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(共20張PPT)
Unit 1 Teenage Life
—Reading for Writing
As a teenager, what problems do you have
in your daily life
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Step1 Lead-in
cyber addiction
bullying
feel lonely and
isolated
generation gaps
with parents
high expectations
from parents
and teachers
What advice will you give if you have friends with such problems
pressure from
heavey school work
depression
Facing these problems, how will you seek for help
1
communicating face to face with the person concerned
2
turning to friends for help
3
asking for advice on social media
4
writing a letter to a professional adviser
5
ringing help hotlines
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Step1 Lead-in
1. What is Worried Friend’s problem
2. What suggestions does Susan Luo give to Worried Friend
Worried Friend is worried that his or her friend, Chen Lei, plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
1) Talk to her/his friend about his behaviour.
2) Encourage his/her friend to try new hobbies.
3. Besides suggestions, what else does Susan Luo say in her letter
She also talks about the negative effects of computer addiction.
1. Do you think Ms Luo’s advice is useful Why or why not
Perhaps the advice is useful, because it is always good to talk to a friend about his or her problems and offer advice.
2. What other kinds of advice would you give
I would tell Chen Lei that he should spend his time more productively with an eye on his future. For example, instead of playing computer games, he could learn computer programming. Who knows He might become a great figure in that field when he’s older.
Suggestion Reason
Try listening to your parents.
Invite them out for something to eat.
Maybe they aren’t listening to you because you don’t listen to them.
This will give you a chance to speak to them without distractions.
self-segregate自我隔離
turn to parents
ask teachers for help
write to Agony Aunt
self-regulate自我調節
talk to friends
What should you do
Writing a letter to Agony Aunts (Brit) or Advice Columnist (Amr) is a good way to solve your problem.
Someone may write to you for help, too.
And you have to know how to write back.
Listen twice and answer the questions
P18
Learn to write a letter of advice.
2.What is Worried Friend's problem
3.What suggestions does Susan Luo give to Worried Friend
4.Besides suggestions, what else does Susan Luo say in her letter
She talks about the negative effects of computer addiction.
reasons
②
③
①
Step2 Reading
Considerate & Courteous
Concrete & Convincing
Language Features
5.What expressions does Susan Luo use to make suggestions Circle them in the letter.
Think deeper
1
2
3
What would you say when you want to show empathy（共情）
What expressions will you use when you give advice
What would you say when you end the letter of advice
B. I understand how you feel.
表示理解
I understand
quite well that...
事件+引發的感情
（焦慮、興奮）
E.g.
I understand quite well that you feel lonely when your partener spends a lot of time playing computer games.you.
angry, confused, upset, disappointed, annoyed, lonely, helpless, tired...
賓語從句
賓語從句
Pre-writing: More expressions
我非常能理解當你同伴花大把時間玩電腦游戲時你很孤單。
給出建議：
較易1. You had better do sth
2. How/ what about doing sth
3. Why not do sth
4. It’s a good idea for sb. to do sth
5. It’s adj.(important, necessary,beneficial, helpful) for sb to do sth
更高級：
-I strongly suggest/advise/recommend that you (should) do...because/because of...建議(+原因)
-I consider it's a good idea that...because...
-In my opinion /From my point of view, it is wise that/to do... 建議（+原因）
-If I were you, I would...
- When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that... 當談到這種情況，我想建議...
D. I think my advice will help.
Reading for the organisation
表示希望
I am sure he will...
-I sincerely hope that my suggestions will be (of use=helpful) / (of benefit= beneficial) to you.
(If there is more I can do to help, please let me know).
-I hope you will find these suggestions/ recommendations helpful/ useful/ practical.
- I will be more than delighted if you can take my suggestions/recommendations into account
10 September 2018
Dear Worried Friend,
You wrote that you are very worried about your friend, Chen Lei. I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible. You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
Write a Letter of Advice
cyber addiction
I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour. It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world. But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life. Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.
I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies. Why not discuss the problem together
I am sure he will listen to you, since you are his good friend.
All the best,
Susan Luo
Step3 Conclusion
首段Beginning—your point of view
中段Body
—your advice
尾段Ending
—your wishes

提出有針對性的建議，給出理由。
Body

希望自己的建議能對對方有所幫助，同時闡明你所提供的建議僅供對方參考。
Ending
一般指明建議的前提和事情的原委，對自己的立場作一些解釋。
Beginning
建議信的正文通常采取“三段式結構”：
01
02
03
I'm sorry to know/hear that you are now having trouble ( in) doing sth… .
知道/聽到你現在在……方面有些麻煩, 我很抱歉。
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
很高興收到你就……征求建議的來信。
My advice /suggestions are as follows./ The following is my advice.
/ Here are some tips to help you.
我的建議如下/這里有幫助你的一些建議。
Beginning：交代背景+寫信目的（1+3 或2+3）
Sentence patterns

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