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What will my life be like
in 20 years?
版本：北師大課標版
年級：八年級下冊第一單元
How time flies!

Ms. wang
Jim
Jim, please write a composition about your life in 20 years.
OK. Let me think of it.


Focus on the structure
Try to remember more information
關注結構 多記信息

Jim's life in 20 years

Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
Para 4

Jim’s life in twenty years


Talk about our/my life in twenty years



P1 introduction

How old will Jim be?
He will be_____ years old.
What kind of person will Jim be?
He will be a __________ and _______person.
In twenty years
34
successful
happy

P2 Work or job

What will Jim be? What will Jim do?
He will be a___________ .
,
In twenty years
businessman
What will he do in his job?
He will
_________his own website
________ his job very much
because he loves _________ the net.
_________to the office very often.
_____ from home according to his own timetable
not need to _________ early
____________work until late at night.
In twenty years
set up
enjoy
surfing
not go
work
wake up
be able to

P3 Family

Where will he live? What will he do with his family?
He will
leave ________.
live in his own ______.
live near his ____________.
visit his parents often.
have a ______ trip together every year.
home
flat
parents
family
In twenty years

P4 spare time

What will Jim do in his spare time?
He will
read ________.
_______ around.
play _________ with his friends
go swimming at the swimming pool _______ his home.
books
travel
football
near
In twenty years

P5 conclusion

Will Jim enjoy his life? Why or why not?
Yes. He will.
He will enjoy his life a lot
Because
he will ______ his time how he wants to
His life will be so __________ and _____________
In twenty years
spend
exciting
comfortable
Make your own mind-map
Work in groups.
Brain storm as many words as possible about work, family and hobbies.
In twenty years, I will be thirty-four years old. I think I will be a successful and happy person.
introduction
Tips:
1. Be brief in the beginning.
2. Use some adjective to make your writing lively.
conclusion
I will enjoy my life a lot because I will spend my time how I want to. Life will be so exciting and comfortable.
Tips:
1. Come back to the topic.
2. Use some clauses to make your writing better.
Use the link words and sentence phrases
I will be a businessman then and will set up my own website. I will enjoy my job very much because I love surfing the net…
I will leave home and live in my own flat. However, I will live near my parents and I will visit them often. Every year, we will have a family trip together.
ⅡMake feelings stronger

Construction
I will be a...
writer
famous
writer
who is popular
among the
readers
in 20 years
I have
confidence
that
Time to show your own composition
pay attention to the structure

use the useful phrases and sentences

write about 80 words.
· 13-15 marks
· 9-12 marks

· 4-8 marks
· 0-3 marks
assessment of composition












√
Group Work
9-12 marks


第二檔：符合題目要求，整篇表達清楚，語法錯誤較少。9-12分。
Pay attention to the spelling, remember more basic words.
第一檔：符合題目要求，內容完整，層次結構清晰，表達能用句型詞組，基本無語言錯誤。13-15分。
13-15 marks

Group Work
0-3 marks


第四檔：不符合題目要求，整篇表達不清楚，或只照抄、拼湊幾個提示詞語。0-3分。
Pay attention to the spelling, remember more basic words.
第三檔：部分內容符合題目要求，內容不夠完整，層次結構不夠清晰，表達不夠清楚，語言有較多錯誤。4-8分。
4-8 marks

Avoid Qing-English and basic grammar errors.
· 13-15 marks
· 9-12 marks

· 4-8 marks
· 0-3 marks
assessment of composition












√
singer
teacher
Fly high
with your dreams
banker
musician
painter
doctor

engineer
I BELIEVE I CAN FLY
If I can see it, then I can do it
If I can see it , then I can be it
I believe I can fly,
I believe I can touch the sky.

Anyang
Shanghai
2019
2039
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Beijing
2019
2039

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