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Period 5　Writing
寫作一　應用文寫作——健康報告書
本單元的寫作任務是寫健康報告書，屬于記敘文。
1．首段常用句式
In the past，I worried about/was worried about...在過去，我擔心……
I used to do/be...
我過去常做/是……
Recently I have been concerned about...
最近我擔心……
What bothered me was that...
讓我困擾的是……
2．中段常用句式
I read an article that told me that...
我讀了一篇文章，告訴我……
I saw a programme that showed...
我看了一個節目，節目里……
A doctor recommended that...(should)．..
醫生建議……(應該)……
Instead of doing...，I would do...
而不是做……，我會……
I tried to do the following things.
我試著做以下事情。
I took part in...我參加……
Rather than cutting out the foods I enjoyed，I added healthy foods to my meals.
我不再拒絕我喜歡的食物，而是在我的膳食中加入了健康食品。
3．尾段常用句式
Finally，I stopped comparing myself with...
最后，我不再拿自己和……比較。
By being positive about myself and my body，I became both happier and more confident than before.
通過積極地看待自己和自己的身體，我變得比以前更快樂、更自信。
At present，not only am I healthier than before，but I also become happier.
現在，我不僅比以前更健康了，而且變得更快樂了。
Thanks to my effort，I...
由于我的努力，我……
I am more than happy to see the improvements in...
我非常高興看到……方面的進步。
Being physically and mentally healthy is of great importance to...
身心健康對……非常重要。
假如你叫Linda，過去一直因為身體瘦弱、經常生病而苦惱。后來朋友建議你跟她一起參加健身俱樂部，每天適量鍛煉并持之以恒。在俱樂部其他成員的鼓勵下，你現在不僅身體健康了，而且更加活潑開朗了。請根據以上信息寫一份健康報告書。
第一步　審題謀篇
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯　(單元寫作詞匯運用)
1．瘦的，纖細的slim
2．健壯healthy and strong
3．參加俱樂部join a club
4．與……相比較compared with/to
5．而不是rather than
6．有影響make a difference
7．苦惱的annoyed
8．均衡的飲食a balanced diet
9．適量運動take a proper amount of exercise
10．增強體質build up strength
11．停止做(或使用、食用) cut out
連詞成句　(教材句式仿寫)
1．我過去很瘦并且經常生病，我對此很苦惱。
I used to be very slim and often fell ill and it made me annoyed.
2．我的一個朋友建議我參加一個健身俱樂部。(recommend sb to do...)
One of my friends recommended me to join a health club.
3．在這個俱樂部里，我每天堅持做適量的鍛煉。
In the club，I kept taking a proper amount of exercise every day.
4．與過去相比，我戒掉了曾經喜歡吃的垃圾食品，飲食更加均衡。
Compared with the past，I cut out the junk food I once enjoyed and have a more balanced diet.
5．我的汗水起了很大作用。
My sweat made a great difference.
6．現在我經常去健身房而不是去醫院。
Rather than going to hospital，I go to the gym regularly now.
7．經常鍛煉身體極大地增強了我的體質。
Working out regularly has built up my strength greatly.
第三步　句式升級
1．用定語從句升級句1。
I used to be very slim and often fell ill，which made me annoyed.
2．用含虛擬語氣的賓語從句升級句2。
One of my friends recommended that I should join a health club.
第四步　組句成篇
用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語短文。
參考范文
I am Linda.I used to be very slim and often fell ill，which made me annoyed.
One of my friends recommended that I should join a health club.In the club，I kept taking a proper amount of exercise every day.In addition，compared with the past，I cut out the junk food I once enjoyed and have a more balanced diet.My sweat made a great difference.Rather than going to hospital，I go to the gym regularly now.Working out regularly has built up my strength greatly.
By being positive about myself and my body，I became both happier and more confident than before.
寫一篇短文，介紹你自己是如何平衡學習和休息的，內容包括：
1．以前無法平衡學習和休息；
2．現在已經做到二者平衡。
注意：寫作詞數應為80個左右。
參考范文
Two years ago，I couldn’t balance my study and rest.I used to be busy with my study，so I had no time to have a rest.At last I fell ill and had to stay in hospital for 3 weeks.
After I recovered from illness，I began to think about my problems.I got to realise the importance of balancing study and rest.Instead of doing my homework all day，I would go to play basketball for an hour a day.
Finally，by balancing rest and study，I became quite healthy.I didn’t fall behind；instead，I studied better than before.
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
Ⅰ.續寫技法指導——如何根據兩段首句構建續寫情節框架
閱讀文本材料之后，以故事的發展邏輯為基礎，以“兩段首句定一框，二框二首正能量”為支架，構建兩個段落的情節發展。
Ⅱ.教材語料積累
詞匯 情感描寫 determination n．決心；決定→determine v．測定；決定；確定　fall apart破裂；破碎；崩潰　lose heart喪失信心；泄氣　give up放棄；投降　positive adj.積極的；樂觀的
動作描寫 track vt.& vi.追蹤；跟蹤　work out鍛煉；計算出；解決　sweat vt.使出汗；出汗弄濕 vi.出汗；流汗 n．汗水；出汗　make it獲得成功；準時到達
句型 1.As a player，Lang Ping brought honour and glory to her country.As a coach，she led the China women’s volleyball team to medals at world championships and the Olympics.As a person，Lang Ping is loved by fans at home and abroad.(排比) 2．Losing two important players was a big challenge，but Lang Ping did not lose heart.(情感描寫) 3．When Michael Jordan’s feet left the ground，time seemed to stand still.(夸張) 4．The player who became known as “Air Jordan” changed basketball with his graceful moves and jumps.(比喻) 5．I almost went bananas，too.(比喻) 6．By being positive about myself and my body，I became both healthier and happier.(情感描寫)
續寫語料運用
請從以上語料中選擇合適的詞匯，完成以下語段。然后核對答案并背誦該語段。
當看到一只兔子的時候，我和爸爸決定追它。它跑得那么快以致它消失在樹林中。直到那時，我們才意識到最后一抹霞光正快速消失在樹叢中。在陌生的樹林里迷路了，我嚇得一身冷汗，幾乎要崩潰了。我聲音顫抖地說道：“爸爸，我們怎樣才能解決這個困境呢？”爸爸喃喃地說：“不要灰心！不要放棄！我們會成功到達農舍的！”
When seeing a rabbit，Dad and I 1.determined to track it.So swiftly did it run that it disappeared in the forest.It was not until then that we realized that the last ray of twilight was quickly disappearing among the trees.Lost in the unfamiliar forest，I 2.was in cold sweat from extreme horror and I nearly 3.fell apart.I said in a trembling voice，“Dad,4.how can we work out the dilemma？” Dad murmured，“Don’t 5.lose heart！Don’t 6.give up！We will 7.make it to the farmhouse！”(共28張PPT)
Period 5
Writing
Sports and fitness
Unit 3
內容索引
寫作一　應用文寫作——健康報告書
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
寫作一　應用文寫作——健康報告書
本單元的寫作任務是寫健康報告書，屬于記敘文。
常用表達
1.首段常用句式
In the past，I worried about/was worried about...在過去，我擔心……
I used to do/be...
我過去常做/是……
Recently I have been concerned about...
最近我擔心……
What bothered me was that...
讓我困擾的是……
2.中段常用句式
I read an article that told me that...
我讀了一篇文章，告訴我……
I saw a programme that showed...
我看了一個節目，節目里……
A doctor recommended that...(should)...
醫生建議……(應該)……
Instead of doing...，I would do...
而不是做……，我會……
I tried to do the following things.
我試著做以下事情。
I took part in...我參加……
Rather than cutting out the foods I enjoyed，I added healthy foods to my meals.
我不再拒絕我喜歡的食物，而是在我的膳食中加入了健康食品。
3.尾段常用句式
Finally，I stopped comparing myself with...
最后，我不再拿自己和……比較。
By being positive about myself and my body，I became both happier and more confident than before.
通過積極地看待自己和自己的身體，我變得比以前更快樂、更自信。
At present，not only am I healthier than before，but I also become happier.
現在，我不僅比以前更健康了，而且變得更快樂了。
Thanks to my effort，I...
由于我的努力，我……
I am more than happy to see the improvements in...
我非常高興看到……方面的進步。
Being physically and mentally healthy is of great importance to...
身心健康對……非常重要。
假如你叫Linda，過去一直因為身體瘦弱、經常生病而苦惱。后來朋友建議你跟她一起參加健身俱樂部，每天適量鍛煉并持之以恒。在俱樂部其他成員的鼓勵下，你現在不僅身體健康了，而且更加活潑開朗了。請根據以上信息寫一份健康報告書。
典例演練
第一步　審題謀篇
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯(單元寫作詞匯運用)
1.瘦的，纖細的
2.健壯
3.參加俱樂部
4.與……相比較
5.而不是
6.有影響
______
__________________
___________
_________________
____________
_________________
slim
healthy and strong
join a club
compared with/to
rather than
make a difference
7.苦惱的
8.均衡的飲食
9.適量運動
10.增強體質
11.停止做(或使用、食用)
__________
_______________
______________________________
_________________
________
annoyed
a balanced diet
take a proper amount of exercise
build up strength
cut out
1.我過去很瘦并且經常生病，我對此很苦惱。
and it made me annoyed.
2.我的一個朋友建議我參加一個健身俱樂部。(recommend sb to do...)
_______________________________________________________________
3.在這個俱樂部里，我每天堅持做適量的鍛煉。
_______________________________________________________________
I used to be very slim and often fell ill
One of my friends recommended me to join a health club.
連詞成句(教材句式仿寫)
In the club，I kept taking a proper amount of exercise every day.
4.與過去相比，我戒掉了曾經喜歡吃的垃圾食品，飲食更加均衡。
，I____________________________________
.
5.我的汗水起了很大作用。
_______________________________________________________________
6.現在我經常去健身房而不是去醫院。
，I go to the gym regularly now.
7.經常鍛煉身體極大地增強了我的體質。
has built up my strength greatly.
Compared with the past
cut out the junk food I once enjoyed and
have a more balanced diet
My sweat made a great difference.
Rather than going to hospital
Working out regularly
1.用定語從句升級句1。
_______________________________________________________________
2.用含虛擬語氣的賓語從句升級句2。
_______________________________________________________________
I used to be very slim and often fell ill，which made me annoyed.
第三步　句式升級
One of my friends recommended that I should join a health club.
第四步　組句成篇
用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語短文。
參考范文
I am Linda.I used to be very slim and often fell ill，which made me annoyed.
One of my friends recommended that I should join a health club.In the club，I kept taking a proper amount of exercise every day.In addition，compared with the past，I cut out the junk food I once enjoyed and have a more balanced diet.My sweat made a great difference.Rather than going to hospital，I go to the gym regularly now.Working out regularly has built up my strength greatly.
By being positive about myself and my body，I became both happier and more confident than before.
寫一篇短文，介紹你自己是如何平衡學習和休息的，內容包括：
1.以前無法平衡學習和休息；
2.現在已經做到二者平衡。
注意：寫作詞數應為80個左右。
達標檢測
參考范文
Two years ago，I couldn’t balance my study and rest.I used to be busy with my study，so I had no time to have a rest.At last I fell ill and had to stay in hospital for 3 weeks.
After I recovered from illness，I began to think about my problems.I got to realise the importance of balancing study and rest.Instead of doing my homework all day，I would go to play basketball for an hour a day.
Finally，by balancing rest and study，I became quite healthy.I didn’t fall behind；instead，I studied better than before.
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寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
Ⅰ.續寫技法指導——如何根據兩段首句構建續寫情節框架
閱讀文本材料之后，以故事的發展邏輯為基礎，以“兩段首句定一框，二框二首正能量”為支架，構建兩個段落的情節發展。
Ⅱ.教材語料積累
詞匯 情感描寫 determination n.決心；決定→determine v.測定；決定；確定　fall apart破裂；破碎；崩潰　lose heart喪失信心；泄氣　give up放棄；投降　positive adj.積極的；樂觀的
動作描寫 track vt.& vi.追蹤；跟蹤　work out鍛煉；計算出；解決　sweat vt.使出汗；出汗弄濕 vi.出汗；流汗 n.汗水；出汗　make it獲得成功；準時到達
句型 1.As a player，Lang Ping brought honour and glory to her country.As a coach，she led the China women’s volleyball team to medals at world championships and the Olympics.As a person，Lang Ping is loved by fans at home and abroad.(排比)
2.Losing two important players was a big challenge，but Lang Ping did not lose heart.(情感描寫)
3.When Michael Jordan’s feet left the ground，time seemed to stand still.(夸張)
句 型 4.The player who became known as “Air Jordan” changed basketball with his graceful moves and jumps.(比喻)
5.I almost went bananas，too.(比喻)
6.By being positive about myself and my body，I became both healthier and happier.(情感描寫)
續寫語料運用
請從以上語料中選擇合適的詞匯，完成以下語段。然后核對答案并背誦該語段。
當看到一只兔子的時候，我和爸爸決定追它。它跑得那么快以致它消失在樹林中。在陌生的樹林里迷路了，我嚇得一身冷汗，幾乎要崩潰了。
When seeing a rabbit，Dad and I 1. it.So swiftly did it run that it disappeared in the forest.It was not until then that we realized that the last ray of twilight was quickly disappearing among the trees.
determined to track
在陌生的樹林里迷路了，我嚇得一身冷汗，幾乎要崩潰了。我聲音顫抖地說道：“爸爸，我們怎樣才能解決這個困境呢？”爸爸喃喃地說：“不要灰心！不要放棄！我們會成功到達農舍的！”
Lost in the unfamiliar forest，I 2. from extreme horror and I nearly 3. .I said in a trembling voice，“Dad,4._________
？” Dad murmured，“Don’t 5. ！Don’t 6. ！We will 7. ！”
was in cold sweat
fell apart
how can
we work out the dilemma
lose heart
give up
make it to the farmhouse
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