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Period 5　Writing
寫作一　應用文寫作——博客
本單元的寫作任務是寫一篇關于語言學習的博客。 寫此類博客時，可以就自己學習語言時遇到的困難提出問題，也可以回復他人的博客，提出自己的建議來幫助他人解決問題。
1．首段常用句式
My name is...I’m writing the blog to offer you some practical suggestions.我叫……，我寫這個博客來給你提供一些實用的建議。
I’m writing a blog to do you a favour.
我寫這個博客來幫助你。
I am terribly sorry to hear that you are having trouble/difficulty speaking fluent English.
聽說你在說流利的英語方面遇到了問題，我非常遺憾。
You have asked for my advice on...and I will try to provide some suggestions.
你曾向我尋求有關……的建議，我將盡力提供一些建議。
Learning that you have some difficulty with...，I am willing to help you out of difficulty.
得知你在……方面有困難，我樂意幫助你擺脫困境。
2．中段常用句式
Firstly/To start with/To begin with，you’d better...首先，你最好……
Besides/Furthermore/What’s more，why not...？另外，何不……？
Last but not least，it would be a good idea if you could...
最后但同樣重要的是，如果你能……，這會是個好主意。
I strongly suggest that you (should)．..
我強烈建議你……
Learning a language is a gradual process—it does not happen overnight.
學習一門語言是一個循序漸進的過程，不可能一蹴而就。
If you often practice giving speeches in English，you will get your oral English improved.
如果你經常練習用英語做演講，你就會提高你的英語口語。
The Internet is the most exciting，unlimited English resource and it is right at your fingertips.網絡是最令人興奮且不受限制的英語學習資源，一切都觸手可及。
3．尾段常用句式
I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.
我想讓你介紹一些學習語法的好方法。
Faced with so many difficulties，I have to ask you for help.
面對這么多的困難，我不得不向你求助。
In the meanwhile/At the same time，I beg you to...so that...Also，I would like you to...
同時，我懇求你……以便……我也想讓你……
I have met with many difficulties in learning English.在學習英語的過程中我遇到了許多困難。
I wonder if/whether you could do me a favour...我想知道你是否能幫我一個忙……
I would appreciate it if you could offer me some practical suggestions.
如果你能給我一些實用的建議，我將不勝感激。
在英語學習的博客上，Li Rui說進入高中后感覺有許多要背的單詞，但是不知道怎樣記單詞。請你寫一篇博客，給她提供一些記憶英語單詞方面的建議。
要點：1.要學會讀單詞，而不是只會拼寫；要學會背短語、造句子，單詞在語境中才會記得更牢；盡量多讀英文文章。
2．你的問題，并尋求建議。
第一步　審題謀篇
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯　(單元寫作詞匯運用)
1．給某人提供一些建議 offer sb some advice
2．觀點 point of view
3．另外 in addition
4．而不是instead of
5．擴大某人的詞匯量 enlarge one’s vocabulary
6．造句 make up sentences
7．語境 context
8．感激 appreciate
9．各種各樣的 various/a variety of/varieties of
10．以……為基礎 be based on/upon
連詞成句　(教材句式仿寫)
1．基于我自己的經驗，我將為你提供一些有關如何記單詞的建議。
Based on/upon my own experience，I will offer you some advice on how to remember words.
2．在我看來，你不應該只會拼寫英語單詞，你必須先學會讀單詞。
From my point of view，you shouldn’t only be able to spell English words；you must learn to read them first.
3．你最好多記短語、多造句，因為在語境中學單詞會更好。
You’d better remember more phrases and make up more sentences because it’s better to learn words in context.
4．閱讀各種英文文章對擴大你的詞匯量也很重要。
Reading various/a variety of/varieties of English articles is also greatly important for you to enlarge your vocabulary.
5．我的問題是我寫不好作文。如果有人能給我一些好的建議，我將感激不盡。
My problem is that I can’t write well.I would appreciate it if someone could provide me with some good tips.
第三步　句式升級
1．使用instead of改寫句2。
From my point of view，you must learn to read English words first instead of only being able to spell them.
2．用“be＋of＋n.”改寫句4。
Reading various/a variety of/varieties of English articles is also of great importance for you to enlarge your vocabulary.
第四步　組句成篇
用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語短文。
參考范文
Based on/upon my own experience，I will offer you some advice on how to remember words.
From my point of view，you must learn to read English words first instead of only being able to spell them.In addition，you’d better remember more phrases and make up more sentences because it’s better to learn words in context.Furthermore，reading various/a variety of/varieties of English articles is also of great importance for you to enlarge your vocabulary.Do remember to take notes when you meet with some unknown words.
My problem is that I can’t write well.I would appreciate it if someone could provide me with some good tips.
在英語學習的博客上，請你以“How to Improve Oral English”為題寫一篇英語博文，談談怎樣才能提高英語口語，并就自己的問題“如何提高書面英語”尋求幫助。
參考范文
How to Improve Oral English
Learning that many students have difficulty with oral English，I am willing to offer some practical suggestions.
To begin with，you’d better practise speaking English every day.Besides，watching English movies is of great use for improving your spoken English and broadening your horizons.Last but not least，you shouldn’t be afraid of speaking English in front of others or making mistakes.Only in this way can you make great progress in English.
My biggest problem is written English.I would appreciate it if someone could offer me some practical suggestions.
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
Ⅰ.續寫技法指導——如何利用“五所”寫續寫中間過渡句
精巧構思完續寫兩段的銜接句和主題升華句后，還要有效填充兩段的過渡句。過渡句猶如橋梁，連接著續寫內容的各個部分，使行文流暢自然、邏輯嚴謹清晰，使讀者毫無違和感地跟隨作者的筆觸進入新的情境。此處可借助“五所”，即所見(環境描寫/人物描寫/神態描寫)、所聞(語言描寫)、所說(語言描寫)、所思(心理描寫)、所做(動作描寫)，讓續寫內容層次分明、渾然一體，為續寫內容增色添彩。以上描寫手法在后面的語料積累中將陸續給予講解。
Ⅱ.教材語料積累
詞匯 情感描寫 appreciate vt.欣賞；感激；領會　description n．描寫(文字)；形容→describe vt.描述　beyond description難以描述
動作描寫 beg vt.懇求；祈求；哀求　regard vt.把……視為；看待　struggle n．& vi.斗爭；奮斗；搏斗　refer to指的是；描述；提到；查閱
句型 1.One language sets you in a corridor for life.Two languages open every door along the way.(主旨升華) 2．I used to get high marks in English，but now I’m having a lot of trouble with my listening.(對比) 3．My biggest headache is how to be polite in English.(比喻) 4．If I’m talking to a close friend，I can...But if I’m talking to someone...，I must...If I’m talking to someone senior to me，then I should say...(排比)
續寫語料運用
請從以上語料中選擇合適的詞匯，完成以下語段。然后核對答案并背誦該語段。
Mac正沿著山路騎自行車，這時他看到一只狼張著血盆大口追趕他。他的恐懼無以言表。他乞求路過的司機幫助他，但是徒勞無果。因此，他毫不猶豫地從自行車上下來，抓住自行車，用盡全力把自行車扔向狼，盡力把狼嚇走。他正要成為狼的盤中餐時，他的朋友們趕到救下了他。當他提起這件恐怖的事情時，他仍然感到毛骨悚然。
Mac was pedalling along the mountain road when he saw a wolf running after him，which opened its bloody mouth.His fear was 1.beyond description.He 2.begged passing drivers to help him，but in vain.So he got off his bike without hesitation，seized it and threw it at the wolf with all his strength，3.struggling to frighten the wolf away.He was about to become the food of the wolf when his friends arrived and rescued him.When he 4.referred to the frightening thing，he still felt as if his hair had stood on end.(共28張PPT)
Period 5
Writing
Languages around the world
Unit 5
內容索引
寫作一　應用文寫作——博客
寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
寫作一　應用文寫作——博客
本單元的寫作任務是寫一篇關于語言學習的博客。寫此類博客時，可以就自己學習語言時遇到的困難提出問題，也可以回復他人的博客，提出自己的建議來幫助他人解決問題。
1.首段常用句式
My name is...I’m writing the blog to offer you some practical suggestions.我叫……，我寫這個博客來給你提供一些實用的建議。
I’m writing a blog to do you a favour.
我寫這個博客來幫助你。
I am terribly sorry to hear that you are having trouble/difficulty speaking fluent English.
聽說你在說流利的英語方面遇到了問題，我非常遺憾。
常用表達
You have asked for my advice on...and I will try to provide some suggestions.
你曾向我尋求有關……的建議，我將盡力提供一些建議。
Learning that you have some difficulty with...，I am willing to help you out of difficulty.
得知你在……方面有困難，我樂意幫助你擺脫困境。
2.中段常用句式
Firstly/To start with/To begin with，you’d better...首先，你最好……
Besides/Furthermore/What’s more，why not...？另外，何不……？
Last but not least，it would be a good idea if you could...
最后但同樣重要的是，如果你能……，這會是個好主意。
I strongly suggest that you (should)...
我強烈建議你……
Learning a language is a gradual process—it does not happen overnight.
學習一門語言是一個循序漸進的過程，不可能一蹴而就。
If you often practice giving speeches in English，you will get your oral English improved.
如果你經常練習用英語做演講，你就會提高你的英語口語。
The Internet is the most exciting，unlimited English resource and it is right at your fingertips.
網絡是最令人興奮且不受限制的英語學習資源，一切都觸手可及。
3.尾段常用句式
I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.
我想讓你介紹一些學習語法的好方法。
Faced with so many difficulties，I have to ask you for help.
面對這么多的困難，我不得不向你求助。
In the meanwhile/At the same time，I beg you to...so that...Also，I would like you to...同時，我懇求你……以便……我也想讓你……
I have met with many difficulties in learning English.
在學習英語的過程中我遇到了許多困難。
I wonder if/whether you could do me a favour...
我想知道你是否能幫我一個忙……
I would appreciate it if you could offer me some practical suggestions.
如果你能給我一些實用的建議，我將不勝感激。
在英語學習的博客上，Li Rui說進入高中后感覺有許多要背的單詞，但是不知道怎樣記單詞。請你寫一篇博客，給她提供一些記憶英語單詞方面的建議。
要點：1.要學會讀單詞，而不是只會拼寫；要學會背短語、造句子，單詞在語境中才會記得更牢；盡量多讀英文文章。
2.你的問題，并尋求建議。
典例演練
第一步　審題謀篇
第二步　遣詞造句
核心詞匯(單元寫作詞匯運用)
1.給某人提供一些建議
2.觀點
3.另外
4.而不是
5.擴大某人的詞匯量
6.造句
____________________
_____________
___________
___________
________________________
___________________
offer sb some advice
point of view
in addition
instead of
enlarge one’s vocabulary
make up sentences
7.語境
8.感激
9.各種各樣的
10.以……為基礎
_________
____________
_____________________________
__________________
context
appreciate
various/a variety of/varieties of
be based on/upon
1.基于我自己的經驗，我將為你提供一些有關如何記單詞的建議。
，I will _________________________
.
2.在我看來，你不應該只會拼寫英語單詞，你必須先學會讀單詞。
，you shouldn’t only be able to spell English words；you must learn to read them first.
Based on/upon my own experience
offer you some advice on
連詞成句(教材句式仿寫)
how to remember words
From my point of view
3.你最好多記短語、多造句，因為在語境中學單詞會更好。
You’d better ___________________________________________________
because it’s better to .
4.閱讀各種英文文章對擴大你的詞匯量也很重要。
is also greatly important for you .
5.我的問題是我寫不好作文。如果有人能給我一些好的建議，我將感激不盡。
My problem is ____________________ I ____________________________
.
remember more phrases and make up more sentences
learn words in context
Reading various/a variety of/varieties of English articles
to enlarge your vocabulary
that I can’t write well.
would appreciate it if someone
could provide me with some good tips
1.使用instead of改寫句2。
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
2.用“be＋of＋n.”改寫句4。
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
From my point of view，you must learn to read English words first instead of only being able to spell them.
第三步　句式升級
Reading various/a variety of/varieties of English articles is also of great importance for you to enlarge your vocabulary.
第四步　組句成篇
用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語短文。
參考范文
Based on/upon my own experience，I will offer you some advice on how to remember words.
From my point of view，you must learn to read English words first instead of only being able to spell them.In addition，you’d better remember more phrases and make up more sentences because it’s better to learn words in context.Furthermore，reading various/a variety of/varieties of English articles is also of great importance for you to enlarge your vocabulary.Do remember to take notes when you meet with some unknown words.
My problem is that I can’t write well.I would appreciate it if someone could provide me with some good tips.
在英語學習的博客上，請你以“How to Improve Oral English”為題寫一篇英語博文，談談怎樣才能提高英語口語，并就自己的問題“如何提高書面英語”尋求幫助。
達標檢測
參考范文
How to Improve Oral English
Learning that many students have difficulty with oral English，I am willing to offer some practical suggestions.
To begin with，you’d better practise speaking English every day.Besides，watching English movies is of great use for improving your spoken English and broadening your horizons.Last but not least，you shouldn’t be afraid of speaking English in front of others or making mistakes.Only in this way can you make great progress in English.
My biggest problem is written English.I would appreciate it if someone could offer me some practical suggestions.
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寫作二　讀后續寫微技能
Ⅰ.續寫技法指導——如何利用“五所”寫續寫中間過渡句
精巧構思完續寫兩段的銜接句和主題升華句后，還要有效填充兩段的過渡句。過渡句猶如橋梁，連接著續寫內容的各個部分，使行文流暢自然、邏輯嚴謹清晰，使讀者毫無違和感地跟隨作者的筆觸進入新的情境。此處可借助“五所”，即所見(環境描寫/人物描寫/神態描寫)、所聞(語言描寫)、所說(語言描寫)、所思(心理描寫)、所做(動作描寫)，讓續寫內容層次分明、渾然一體，為續寫內容增色添彩。以上描寫手法在后面的語料積累中將陸續給予講解。
Ⅱ.教材語料積累
詞匯 情感描寫 appreciate vt.欣賞；感激；領會　description n.描寫(文字)；形容→describe vt.描述　beyond description難以描述
動作描寫 beg vt.懇求；祈求；哀求　regard vt.把……視為；看待　struggle n.& vi.斗爭；奮斗；搏斗　refer to指的是；描述；提到；查閱
句型 1.One language sets you in a corridor for life.Two languages open every door along the way.(主旨升華)
2.I used to get high marks in English，but now I’m having a lot of trouble with my listening.(對比)
3.My biggest headache is how to be polite in English.(比喻)
4.If I’m talking to a close friend，I can...But if I’m talking to someone...，I must...If I’m talking to someone senior to me，then I should say...(排比)
續寫語料運用
請從以上語料中選擇合適的詞匯，完成以下語段。然后核對答案并背誦該語段。
Mac正沿著山路騎自行車，這時他看到一只狼張著血盆大口追趕他。他的恐懼無以言表。他乞求路過的司機幫助他，但是徒勞無果。因此，他毫不猶豫地從自行車上下來，
Mac was pedalling along the mountain road when he saw a wolf running after him，which opened its bloody mouth.His fear was 1._________
.He 2. help him，but in vain.So he got off his bike without hesitation，
beyond
description
begged passing drivers to
抓住自行車，用盡全力把自行車扔向狼，盡力把狼嚇走。他正要成為狼的盤中餐時，他的朋友們趕到救下了他。當他提起這件恐怖的事情時，他仍然感到毛骨悚然。
seized it and threw it at the wolf with all his strength，3.______________
.He was about to become the food of the wolf when his friends arrived and rescued him.When he 4._________________
，he still felt as if his hair had stood on end.
struggling to
frighten the wolf away
referred to the
frightening thing
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