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Happy
Holiday
Unit 1
Reading for writing
Section B (3a-3c)
TeacherWu原創
01
02
03
理解文本結構(開篇→過程→感想)，提取Gina蘇格蘭假期的時間、地點、活動、感受等關鍵信息。(學習理解)
運用“When who Where What How ”框架，描述個人假期經歷，正確使用復合不定代詞和過去時；通過同伴互評修改作文中的語法錯誤和內容細節(應用實踐)
通過本課時學習，我們能夠：
Learning objectives
對比不同假期體驗(自然/城市/歷史)，思考旅行對認知的拓展，提升跨文化觀察與表達能力。(遷移創新)
Do you like travelling
food
scenery
culture
What do you travel for
relax
Lead-in
Free talk
Hi, Gina. Did you go somewhere interesting on your vacation
Yes, I went to Scotland.
/ sk tl nd/
Gina went to Scotland for a holiday.
What do you know about Scotland
Q1: How many castles(城堡) does Scotland have
Q2: Where is the oldest golf course(最古老的高爾夫球場) in the world
Q3: What is the national drink (國酒) of Scotland
Q4: What musical instrument(樂器) is very famous in Scotland
Q5: Why might tourists visit the Elephant House
Pre-reading
Watch and answer
Bagpipes (風笛)
Because J.K. Rowling wrote parts of the Harry Potter books there. / It's where Harry Potter was "born".
in Scotland. It's the Old Course at St Andrews.
Over 2,000 castles
Scotch whisky. (蘇格蘭威士忌)
Scotland is a beautiful country in the northern part of the united Kingdom. It’s famous for its green mountains, deep blue lakes, and ancient castles. The capital city is Edinburgh, where you can see a huge volcano-shaped hill (火山) called Arthur’s Seat（亞瑟王座）.
Scotland
Pre-reading
Culture note
1.What can you know from the title？
2.What might she see or do during her holiday
Pre-reading
Look at the title and picture and predict
She might meet a deer in the Scotland.
She went on holiday in Scotland
While-reading
Read quickly and match the main idea
1
2
3
How many paragraphs are there in the passage
How Gina felt.
What Gina heard and saw.
When and where Gina went.
Three.
Read quickly and find out the structure
How Gina felt.
What Gina heard and saw.
When and where Gina went.
While-reading
General Introduction
(總體介紹）
Specific event
（詳細事件）
True feelings（真實感受）
How many parts can you divide the passage into
Things that Gina did
took ______________________
stayed _____________________
went to ____________________
saw _______________________
ran home and _______________
a train to Scotland
in a comfortable house
the forest to explore
a deer
told her parents
Scan the passage and fill in the blanks
3a
Read Gina’s holiday story and write down the things that she did.
While-reading
Read carefully and find out the details
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
Gina’s Holiday in Scotland When did Gina go on a holiday Whom did Gina go with How did they get there Where did they stay in Scotland
Last autumn
Gina’s family
in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery
By train.
Tip 1:
When we write about the introduction, we can tell information like when, who, how, where ...
While-reading
General Introduction
(總體介紹）
Read carefully and find out the details
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
Tip 2:
give an example to show the difference
How does Gina show the house was different
By giving an example.
While-reading
General Introduction
(總體介紹）
Why did everything seem different to Gina
Because she lives in a big city while the place
in Scotland is a countryside with beautiful scenery.
Read carefully and find out the details
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
What happened while Gina was in the forest
She turned around and was____________ to see a deer.
surprised
Something made a noise.
While-reading
Specific event
（詳細事件）
Tip 3:
Use sensory words(感官詞匯)
build up tension(增加故事緊張感)
Read carefully and find out the details
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
Tip 4 :
use adjectives to make the writing vivid.
How does Gina like her travelling
It is a wonderful experience.
While-reading
True feelings（真實感受）
Read Gina’s holiday story again and think about how to tell a story.
When: Last autumn
Where: Scotland
What:
took a train to Scotland
stayed in a comfortable house
went to the forest to explore
saw a deer
ran home and told her parents...
Why: I live in a big city, so...
How: What a wonderful experience...
Who: My family
Retell the story
While-reading
Watch and imitate
While-reading
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原創制作
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Watch and imitate
While-reading
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原創制作
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Who
When
What
How
Where
Last autumn
Gina and her parents
Scoland
wonderful
Retell the story according to the mind-map
Post-reading
When
Who
What Gina did and saw
How Gina felt
Vivid adjectives
Connection words
Sensory details
Where
Post-reading
Analyze the content （分析內容）
How can we write our holiday experiences
My travel
Beginning
Main body
Ending
time
place
weather
partner
activities
We did
We ate
We thought
We enjoyed
...
We saw/heard
summary
first,next,after that ,in the morning,at last 等時間順序串聯。
feeling
Post-reading
Conclude the framework （總結結構）
Last autumn, Gina’s family went to Scotland for a holiday by train . They stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside . Out of the window, they could see beautiful scenery . Gina likes it a lot because she lives in a big city , so everything seemed so differen t for her.
Beside the house, there was a huge forest . Gina felt so excited.
In the morning of the last day, she explored the forest .There she heard something make a noise . She turned around and saw a deer . It surprised her. So she ran home and told her parents what she saw. Her mum smiled and said, “The deer is probably lookin g for food and hoping to get some from you.” She thought the experience was so wonderful . She hopes to go back again someday.
Scotland
train
comfortable
countryside
beautiful scenery
a big city
different
huge forest
forest
make a noise
saw a deer
surprised
ran home
her parents
smiled
looking
for
hoping to
wonderful
go back
Close your book and fill in the blanks
Post-reading
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday.
We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with
beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a
huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest
to explore. While there, something made a noise.
I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you."
What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
在鄉下/農村
例如
在最后一天
go to the forest 去森林
make a noise 發出噪音
turn around 轉身
be surprised to do sth. 對做某事感到驚訝
look for 尋找
hope to do sth. 希望做某事
What a/an+形容詞+可數名詞單數(+主語+謂語)！
/'pr b bli/ adv.很可能
Language points
Post-reading
seem＋adj
1.When did it happen
___________________________________
2. Where were you
___________________________________
3. What did you do
___________________________________
4. How did you feel
___________________________________
5. What did you learn ___________________________________
Post-reading
Think and share
3b
Think of an unforgettable holiday experience and answer the questions.
What did you do there
Whom did you go with
時間
地點
交通
活動
人物
天氣
How was the weather
感受
How did you feel
When did you go on a trip
Where did you go
How did you go there
Travel
experience
Post-reading
Think and share
請你回想一下令你難忘的一次快樂旅行，并以“A Happy Holiday Trip”為題， 寫一篇英語短文， 說說你去了哪兒、你的旅行經歷，以及你的旅行感觸，在英語課上與同學們分享。
要求:1. 內容完整，語句通順，邏輯清晰；
2. 80 詞左右。
時態：一般過去時
人稱：第一人稱
體裁：記敘文
要點：1.旅游地點
2. 介紹旅游經歷
3. 描述旅游感受
Pre-writing
To learn to write your travel experience
travel experience 人稱
時態
內容安排
常用一般過去時。
常用第一人稱。
記敘文一般按照時間順序或事情的經過來寫。
Pre-writing
開篇點題
旅行過程
表達感想
介紹旅行的時間、地點、同行者及整體感受。
正文：具體介紹旅游經歷1-2點。
（景點、活動、趣事）
謀篇布局
結尾：總結感受或旅行的意義/收獲。
Pay attention to the date, person, tense, order
Pre-writing
on vacation 度假 the next day 第二天
take photos 照相 quite a few 相當多
learn about 了解 go to the beach 去海灘
at first 首先 feel like 給……的感覺；感受到
have fun/enjoy oneself 玩得高興
have a three-day trip 進行三天的旅行
go hiking/camping/swimming 去遠足/野營/游泳
積句成篇
短語儲備
Pre-writing
句型薈萃
開頭句：
Last summer, I had an unforgettable trip to …
Last autumn, my family took a train to …for a holiday.
Last summer vacation, I went to…with…
Last summer vacation, I had an unforgettable experience. I went to …
中間句：
First of all, we went to see ... as soon as we arrived there.
On the second day, we went to... a famous place of
interest in...
As I... the beautiful scenery took my breath away.
The food was delicious, especially…
During the trip, I also made some local friends…
Pre-writing
結尾句：
All in all, it was such a …trip that…
What a wonderful/pleasant/ special experience I have!
Although we were really tired, we did have great fun that day.
This trip was not just a holiday but a cultural experience. It reminded me…
I learned that… I realized that…
經典名句：
Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.
He who travels far knows much.
句型薈萃
Pre-writing
Topic sentence
Body
Activities
Meaning
Last summer, I had an unforgettable trip to …
Last autumn, my family took a train to …for a holiday.
Last summer vacation, I went to…with…
First of all, we went to see ... as soon as we arrived there.
On the second day, we went to... a famous place of interest in...
As I... the beautiful scenery took my breath away.
The food was delicious, especially…
During the trip, I also made some local friends…
All in all, it was such a …trip that…
What a wonderful/pleasant/ special experience I have!
This trip was not just a holiday but a cultural experience. It reminded me…
Beginning
Body
Ending
介紹旅行的時間、地點、同行者及整體感受。
具體介紹旅游經歷1-2點： （景點、活動、趣事）What did you do/see How did you feel
總結感受或旅行的意義:How did you feel
What did you learn
Tips for your writing
適當運用名言或俗語
句式多樣化
巧用銜接詞
語句通順，語法正確
Tips
請你回想一下令你難忘的一次快樂旅行，并以“A Happy Holiday Trip”為題， 寫一篇英語短文， 說說你去了哪兒、你的旅行經歷，以及你的旅行感觸，在英語課上與同學們分享。
要求:1. 內容完整，語句通順，邏輯清晰；
2. 80 詞左右。
While-writing
Exchange your work with your classmate.
Evaluate according to the checklist.
Checklist Assessment(評價) Total score Your score
內容要點全面，表達準確 10分
文章結構完整 1分
人稱、時態使用得當 2分
詞匯豐富、句子銜接流暢 1分
卷面書寫 1分
合計（總分15分） 15分
Post-writing
Post-writing
Last winter vacation, my family took a train to Harbin for a holiday. We stayed in a warm hotel near the frozen Songhua River. I live in a southern city, so everything here was so different! For example, outside our hotel, there was a huge ice square with shining lights.
On the first day, in the evening, I went to the ice square to explore. There, I was surprised to see colorful ice works of art. They looked like giant castles and animals! I ran back to tell my parents what I saw. My mom smiled and said, “These ice works are made by artists around the world. They want people to enjoy Harbin’s winter magic!”
What an unforgettable experience I had! From the experience, I learned that Harbin’s beauty can bring people at home and abroad together. I really hope I can go back again.
One possible version
Beginning
Body
Ending
I went to Xi’an on vacation with my family. When I got there, it was sunny and hot. I was so excited because it was the first time for me to see one of the oldest cities in China.
We drove to the Terracotta Army first. I learned something important about Chinese culture and history. The next day, we decided to climb Hua Mountains and we walked up to the top. Everything was small from above. We were so excited to dance and took photos. After walking for four hours, I was tired and hungry. Then, we tried something special in Xi’an. Mutton and bread tasted delicious. Before leaving, I bought something special for my grandparents and friends.
No one felt bored. It was a wonderful trip. I am so proud of our country. I decide to study hard and learn more about Chinese history.
Post-writing
One possible version
Beginning
Body
Ending
Why Travelling is Important
01
03
02
04
It’s better to _____________________ experience rather than on material things.
__________from your everyday life and look at it a different point of view.
Push your limits.
__________your bubble.
（把錢花在體驗上比花在物質上更好。）
（走出舒適區。）
（突破自己的極限。）
（遠離日常生活，從不同的角度看待它的好機會。）
spend your money on
Get away
Get out of
05
07
06
08
09
________ yourself better.
_____________________is through experience.
People you _______ along the way.
___________ is greater when shared.
Choose your own kind of travel.
（更好的了解自己。 ）
（最好的學習方法是 通過經驗。 ）
（沿途遇到的人。 ）
（與人分享，幸福更大。）
（選擇自己的旅行方式。 ）
The best way to learn
Know
meet
Happiness
Enjoy traveling
Enjoy sharing
Homework
Must do:
1.Polish your article according to your group members’ advice
Choose to do:
Design a postcard for a holiday place you love.
On the back: Write at least 3 sentences to show the scenery
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience I had!
I really hope I can go back again.
我們住在鄉間一棟舒適的房子里，那里風景優美。
1. countryside n.鄉村；農村【不可數名詞】
in the countryside 在農村
e.g. He painted both the countryside and people.
他既畫鄉村，也畫人物。(2024天津中考)
練習：在農村，人們養狗看門。(2024陜西中考)
_______ ______ ____________, people keep dogs to watch doors of their houses.
In the countryside
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience I had!
I really hope I can go back again.
我轉過身，驚訝地發現是一只鹿。
2. 1) turn around 轉身; 翻轉 也可寫作 turn round
e.g. The little girl heard her mother's voice and quickly turned around.
小女孩聽到媽媽的聲音, 迅速轉過身來。
拓展：含turn的其他常見短語：
turn back原路返回，往回走 turn into 變成
turn down 關小；拒絕 turn up 開大，調高
turn on 打開 turn off 關閉 turn to 向···求助
我轉過身，驚訝地發現是一只鹿。
2. 2) surprised adj.驚奇的；驚訝的
辨析：surprised, surprising與surprise
surprised【形容詞】驚奇的；感覺意外的 表示人的主觀感受。
be surprised at 對···感到吃驚 be surprised to do sth. 做某事很驚訝
surprising【形容詞】令人驚訝的 修飾物,說明事物本身的性質/特征。
surprise 【動詞】使驚訝；使感到意外
【名詞】驚訝，意外；令人驚奇的事
to one's surprise 令某人驚訝的是 in surprise 驚訝地
練習：用括號中所給單詞的適當形式填空。
(包頭中考) We weren't __________ (surprise) that she won the talent
competition. She sings very well.
surprised
My Holiday in Scotland
Last autumn, my family took a train to Scotland for a holiday. We stayed in a comfortable house in the countryside with beautiful scenery. I live in a big city, so everything seemed
so different. For example, beside the house, there was a huge forest.
On the last day, early in the morning, I went to the forest to explore. While there, something made a noise. I turned around and was surprised to see a deer.
I ran home and told my parents what I saw. My mum smiled and said, "The deer is probably looking for food and hoping to get some from you." What a wonderful experience I had! I really hope I can go back again.
小鹿可能是在尋找食物，希望從你這里得到一些。
3. 1) deer (pl. deer 單復數同形) n. 鹿
2) possibly adv.很可能；大概
近義詞為：possibly / likely / maybe
表示推測。常用于肯定句中，位于助動詞、情態動詞或系動詞be
之后，實義動詞之前。其形容詞形式為probable“很可能的”。
e.g. It will probably rain tomorrow. 明天很可能會下雨。
練習：I think it is ___________ true. 我認為它很可能是真的。
It is __________ that we will win. 我們很可能會贏。
probably
probable
按要求寫出正確的單詞、詞組或句子。
1. 在陽光下 (短語) __________ 2. 塔樓 (名詞) ___________
3.可能(情態動詞) __________ 4. 健忘的(形容詞) __________
5. 有規律的(形容詞) __________
6. 超出預算(短語) __________
7. 遠方的（形容詞）_________ 8. 一些……另一些（短語）__________
9. 你可能容易地超預算。__________________________
10. 請提醒我帶護照。
_______________________
11. 我最近有點健忘。___________________
in the sun
tower
might
forgetful
regular
go over the budget
faraway
some...others...
You might easily gover budget.
Please remind me to take my passport.
I’m getting a little forgetful these days.
回顧復習（Section B Vocabulary in Use）
按要求寫出正確的單詞、詞組或句子。
1. 鄉村 (名詞) __________ 2. 轉身 (短語) ___________
3.驚訝的(形容詞) __________ 4. 可能地(副詞) __________
5. 尋找(短語) __________
6. 去森林探險(短語) __________
7. 驚訝地做某事（形容詞）__________
8. 多么完美的經驗！________
9. 我真希望我能再回去。 ___________________________
10. 一切似乎都不同。
_______________________
countryside
turn around
surprised
probably
look for
go to the forest to explore
be surprised to do sth.
What a wonderful experience!
I really hope I can go back again.
Everything there seemed so different.

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