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Review Unit 4
My family 寫作練習(xí)
1.我能夠通過小組合作學(xué)習(xí)，掌握單詞、短語、句式的背誦。
2.我能夠積累“談?wù)摷胰恕毕嚓P(guān)句型，進(jìn)行作文表達(dá)與寫作，提高我的英語語言表達(dá)能力和理解能力。
Learning aims
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【話題解讀】
本單元主題為 “介紹我的家庭”，歸屬于 “人與社會(huì)” 范疇里 “社會(huì)服務(wù)與人際溝通” 主題群，涉及 “和諧家庭，良好的人際關(guān)系” 子主題 。通過聽說、閱讀理解、語法體驗(yàn)、寫作等語言活動(dòng)，讓學(xué)生掌握介紹家人、家庭活動(dòng)以及名字文化含義等內(nèi)容，助力學(xué)生培養(yǎng)尊重、同情、責(zé)任感等正面價(jià)值觀，加深對(duì)家庭在生活中重要性的認(rèn)知。
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寫作內(nèi)容:創(chuàng)作一篇短文，全面介紹自己的家庭，涵蓋家庭成員信息、
家庭日常活動(dòng)、特殊節(jié)日或紀(jì)念日的慶祝方式等。
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3. 寫作要點(diǎn)
(1)家庭成員：詳細(xì)說明家庭成員的姓名、年齡、職業(yè)、性格特點(diǎn)等。比如介紹父親，“My father, named Li Hua, is 40 years old. He is a doctor and is known for his patience and kindness.”
(2)家庭日常活動(dòng)：描述家庭成員共同參與的日常活動(dòng)，如一起做飯、看電視、戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)等。“On weekends, we often cook a big meal together. Mom is in charge of the main course, while Dad and I help with the side dishes.”
(3)特殊時(shí)刻：闡述家庭如何慶祝生日、節(jié)日等特殊時(shí)刻。“During the Spring Festival, we always decorate our house with red lanterns and couplets. On New Year's Eve, the whole family gets together to have a big feast and watch the Spring Festival Gala.”
(4)家庭關(guān)系：提及家庭成員間的相處模式、彼此間的關(guān)愛與支持。“My parents always encourage me when I face difficulties. My sister and I share secrets and support each other in our studies.”
(5)名字文化：若有特別含義，可介紹自己或家人名字的文化內(nèi)涵。“My name is Mei, which means beautiful in Chinese. My parents hoped I would grow up to be a kind - hearted and beautiful - minded person.”
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4. 寫作思路提示
(1)以人帶事：先介紹每個(gè)家庭成員，再圍繞其講述與之相關(guān)的家庭活動(dòng)或故事，使人物形象更豐滿，家庭場(chǎng)景更生動(dòng)。比如介紹完奶奶后，講述每年奶奶生日時(shí)全家一起為她慶生的溫馨場(chǎng)景。
(2)時(shí)間串聯(lián)：按照時(shí)間順序，從日常到特殊節(jié)日，依次描述家庭生活片段，展現(xiàn)家庭生活的連貫性和豐富性。如從平常的周末家庭活動(dòng)，過渡到重要節(jié)日的慶祝。
(3)突出情感：在描述家庭活動(dòng)和成員關(guān)系時(shí)，著重體現(xiàn)家庭的溫暖、愛與凝聚力，讓讀者能深切感受到家庭氛圍。
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5. 寫作步驟詳解
(1)開篇引入：以對(duì)家庭的總體感受或一句溫馨的話語開篇，如 “Home is where the heart is. My family is the most precious thing in my life.” 引出要介紹家庭的主題。
(2)主體描述：按照寫作要點(diǎn)，依次介紹家庭成員、日常活動(dòng)、特殊時(shí)刻等內(nèi)容。在介紹過程中，運(yùn)用具體事例和細(xì)節(jié)描寫，增強(qiáng)文章感染力。例如介紹家庭活動(dòng)時(shí)，描述大家一起做飯時(shí)的互動(dòng)和笑聲。
(3)結(jié)尾升華：總結(jié)對(duì)家庭的熱愛，強(qiáng)調(diào)家庭對(duì)自己成長的重要意義。如 “I love my family deeply. It is not just a place to live but a harbor full of love and warmth that will always be with me.”
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匯運(yùn)用提示
(1)家庭成員稱呼：“father/dad/daddy”“mother/mom/mummy”“grandfather/grandpa”“grandmother/grandma”“sister”“brother”“uncle”“aunt”“cousin” 等。
(2)描述性格與外貌：“kind - hearted”（善良的）、“patient”（有耐心的）、“outgoing”（外向的）、“handsome”（英俊的）、“beautiful”（美麗的）、“tall”（高的）、“short”（矮的） 等。
(3)家庭活動(dòng)：“cook”（做飯）、“watch TV”（看電視）、“play games”（玩游戲）、“go for a walk”（散步）、“have a picnic”（野餐） 等。
(4)節(jié)日相關(guān)：“Spring Festival”（春節(jié)）、“Mid - Autumn Festival”（中秋節(jié)）、“birthday”（生日）、“celebrate”（慶祝）、“decorate”（裝飾） 等。
(5)情感表達(dá)：“l(fā)ove”（愛）、“care”（關(guān)心）、“warmth”（溫暖）、“happiness”（幸福）、“precious”（珍貴的） 等。
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句型運(yùn)用提示
(1)介紹家庭成員：“This is... He/She is...（這是…… 他 / 她是…… ）” 例如：“This is my mother. She is a teacher.”
(2)描述愛好與活動(dòng)：“...like (s)/love (s) doing...（…… 喜歡做…… ）” 比如：“My brother loves playing basketball.”
(3)表達(dá)在某時(shí)做某事：“We usually/often...on/at...（我們通常 / 經(jīng)常在……（時(shí)間）做…… ）” 如：“We often have a family dinner on weekends.”
(4)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型：“It is/was...that/who...（正是…… ）” 例如：“It is my parents who always support me.”
(5)感嘆句：“What a/an + adj. + n. + 主語 + 謂語！（多么…… 的…… 啊！ ）” 或 “How + adj./adv. + 主語 + 謂語！（多么…… 啊！ ）” 如：“What a warm family I have! ” 或 “How happy we are when we get together! ”
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范例作文
My Family
Home is where the heart is. My family is the most precious thing in my life. There are four people in my family: my parents, my sister, and me.
My father, named Zhang Wei, is 42 years old. He is a hard - working engineer. He is tall and strong, and he has a great sense of responsibility. He always tries his best to support our family. My mother is 40 and she is a kind - hearted nurse. She is gentle and patient. She takes good care of all of us.My sister is a lovely girl. She is 10 years old and in primary school. She is very clever and outgoing. We often play games and share our secrets together.
On weekends, we usually have a family activity. Sometimes we go to the park and have a picnic. We enjoy the fresh air and beautiful scenery there. Sometimes we cook a big meal at home. Mom is in charge of the main course, and Dad and I help with the side dishes. We chat and laugh while cooking, and it's really a happy time
During the Spring Festival, our family is full of joy. We decorate our house with red lanterns and couplets. On New Year's Eve, we get together to have a big feast. After that, we watch the Spring Festival Gala and wait for the New Year to come.
My name is Zhang Ming. “Ming” means bright in Chinese. My parents hoped I could have a bright future. I love my family deeply. It is not just a place to live but a harbor full of love and warmth that will.
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譯文：
我的家庭
家是心之所系之處。我的家庭是我生命中最珍貴的東西。我家有四口人：我的父母、我的妹妹和我。
我的父親叫張偉，42 歲。他是一名勤勞的工程師。他高大強(qiáng)壯，有很強(qiáng)的責(zé)任感。他總是竭盡全力支撐我們的家。我的母親 40 歲，是一位善良的護(hù)士。她溫柔且有耐心。她把我們照顧得很好。
我的妹妹是個(gè)可愛的女孩。她 10 歲，在上小學(xué)。她非常聰明且外向。我們經(jīng)常一起玩游戲，分享彼此的秘密。
在周末，我們通常會(huì)進(jìn)行家庭活動(dòng)。有時(shí)我們?nèi)ス珗@野餐。我們享受那里的新鮮空氣和美麗風(fēng)景。有時(shí)我們?cè)诩易龃蟛汀寢屫?fù)責(zé)主菜，我和爸爸幫忙做配菜。我們做飯時(shí)一邊聊天一邊歡笑，那真是一段快樂的時(shí)光。
春節(jié)期間，我們家充滿了喜悅。我們用紅燈籠和春聯(lián)裝飾房子。除夕夜，我們聚在一起吃一頓豐盛的大餐。之后，我們看春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會(huì)，等待新年的到來。
我的名字是張明。“明” 在中文里意味著光明。我的父母希望我能有一個(gè)光明的未來。我深深地愛著我的家庭。它不僅僅是一個(gè)居住的地方，更是一個(gè)充滿愛與溫暖的港灣，將永遠(yuǎn)陪伴著我。
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實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練:
家是溫馨的港灣，為我們遮風(fēng)擋雨;家是快樂生活的源泉，滋潤著我們的心靈。育才中學(xué)即將舉辦一場(chǎng)主題為“AHappy Family”的英語演講比賽。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖文信息寫一篇不少于50詞的演講稿，介紹你的一家.寫作要求:
1.包含圖文信息的全部內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)拓展;:
2.條理清晰，語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范;
3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名,
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A Happy Family
I'm Li Hua. _________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________
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[總體分析]
① 體裁：本文是一篇演講稿，屬于記敘文范疇，作者以第一人稱介紹自己的家庭，屬于 “人與社會(huì)” 主題范疇中的 “家庭、朋友與周圍的人” 主題群 ，旨在展現(xiàn)家庭的幸福與溫暖。
② 時(shí)態(tài)：主要運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來陳述家庭成員的職業(yè)、愛好等常態(tài)信息 ，如 “My father is a doctor. He loves eating beef noodles...” 。整體時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，契合介紹家庭日常情況的語境。
③ 提示：圍繞圖文信息介紹家庭成員，包括職業(yè)、喜愛的食物和活動(dòng)，以及自身和弟弟的年齡、特點(diǎn)與喜好，要點(diǎn)全面，內(nèi)容緊密圍繞 “幸福家庭” 主題展開。
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[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]
① warm - hearted：“熱心的；溫馨的” ，用來形容家庭，生動(dòng)傳達(dá)出家庭溫暖的氛圍，比普通的 “warm” 更具情感色彩。
② be into：“對(duì)…… 感興趣；熱衷于” ，是口語化且地道的表達(dá)，如 “He's really into beef noodles” ，比 “l(fā)ike” 更能體現(xiàn)喜愛的程度。
③ cherish：“珍視；珍惜” ，準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)出作者對(duì)家庭的深厚情感，用詞精準(zhǔn)且高級(jí)。
[高分句型]
① 定語從句：“It's the place where I grow, learn, and feel happy.” 用 “where” 引導(dǎo)定語從句，修飾先行詞 “the place” ，清晰地表明家庭是自己成長、學(xué)習(xí)和感受快樂的地方，使句子表意豐富且語法結(jié)構(gòu)更高級(jí)。
② 并列句：“My father is a doctor. He's really into beef noodles and often plays football after work to keep fit.” 通過并列句結(jié)構(gòu)，簡潔明了地介紹父親的職業(yè)和生活愛好，句子邏輯連貫，層次清晰。
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[寫作步驟]
第一步，點(diǎn)明主題：“Dear friends, I'm Li Hua. I'm lucky to be part of a warm - hearted family.” 開篇點(diǎn)明身份，并直接引出 “自己身處一個(gè)溫馨家庭” 這一主題，為后文介紹家庭成員做鋪墊。
第二步，闡述具體內(nèi)容：
父親介紹：“My father is a doctor. He's really into beef noodles and often plays football after work to keep fit. His hard - working and responsible spirit inspires me.” 先說明父親職業(yè)，接著介紹其飲食愛好和運(yùn)動(dòng)習(xí)慣，最后闡述父親的精神對(duì)自己的激勵(lì)，從多個(gè)角度展現(xiàn)父親形象。
母親介紹：“My mother is a teacher. Mapo tofu is her all - time favorite. She loves going hiking on weekends, enjoying the beauty of nature. Her patience and kindness touch everyone around her.” 依次介紹母親職業(yè)、喜愛食物、周末活動(dòng)，以及母親性格特點(diǎn)帶來的影響，使母親形象立體豐滿。
自身與弟弟介紹：“I'm 13 years old. I'm crazy about reading as it takes me to different worlds. And here's Oscar, my 2 - year - old brother. He's incredibly cute and his love for meat is so funny.” 介紹自己年齡和愛好，并說明愛好帶來的體驗(yàn)，再介紹弟弟年齡、可愛特點(diǎn)和飲食喜好，生動(dòng)有趣。
第三步，總結(jié)升華：“In our family, love is everywhere. It's the place where I grow, learn, and feel happy. I cherish my family forever.” 總結(jié)家庭充滿愛，強(qiáng)調(diào)家庭對(duì)自己成長和情感的重要意義，表達(dá)對(duì)家庭的珍視，升華主題，收束全文。
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例文
Dear friends,
I'm Li Hua. I'm lucky to be part of a warm - hearted family.My father is a doctor. He's really into beef noodles and often plays football after work to keep fit. His hard - working and responsible spirit inspires me.My mother is a teacher. Mapo tofu is her all - time favorite. She loves going hiking on weekends, enjoying the beauty of nature. Her patience and kindness touch everyone around her.I'm 13 years old. I'm crazy about reading as it takes me to different worlds. And here's Oscar, my 2 - year - old brother. He's incredibly cute and his love for meat is so funny.
In our family, love is everywhere. It's the place where I grow, learn, and feel happy. I cherish my family forever.
Thank you!
復(fù)習(xí)U4，整理單詞短語，和同桌一起復(fù)習(xí)單元短語句型。
基礎(chǔ)性作業(yè)：
實(shí)踐性作業(yè)：
經(jīng)過一單元的學(xué)習(xí)，完成一份“My family”為主題的手抄報(bào)，
向同學(xué)們展示。
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