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Unit 1 Teenage Life
—Reading for Writing
As a teenager, what problems do you have
in your daily life
...
...
Step1 Lead-in
cyber addiction
bullying
feel lonely and
isolated
generation gaps
with parents
high expectations
from parents
and teachers
What advice will you give if you have friends with such problems
pressure from
heavey school work
depression
Facing these problems, how will you seek for help
1
communicating face to face with the person concerned
2
turning to friends for help
3
asking for advice on social media
4
writing a letter to a professional adviser
5
ringing help hotlines
...
Step1 Lead-in
建議信的目的
Q: Why do we need to write a letter of advice
A: Because one of your（李華的） friends has trouble/facing a problem and he/she needs your help/advice.
Task 1 預習檢測
recommend vt.　 建議　　　　　 unhealthy adj.　　不健康的
encourage vt. 鼓勵 useful adj. 有用的
advice vt. 忠告，建議 situation n. 情況
look forward to 盼望，期望 be worried about 對…… 擔心
be attracted to 喜愛 be addicted to 對……上癮
concentrate on 集中精力于 be good for 對……有益
make friends 交朋友 hear from 收到……的來信
enjoy oneself/have fun 玩得愉快 tip/advice/suggestion n.　建議
in one’s spare time 在某人閑暇時 call for 需要
have trouble/difficulty in doing ... 做……有困難
take one’s advice 接受某人的建議 put one’s heart into 全心全意
share happiness and sorrow with... 和……同甘共苦
Task 2
1.What is Worried Friend's problem
2.Do you think Ms Luo's advice is useful Why or why not
3.What kind of advice did Susan Luo gave to this Worried Friend What other kinds of advice would you give
His/Her friend, ChenLei plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.
Yes，I do./ No,I don't. Because...
3 advice：①talk to his friend; ②encourage his/her friend to try new hobbies; ③discuss the problem together.
Suggestion Reason
Join a volunteer group.
Connect with your parents online.
This will give you a chance to be around other people, and help you realise that other people have problems, too.
Just because they are far away, it doesn’t mean that you can’t talk to them.
Suggestion Reason
Ask a mutual friend to introduce you to her.
Find chances to get together in groups where she is a group member.
Your friend will be able to help you break the ice (打破沉默) with her and provide encouragement to you.
If you are in a group, it takes all the pressure off, and you can interact with her in a relaxing setting.
A. I know what the problem is.
Pre-writing: More sentence expressions
- I am (very) glad to hear that...
You wrote that ...
接收信息
- I am sorry to hear /know that...
- Learning that you can't/have trouble in（doing sth） ...
很抱歉你
遇到...問題
很高興聽
到...消息
賓語從句
2.What is Worried Friend's problem
3.What suggestions does Susan Luo give to Worried Friend
4.Besides suggestions, what else does Susan Luo say in her letter
She talks about the negative effects of computer addiction.
reasons
②
③
①
Step2 Reading
Considerate & Courteous
Concrete & Convincing
Language Features
5.What expressions does Susan Luo use to make suggestions Circle them in the letter.
Think deeper
1
2
3
What would you say when you want to show empathy（共情）
What expressions will you use when you give advice
What would you say when you end the letter of advice
Learning to write after the model
Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem together
I am sure he will listen to you，since you are his good friend.
All the best，
Susan Luo
I think my advice will help
Wishes & Signature
1.篇章結(jié)構(gòu)
建議信是寫信人向收信人針對某事提出的建議或忠告。信的內(nèi)容要包含寫信的原因、具體建議以及提出建議的理由等。文章結(jié)構(gòu)一般是“三段式”，通常以first(ly)，second(ly), third(ly)或 to begin/start with, then, besides, last but not least等依次陳述建議，具體為：
第一段：表明寫作意圖。陳述事由，需要的話可以簡單介紹自己，注意禮貌用語的使用和語氣。
第二段：最好先肯定對方的優(yōu)點，然后指出需要改進的地方或針對具體情況給出具體的建議或忠告。注意使用禮貌用語，建議信是在提建議，而不是投訴。
第三段：對提出的建議進行總結(jié)。注意結(jié)尾更要有禮貌，使對方容易接受。
2.常用表達
(1)首段常用表達
I am writing to express my views on/about...我寫信是想表達我對……的看法。
You have asked my advice about/on... and I will try to make some suggestions.
你已經(jīng)問了我一些關(guān)于……的建議，我會盡量給你一些建議。
After I read your letter in the newspaper, I am sorry to know that...
我在報上看到你的信后，很遺憾得知……
I am very glad to hear that you want to...
我很高興聽到你想要……
I know you have trouble in... after reading your letter.
讀完你的來信后，得知你在……方面有麻煩。
I am writing to you for the purpose of...我寫信給你是為了……
I am writing to share some advice/opinions with you.
我寫信是想和你分享一些建議/意見。
Greeting
Body
Signature
三段論
A. I know what the problem is.
B. I understand how you feel.
C. This is my advice and reason(s).
D. I think my advice will help.
問候 頂格
主體三段都先空兩格
落款右對齊

表明寫作目的，自己感同身受
提出建議并闡述理由
表示祝愿、期望
10 September 2018
Dear Xu Ting,
You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city. I understand how you feel. It is common for teenagers to feel lonely when they live away from their parents.
I think you can try joining a volunteer group that helps other people. This will give you a chance to meet and be around others.
It will also help you realise that you are not alone in having problems and that many other people have problems, too. Helping other people also makes us feel better. You can also connect with your parents online. Just because your parents are far away, it doesn’t mean you can’t talk to them. I’m sure that you’ll make new friends and get a chance to speak to your parents more often. This will help drive away your loneliness.
Best wishes,
Susan Luo
Step3 Conclusion
首段Beginning—your point of view
中段Body
—your advice
尾段Ending
—your wishes

提出有針對性的建議，給出理由。
Body

希望自己的建議能對對方有所幫助，同時闡明你所提供的建議僅供對方參考。
Ending
一般指明建議的前提和事情的原委，對自己的立場作一些解釋。
Beginning
建議信的正文通常采取“三段式結(jié)構(gòu)”：
01
02
03
I'm sorry to know/hear that you are now having trouble ( in) doing sth… .
知道/聽到你現(xiàn)在在……方面有些麻煩, 我很抱歉。
I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on...
很高興收到你就……征求建議的來信。
My advice /suggestions are as follows./ The following is my advice.
/ Here are some tips to help you.
我的建議如下/這里有幫助你的一些建議。
Beginning：交代背景+寫信目的（1+3 或2+3）
Sentence patterns

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