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Period 5　Writing
寫作一　應用文寫作——公園介紹
公園介紹屬于說明文，是指使用生動的語言對某一地點進行具體逼真的描繪。要寫清地點中各種活動項目的功能或特點、地理位置、面積、歷史、往來交通方式以及收費情況等。
1．介紹功能或特點
From my point of view，...is an ideal place for relaxation and amusement.
在我看來，……是休閑娛樂的理想場所。
In addition，...can enjoy wonderful performances at the park.
此外，……可以在公園里欣賞精彩的表演。
...is an ideal place for you.It brings you into a magical world where you can enjoy a wonderful experience.
……是你的理想去處。它帶你進入一個神奇的世界，在那里你可以享受一次美妙的體驗。
2．介紹地理位置
...is located/situated in the west of the city near the high-speed railway station.
……位于城市的西部，靠近高鐵站。
...lies in the northern part of...，which is well-known for its beautiful lakes.
……位于……北部。它因美麗的湖泊而聞名。
Located/Situated in...，...is one of the most famous parks in China.
位于……，……是中國最著名的公園之一。
It’s...kilometers from the destination to the railway station.
從目的地到火車站有……公里。
3．介紹面積
It is a world-famous theme park covering/which covers an area of...square meters.
＝It is a world-famous theme park with an area of...square meters.
它是一個世界聞名的主題公園，占地面積為……平方米。
4．介紹歷史
...is a famous theme park which has a history of...years.
＝...is a famous theme park with a history of...years.
……是一個著名的主題公園，它有……年的歷史。
5．介紹交通方式
...can be reached by subway/taxi/bus.
可以乘地鐵/出租車/公共汽車到達……
You can get there a little more quickly by taxi.
乘出租車去那里會快一點。
6．介紹收費情況
You need to pay...for the entrance ticket and an additional charge of...for...
你需要付……(錢)買門票和額外費用……(錢)用于……
Each activity costs...
每項活動花費……
...charge no additional fees except the entrance ticket.
除了門票外，……不收取額外費用。
The admission fee is...and all the activities in the park are free/free of charge.
門票是……(錢)，公園里所有的活動都是免費的。
請根據下面表格的內容寫一篇英語短文，介紹鄭州綠博園(The Zhengzhou Greening Expo Park)。
地點 緊鄰鄭開大道
面積 約3 000畝
特色 展園99個，是各類花卉的家園
宗旨 展示在環保方面取得的成就，倡導綠色生活
門票 成人票每人次20元
公交 568路和573路
第一步　審題謀篇
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯　(單元寫作詞匯運用)
1．坐落于 be located in/on
2．吸引 appeal to/attract
3．占地面積為…… cover an area of...
4．多達 up to
5．有幸擁有 be blessed with
6．在展覽中 on display
7．極好的；極大的；難以置信的 incredible
8．過一種綠色生活 live a green life
9．可愛的；討人喜歡的 adorable
10．壯麗的；雄偉的；極佳的；非常好的 splendid
連詞成句　(教材句式仿寫)
1．鄭州綠博園位于鄭開大道附近，它每年都吸引許多游客。
The Zhengzhou Greening Expo Park is located next to Zhengkai Avenue and it attracts numerous visitors each year.
2．它是個很壯觀的公園，占地面積約3 000畝。
It is a very splendid park and it covers an area of about 3,000 mu.
3．各種各樣的花在多達99個展園里。
Various types of flowers are in up to 99 exhibition parks.
4．無論你喜歡哪種花，無論你喜歡什么花，總有一些不可思議的花會吸引你。
Whichever and whatever flowers you like，there are incredible flowers that will appeal to you.
5．在世博公園里欣賞自己最喜歡的鮮花，可以讓游客身心放松。
Appreciating their favourite flowers in the expo park makes visitors relaxed mentally and physically.
6．建設公園的目的是為了展示環境保護的成果，呼吁人們過綠色生活。
The purpose of building the park is to show the achievements in environmental protection and appeal to people to live a green life.
7．成人門票是20元。你可以乘568路或573路公交車去那里。
The admission for an adult is 20 yuan.You can take Bus 568 or Bus 573 to get there.
第三步　句式升級
1．用分詞短語作狀語改寫句1。
Located next to Zhengkai Avenue，the Zhengzhou Greening Expo Park attracts numerous visitors each year.
2．用非限制性定語從句改寫句2。
It is a very splendid park，which covers an area of about 3,000 mu.
3．用完全倒裝改寫句3。
In up to 99 exhibition parks are various types of flowers.
4．用強調句型(強調句子主語)改寫句5。
It is appreciating their favourite flowers in the expo park that makes visitors relaxed mentally and physically.
第四步　組句成篇
用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇80個詞左右的英語短文。
參考范文
Located next to Zhengkai Avenue，the Zhengzhou Greening Expo Park attracts numerous visitors each year.It is a very splendid park，which covers an area of about 3,000 mu.In up to 99 exhibition parks are various types of flowers.Whichever and whatever flowers you like，there are incredible flowers that will appeal to you.It is appreciating their favourite flowers in the expo park that makes visitors relaxed mentally and physically.
The purpose of building the park is to show the achievements in environmental protection and appeal to people to live a green life.
The admission for an adult is 20 yuan.You can take Bus 568 or Bus 573 to get there.
請根據以下要點，寫一篇80個詞左右的英語短文，介紹香港海洋公園。
1．香港海洋公園位于香港的南部，是一個著名的主題公園；
2．面積超過91.5萬平方米，是世界上最珍貴的海洋公園之一；
3．有近50年的歷史，是亞洲主要的旅游景點之一，也是香港最受人們喜愛的公園之一，每年吸引了大量的游客；
4．游客可以體驗驚險之旅和欣賞各種表演；
5．香港海洋公園還為其提供的教育項目而自豪。
參考范文
Ocean Park Hong Kong，a famous theme park，is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong.
It is one of the rarest marine parks in the world，covering an area of more than 915,000 square metres.With a history of nearly 50 years，the ocean park has become one of the major tourist attractions in Asia.It is also one of the most adorable parks in Hong Kong，which appeals to a large number of visitors every year.Visitors can experience adventurous trips and enjoy a wide variety of shows，such as dolphin shows.The park also takes pride in its educational programs.
Ocean Park Hong Kong will fill your day with wonder，pleasure and excitement and reward you with satisfying memories.
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
Ⅰ.增分語料積累
無靈主語 (二)
公式二：主語(身體部位/聲音/笑容)＋有靈動詞(＋sb)
意義：……臉上/眼中……流露出……
常見主語：tears/heart/voice/fingers/eye/face...
常見有靈動詞：interrupt打斷，light up露出喜色，well up涌出，spread across浮現，fill/be full of充滿，brighten使開心，stream 流淌等
公式三：主語(表地點/時間的名詞)＋有靈動詞(＋sb)
意義：……目擊/見證……
常見主語：gym/school/the scene/the contest/the argument/dawn/dusk/last Monday/2024...
常見有靈動詞：fall降臨，see/witness目睹等
增分靚句：
When I learned that I won first place in the writing competition，tears of excitement welled up in my eyes.當我得知我在寫作比賽中獲得第一名時，激動的淚水涌上了我的眼睛。
So nervous was I that my throat tightened and my knees felt quite weak.
我緊張得喉嚨發緊，膝蓋發軟。
My fingers shook with extreme anger and I almost couldn’t control my emotions.
我的手指因極度憤怒而顫抖，我幾乎無法控制自己的情緒。
Night fell over the forest and we felt extremely frightened.
夜幕降臨在森林里，我們感到非常害怕。
The street witnessed a car accident last night，which claimed two deaths.
昨晚這條街上發生了一起車禍，造成兩人死亡。
Ⅱ.教材語料積累
詞匯 情感描寫 amusement n．娛樂(活動)；愉悅→amuse vt.(提供)消遣；(使)娛樂→amusing adj.逗人笑的；有趣的→amused adj.被逗樂的；覺得好笑的
動作描寫 buffet vt.連續猛擊；打來打去　accompany vt.陪同；陪伴；伴隨；(尤指用鋼琴)為……伴奏　adopt vt.采用；采取；采納 vt.& vi.領養　stretch vi.延伸；延續 vi.& vt.伸展；舒展　appeal vi.有吸引力；呼吁；懇求；上訴　pedal vt.& vi.騎自行車；踩踏板　wander vt.& vi.閑逛；漫游 vi.走失；離散；走神　bless vt.祝福　cycle vi.騎自行車　set out出發；啟程；(懷著目標)開始工作
句型 1.I wake up to the sound of the wind buffeting the cloth of my tent.(動作描寫) 2.I’m above the Arctic Circle，where in summer the sun never sets.(環境描寫) 3.Spreading out before me，branches of the Rapa River flow through the valley below.(環境描寫) 4.At the far side of the valley，an ancient Sami cottage is visible.Close by，there are a few reindeer feeding on grass.(環境描寫) 5.They used the reindeer’s meat for food，their bones for tools，and their skin for making clothes and tents.(排比修辭) 6.Here I am，alone under this broad sky，breathing the fresh air，and enjoying this great adventure.(動作描寫)
Ⅲ.續寫語料運用
請從以上語料中選擇合適的詞匯，完成以下語段。然后核對答案并背誦該語段。
父母陪著我，我向一望無際的風景如畫的沙灘出發。海浪拍打著海岸。海水在清晨的陽光下閃閃發光。當我們悠閑地沿著海灘閑逛時，腳下的海浪很涼爽。我快樂地堆了一些沙堡。接著，最吸引我的是散落在沙灘上的貝殼。身處如此吸引人的地方，我們感到活著是幸福的。
With my parents 1.accompanying me，I 2.set out for the picturesque beach 3.stretching out as far as we could see.The sea waves were 4.buffeting the shore.The seawater was glittering in the morning sunlight and the sea wave was cool on our feet as we leisurely 5.wandered along the beach.I made some sandcastles 6.with/in amusement.Then 7.what appealed to me most were the seashells scattered on the beach.8.Being in such an appealing place made us feel blessed to be alive.(共34張PPT)
Period 5
Writing
Fascinating parks
Unit 3
內容索引
寫作一　應用文寫作——公園介紹
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
寫作一　應用文寫作——公園介紹
公園介紹屬于說明文，是指使用生動的語言對某一地點進行具體逼真的描繪。要寫清地點中各種活動項目的功能或特點、地理位置、面積、歷史、往來交通方式以及收費情況等。
1.介紹功能或特點
From my point of view，...is an ideal place for relaxation and amusement.
在我看來，……是休閑娛樂的理想場所。
In addition，...can enjoy wonderful performances at the park.
此外，……可以在公園里欣賞精彩的表演。
...is an ideal place for you.It brings you into a magical world where you can enjoy a wonderful experience.
……是你的理想去處。它帶你進入一個神奇的世界，在那里你可以享受一次美妙的體驗。
常用表達
2.介紹地理位置
...is located/situated in the west of the city near the high-speed railway station.
……位于城市的西部，靠近高鐵站。
...lies in the northern part of...，which is well-known for its beautiful lakes.
……位于……北部。它因美麗的湖泊而聞名。
Located/Situated in...，...is one of the most famous parks in China.
位于……，……是中國最著名的公園之一。
It’s...kilometers from the destination to the railway station.
從目的地到火車站有……公里。
3.介紹面積
It is a world-famous theme park covering/which covers an area of...square meters.
＝It is a world-famous theme park with an area of...square meters.
它是一個世界聞名的主題公園，占地面積為……平方米。
4.介紹歷史
...is a famous theme park which has a history of...years.
＝...is a famous theme park with a history of...years.
……是一個著名的主題公園，它有……年的歷史。
5.介紹交通方式
...can be reached by subway/taxi/bus.
可以乘地鐵/出租車/公共汽車到達……
You can get there a little more quickly by taxi.
乘出租車去那里會快一點。
6.介紹收費情況
You need to pay...for the entrance ticket and an additional charge of...for...
你需要付……(錢)買門票和額外費用……(錢)用于……
Each activity costs...
每項活動花費……
...charge no additional fees except the entrance ticket.
除了門票外，……不收取額外費用。
The admission fee is...and all the activities in the park are free/free of charge.
門票是……(錢)，公園里所有的活動都是免費的。
請根據下面表格的內容寫一篇英語短文，介紹鄭州綠博園(The Zhengzhou Greening Expo Park)。
典例演練
地點 緊鄰鄭開大道
面積 約3 000畝
特色 展園99個，是各類花卉的家園
宗旨 展示在環保方面取得的成就，倡導綠色生活
門票 成人票每人次20元
公交 568路和573路
第一步　審題謀篇
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯　(單元寫作詞匯運用)
1.坐落于
2.吸引
3.占地面積為……
4.多達
5.有幸擁有
6.在展覽中
7.極好的；極大的；難以置信的
8.過一種綠色生活
______________
_______________
________________
_____
______________
__________
__________
______________
be located in/on
appeal to/attract
cover an area of...
up to
be blessed with
on display
incredible
live a green life
9.可愛的；討人喜歡的
10.壯麗的；雄偉的；極佳的；非常好的
________
________
adorable
splendid
連詞成句　(教材句式仿寫)
1.鄭州綠博園位于鄭開大道附近，它每年都吸引許多游客。
The Zhengzhou Greening Expo Park is located next to Zhengkai Avenue and ___________________________________.
2.它是個很壯觀的公園，占地面積約3 000畝。
It is a very splendid park and ________________________________.
3.各種各樣的花在多達99個展園里。
Various types of flowers are __________________________.
it attracts numerous visitors each year
it covers an area of about 3,000 mu
in up to 99 exhibition parks
4.無論你喜歡哪種花，無論你喜歡什么花，總有一些不可思議的花會吸引你。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.在世博公園里欣賞自己最喜歡的鮮花，可以讓游客身心放松。
__________________________________________________ makes visitors relaxed mentally and physically.
Appreciating their favourite flowers in the expo park
Whichever and whatever flowers you like，there are incredible flowers that will appeal to you.
6.建設公園的目的是為了展示環境保護的成果，呼吁人們過綠色生活。
The purpose of building the park is to ______________________________
_________________________________________________________.
7.成人門票是20元。你可以乘568路或573路公交車去那里。
_________________________ is 20 yuan.You can take Bus 568 or Bus 573 ___________.
The admission for an adult
show the achievements in environmental protection and appeal to people to live a green life
to get there
第三步　句式升級
1.用分詞短語作狀語改寫句1。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.用非限制性定語從句改寫句2。
_______________________________________________________________
3.用完全倒裝改寫句3。
_______________________________________________________________
Located next to Zhengkai Avenue，the Zhengzhou Greening Expo Park attracts numerous visitors each year.
It is a very splendid park，which covers an area of about 3,000 mu.
In up to 99 exhibition parks are various types of flowers.
4.用強調句型(強調句子主語)改寫句5。
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It is appreciating their favourite flowers in the expo park that makes visitors relaxed mentally and physically.
第四步　組句成篇
用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇80個詞左右的英語短文。
參考范文
Located next to Zhengkai Avenue，the Zhengzhou Greening Expo Park attracts numerous visitors each year.It is a very splendid park，which covers an area of about 3,000 mu.In up to 99 exhibition parks are various types of flowers.Whichever and whatever flowers you like，there are incredible flowers that will appeal to you.It is appreciating their favourite flowers in the expo park that makes visitors relaxed mentally and physically.
The purpose of building the park is to show the achievements in environmental protection and appeal to people to live a green life.
The admission for an adult is 20 yuan.You can take Bus 568 or Bus 573 to get there.
請根據以下要點，寫一篇80個詞左右的英語短文，介紹香港海洋公園。
1.香港海洋公園位于香港的南部，是一個著名的主題公園；
2.面積超過91.5萬平方米，是世界上最珍貴的海洋公園之一；
3.有近50年的歷史，是亞洲主要的旅游景點之一，也是香港最受人們喜愛的公園之一，每年吸引了大量的游客；
4.游客可以體驗驚險之旅和欣賞各種表演；
5.香港海洋公園還為其提供的教育項目而自豪。
達標檢測
參考范文
Ocean Park Hong Kong，a famous theme park，is situated in the southern side of Hong Kong.
It is one of the rarest marine parks in the world，covering an area of more than 915,000 square metres.With a history of nearly 50 years，the ocean park has become one of the major tourist attractions in Asia.It is also one of the most adorable parks in Hong Kong，which appeals to a large number of visitors every year.Visitors can experience adventurous trips and enjoy a wide variety of shows，such as dolphin shows.The park also takes pride in its educational programs.
Ocean Park Hong Kong will fill your day with wonder，pleasure and excitement and reward you with satisfying memories.
返 回
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
無靈主語 (二)
公式二：主語(身體部位/聲音/笑容)＋有靈動詞(＋sb)
意義：……臉上/眼中……流露出……
常見主語：tears/heart/voice/fingers/eye/face...
常見有靈動詞：interrupt打斷，light up露出喜色，well up涌出，spread across浮現，fill/be full of充滿，brighten使開心，stream 流淌等
公式三：主語(表地點/時間的名詞)＋有靈動詞(＋sb)
意義：……目擊/見證……
Ⅰ.增分語料積累
常見主語：gym/school/the scene/the contest/the argument/dawn/dusk/
last Monday/2024...
常見有靈動詞：fall降臨，see/witness目睹等
增分靚句：
When I learned that I won first place in the writing competition，tears of excitement welled up in my eyes.當我得知我在寫作比賽中獲得第一名時，激動的淚水涌上了我的眼睛。
So nervous was I that my throat tightened and my knees felt quite weak.
我緊張得喉嚨發緊，膝蓋發軟。
My fingers shook with extreme anger and I almost couldn’t control my emotions.
我的手指因極度憤怒而顫抖，我幾乎無法控制自己的情緒。
Night fell over the forest and we felt extremely frightened.
夜幕降臨在森林里，我們感到非常害怕。
The street witnessed a car accident last night，which claimed two deaths.
昨晚這條街上發生了一起車禍，造成兩人死亡。
Ⅱ.教材語料積累
詞匯 情感描寫 amusement n.娛樂(活動)；愉悅→amuse vt.(提供)消遣；(使)娛樂→amusing adj.逗人笑的；有趣的→amused adj.被逗樂的；覺得好笑的
動作描寫 buffet vt.連續猛擊；打來打去　accompany vt.陪同；陪伴；伴隨；(尤指用鋼琴)為……伴奏　adopt vt.采用；采取；采納 vt.& vi.領養　stretch vi.延伸；延續 vi.& vt.伸展；舒展　appeal vi.有吸引力；呼吁；懇求；上訴　pedal vt.& vi.騎自行車；踩踏板　wander vt.& vi.閑逛；漫游 vi.走失；離散；走神　bless vt.祝福　cycle vi.騎自行車　set out出發；啟程；(懷著目標)開始工作
句型 1.I wake up to the sound of the wind buffeting the cloth of my tent.
(動作描寫)
2.I’m above the Arctic Circle，where in summer the sun never sets.
(環境描寫)
3.Spreading out before me，branches of the Rapa River flow through the valley below.(環境描寫)
4.At the far side of the valley，an ancient Sami cottage is visible.
Close by，there are a few reindeer feeding on grass.(環境描寫)
句型 5.They used the reindeer’s meat for food，their bones for tools，and their skin for making clothes and tents.(排比修辭)
6.Here I am，alone under this broad sky，breathing the fresh air，and enjoying this great adventure.(動作描寫)
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父母陪著我，我向一望無際的風景如畫的沙灘出發。海浪拍打著海岸。
With my parents 1.__________________，I 2.___________ the picturesque beach 3._________________________________.The sea waves were 4.___________________.
accompanying me
set out for
stretching out as far as we could see
buffeting the shore
海水在清晨的陽光下閃閃發光。當我們悠閑地沿著海灘閑逛時，腳下的海浪很涼爽。我快樂地堆了一些沙堡。接著，最吸引我的是散落在沙灘上的貝殼。身處如此吸引人的地方，我們感到活著是幸福的。
The seawater was glittering in the morning sunlight and the sea wave was cool on our feet as we leisurely 5._______________________.I made some sandcastles 6.___________________.Then 7.________________________ were the seashells scattered on the beach.8.__________________________
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wandered along the beach
with/in amusement
what appealed to me most
Being in such an appealing
place made us feel blessed to be alive
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