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(共20張PPT)
Book 1
Reading for Writing P18-19
Unit 1 Teenage life
(First Period)
Part One
Revise the vocabulary
1 volunteer 志愿者
2 debate 辯論；爭論
3 movement 動(dòng)作；運(yùn)動(dòng)
4 greenhouse 溫室；暖房
5 clean up 打掃(或清除)干凈
6 suitable 適合的；適用的
7 actually 事實(shí)上; 的確
8 challenge 挑戰(zhàn)；向…挑戰(zhàn)
Revise to check your memory (A)
Read to discover writing details
2.What expressions does Ms Luo use to make suggestions Write them down.
I understand quite well….
I recommend that you ….
I think you should …
Why not do …
I am sure he will…
Read the passage on Page 18 again and figure out the organization of the letter
Write down the sentences from the passage that match the following points.
A.I know what the problem is.
B.I understand how you feel.
C.This is my advice and reasons
D.I think my advice will help.
Your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behavior. Spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. …. can not concentrate on school and family life.
I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
Writing
I always feel lonely after school because my parents work in another city. What can I do
Use what you have learnt to write a letter of advice to the teenager below.
Suggestion Reason
Join a volunteer group.
Connect with your parents online.
This will give you a chance to be around other people, and help you realise that other people have problems, too.
Just because they are far away, it doesn’t mean that you can’t talk to them.
Suggestion Reason
Ask a mutual friend to introduce you to her.
Find chances to get together in groups where she is a group member.
Your friend will be able to help you break the ice (打破沉默) with her and provide encouragement to you.
If you are in a group, it takes all the pressure off, and you can interact with her in a relaxing setting.
A. I know what the problem is.
Pre-writing: More sentence expressions
- I am (very) glad to hear that...
You wrote that ...
接收信息
- I am sorry to hear /know that...
- Learning that you can't/have trouble in（doing sth） ...
很抱歉你
遇到...問題
很高興聽
到...消息
賓語從句
self-segregate自我隔離
turn to parents
ask teachers for help
write to Agony Aunt
self-regulate自我調(diào)節(jié)
talk to friends
What should you do
Writing a letter to Agony Aunts (Brit) or Advice Columnist (Amr) is a good way to solve your problem.
Someone may write to you for help, too.
And you have to know how to write back.
Listen twice and answer the questions
P18
Learn to write a letter of advice.
建議信是寫信人向收信人對某事提出的建議和忠告。
建議信有可能是寫給某個(gè)人，就其遇到的某個(gè)問題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；也可能是寫給某個(gè)組織和機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其服務(wù)提出建議或忠告。
信的內(nèi)容要包括寫信的原因、建議的內(nèi)容和提出建議的理由。
提出的理由要入情入理，語氣一定要禮貌當(dāng)先。建議信要寫得簡明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說服力。這類文章的基本時(shí)態(tài)多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。
具體寫作步驟一般是“三段式”，通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least等依次陳述建議，具體為：
建議信
首段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，簡單介紹自己，注意語氣。
主體段落：應(yīng)該首先肯定對方的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后指出需要改進(jìn)的地方或針對具體情況提出具體的建議或忠告。注意千萬不要讓對方認(rèn)為是投訴，而不是建議。
結(jié)尾段：對提出的建議進(jìn)行總結(jié)。注意要有禮貌，使對方容易接受。
建議信常用句式：
1．段首常用語(照應(yīng)材料，表明寫作意圖)：
①I am writing to express my views concerning...
②After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that...
③You have asked for my advice about...and I will try to make some suggestions.
④I am very glad to hear that you want to...
2．表達(dá)建議常用語：
①I think the most suitable...for you is...
②I would like to suggest that...
③You'd better.../It's better to...
④As far as I am concerned.../In my opinion/...
⑤For one thing...; for another...
⑥If I were you, I would...
⑦It seems to me that you could...
⑧I think it would be more beneficial if you could.
Greeting
Body
Signature
三段論
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason(s).
D. I think my advice will help.
問候 頂格
主體三段都先空兩格
落款右對齊

表明寫作目的，自己感同身受
提出建議并闡述理由
表示祝愿、期望
10 September 2018
Dear Xu Ting,
You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city. I understand how you feel. It is common for teenagers to feel lonely when they live away from their parents.
I think you can try joining a volunteer group that helps other people. This will give you a chance to meet and be around others.
It will also help you realise that you are not alone in having problems and that many other people have problems, too. Helping other people also makes us feel better. You can also connect with your parents online. Just because your parents are far away, it doesn’t mean you can’t talk to them. I’m sure that you’ll make new friends and get a chance to speak to your parents more often. This will help drive away your loneliness.
Best wishes,
Susan Luo
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
Write a Letter of Advice
cyber addiction
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.

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