
⑤like doing sth.喜歡做某事
[高分句型]
He is as tall as me but he is stronger than me because he is good at sports. (because引導的原因狀語從句)
11．例文
Dear Mrs. Brown,
I’m writing this email to you because I want to join the school club.
My name is Li Hua. I’m a 13-year-old girl. I’m in Class 4, Grade 7. I love music very much because it’s exciting and my parents are both music lovers. I can sing a lot of songs. I can play the violin very well. And I am very good at playing the guitar. If I can join the school music club, I’ll be very happy.
My telephone number is 1850633299. Please call me. Many thanks to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：材料所給內容不得遺漏，注意電子郵件格式要求。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，借用已給開頭，點題說明郵件內容；
第二步，詳細介紹自己的基本情況、愛好特長等；
第三步，結尾表達想加入俱樂部的愿望和對負責人的感謝。
[亮點詞匯]
①a lot of許多；很多
②play the violin拉小提琴
③be good at擅長
[高分句型]
①I love music very much because it’s exciting and my parents are both music lovers. (because引導的原因狀語從句)
②If I can join the school music club, I’ll be very happy. (if引導的條件狀語從句)
12．例文
I have a great friend named Tony. He is 11 years old and his birthday is on April 20th. Tony’s favorite subject is English. He finds it both useful and interesting. With English, he can explore different cultures and communicate with people around the world. Tony is really talented. He can sing beautifully and dance gracefully. So, he joined the school music club. Every day, Tony rides his bike to school, which takes him about 10 minutes. After dinner, he always focuses on doing his homework. Then, around 9:30, he goes to bed to get enough rest for the next day. In a word, Tony is an amazing friend. I’m lucky to have him by my side!
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態以“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏提示，并適當添加細節，注意字母大小寫以及標點符號。
[寫作步驟]
第一步、介紹好朋友的姓名、年齡及生日；
第二步、介紹好朋友的最喜歡的科目和原因，個人特長及加入俱樂部情況；
第三步、介紹好朋友去學校的交通方式以及日常活動。
[亮點詞匯]
①around the world全世界
②focus on專注于
[高分句型]
①Every day, Tony rides his bike to school, which takes him about 10 minutes.(which引導非限制性定語從句)
13．例文
Hello, my name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old and I am from Chongqing. I am tall and strong. I like running and playing football. People say that I am helpful and kind. Let me introduce my friend Zhao Le. He is also 13 years old and he comes from Chendu. Zhao Le is thin and short. He enjoys drawing and also likes playing football, just like me. He is quiet and nice. We get along very well.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：本文應使用“一般現在時”為主；
③提示：應注意題干給出的要點并適當補充，使文章內容充實。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，根據題干表格的要點，介紹自己的基本信息；
第二步，根據題干表格的要點，介紹朋友的基本信息；
第三步，點評自己和朋友的關系，并收尾。
[亮點詞匯]
①be from來自
②get along相處融洽
[高分句型]
①He enjoys drawing and also likes playing football, just like me. (and表并列)
14．例文：
Dear Jack,
I’m glad that you plan to visit China in winter holidays. Let me share something about myself and my hometown, Fujian, with you and I am sure you will want to come soon.
I’m Wang Junfeng. I’m in Class 2, Grade 7. I’m tall and strong, and I like playing basketball.
Fujian is my hometown. It’s in the south of China. The weather here is nice. It’s hot in summer and warm in winter.
During the Spring Festival, we have many wonderful traditions. We put up couplets to make our houses look beautiful. We also eat jiaozi and children can get lucky money.
I sincerely hope you can come and experience all these wonderful things with me.
Yours,
Wang Junfeng
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇書信作文。
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”。
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意要點齊全，適當進行補充。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖。用“讓我給你介紹一些我和家鄉的事情”引出下文。
第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從“自我介紹、我的家鄉、春節的傳統。”三個方面作出詳細的描寫。
第三步，書寫結語。表達“我真誠地希望你能來和我一起體驗這些美好的事情”進行情感升華。
[亮點詞匯]
①share 分享
②lucky 幸運的
③experience 體驗
[高分句型]
①I sincerely hope you can come and experience all these wonderful things with me.（賓語從句）
15．例文
Bob is my good friend. He is 12 years old. His birthday is on 2nd June. He has a happy family. There are grandparents, parents and a sister in his family. His favourite subject is biology, because it’s useful. He likes Mr Wang best. He thinks he is fun. He can play the guitar and he plays chess well. He joins the music club on Tuesday and chess club on Friday. He gets up at 6:30 a.m. He goes to school at 7:00 a.m by bus. He does exercise at 4:00 p.m. At 9:00 p.m., he brushes his teeth, and he goes to bed at 10:00 p.m.
We are good friends, I love him very much.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的介紹要點，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“鮑勃是我的好朋友”來引出重點介紹的內容；
第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從“生日、家人、科目、愛好、俱樂部和日常活動”幾個方面重點介紹；
第三步，書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①like...best最喜歡
②play the guitar彈吉他
[高分句型]
There are grandparents, parents and a sister in his family.（there be句型）
16．例文
My New Friend
Hi, I’m Li Hua. I have a new friend. His name is Wang Tao.
He is from Chongqing, China. He is 12 years old. We are both in Class 4, Grade 7. He likes red best, because he thinks red is a color of good luck. His favorite season is summer. And he loves playing tennis every Saturday afternoon. We study many subjects. He likes P.E class best because he likes sports. Wang Tao is friendly and always ready to help others.
I like my new friend. Do you want to make friends with him
【解析】【總體分析】
①題材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”。
③提示：寫作要點已經給出，考生應注意不要遺漏信息提示中的介紹要點，適當添加細節，并突出寫作要點。
【寫作步驟】
第一步，點題。點出即將要寫的要點，介紹新朋友。
第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。包含信息提示中需要介紹的所有要點。
第三步，結尾。表達自己對新朋友的喜愛之情。
【亮點詞匯】
①good luck好運
②play tennis打網球
③make friend交朋友
【高分句型】
①He likes red best, because he thinks red is a color of good luck.（a color of“……的顏色”）
②He likes P.E class best because he likes sports.（like...best“最喜愛”）
17．例文
My Friend
Hello, everyone. I am Tony. I’d love to introduce my friend to you.
I have a good friend named Peter King. He is 14 years old and comes from the UK. His birthday is on August the second. There are three people in his family: his father, his mother and him. He studies at No. 3 Middle School. We are in the same grade, Grade 7, but he is in Class 2.
Peter has a lot of hobbies. He especially likes playing all kinds of sports. He thinks it’s a good way to keep fit. For lunch, he always has vegetables and beef. He believes they are healthy. Among all the subjects, he likes geography best because he can learn about different places. However, he dislikes maths. He thinks it’s too difficult.
This is my friend. I’m glad to have such a great friend.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
②時態：時態主要為“一般現在時”；
③提示：文章應該包括表格所列信息，要適當補充，使文章內容充實；行文時多用第三人稱，盡量多使用短語和句型；寫作中適當使用連接詞，使行文連貫、順暢。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，開門見山：表明寫作目的——介紹朋友；
第二步，依據表格信息，逐一介紹朋友的情況，適當拓展；
第三步，書寫總結，表達感受。
[亮點詞匯]
①in the same grade 在同一個年級
②come from 來自
[高分句型]
①Among all the subjects, he likes geography best because he can learn about different places. (because引導原因狀語從句)
②He thinks it’s a good way to keep fit. (賓語從句)
18．Hi, Alice,
Thanks for your last email! You want to know something about me. Now let me tell you.
My name is Wang Fuxing. I’m from Shaanxi. I’m 12 years old and my birthday is on September 3rd. I’m an outgoing boy. I have many hobbies. I like reading books because I can learn a lot from them. I also like playing the violin. It makes me relaxed. My favorite subject is Chinese. I think it’s very interesting. Tuesday is my favorite school day because I have a Chinese class on that day. I have a healthy lifestyle. I get up at 7:00 a.m. I play tennis for an hour in the afternoon. It’s good for my health. I go to bed at 9:30 p.m.
Welcome to China! Hope to see you soon!
Yours,
Wang Fuxing
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；
②時態：時態以一般現在時為主；
③提示：以王復興的身份，給Alice寫一封電子郵件來介紹自己，寫作時必須包含表格中的所有要點，可適當發揮。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，寒暄與引出主題；
第二步，詳細介紹自身情況；
第三步，熱情邀請。
[亮點詞匯]
①like doing sth喜歡做某事
②get up起床
③play tennis打網球
④be good for對……有好處
[高分句型]
①I think it’s very interesting. (省略that的賓語從句)
②Tuesday is my favorite school day because I have a Chinese class on that day. (because引導的原因狀語從句)
19．例文
Good morning, everybody! I’m very glad to introduce myself here.
My name is Bob Brown. I’m 13 years old now. My favorite color is green. All of my clothes are green. I think I look cool in this color. I have a good eating habit. I eat lots of healthy food every day, such as vegetables and fruit. April is my favorite month of the year, because my birthday is in April. I can have a birthday party in that month. After class, I often play basketball with my friend, Tom. We both like sports. I have many classes at school. But I like English best. I think it’s easy and fun for me.
That’s all. Thank you.
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；
②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已經給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點；注意適當發揮，突出寫作重點。
[寫作步驟]
第一步，表明寫作主旨；
第二步，介紹個人的基本信息和喜好；
第三步，書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①eating habit 飲食習慣
②lots of 許多
③such as 例如
④play basketball 打籃球
[高分句型]
①I think I look cool in this color. （省略that的賓語從句）
②April is my favorite month of the year, because my birthday is in April.（because引導的原因狀語從句）
20．例文：
Dear Linda,
I’m Teng Fei, a 13-year-old boy from Class 1, Grade 7. I want to join the book club. I am interested in reading books because reading can open my mind and make me think. I can read many kinds of books. I am free on Fridays after school. I often spend lots of time reading in the school library. I can also read fast too. In my free time, I love to act out stories with my family at home. It’s really fun. I’d like to make more friends in the club. I am sure we can have fun together and learn a lot from each other.
Can I join the club
Yours,
Teng Fei
【解析】[總體分析]
①題材：本文是書信；
②時態：主要時態為“一般現在時”；
③提示：寫作要點已給出，不要遺漏寫作要點，可適當發揮，避免出現語法錯誤和拼寫錯誤。
[寫作步驟]
第一步：表明寫作意圖。借用“我想加入讀書俱樂部。”來引出重點介紹的內容。
第二步：具體闡述寫作內容。依照提示信息的要點——加入此俱樂部所具備的相關能力、相關愛好、期待等方面均要一一闡述。
第三步：書寫結語。
[亮點詞匯]
①be interested in doing sth. 在做某事方面感興趣
②spend some time doing sth. 花費時間做某事
③learn a lot from 從……學到很多
[高分句型]
①I am sure we can have fun together and learn a lot from each other. (賓語從句）
②I am interested in reading books because reading can open my mind and make me think. (Because引導的原因狀語從句)
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