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Period 5　Writing
寫作一　應用文寫作——建議信
本單元的寫作任務是寫一封建議信。建議信是常用的書信形式之一，主要用來針對存在的某一問題提出自己的合理建議，從而達到解決問題的目的。建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。注意建議信的語氣一定要委婉。
1．首段常用句式
You wrote in your letter that...I understand quite well that...
你在信中寫道……我非常理解……
You have asked for my advice about/on...and I will try to offer you some.
你問我關于……的建議，我將盡力給你提供一些。
Learning/Hearing that you have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth，I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
得知你在做……方面有困難，我特此寫信給你一些建議。
I’m more than glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...Here are a few suggestions.很高興收到你詢問我關于……的建議的來信，這里是一些建議。
The following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.我的建議如下。
2．中段常用句式
I think you should...我認為你應該……
Why not...？何不……？
I strongly recommend/suggest/advise that...
我強烈建議……
You’d better...你最好……
It would be a good idea if you could...
如果你能夠……會是個好主意。
How/What about...？……怎么樣呀？
If I were you，I would...如果我是你，我會……
3．尾段常用句式
I sincerely/do hope you will find these suggestions helpful./I sincerely/do hope my suggestions will be of benefit/use to you.
我由衷地/真的希望你會發現這些建議有幫助。/我由衷地/真的希望我的建議對你有益/有用。
If you take the above suggestions，you will find it easy to...
如果你采納以上建議，你會發現……很容易。
I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account/consideration.
我相信你會認真考慮我的建議。
I am sure...我確定……
徐婷，今年十四歲，因為父母常年在外地工作而時常感到孤獨。假定你是Susan Luo，請你寫信給她提供一些建議并說明原因。
第一步　審題謀篇
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯　(單元寫作詞匯運用)
1．滿意的content
2．建議recommend
3．志愿者volunteer
4．青少年teenager
5．事實上actually
6．集中；特別關注focus on
7．困惑的confused
8．喜愛 be attracted to
連詞成句　(教材句式仿寫)
1．你對現在的生活不滿意。
You are not content with your present life.
2．你的父母在另一座城市工作。
Your parents work in another city.
3．我非常理解你感到困惑和焦慮。
I understand quite well that you feel confused and anxious.
4．像你這樣的青少年離開父母生活時感到孤獨是很正常的。
It is not unusual for teenagers like you to feel lonely when they live away from their parents.
5．獨自待在家里太久對你的健康有害，而且很容易感到不安和煩惱。
Staying at home alone for too long is harmful to your health and makes it very easy to be upset and annoyed.
6．我建議你去參加一個志愿者組織，這樣你不僅可以幫助別人，還可以和別人交流。
I recommend you to join a volunteer organization so that you can not only help others but also communicate with others.
7．事實上，有很多需要你幫助的人，很快你就會愛上這個組織。
Actually，there are many people who need your help and soon you will be attracted to the organization.
8．如果你能關注一些有意義的事情來讓自己感覺更好，這將是一個好主意。
It would be a good idea if you could focus on some meaningful things so that you can make yourself feel better.
9．如果你采納上面的建議，我確信你會發現改變現狀很容易。
If you take the above suggestions，I am sure that you will find that it is easy to change your present situation.
第三步　句式升級
1．用句型the reason why...is that...合并句1和句2。
The reason why you are not content with your present life is that your parents work in another city.
2．把句6改為含有賓語從句的復合句。
I recommend that you (should) join a volunteer organization so that you can not only help others but also communicate with others.
3．用形式賓語it升級句9。
If you take the above suggestions，I am sure that you will find it easy to change your present situation.
第四步　組句成篇
用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇80個詞左右的英語短文。
參考范文
Dear Xu Ting，
You wrote that the reason why you are not content with your present life is that your parents work in another city.The following are my suggestions.
I understand quite well that you feel confused and anxious.It is not unusual for teenagers like you to feel lonely when they live away from their parents.Staying at home alone for too long is harmful to your health and makes it very easy to be upset and annoyed.So I recommend that you should join a volunteer organization so that you can not only help others but also communicate with others.Actually，there are many people who need your help and soon you will be attracted to the organization.Besides，it would be a good idea if you could focus on some meaningful things so that you can make yourself feel better.
If you take the above suggestions，I am sure that you will find it easy to change your present situation.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes，
Susan Luo
假設你是李華，你的好友Mary前不久去了英國留學。她寫信告訴你她不適應英國的高中生活，感到很孤獨。請你根據以下要點給她寫一封建議信：
1．努力提高英語水平；
2．廣交朋友；
3．多參加各種活動。
注意：寫作詞數應為80個左右。
參考范文
Dear Mary，
Hearing that you have trouble in adapting to your new school and meet some challenges，I feel terribly sorry.
I’m willing to give you some advice.Firstly，I recommend that you sign up for advanced English classes，which can help you speak English fluently.Secondly，why not make more friends？They can help you forget your loneliness.Thirdly，it would be a good idea if you take an active part in after-class activities.
I really hope that these suggestions are of great help to you.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
Ⅰ.續寫技法指導——讀后續寫應遵循的原則與續寫步驟
Ⅱ.教材語料積累
詞匯 情感描寫 content adj.滿意的；滿足的　confuse vt.使糊涂；使迷惑→confusing adj.難以理解的；不清楚的→confused adj.糊涂的；迷惑的　responsible adj.負責的；有責任的　addicted adj.有癮的；上癮的；入迷的
動作描寫 debate vt.& vi.辯論；爭論　challenge vt.懷疑；向……挑戰　recommend vt.建議；推薦；介紹　advance vi.前進；發展 vt.發展；促進　quit vt.& vi.停止；戒掉；離開(工作職位、學校等)　schedule vt.安排；預定
句型 1.Obviously，I was unhappy，but I won’t quit.(情感描寫) 2．Every Wednesday，we work at a soup kitchen and hand out food to homeless people in the community.(動作描寫) 3．I’m a bit worried about keeping up with the other students in my advanced course...(情感描寫) 4．I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.(情感描寫) 5．Good habits formed at youth make all the difference.(結尾升華句) 6．Studying hard isn’t always fun，but I’ll be well prepared for university or whatever else comes in the future.(結尾升華句)
續寫語料運用
請從以上語料中選擇合適的詞匯，完成以下語段。然后核對答案并背誦該語段。
在早晨，按照所安排的，雙胞胎早早起床，躡手躡腳地走進廚房，從袋子里舀出一些面粉。剛一開始做面包，他們就感到迷惑。就在那時，他們的爸爸溜進廚房，輕拍雙胞胎的肩膀，柔聲安慰道：“不要放棄。你們可以戰勝這個挑戰。”這對雙胞胎最后把面包做得很好，一陣幸福掠過他們的心頭。接著，他們端著早餐，向樓上走去，喊醒他們的媽媽。雙眼閃爍著激動的光芒，媽媽是如此滿足，她把孩子們攬入懷中。
In the morning,1.as scheduled，the twins got up early，tiptoed to the kitchen and scooped some flour out of the bag.Once they set about making bread,2.they felt confused.Just at that time，their father slid into the kitchen，patted the twins’ shoulders and comforted them in a soft voice，“3.Don’t quit.You can 4.overcome the challenge.” The twins made the bread quite well at last and a flash of happiness swept through their hearts.Then they carried breakfast,5.advanced upstairs and woke up their mother.With her eyes glittering with excitement,6.the mother was so content that she gathered her children into her arms.(共29張PPT)
Period 5
Writing
Teenage life
Unit 1
內容索引
寫作一　應用文寫作——建議信
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
寫作一　應用文寫作——建議信
本單元的寫作任務是寫一封建議信。建議信是常用的書信形式之一，主要用來針對存在的某一問題提出自己的合理建議，從而達到解決問題的目的。建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。注意建議信的語氣一定要委婉。
常用表達
1.首段常用句式
You wrote in your letter that...I understand quite well that...
你在信中寫道……我非常理解……
You have asked for my advice about/on...and I will try to offer you some.
你問我關于……的建議，我將盡力給你提供一些。
Learning/Hearing that you have trouble/difficulty (in) doing sth，I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
得知你在做……方面有困難，我特此寫信給你一些建議。
I’m more than glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...Here are a few suggestions.
很高興收到你詢問我關于……的建議的來信，這里是一些建議。
The following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.
我的建議如下。
2.中段常用句式
I think you should...我認為你應該……
Why not...？何不……？
I strongly recommend/suggest/advise that...
我強烈建議……
You’d better...你最好……
It would be a good idea if you could...
如果你能夠……會是個好主意。
How/What about...？……怎么樣呀？
If I were you，I would...如果我是你，我會……
3.尾段常用句式
I sincerely/do hope you will find these suggestions helpful./I sincerely/do hope my suggestions will be of benefit/use to you.
我由衷地/真的希望你會發現這些建議有幫助。/我由衷地/真的希望我的建議對你有益/有用。
If you take the above suggestions，you will find it easy to...
如果你采納以上建議，你會發現……很容易。
I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account/ consideration.我相信你會認真考慮我的建議。
I am sure...我確定……
徐婷，今年十四歲，因為父母常年在外地工作而時常感到孤獨。假定你是Susan Luo，請你寫信給她提供一些建議并說明原因。
典例演練
第一步　審題謀篇
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯(單元寫作詞匯運用)
1.滿意的
2.建議
3.志愿者
4.青少年
5.事實上
6.集中；特別關注
7.困惑的
8.喜愛
________
____________
__________
_________
_________
_________
__________
_______________
content
recommend
volunteer
teenager
actually
focus on
confused
be attracted to
1.你對現在的生活不滿意。
_______________________________________________________________
2.你的父母在另一座城市工作。
_______________________________________________________________
3.我非常理解你感到困惑和焦慮。
I understand quite well that .
4.像你這樣的青少年離開父母生活時感到孤獨是很正常的。
when they live away from their parents.
You are not content with your present life.
Your parents work in another city.
you feel confused and anxious
It is not unusual for teenagers like you to feel lonely
連詞成句(教材句式仿寫)
5.獨自待在家里太久對你的健康有害，而且很容易感到不安和煩惱。
is harmful to your health and ______
be upset and annoyed.
6.我建議你去參加一個志愿者組織，這樣你不僅可以幫助別人，還可以和別人交流。
I recommend you to so that you can not only help others but also communicate with others.
7.事實上，有很多需要你幫助的人，很快你就會愛上這個組織。
，there are many people who need your help and soon you will .
Staying at home alone for too long
makes
it very easy to
join a volunteer organization
Actually
be attracted to the organization
8.如果你能關注一些有意義的事情來讓自己感覺更好，這將是一個好主意。
It would be a good idea if you could ________________________________
you can make yourself feel better.
9.如果你采納上面的建議，我確信你會發現改變現狀很容易。
If you take the above suggestions，I am sure that you will find that _____
.
focus on some meaningful things so
that
easy to change your present situation
it is
1.用句型the reason why...is that...合并句1和句2。
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
2.把句6改為含有賓語從句的復合句。
I recommend so that you can not only help others but also communicate with others.
3.用形式賓語it升級句9。
If you take the above suggestions，I am sure that ____________________
.
The reason why you are not content with your present life is that your parents work in another city.
第三步　句式升級
that you (should) join a volunteer organization
you will find it easy to change your present situation
第四步　組句成篇
用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語短文。
參考范文
Dear Xu Ting，
You wrote that the reason why you are not content with your present life is that your parents work in another city.The following are my suggestions.
I understand quite well that you feel confused and anxious.It is not unusual for teenagers like you to feel lonely when they live away from their parents.Staying at home alone for too long is harmful to your health and makes it very easy to be upset and annoyed.So I recommend that you should join a volunteer organization so that you can not only help others but also communicate with others.Actually，there are many people who need your help and soon you will be attracted to the organization.Besides，it would be a good idea if you could focus on some meaningful things so that you can make yourself feel better.
If you take the above suggestions，I am sure that you will find it easy to change your present situation.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes，
Susan Luo
假設你是李華，你的好友Mary前不久去了英國留學。她寫信告訴你她不適應英國的高中生活，感到很孤獨。請你根據以下要點給她寫一封建議信：
1.努力提高英語水平；
2.廣交朋友；
3.多參加各種活動。
注意：寫作詞數應為80個左右。
達標檢測
參考范文
Dear Mary，
Hearing that you have trouble in adapting to your new school and meet some challenges，I feel terribly sorry.
I’m willing to give you some advice.Firstly，I recommend that you sign up for advanced English classes，which can help you speak English fluently.Secondly，why not make more friends？They can help you forget your loneliness.Thirdly，it would be a good idea if you take an active part in after-class activities.
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I really hope that these suggestions are of great help to you.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
Ⅰ.續寫技法指導——讀后續寫應遵循的原則與續寫步驟
Ⅱ.教材語料積累
詞匯 情感描寫 content adj.滿意的；滿足的　confuse vt.使糊涂；使迷惑→confusing adj.難以理解的；不清楚的→confused adj.糊涂的；迷惑的　responsible adj.負責的；有責任的　addicted adj.有癮的；上癮的；入迷的
動作描寫 debate vt.& vi.辯論；爭論　challenge vt.懷疑；向……挑戰　recommend vt.建議；推薦；介紹　advance vi.前進；發展 vt.發展；促進　quit vt.& vi.停止；戒掉；離開(工作職位、學校等)　schedule vt.安排；預定
句型 1.Obviously，I was unhappy，but I won’t quit.(情感描寫)
2.Every Wednesday，we work at a soup kitchen and hand out food to homeless people in the community.(動作描寫)
3.I’m a bit worried about keeping up with the other students in my advanced course...(情感描寫)
4.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.(情感描寫)
5.Good habits formed at youth make all the difference.(結尾升華句)
6.Studying hard isn’t always fun，but I’ll be well prepared for university or whatever else comes in the future.(結尾升華句)
續寫語料運用
請從以上語料中選擇合適的詞匯，完成以下語段。然后核對答案并背誦該語段。
在早晨，按照所安排的，雙胞胎早早起床，躡手躡腳地走進廚房，從袋子里舀出一些面粉。剛一開始做面包，他們就感到迷惑。就在那時，他們的爸爸溜進廚房，輕拍雙胞胎的肩膀，柔聲安慰道：
In the morning,1. ，the twins got up early，tiptoed to the kitchen and scooped some flour out of the bag.Once they set about making bread,2. .Just at that time，their father slid into the kitchen， patted the twins’ shoulders and comforted them in a soft voice，
as scheduled
they felt confused
“不要放棄。你們可以戰勝這個挑戰。”這對雙胞胎最后把面包做得很好，一陣幸福掠過他們的心頭。接著，他們端著早餐，向樓上走去，喊醒他們的媽媽。雙眼閃爍著激動的光芒，媽媽是如此滿足，她把孩子們攬入懷中。
“3. .You can 4. .” The twins made the bread quite well at last and a flash of happiness swept through their hearts. Then they carried breakfast,5. . With her eyes glittering with excitement,6.____________________________
she gathered her children into her arms.
Don’t quit
overcome the challenge
advanced upstairs and woke up their mother
the mother was so content that
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