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人教版（2024）七年級上冊寫作3 介紹家人
一、書面表達
1．（2025七上·新會期末）假如你是李華（Li Hua），請給你在美國的網(wǎng)友David寫一封電子郵件，介紹一下你的家庭生活（重點圍繞 a family moment這個主題）。
要求如下：
1. 郵件內(nèi)容健康。
2. 內(nèi)容至少包括：
1）表達關(guān)心問候；
2）你的家庭成員；
3）你的家庭生活片段（family moment）；
4）你的家庭生活感受；
3. 不能出現(xiàn)你的學校名稱和你的真實姓名。
4. 詞數(shù)不少于80。
Dear David,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2． 家庭像一棵大樹，每個成員都是這棵樹上不可或缺的枝葉，共同為家庭的繁榮付出努力。假設(shè)你是李大明，請根據(jù)圖片及其所提供的信息，用英語向你們班的交換生Peter介紹你的家庭情況。
要求:1. 包括圖片所給信息，條理清楚，語句通順；2. 詞數(shù)不少于60。
3．（2024七上·湛江期中）書面表達
假如你是王笑，你想和上文的Mary成為朋友，請你根據(jù)以下要求給她寫一封信：
1、簡單介紹你自己（姓名，年齡，興趣）。
2、簡單介紹你的家庭（人數(shù)，家庭成員簡介）。
3、表達你想要交朋友的想法。
作文要求：（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實校名、地名和考生的真實姓名。
（2）語句連貫，詞數(shù)70詞左右。作文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mary,
……
Yours,
Wang Xiao
4．（2025七上·廣安期末）假如你是劉琳，你的英語老師布置了一個創(chuàng)意作業(yè)。她讓同學們畫一幅"我的家譜"（My family tree），并在圖畫下方用英語介紹自己的家庭。下圖是你創(chuàng)作的家譜，請寫一篇英語短文介紹它吧。
內(nèi)容提示：
1. 介紹家庭成員的年齡和職業(yè)；
2. 介紹家庭成員的興趣和愛好。
要求：
1. 條理清晰，內(nèi)容完整，語句通順，書寫工整；
2. 參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)學生的真實姓名和校名；
4. 語句連貫，詞數(shù) 70 左右。作文開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
There are five people in my family. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．（2025七上·長春期中）(B) 假如你是劉琳，你的英語老師布置了一個創(chuàng)意作業(yè)。她讓同學們畫一幅"我的家譜"(My amily Tree)， 并在圖畫下方用英語介紹自己的家庭。下圖是你創(chuàng)作的家譜，請寫一篇 80詞左右英語短文介紹它吧。
內(nèi)容提示：
1.介紹家庭成員的年齡和職業(yè)：
2.介紹家庭成員的興趣和愛好并說明理由；
要求:
1. 條理清晰，內(nèi)容完整，語句通順，書寫工整；
2. 參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；
3. 文中請勿提及你的真實姓名和校名：
答案解析部分
1．【答案】例文
Dear David,
How is it going I am so happy to talk with you again. Let me tell something about my family life. There are 4 people in my family. They are my father, mother, sister and I. We all love sports. My father likes playing table tennis. I love playing football. My mother is good at playing tennis and my sister is a good swimmer. Every weekend we go out to do sports in the morning. We often talk about something interesting about sports at lunch time or dinner time. From Monday to Friday, we often share something fun in study or work. We enjoy every family moment every day. I love my family and the nice family moment. I am very happy to be with my family.
David, can you tell me something about your family moment
Yours,
Li Hua
【知識點】家庭生活
2．【答案】Hello, Peter! My name's Li Daming and this is my family photo.
This is my father, on the left. He is a teacher and he is very kind. The woman on the right is my mother. She is a teacher and she can play the piano. The little girl and the little boy in the front are my sister and me. My sister is fourteen years old. She likes singing English songs. The old man is my grandfather. He likes reading books. My grandmother can cook delicious meals. We have a really happy family and we live a happy life.
【知識點】提綱作文；說明文；家庭成員介紹
【解析】【分析】這是一篇提綱作文，要求根據(jù)圖片及其所提供的信息，用英語向你們班的交換生Peter介紹你的家庭情況。寫作內(nèi)容包括李大明家庭成員和職業(yè)等介紹。根據(jù)內(nèi)容要求可知本文的主要時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。注意并列連詞的使用和主謂一致問題，寫作中要注意上下文的過渡和邏輯，要符合英語的表達習慣。
【點評】這篇短文對李大明家庭成員和職業(yè)進行了詳細論述。內(nèi)容全面、詳盡，意思連貫，表達清楚，時態(tài)和人稱的運用靈活準確。其中使用的on the left/right在左邊/在右邊，like doing sth.喜歡做某事等短語增加了文章的可讀性。日常進行寫作訓練注意多運用常見句式和短語，使表達更為流暢。
3．【答案】Dear Mary,
How are you I'm Wang Xiao. I am twelve years old. I'm from China. Now I live in Qingyuan, Guangdong. I am a student in Class Three, Grade Seven in Sunshine Middle School. I like playing the guitar. I am good at it. But I can't sing, dance or play the piano.
I have a happy family. There are four people in my family. My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital. My mother is a Chinese teacher in a middle school. She is very nice. Her students all like her very much. My brother is 5 years old. He is very cute. He likes running. I like to play with him.
I want to make friends with you. Will you be friends with me
Yours,
Wang Xiao
【知識點】提綱作文；家庭成員介紹；身邊的事物與環(huán)境；人際關(guān)系與交往；書信、電子郵件
【解析】【分析】這是一篇書信體作文。要求以王笑的身份給Mary寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括簡單介紹自己（姓名、年齡、興趣）、家庭（人數(shù)、家庭成員簡介）以及表達想要交朋友的想法。文章開頭根據(jù)開頭已給內(nèi)容，直接進入自我介紹部分。中間依次介紹自己的基本信息和家庭情況。結(jié)尾表達想要交朋友的愿望。主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時。要正確使用人稱，介紹自己用第一人稱；介紹家庭成員時注意第三人稱單數(shù)的使用。同時要保證語句通順、連貫，符合書信的格式。
【點評】考查提綱作文。結(jié)構(gòu)例文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，按照要求依次進行了自我介紹、家庭介紹以及表達交朋友的愿望，層次分明。內(nèi)容完整，涵蓋了所有寫作要點。自我介紹部分說明了姓名、年齡、來自哪里、所在學校和興趣愛好；家庭介紹部分介紹了家庭人數(shù)以及父親、母親和弟弟的基本情況；最后自然地表達了想要和Mary交朋友的想法。文章中心思想明確，圍繞與Mary交朋友這一主題，通過介紹自己和家庭，讓Mary對自己有初步了解，從而增進彼此的認識，達到交朋友的目的?？傮w而言，這篇例文很好地完成了寫作任務(wù)，符合書信的格式和內(nèi)容要求，語言簡潔流暢。寫得好的句子： I like playing the guitar. I am good at it. But I can't sing, dance or play the piano. 此句清晰地闡述了自己的興趣愛好以及擅長的和不擅長的事情，使人物形象更加立體。 I want to make friends with you. Will you be friends with me 直接表達了自己的愿望，簡潔明了，符合書信表達的需求。
4．【答案】例文：
There are five people in my family. My grandfather is 61 years old. He is a farmer and enjoys playing chess in his free time. My grandmother is 59 years old. She is also a farmer but loves drawing pictures of flowers and landscapes.
My father is 39 years old and works as a doctor. He likes to go fishing on weekends. My mother is 38 years old and she is a teacher. She loves reading books, especially those about history.
I'm Liu Lin, 13 years old, and I'm a student. My hobby is playing the guitar. I enjoy making music and sharing it with my family. We all love each other and spend a lot of time together.
5．【答案】One possible version:
I have a big family. My grandparents are both 70 years old. They are retired. They like gardening because they think it is relaxing. My father is 45 and he is a worker. He likes fishing as it makes him calm. My mother is 42 and she is a teacher. She loves reading because she can learn a lot from books. I have a brother. He is 5 years old. He likes playing football because he likes watching football games. I have an aunt and an uncle. They are both 40. My aunt is a nurse and she likes helping others. My uncle is a driver and he likes watching football games. I have two cousins. They are my uncle and aunt's daughter who is 15 and son who is 12. They like reading storybooks because they think storybooks are funny. We all study hard at school. We like having family parties because we can have fun together.
【知識點】提綱作文；說明文；家庭成員介紹；家庭生活
【解析】【分析】這是一篇提綱作文，要求根據(jù) "我的家譜"用英語介紹自己的家庭。寫作內(nèi)容包括家庭成員的年齡和職業(yè)、興趣愛好及理由。根據(jù)內(nèi)容要求可知本文的主要時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，主要人稱為第一人稱和第三人稱。注意并列連詞的使用和主謂一致問題，寫作中要注意上下文的過渡和邏輯，要符合英語的表達習慣。
【點評】這篇短文首先介紹了自己大致的家庭情況，其次介紹自己的爺爺奶奶、爸爸媽媽、叔叔阿姨的年齡、職業(yè)、興趣愛好及理由，內(nèi)容全面、詳盡，意思連貫，表達清楚，時態(tài)和人稱的運用靈活準確。其中使用的They think+賓語從句：They like gardening because they think it is relaxing. "他們喜歡園藝，因為他們認為這很放松"等；who引導的定語從句： I have a sister who is 15 and a brother who is 12. "我有一個15歲的姐姐和一個12歲的哥哥"等句型，以及because、and等連詞使得文章的邏輯性大大增強；使用的like doing sth.喜歡做某事，study hard努力學習，have fun玩得開心，等短語增加了文章的可讀性。日常進行寫作訓練注意多運用常見句式和短語，使表達更為流暢。
1 / 1人教版（2024）七年級上冊寫作3 介紹家人
一、書面表達
1．（2025七上·新會期末）假如你是李華（Li Hua），請給你在美國的網(wǎng)友David寫一封電子郵件，介紹一下你的家庭生活（重點圍繞 a family moment這個主題）。
要求如下：
1. 郵件內(nèi)容健康。
2. 內(nèi)容至少包括：
1）表達關(guān)心問候；
2）你的家庭成員；
3）你的家庭生活片段（family moment）；
4）你的家庭生活感受；
3. 不能出現(xiàn)你的學校名稱和你的真實姓名。
4. 詞數(shù)不少于80。
Dear David,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear David,
How is it going I am so happy to talk with you again. Let me tell something about my family life. There are 4 people in my family. They are my father, mother, sister and I. We all love sports. My father likes playing table tennis. I love playing football. My mother is good at playing tennis and my sister is a good swimmer. Every weekend we go out to do sports in the morning. We often talk about something interesting about sports at lunch time or dinner time. From Monday to Friday, we often share something fun in study or work. We enjoy every family moment every day. I love my family and the nice family moment. I am very happy to be with my family.
David, can you tell me something about your family moment
Yours,
Li Hua
【知識點】家庭生活
2． 家庭像一棵大樹，每個成員都是這棵樹上不可或缺的枝葉，共同為家庭的繁榮付出努力。假設(shè)你是李大明，請根據(jù)圖片及其所提供的信息，用英語向你們班的交換生Peter介紹你的家庭情況。
要求:1. 包括圖片所給信息，條理清楚，語句通順；2. 詞數(shù)不少于60。
【答案】Hello, Peter! My name's Li Daming and this is my family photo.
This is my father, on the left. He is a teacher and he is very kind. The woman on the right is my mother. She is a teacher and she can play the piano. The little girl and the little boy in the front are my sister and me. My sister is fourteen years old. She likes singing English songs. The old man is my grandfather. He likes reading books. My grandmother can cook delicious meals. We have a really happy family and we live a happy life.
【知識點】提綱作文；說明文；家庭成員介紹
【解析】【分析】這是一篇提綱作文，要求根據(jù)圖片及其所提供的信息，用英語向你們班的交換生Peter介紹你的家庭情況。寫作內(nèi)容包括李大明家庭成員和職業(yè)等介紹。根據(jù)內(nèi)容要求可知本文的主要時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱為第一人稱。注意并列連詞的使用和主謂一致問題，寫作中要注意上下文的過渡和邏輯，要符合英語的表達習慣。
【點評】這篇短文對李大明家庭成員和職業(yè)進行了詳細論述。內(nèi)容全面、詳盡，意思連貫，表達清楚，時態(tài)和人稱的運用靈活準確。其中使用的on the left/right在左邊/在右邊，like doing sth.喜歡做某事等短語增加了文章的可讀性。日常進行寫作訓練注意多運用常見句式和短語，使表達更為流暢。
3．（2024七上·湛江期中）書面表達
假如你是王笑，你想和上文的Mary成為朋友，請你根據(jù)以下要求給她寫一封信：
1、簡單介紹你自己（姓名，年齡，興趣）。
2、簡單介紹你的家庭（人數(shù)，家庭成員簡介）。
3、表達你想要交朋友的想法。
作文要求：（1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)真實校名、地名和考生的真實姓名。
（2）語句連貫，詞數(shù)70詞左右。作文的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Mary,
……
Yours,
Wang Xiao
【答案】Dear Mary,
How are you I'm Wang Xiao. I am twelve years old. I'm from China. Now I live in Qingyuan, Guangdong. I am a student in Class Three, Grade Seven in Sunshine Middle School. I like playing the guitar. I am good at it. But I can't sing, dance or play the piano.
I have a happy family. There are four people in my family. My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital. My mother is a Chinese teacher in a middle school. She is very nice. Her students all like her very much. My brother is 5 years old. He is very cute. He likes running. I like to play with him.
I want to make friends with you. Will you be friends with me
Yours,
Wang Xiao
【知識點】提綱作文；家庭成員介紹；身邊的事物與環(huán)境；人際關(guān)系與交往；書信、電子郵件
【解析】【分析】這是一篇書信體作文。要求以王笑的身份給Mary寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括簡單介紹自己（姓名、年齡、興趣）、家庭（人數(shù)、家庭成員簡介）以及表達想要交朋友的想法。文章開頭根據(jù)開頭已給內(nèi)容，直接進入自我介紹部分。中間依次介紹自己的基本信息和家庭情況。結(jié)尾表達想要交朋友的愿望。主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時。要正確使用人稱，介紹自己用第一人稱；介紹家庭成員時注意第三人稱單數(shù)的使用。同時要保證語句通順、連貫，符合書信的格式。
【點評】考查提綱作文。結(jié)構(gòu)例文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，按照要求依次進行了自我介紹、家庭介紹以及表達交朋友的愿望，層次分明。內(nèi)容完整，涵蓋了所有寫作要點。自我介紹部分說明了姓名、年齡、來自哪里、所在學校和興趣愛好；家庭介紹部分介紹了家庭人數(shù)以及父親、母親和弟弟的基本情況；最后自然地表達了想要和Mary交朋友的想法。文章中心思想明確，圍繞與Mary交朋友這一主題，通過介紹自己和家庭，讓Mary對自己有初步了解，從而增進彼此的認識，達到交朋友的目的。總體而言，這篇例文很好地完成了寫作任務(wù)，符合書信的格式和內(nèi)容要求，語言簡潔流暢。寫得好的句子： I like playing the guitar. I am good at it. But I can't sing, dance or play the piano. 此句清晰地闡述了自己的興趣愛好以及擅長的和不擅長的事情，使人物形象更加立體。 I want to make friends with you. Will you be friends with me 直接表達了自己的愿望，簡潔明了，符合書信表達的需求。
4．（2025七上·廣安期末）假如你是劉琳，你的英語老師布置了一個創(chuàng)意作業(yè)。她讓同學們畫一幅"我的家譜"（My family tree），并在圖畫下方用英語介紹自己的家庭。下圖是你創(chuàng)作的家譜，請寫一篇英語短文介紹它吧。
內(nèi)容提示：
1. 介紹家庭成員的年齡和職業(yè)；
2. 介紹家庭成員的興趣和愛好。
要求：
1. 條理清晰，內(nèi)容完整，語句通順，書寫工整；
2. 參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；
3. 文中不得出現(xiàn)學生的真實姓名和校名；
4. 語句連貫，詞數(shù) 70 左右。作文開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
There are five people in my family. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
There are five people in my family. My grandfather is 61 years old. He is a farmer and enjoys playing chess in his free time. My grandmother is 59 years old. She is also a farmer but loves drawing pictures of flowers and landscapes.
My father is 39 years old and works as a doctor. He likes to go fishing on weekends. My mother is 38 years old and she is a teacher. She loves reading books, especially those about history.
I'm Liu Lin, 13 years old, and I'm a student. My hobby is playing the guitar. I enjoy making music and sharing it with my family. We all love each other and spend a lot of time together.
5．（2025七上·長春期中）(B) 假如你是劉琳，你的英語老師布置了一個創(chuàng)意作業(yè)。她讓同學們畫一幅"我的家譜"(My amily Tree)， 并在圖畫下方用英語介紹自己的家庭。下圖是你創(chuàng)作的家譜，請寫一篇 80詞左右英語短文介紹它吧。
內(nèi)容提示：
1.介紹家庭成員的年齡和職業(yè)：
2.介紹家庭成員的興趣和愛好并說明理由；
要求:
1. 條理清晰，內(nèi)容完整，語句通順，書寫工整；
2. 參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮；
3. 文中請勿提及你的真實姓名和校名：
【答案】One possible version:
I have a big family. My grandparents are both 70 years old. They are retired. They like gardening because they think it is relaxing. My father is 45 and he is a worker. He likes fishing as it makes him calm. My mother is 42 and she is a teacher. She loves reading because she can learn a lot from books. I have a brother. He is 5 years old. He likes playing football because he likes watching football games. I have an aunt and an uncle. They are both 40. My aunt is a nurse and she likes helping others. My uncle is a driver and he likes watching football games. I have two cousins. They are my uncle and aunt's daughter who is 15 and son who is 12. They like reading storybooks because they think storybooks are funny. We all study hard at school. We like having family parties because we can have fun together.
【知識點】提綱作文；說明文；家庭成員介紹；家庭生活
【解析】【分析】這是一篇提綱作文，要求根據(jù) "我的家譜"用英語介紹自己的家庭。寫作內(nèi)容包括家庭成員的年齡和職業(yè)、興趣愛好及理由。根據(jù)內(nèi)容要求可知本文的主要時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，主要人稱為第一人稱和第三人稱。注意并列連詞的使用和主謂一致問題，寫作中要注意上下文的過渡和邏輯，要符合英語的表達習慣。
【點評】這篇短文首先介紹了自己大致的家庭情況，其次介紹自己的爺爺奶奶、爸爸媽媽、叔叔阿姨的年齡、職業(yè)、興趣愛好及理由，內(nèi)容全面、詳盡，意思連貫，表達清楚，時態(tài)和人稱的運用靈活準確。其中使用的They think+賓語從句：They like gardening because they think it is relaxing. "他們喜歡園藝，因為他們認為這很放松"等；who引導的定語從句： I have a sister who is 15 and a brother who is 12. "我有一個15歲的姐姐和一個12歲的哥哥"等句型，以及because、and等連詞使得文章的邏輯性大大增強；使用的like doing sth.喜歡做某事，study hard努力學習，have fun玩得開心，等短語增加了文章的可讀性。日常進行寫作訓練注意多運用常見句式和短語，使表達更為流暢。
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