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Unit 3 Travel journal

如何寫解決問題建議信 ？
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Unit 3 Travel journal

如何寫解決問題建議信 ？


（人教版必修一）

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情景導入















































































如何寫建議信？






























定 義

建議信是針對某事向收信人提出建議和忠告的一種文體。建議信要寫明寫信的原因、建議的內容、提出建議的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，語氣一定要和緩。































基本框架
1．開頭(beginning)——開門見山，向對方陳述自己的觀點(state your idea)。
2．主體(body)——對所提出的問題進行分析并說明理由，接著提出自己的建議(reasons and evidence)。
3．結尾(ending)——呼應開頭，重申觀點(restate your opinion)。































亮點句式
①I am writing to express my views/ideas about/concerning...
②Thanks for trusting me. It's my great pleasure to give you some suggestions/ advice/tips.
1．開頭常用句式：































亮點句式
①I would like to suggest that...
②If I were you，I would...
③As far as I am concerned.../In my opinion...
④For one thing...，for another...
⑤Last but not least(最后但同樣重要的)．..
2．表達建議常用句式：































亮點句式
①These are only my personal suggestions/tips. I hope you will find them useful/helpful.
②I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in further detail.
③I will highly appreciate your consideration of my suggestions / advice /tips.
3．結尾常用句式：


寫作任務
假如你是李華，你的好朋友蘇茹在交友方面存在著一些困難，請根據下面提示用英語給他寫一封詞數100左右的信。
1．要交朋友首先要成為一個朋友；
2．要和朋友同甘共苦，患難之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；
3．友誼需要時間和投入(effort)。




審題謀篇
體裁 建議信
話題 交友
時態 一般現在時
人稱 第一人稱


組詞造句
Ⅰ.詞匯

1．成為一個朋友 _______________
2．交朋友 __________________
3．與……分享…… _________________
4．全身心投入…… ____________________
5．需要 ______________
be a friend
make friends
share...with...
put one's heart into...
call for/need



組詞造句
Ⅱ.句式


1．You should be a friend if you want to make friends.(用why not改寫)
________________________________________________
2．A friend in need is a friend indeed.(在句子前加入Just as a saying goes)
_____________________________________________________
Why not be a friend if you want to make friends?
Just as a saying goes，a friend in need is a friend indeed.


組詞造句
Ⅱ.句式


3．你應該全心全意地來交朋友。
You should put your heart into making friends.
(改成否定疑問句Wouldn't it be a good idea if...)
________________________________________________________
Wouldn't it be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends?


組詞造句
Ⅱ.句式


4．我們都知道交友需要時間和投入。
We all know that friendship calls for time and effort.
(使用形式主語改寫)
______________________________________________________
It is well? known to us all that friendship calls for time and effort.


妙筆成篇
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
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參考范文

Para. 1

開門見山，向對方陳述自己的觀點
Dear Su Ru，
I am sorry to know that you are having trouble in making friends. However，the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.

To begin with，why not be a friend if you want to make friends？In addition，you should share happiness and sorrow with your friend. Just as a saying goes，a friend in need is a friend indeed. Last but not least，wouldn't it be a good idea if you put your heart into making friends？It is well ?known to us all that friendship calls for time and effort.


參考范文

Para. 2

對問題進行分析并說明理由，提出建議


參考范文

Para. 3

前后呼應，表達期待
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours，
Li Hua
亮點概述
建議信寫作
主體——進行分析并說明理由，提出建議
結尾——呼應開頭，重申觀點

開頭——開門見山，向對方陳述自己的觀點
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