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Section Ⅴ　Writing
寫作一　應(yīng)用文寫作——如何介紹科學家的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)
No.1　研教材·積語料
[研教材]
一、學語言
1.高級句式
(1)Perhaps no other scientist has had a greater impact on China’s aerospace science than Qian Xuesen.
賞析:本句運用了“否定詞+形容詞的比較級”結(jié)構(gòu)。此結(jié)構(gòu)表示最高級的意義。本句句意為“也許再沒有哪一位科學家比錢學森對中國航天科學的影響更大了。”運用這種結(jié)構(gòu),來突出說明錢學森做出的巨大貢獻。
仿寫:John thought nothing was more meaningful than helping others earn a living by themselves.
約翰認為沒有什么比幫助別人自力更生更有意義的事情了。
(2)However,what might have made him such an outstanding and creative scientist was probably his strong interest in other things,such as music and drawing.
賞析:本句運用了what引導的名詞性從句和make復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu),介紹了錢學森廣泛的愛好,以及這些愛好對他開展科學研究的積極影響。寫作中恰當運用what引導的名詞性從句不僅顯得句式多樣,句子活潑,而且讀起來結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,言簡意賅。
仿寫:What made Tu Youyou awarded the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine is her outstanding achievements in medical research and her contribution to human health over the years.
屠呦呦之所以能夠獲得諾貝爾生理學或醫(yī)學獎,是因為她多年來在醫(yī)學研究方面所取得的杰出成就以及對人類健康所做的貢獻。
2.人物性格描寫
Besides being brilliant,he was brave,though sometimes careless in what he said or did.He was willing to say what others were afraid to say,and to dream of what others were afraid to dream about.Furthermore,he was quite determined.
賞析:文章第三段告訴我們勇敢無畏、意志堅定和敢于承認錯誤是霍金身上體現(xiàn)出來的科學家的品質(zhì)。
仿寫:She is a determined girl and confident about her future,so we know that once she has made up her mind to do something,she will make her dream come true with great confidence.
她是個意志堅定的女孩,對自己的未來充滿信心,所以我們知道,一旦她下定決心做某事,她就會滿懷信心地實現(xiàn)夢想。
二、學結(jié)構(gòu)
該部分有兩個閱讀語篇,標題分別為THE FATHER OF CHINA’S AEROSPACE和A WORLD OF PURE THOUGHT,它們從不同的角度簡要敘述了科學家錢學森和史蒂芬·霍金的經(jīng)歷、重要貢獻、性格特點以及他們所具備的科學素養(yǎng)。
第一篇文章THE FATHER OF CHINA’S AEROSPACE,首先用“否定詞+比較級”的句式結(jié)構(gòu)介紹錢學森在科學界的地位,然后用過去分詞短語作狀語及定語從句舉例說明他具體的科學家的品質(zhì)。
第二、三段使用了in 1911、in 1932、in 1935、over the course of the 1930s and 1940s、during the 1930s、in the 1940s等時間狀語介紹了錢學森在歸國前的成就。
第四段介紹了錢學森回國后克服困難的經(jīng)歷。文中使用了poor、undeveloped和no等詞匯突出介紹了當時中國貧窮的現(xiàn)狀,然后使用過渡詞nevertheless轉(zhuǎn)折到描寫錢學森研發(fā)導彈的決心。
第五段介紹了錢學森在航天科技領(lǐng)域所做的開創(chuàng)性工作——Dongfeng missiles、the first generation of Long March rockets、first man-made satellite、much of the technology behind the Shenzhou spacecraft等等。因此錢學森贏得了“中國航天之父”的贊譽。
第六段介紹了錢學森廣泛的愛好,以及這些愛好對他開展科學研究的積極影響。
第七段介紹了錢學森的去世及其影響。
第二篇文章A WORLD OF PURE THOUGHT,重點講述了霍金早期成名的經(jīng)歷,突出了他頑強地與疾病作斗爭、敢于質(zhì)疑、堅持夢想、勇于承認錯誤等可貴品質(zhì)。
第一段使用one of the most famous and gifted scientists in physics介紹了霍金在科學界的地位。
第二段介紹了霍金的早期成就。文章通過“大爆炸”戰(zhàn)勝“穩(wěn)恒態(tài)理論”的過程來介紹霍金理論的正確。
第三段以特殊疑問句開頭,告訴我們勇敢無畏、意志堅定和敢于承認錯誤是霍金身上體現(xiàn)出來的科學家的品質(zhì)。
總的說來,兩篇文章是“總—分—總”結(jié)構(gòu),由三部分構(gòu)成:
第一部分:簡要介紹人物的卓越貢獻和地位
第二部分:人物的經(jīng)歷及其科學精神
第三部分:概括人物的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)
[積語料]
一、開門見山,指出要介紹的科學家的歷史地位
1.Born in 1911,he was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century.
生于1911年,他是20世紀最偉大的科學家之一。
2.As we all know,he is one of the most famous medical scientists in the 21st century in China.
眾所周知,他是中國21世紀最著名的醫(yī)學科學家之一。
二、描寫要介紹的科學家的重要事跡
1.He got an award in 1998 for having played an important role in scientific research.
因為在科學研究中發(fā)揮了重要作用,他在1998年獲獎。
2.He is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him.
他是一個如此博學/意志堅強的人,我們都欽佩/尊敬他。
3.He devoted all his life to scientific research and his scientific findings have benefited people all over the world.
他一生致力于科學研究,他的科學發(fā)現(xiàn)使全世界人民受益。
三、總結(jié)概括科學家的品質(zhì)
1.His efforts in protecting people’s health and lives are worth celebrating.Let’s salute him and give him the thumbs up!
他為保護人民健康和生命所做的努力值得慶賀。讓我們向他致敬,給他點贊!
2.Due to his great achievements and contributions,he was awarded State Preeminent Science and Technology Award in 2005,which is China’s top science award.
由于他的巨大成就和貢獻,他于2005年被授予國家最高科學技術(shù)獎,這是中國的最高科學獎。
NO.2　仿寫作·會運用
[典題示例]
牛頓是世界著名的科學家,關(guān)于他的故事有很多。請你根據(jù)他煮雞蛋的故事,以A Story of Newton為題寫一篇短文,并據(jù)此發(fā)表一下自己對科學精神的看法。
注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。
[仿寫步驟]
1.一仿結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理
首段:總體介紹。
主體:故事梗概。
尾段:概括優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)。
2.二仿語言規(guī)范美觀
①牛頓是最杰出、最有天賦的科學家之一。(outstanding,gifted)
Newton is one of the most outstanding and gifted scientists.
②牛頓是如此投入以至于他經(jīng)常在日常生活中忘卻小事。(so...that...)
Newton was so devoted that he often forgot the little things in his daily life.
③一個為牛頓做飯的仆人想要出去。
A servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go out.
④他讓牛頓自己煮雞蛋。
He asked Newton to cook the eggs himself.
⑤當仆人回來時,他發(fā)現(xiàn)鍋里正在煮的不是雞蛋而是一個懷表。(過去進行時的被動語態(tài))
When the servant came back,he found that not eggs but a pocket watch was being cooked in the pot.
⑥我們應(yīng)該知識淵博并全神貫注于我們正在做的事情。(focus on)
We should be knowledgeable and focus on what we are doing.
3.三仿句式高級表達
(1)用倒裝句升級句②
So devoted was Newton that he often forgot the little things in his daily life.
(2)用動詞-ing形式短語作狀語合并句③和句④。
A servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go out,asking Newton to cook the eggs himself.
(3)用what引導的主語從句和that引導的表語從句改寫句⑤。
When the servant came back,what he found was that not eggs but a pocket watch was being cooked in the pot.
(4)用not only...but also...的倒裝句改寫句⑥。
Not only should we be knowledgeable,but we should also focus on what we are doing.
4.四仿教材連句成篇
注意使用恰當?shù)倪^渡銜接詞匯。
【參考范文】
Newton is one of the most outstanding and gifted scientists.So devoted was Newton that he often forgot the little things in his daily life.
Once,a servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go out,asking Newton to cook the eggs himself.However,when the servant came back,what he found was that not eggs but a pocket watch was being cooked in the pot.
From the story we can learn that to be an outstanding scientist,not only should we be knowledgeable,but we should also focus on what we are doing.
寫作二　續(xù)寫進階訓練之科技與生活　
No.1　構(gòu)建語義場
靚詞 [情感描寫] frustrated;determined;willing
[動作描寫] suspect;blame;decrease;cast;pour;trace;defend;assist
詞塊 once and for all;subscribe to;thanks to;be to blame;suspect sb of;have an impact on;break out;in charge of;above all;take on the challenge;be familiar with
美句 1.As a young doctor,John Snow became frustrated because no one knew how to prevent or treat cholera.(情緒描寫) 2.Described by the authors of the Story of Qian Xuesen as a man with“great scientific thought and scientific spirit”who was patriotic and served his homeland with effort,achievement,and devotion,Qian was an extremely well-respected man.(人物描寫) 3.Qian read a lot and was extremely knowledgeable,especially in the area of frontier science research.(人物描寫) 4.During the question and answer period after one of Hoyle’s lectures,Hawking stood up and pointed out that Hoyle had made a mistake in his maths.(動作描寫) 5.Besides being brilliant,he was brave,though sometimes careless in what he said or did.He was willing to say what others were afraid to say,and to dream of what others were afraid to dream about.Furthermore,he was quite determined.(人物描寫)
靚詞 [科學精神] assume vt.假定;設(shè)想　breakthrough n.重大進展,突破　experimental adj.實驗的 component n.成分process n.步驟v.加工;處理 remodel vt.重塑;改造 sample n.樣品;樣本;例子substance n.物質(zhì) drawback n.缺點,不利條件
[工作職責] certificate n.證明;證(明)書　　qualification n.資格;學歷 qualify vt.& vi.(使)具有資格;(使)具備合格條件 invent vt.發(fā)明;創(chuàng)造 qualified adj.有資格的responsibility n.責任;負責 undertake vt.承擔;從事;負責charge n.負責;主管
詞塊 become involved in參與……　　make a great contribution to對……做出突出貢獻 in the field of在……領(lǐng)域get over varieties of difficulties克服各種各樣的困難 witness success見證成功play a leading role in起著重要的作用 pursue one’s dream追求夢想have made rapid progress in在某方面取得迅速的進展 devote...to...把……用于……receive one’s doctor’s degree獲博士學位 face the challenge面對挑戰(zhàn)
美句 1.His modesty and diligence,which I admire most,have a deep impact on me. 我最欽佩他的謙遜和勤奮,這對我有著深刻的影響。 2.It is from him that I realize what I am struggling is not just for myself,but for the happiness of the whole world. 正是從他身上我意識到我所奮斗的不僅僅是為了自己,而是為了全世界的幸福。 3.Thanks to the advanced technology,it is possible for people to have access to a wide range of information. 由于先進的科技,人們能夠接觸到各類的信息。 4.Technological innovation accelerates the pace of life and enhances work efficiency. 科技創(chuàng)新加快了生活的節(jié)奏,提升了工作效率。 5.With science and technology developing rapidly,who can predict what inventions there will be in the future 隨著科學技術(shù)的迅速發(fā)展,誰能預(yù)測到將來會有什么樣的發(fā)明
No.2　情景續(xù)寫(科技給挪威小鎮(zhèn)帶來光明)
　　場景導語:(2019·全國Ⅲ卷完形改編)Rjukan小鎮(zhèn)位于挪威的山區(qū),由于地處兩條高聳山谷之間,小鎮(zhèn)每年里有半年的時間得不到太陽光直射→整個小鎮(zhèn)顯得暮氣沉沉,陰暗寒冷,渴望陽光的居民因此痛苦不堪→藝術(shù)家Martin于2002年搬到該鎮(zhèn),他決定采取行動……
注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右。
場景續(xù)寫1:馬丁定居的原因——優(yōu)美的風景及豐富的冬季活動→冬季看不到陽光,他感到非常沮喪→利用高科技鏡子照亮小鎮(zhèn)廣場
He was the one who decided to light the town square.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
場景續(xù)寫2:高科技鏡子的投資非常大→大多數(shù)人贊成→高科技鏡子持續(xù)為小鎮(zhèn)提供陽光并成為特色旅游景點,吸引很多游客→高科技鏡子不僅為小鎮(zhèn)居民帶來了陽光,也帶了經(jīng)濟效益
At first,not all residents thought the high-tech mirrors were worth the money.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
【參考范文】
He was the one who decided to light the town square.Martin settled down here to enjoy the natural beauty.Rjukan is pretty and is known for its winter activities.However,Martin soon found it depressing to live here without sunshine.He turned to the local government for help and was told he was not the first one to make plans to bring sunshine to Rjukan residents.However,due to a lack of technology,it was impossible to make it a reality.Martin didn’t lose heart,and he finally got access to the system of high-tech mirrors.
At first,not all residents thought the high-tech mirrors were worth the money.After initial investigations,the investment was estimated to cost half a million dollars.However,the majority voted for the construction of the new system,which would bring great convenience.Even those who were initially against it came around when the mirrors attracted international attention,causing a new wave of tourism.The local residents were more than delighted not only to enjoy the sunshine but also to enjoy the economic boom.
Ⅰ.應(yīng)用文寫作(滿分15分)
假定你是紅星中學的學生李華,你校英文報將以“The Scientist I Admire Most”為題進行征稿。請你寫一篇短文投稿,介紹一位你最尊敬的中國科學家及其研究成果,內(nèi)容包括:
1.科學家的姓名;
2.科學家的研究成果;
3.該研究成果的意義。
注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右;
2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。
The Scientist I Admire Most
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
【參考范文】
The Scientist I Admire Most
As we all know,Tu Youyou is considered to be one of the admired scientists.
Tu Youyou and her team discovered the antimalarial substance—artemisinin,one of the world’s most effective malaria-fighting drugs from sweet wormwood.And she volunteered to be the first human subject.It was safe,so she did successful experiments with human patients.She won the 2015 Nobel Prize for discovering the medicine which has significantly reduced the death rates for patients suffering from malaria.
What impresses me most is her persistence and strong will,which inspire me to study harder to achieve my goals.
Ⅱ.情景續(xù)寫(優(yōu)秀品行)(滿分25分)
場景導語:“我”熱衷于收集各種東西→有一天,“我”在海邊撿到了一條特殊又珍貴的項鏈→回家途中,“我”看到糖果店的玻璃上貼著一張尋物啟事:Chrissy尋找一條項鏈→“我”努力說服自己海報上的項鏈并不是“我”撿到的那條……
注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右。
場景續(xù)寫1:“我”迫不及待地想將項鏈占為己有→“我”進行了一系列心理斗爭→撥打了海報上的號碼→聯(lián)系或者約見Chrissy
Once home,I placed the necklace in my special spot for special things,lost in thought.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
場景續(xù)寫2:歸還項鏈→失主表示感謝并解釋項鏈之所以特別的原因→主旨升華
Fifteen minutes later,I was sitting across from Chrissy in the candy shop.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
【參考范文】
Once home,I placed the necklace in my special spot for special things,lost in thought.There had been many treasured things like mini cola bottles and shakers.Gazing at the necklace,I was totally attracted by its beauty.Should I keep it a secret Could it be Chrissy’s Was it very special I paced back and forth anxiously,not knowing what to do.Finally,my desire to keep it gave way to my resolve to return it.I called the number on the poster and got in touch with Chrissy.
Fifteen minutes later,I was sitting across from Chrissy in the candy shop.I took the necklace out of my pocket and handed it to Chrissy.No sooner had she seen the necklace than she shed tears of joy.She thanked me and explained the necklace was a gift from her late grandmother and that it meant a lot to her.It dawned on me that nothing is more precious than honesty.I was happy I was “a treasured girl” rather than “a trash girl”. (共45張PPT)
Section Ⅴ　Writing
寫作一　應(yīng)用文寫作——如何介紹科學家的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)
內(nèi)
容
索
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寫作二　續(xù)寫進階訓練之科技與生活
課時測評作業(yè)
寫作一　應(yīng)用文寫作——如何介紹科學家的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)
NO.1　研教材 積語料
NO.2　仿寫作 會運用
NO.1　研教材·積語料
[研教材]
一、學語言
1.高級句式
(1)Perhaps no other scientist has had a greater impact on China’s aerospace science than Qian Xuesen.
賞析:本句運用了“否定詞+形容詞的比較級”結(jié)構(gòu)。此結(jié)構(gòu)表示最高級的意義。本句句意為“也許再沒有哪一位科學家比錢學森對中國航天科學的影響更大了。”運用這種結(jié)構(gòu),來突出說明錢學森做出的巨大貢獻。
仿寫:John thought 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
than helping others earn a living by themselves.
約翰認為沒有什么比幫助別人自力更生更有意義的事情了。
nothing was more meaningful
(2)However,what might have made him such an outstanding and creative scientist was probably his strong interest in other things,such as music and drawing.
賞析:本句運用了what引導的名詞性從句和make復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu),介紹了錢學森廣泛的愛好,以及這些愛好對他開展科學研究的積極影響。寫作中恰當運用what引導的名詞性從句不僅顯得句式多樣,句子活潑,而且讀起來結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,言簡意賅。
仿寫:
in Physiology or Medicine is her outstanding achievements in medical research and her contribution to human health over the years.
屠呦呦之所以能夠獲得諾貝爾生理學或醫(yī)學獎,是因為她多年來在醫(yī)學研究方面所取得的杰出成就以及對人類健康所做的貢獻。
What made Tu Youyou awarded the Nobel Prize
2.人物性格描寫
Besides being brilliant,he was brave,though sometimes careless in what he said or did.He was willing to say what others were afraid to say,and to dream of what others were afraid to dream about. Furthermore,he was quite determined.
賞析:文章第三段告訴我們勇敢無畏、意志堅定和敢于承認錯誤是霍金身上體現(xiàn)出來的科學家的品質(zhì)。
仿寫:　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 ,
so we know that once she has made up her mind to do something,she will make her dream come true with great confidence.
她是個意志堅定的女孩,對自己的未來充滿信心,所以我們知道,一旦她下定決心做某事,她就會滿懷信心地實現(xiàn)夢想。
She is a determined girl and confident about her future
二、學結(jié)構(gòu)
該部分有兩個閱讀語篇,標題分別為THE FATHER OF CHINA’S AEROSPACE和A WORLD OF PURE THOUGHT,它們從不同的角度簡要敘述了科學家錢學森和史蒂芬·霍金的經(jīng)歷、重要貢獻、性格特點以及他們所具備的科學素養(yǎng)。
第一篇文章THE FATHER OF CHINA’S AEROSPACE,首先用“否定詞+比較級”的句式結(jié)構(gòu)介紹錢學森在科學界的地位,然后用過去分詞短語作狀語及定語從句舉例說明他具體的科學家的品質(zhì)。
第二、三段使用了in 1911、in 1932、in 1935、over the course of the 1930s and 1940s、during the 1930s、in the 1940s等時間狀語介紹了錢學森在歸國前的成就。
第四段介紹了錢學森回國后克服困難的經(jīng)歷。文中使用了poor、undeveloped和no等詞匯突出介紹了當時中國貧窮的現(xiàn)狀,然后使用過渡詞nevertheless轉(zhuǎn)折到描寫錢學森研發(fā)導彈的決心。
第五段介紹了錢學森在航天科技領(lǐng)域所做的開創(chuàng)性工作——Dongfeng missiles、the first generation of Long March rockets、first man-made satellite、much of the technology behind the Shenzhou spacecraft等等。因此錢學森贏得了“中國航天之父”的贊譽。
第六段介紹了錢學森廣泛的愛好,以及這些愛好對他開展科學研究的積極影響。
第七段介紹了錢學森的去世及其影響。
第二篇文章A WORLD OF PURE THOUGHT,重點講述了霍金早期成名的經(jīng)歷,突出了他頑強地與疾病作斗爭、敢于質(zhì)疑、堅持夢想、勇于承認錯誤等可貴品質(zhì)。
第一段使用one of the most famous and gifted scientists in physics介紹了霍金在科學界的地位。
第二段介紹了霍金的早期成就。文章通過“大爆炸”戰(zhàn)勝“穩(wěn)恒態(tài)理論”的過程來介紹霍金理論的正確。
第三段以特殊疑問句開頭,告訴我們勇敢無畏、意志堅定和敢于承認錯誤是霍金身上體現(xiàn)出來的科學家的品質(zhì)。
總的說來,兩篇文章是“總—分—總”結(jié)構(gòu),由三部分構(gòu)成:
第一部分:簡要介紹人物的卓越貢獻和地位
第二部分:人物的經(jīng)歷及其科學精神
第三部分:概括人物的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)
[積語料]
一、開門見山,指出要介紹的科學家的歷史地位
1.Born in 1911,he was one of the greatest scientists in the 20th century.
生于1911年,他是20世紀最偉大的科學家之一。
2.As we all know,he is one of the most famous medical scientists in the 21st century in China.
眾所周知,他是中國21世紀最著名的醫(yī)學科學家之一。
二、描寫要介紹的科學家的重要事跡
1.He got an award in 1998 for having played an important role in scientific research.
因為在科學研究中發(fā)揮了重要作用,他在1998年獲獎。
2.He is such a learned/strong-willed person that we all admire/respect him.　他是一個如此博學/意志堅強的人,我們都欽佩/尊敬他。
3.He devoted all his life to scientific research and his scientific findings have benefited people all over the world.
他一生致力于科學研究,他的科學發(fā)現(xiàn)使全世界人民受益。
三、總結(jié)概括科學家的品質(zhì)
1.His efforts in protecting people’s health and lives are worth celebrating.Let’s salute him and give him the thumbs up!
他為保護人民健康和生命所做的努力值得慶賀。讓我們向他致敬,給他點贊!
2.Due to his great achievements and contributions,he was awarded State Preeminent Science and Technology Award in 2005,which is China’s top science award.由于他的巨大成就和貢獻,他于2005年被授予國家最高科學技術(shù)獎,這是中國的最高科學獎。
NO.2　仿寫作·會運用
[典題示例]
牛頓是世界著名的科學家,關(guān)于他的故事有很多。請你根據(jù)他煮雞蛋的故事,以A Story of Newton為題寫一篇短文,并據(jù)此發(fā)表一下自己對科學精神的看法。
注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右;
2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。
[仿寫步驟]
1.一仿結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理
首段:　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　。
主體:　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　。
尾段:　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　。
總體介紹
故事梗概
概括優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)
2.二仿語言規(guī)范美觀
①牛頓是最杰出、最有天賦的科學家之一。(outstanding,gifted)
Newton is 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　.
②牛頓是如此投入以至于他經(jīng)常在日常生活中忘卻小事。(so...that...)
Newton was 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　he often forgot the little things in his daily life.
③一個為牛頓做飯的仆人想要出去。
one of the most outstanding and gifted scientists
so devoted that
A servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go out.
④他讓牛頓自己煮雞蛋。
⑤當仆人回來時,他發(fā)現(xiàn)鍋里正在煮的不是雞蛋而是一個懷表。
(過去進行時的被動語態(tài))
When the servant came back,he found that not eggs but a pocket watch 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　.
⑥我們應(yīng)該知識淵博并全神貫注于我們正在做的事情。(focus on)
We should be knowledgeable and 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 .
He asked Newton to cook the eggs himself.
was being cooked in the pot
focus on what we are doing
3.三仿句式高級表達
(1)用倒裝句升級句②
(2)用動詞-ing形式短語作狀語合并句③和句④。
So devoted was Newton that he often forgot the little things in his daily life.
A servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go out,asking Newton to cook the eggs himself.
(3)用what引導的主語從句和that引導的表語從句改寫句⑤。
(4)用not only...but also...的倒裝句改寫句⑥。
When the servant came back,what he found was that not eggs but a pocket watch was being cooked in the pot.
Not only should we be knowledgeable,but we should also focus on what we are doing.
4.四仿教材連句成篇
注意使用恰當?shù)倪^渡銜接詞匯。
【參考范文】
Newton is one of the most outstanding and gifted scientists.So devoted was Newton that he often forgot the little things in his daily life.
Once,a servant who cooked for Newton wanted to go out,asking Newton to cook the eggs himself.However,when the servant came back,what he found was that not eggs but a pocket watch was being cooked in the pot.
From the story we can learn that to be an outstanding scientist,not only should we be knowledgeable,but we should also focus on what we are doing.
寫作二　續(xù)寫進階訓練之科技與生活
No.1　構(gòu)建語義場
No.2　情景續(xù)寫(科技給挪威小鎮(zhèn)帶來光明)
No.1　構(gòu)建語義場
教 材 語 料 整 合 靚詞 [情感描寫] frustrated;determined;willing
[動作描寫] suspect;blame;decrease;cast;pour;trace;defend;assist
詞塊 once and for all;subscribe to;thanks to;be to blame;suspect sb of;have an impact on;break out;in charge of;above all;take on the challenge;be familiar with
美句 1.As a young doctor,John Snow became frustrated because no one knew how to prevent or treat cholera.(情緒描寫)
2.Described by the authors of the Story of Qian Xuesen as a man with“great scientific thought and scientific spirit”who was patriotic and served his homeland with effort,achievement,and devotion,Qian was an extremely well-respected man.(人物描寫)
3.Qian read a lot and was extremely knowledgeable,especially in the area of frontier science research.(人物描寫)
4.During the question and answer period after one of Hoyle’s lectures,Hawking stood up and pointed out that Hoyle had made a mistake in his maths.(動作描寫)
5.Besides being brilliant,he was brave,though sometimes careless in what he said or did.He was willing to say what others were afraid to say,and to dream of what others were afraid to dream about.Furthermore,he was quite determined.(人物描寫)
拓 展 語 料 整 合 靚詞 [科學精神]
assume vt.假定;設(shè)想　breakthrough n.重大進展,突破　experimental adj.實驗的
component n.成分process n.步驟v.加工;處理 remodel vt.重塑;改造
sample n.樣品;樣本;例子substance n.物質(zhì) drawback n.缺點,不利條件
[工作職責]
certificate n.證明;證(明)書　　　qualification n.資格;學歷
qualify vt.& vi.(使)具有資格;(使)具備合格條件 invent vt.發(fā)明;創(chuàng)造
qualified adj.有資格的 responsibility n.責任;負責
undertake vt.承擔;從事;負責 charge n.負責;主管
拓 展 語 料 整 合 詞塊 become involved in參與……
make a great contribution to對……做出突出貢獻
in the field of在……領(lǐng)域
get over varieties of difficulties克服各種各樣的困難
witness success見證成功
play a leading role in起著重要的作用
pursue one’s dream追求夢想
have made rapid progress in在某方面取得迅速的進展
devote...to...把……用于……
receive one’s doctor’s degree獲博士學位
face the challenge面對挑戰(zhàn)
拓 展 語 料 整 合 美句 1.His modesty and diligence,which I admire most,have a deep impact on me.
我最欽佩他的謙遜和勤奮,這對我有著深刻的影響。
2.It is from him that I realize what I am struggling is not just for myself,but for the happiness of the whole world.
正是從他身上我意識到我所奮斗的不僅僅是為了自己,而是為了全世界的幸福。
3.Thanks to the advanced technology,it is possible for people to have access to a wide range of information.
由于先進的科技,人們能夠接觸到各類的信息。
4.Technological innovation accelerates the pace of life and enhances work efficiency.
科技創(chuàng)新加快了生活的節(jié)奏,提升了工作效率。
5.With science and technology developing rapidly,who can predict what inventions there will be in the future
隨著科學技術(shù)的迅速發(fā)展,誰能預(yù)測到將來會有什么樣的發(fā)明
No.2　情景續(xù)寫(科技給挪威小鎮(zhèn)帶來光明)
　　場景導語:(2019·全國Ⅲ卷完形改編)Rjukan小鎮(zhèn)位于挪威的山區(qū),由于地處兩條高聳山谷之間,小鎮(zhèn)每年里有半年的時間得不到太陽光直射→整個小鎮(zhèn)顯得暮氣沉沉,陰暗寒冷,渴望陽光的居民因此痛苦不堪→藝術(shù)家Martin于2002年搬到該鎮(zhèn),他決定采取行動……
注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右。
場景續(xù)寫1:馬丁定居的原因——優(yōu)美的風景及豐富的冬季活動→冬季看不到陽光,他感到非常沮喪→利用高科技鏡子照亮小鎮(zhèn)廣場
He was the one who decided to light the town square.
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
場景續(xù)寫2:高科技鏡子的投資非常大→大多數(shù)人贊成→高科技鏡子持續(xù)為小鎮(zhèn)提供陽光并成為特色旅游景點,吸引很多游客→高科技鏡子不僅為小鎮(zhèn)居民帶來了陽光,也帶了經(jīng)濟效益
At first,not all residents thought the high-tech mirrors were worth the money.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
【參考范文】
He was the one who decided to light the town square.Martin settled down here to enjoy the natural beauty.Rjukan is pretty and is known for its winter activities.However,Martin soon found it depressing to live here without sunshine.He turned to the local government for help and was told he was not the first one to make plans to bring sunshine to Rjukan residents.However,due to a lack of technology,it was impossible to make it a reality.Martin didn’t lose heart,and he finally got access to the system of high-tech mirrors.
At first,not all residents thought the high-tech mirrors were worth the money.After initial investigations,the investment was estimated to cost half a million dollars.However,the majority voted for the construction of the new system,which would bring great convenience.Even those who were initially against it came around when the mirrors attracted international attention,causing a new wave of tourism.The local residents were more than delighted not only to enjoy the sunshine but also to enjoy the economic boom.
課 時 測 評 作 業(yè)
Ⅰ.應(yīng)用文寫作(滿分15分)
假定你是紅星中學的學生李華,你校英文報將以“The Scientist I Admire Most”為題進行征稿。請你寫一篇短文投稿,介紹一位你最尊敬的中國科學家及其研究成果,內(nèi)容包括:
1.科學家的姓名;2.科學家的研究成果;3.該研究成果的意義。
注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右;
2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。
The Scientist I Admire Most
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
【參考范文】
The Scientist I Admire Most
As we all know,Tu Youyou is considered to be one of the admired scientists.
Tu Youyou and her team discovered the antimalarial substance—artemisinin,one of the world’s most effective malaria-fighting drugs from sweet wormwood.And she volunteered to be the first human subject.It was safe,so she did successful experiments with human patients.She won the 2015 Nobel Prize for discovering the medicine which has significantly reduced the death rates for patients suffering from malaria.
What impresses me most is her persistence and strong will,which inspire me to study harder to achieve my goals.
Ⅱ.情景續(xù)寫(優(yōu)秀品行)(滿分25分)
場景導語:“我”熱衷于收集各種東西→有一天,“我”在海邊撿到了一條特殊又珍貴的項鏈→回家途中,“我”看到糖果店的玻璃上貼著一張尋物啟事:Chrissy尋找一條項鏈→“我”努力說服自己海報上的項鏈并不是“我”撿到的那條……
注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右。
場景續(xù)寫1:“我”迫不及待地想將項鏈占為己有→“我”進行了一系列心理斗爭→撥打了海報上的號碼→聯(lián)系或者約見Chrissy
Once home,I placed the necklace in my special spot for special things,lost in thought.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
場景續(xù)寫2:歸還項鏈→失主表示感謝并解釋項鏈之所以特別的原因→主旨升華
Fifteen minutes later,I was sitting across from Chrissy in the candy shop.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
【參考范文】
Once home,I placed the necklace in my special spot for special things,lost in thought.There had been many treasured things like mini cola bottles and shakers.Gazing at the necklace,I was totally attracted by its beauty.Should I keep it a secret Could it be Chrissy’s Was it very special I paced back and forth anxiously,not knowing what to do.Finally,my desire to keep it gave way to my resolve to return it.I called the number on the poster and got in touch with Chrissy.
Fifteen minutes later,I was sitting across from Chrissy in the candy shop.I took the necklace out of my pocket and handed it to Chrissy.No sooner had she seen the necklace than she shed tears of joy.She thanked me and explained the necklace was a gift from her late grandmother and that it meant a lot to her.It dawned on me that nothing is more precious than honesty.I was happy I was “a treasured girl” rather than “a trash girl”.

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