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Unit 1 Happy Holiday
單元寫作專項練習
【寫作能力拓展導練】
一、單元主題詞匯·高頻詞匯梳理
二、語言素材積累·名句活學活用
The journey is half the fun. 旅行的一半樂趣在于過程。
Travel is the best education. 旅行是最好的教育。
Better to travel hopefully than to arrive. 懷著希望出發,勝過到達目的地。
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作不玩耍,聰明孩子也會變傻。 Reading ten thousand books is like traveling ten thousand miles.
讀萬卷書, 行萬里路。
三、教材佳句仿寫·高分句式訓練
1 教材原句：We were so happy that we didn't notice the time.
【仿寫】: 那里太美了, 我們在那里待了很長時間。
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2 教材原句：Everything tasted good,especially the steamed chicken soup.
【仿寫】:戶外運動變得非常受歡迎，尤其是遠足和騎行。
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3 教材原句：I didn't feel like eating because I felt sick.
【仿寫】每當我打開書，我好像進入了一個多彩的世界。
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4 教材原句：There are lots of ways to relax and4have fun.
【仿寫】那里有很多種海洋動物，我們還拍了很多照片。
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5教材原句：What a wonderful experience I had!
【仿寫】多么驚奇的故事呀!
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四、以讀促寫·主題寫作典例剖析
假設你是李華，暑假期間，你和家人進行了一次愉快的旅行。現在請你寫一
篇英語短文，介紹你們本次旅行的活動和感受。（主題:人與社會 人稱:第一人稱）
【要求】:
語言通順、準確，省略部分須適當發揮；
詞數 80 左右。
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開頭：引出話題
I travelled to... with... during...
I was on vacation in... with... during..
I paid a visit to... with... during....
主體：旅游經歷
On the first day.. .
On the second day...
On the last day....
結尾：個人感受
All in all, the three-day trip was enjoyable.
What an enjoyable trip it was! / How enjoyable the trip was !
In a word , my family and I had a good/great/wonderful time there.
Step 2高階表達應用
It was beautiful and we stayed there for a longtime. (用“so...that...”升格)
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2. The food there tasted delicious. (用感嘆句升格)
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3 We went shopping there and had a good time.(用“have fun doing sth.”升格)
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4 I want to visit Zhuhai again.(“can't wait to do sth.”升格)
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Step 3佳作展示評析
I travelled to Zhuhai with my family during the summer holiday. The weather was hot there but we had a wonderful time.
On the first day,we visited the Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macao Bridge（港珠澳大橋）. We were all excited to see so long a bridge. Then, we went to Jingshan Park. It was so beautiful that we stayed there for a long time. The next day，we decided to visit Chimelong Ocean Kingdom. There were many kinds of sea animals and we took lots of photos. On the last day，We took the subway to Wanzai Seafood Street. How delicious the food there tasted ! After that, we had fun shopping.
All in all the three-day trip was enjoyable. I can't wait to visit Zhuhai again.
使用on the first day、the next day、on the last day，以時間為序，使文章條理清晰。 運用“so...that...”句型，既表達了旅行時的喜悅心情，又豐富了文章的句式結構。 使用感嘆句表達了對食物的喜愛之情，提升了文章的檔次。 all in all 引出對珠海三日行的總結，過渡自然，言簡意賅。 can't wait to的使用恰當地表達了作者旅行后的感受。 本篇范文文筆流暢，既有事實描述又恰當地表達了自己的感受，讓讀者也體會到了本次旅行的愉快。
五、學以致用·主題寫作實戰演練
旅行中值得我們關注的是途中的人和事，還有那些美好的經歷和景色。要么讀書，要么旅行，靈魂和身體必須有一個在路上。請用英語寫一篇短文，談談你的一次旅行經歷。
【要點提示】:
When and where did you go
What did you do there
How did you feel
【要求】:
1.涵蓋以上提示內容，語句通順，內容完整，語法正確;
2.可適當發揮，但內容要合情合理;
3.不得出現任何真實人名、校名及其他相關信息;
4.詞數 80 左右。
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【參考答案】
三、教材佳句仿寫·高分句式訓練
1 It was so beautiful that we stayed there for a long time.
2 Outdoor sports become very popular, especially hiking and cycling.
3 Every time I open a book, I feel like that I enter a colourful world.
4 There were many kinds of sea animals and we took lots of photos.
5 What an amazing story!
四、Step2 高階表達應用
1 It was so beautiful that we stayed there for a long time.
2 How delicious the food there tasted !
3 We had fun shopping there.
4 I can't wait to visit Zhuhai again.
學以致用·主題寫作實戰演練
Beihai Park is one of the most popular places to visit in Beijing. I went there with my classmates in May and we had a great time.
We arrived there early in the morning. The air was cool and fresh. As we walked along the lake, we saw many people doing exercise. We also took many pictures. Then we climbed up the hill. It was great to enjoy the views from the top. In the afternoon, we went on a boat tour on the lake.
It was a wonderful trip. We all felt relaxed and happy. I'm looking forward to visiting more beautiful places in Beijing.

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