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課件11張PPT。七年級提優(yōu)課程-書面表達
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May1漢式英語信息提示
??????? 你家里養(yǎng)了一只貓,她很小,也很可愛。由于她的存在,你們?nèi)胰硕己芸鞓贰Ｗ蛱焱砩夏闳ド痰杲o她買食物,在回家的路上下起了大雨。當(dāng)你到家時,你渾身都濕透了。雖然淋了雨,但是你很高興。不管怎么說,小貓不用挨餓了。1習(xí)作? My home (1) raises a lovely small cat. My family are always happy because of her. I went to the store to buy some food for her yesterday night (2). Unluckily, there was a big rain (3) on my way home. When I got home, I was all wet (4). Although I was wet, but (5) I was very happy. No matter how to say (6), the cat would not be hungry.

(1) “home”的漢語意思雖然也是“家”,但它指“家”時一般只指地點而不指人。根據(jù)英語習(xí)慣該句應(yīng)改為My family has a lovely small cat或We keep a lovely small cat at home。 (3) 根據(jù)英語表達習(xí)慣,“一場大雨”應(yīng)表達為a heavy rain,而不
是a big rain。(2) “昨天晚上”要么表達為yesterday evening,要么表達為last night。但根據(jù)語境,這里用前者較合適。(4) be all wet的意思是“完全錯了”。要表達“全身濕透了”,可以用wet through或completely wet。(5) 由于受漢語“雖然……但是”結(jié)構(gòu)的影響而出錯。在英語中,although和but在一個句子中不能連用。(6) 這里要表達“不管怎么說”,可以用anyway或anyhow,文中的表達顯然屬于漢式英語。
1★精品范文 ?We keep a lovely small cat at home. My family are always happy because of her. I went to the store to buy some food for her yesterday evening. Unluckily, there was a heavy rain on my way home. When I got home, I was wet through. Although I was wet, I was very happy. Anyway, the cat would not be hungry.
2習(xí)慣用法和固定搭配信息提示
?2005年10月1日? 星期六? 睛
　　昨天你叔叔打電話來,請你找?guī)讉€朋友去他農(nóng)場收桔子。于是今天早上6點,你和朋友就坐汽車出發(fā)了。一到農(nóng)場便開始干活。桔子樹上結(jié)滿了桔子,你們又摘桔子又裝車,忙完后在那兒吃了午餐,還吃了不少桔子。下午坐卡車回家。你們雖然忙了一天,卻感到非常快樂。
請根據(jù)以上提示寫一篇80詞左右的英語日記。請注意日記的格式。
習(xí)作2October 1, 2005, Saturday?????????????????????????????????? Sunny
?????? My uncle called me yesterday. He said in the phone (1) that he had an orange harvest. He needed some help. He asked me to go there with my friends.
?????? Today morning (2) we left home at 6:00. We went there by a bus (3). The trees in (4) the farm were really full with (5) oranges. When we got there, we began to work at once. We picked a lot of oranges and put them in the boxes. Some strong boys carried the boxes into a truck. After work, we had the lunch (6) at my uncle’s house. We had many oranges, too. In the afternoon, we came back home by truck. We were busy today, but we were happy.
(1) “在電話里說……”應(yīng)用介詞on。(2) “今天上午”的英語說法是this morning。(3) by+交通工具名詞時,其間不用冠詞或其他修飾詞(4) “在農(nóng)場里”介詞用on,應(yīng)是on the farm。(5) “……充(結(jié))滿……”有兩種表示方法,be full of ... 或be filled with...。(6) 英語中在表示吃一日三餐時,三餐前不加冠詞。2★精品范文October 1, 2005, Saturday??????????????????????????????????? Sunny
?????? My uncle called me yesterday. He said on the phone that he had an orange harvest. He needed some help. He asked me to go there with my friends.
???????This morning we left home at 6:00. We went there by bus. The trees on the farm were really full of oranges. When we got there, we began to work at once. We picked a lot of oranges and put them in the boxes. Some strong boys carried the boxes into a truck. After work, we had lunch at my uncle’s house. We had many oranges, too. In the afternoon, we came back home by truck.
?????? We were busy today, but we were happy.3詞匯使用錯誤信息提示
??????? 李小莉的一個名叫Mary Baker的筆友給她回了一封電子郵件,談到她對中國的喜愛和向往。請以“An e-mail from an American pen pal”為標(biāo)題寫一封電子郵件。郵件的開頭已給出(不計入總詞數(shù))。
From: [email protected]
To: [email protected]
Subject: My wish
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3習(xí)作From: [email protected]
To: [email protected]
Subject: My wish
Dear Li Xiaoli,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail. I’ve showed it to my friends. Everyone (1) of us thinks China is one of the greatest countries in the world. We’ve known much about your country for years, but we have not chance (2) to go there. We often watch the Great Wall and beautiful Beijing on TV. So I think China is worth to visit(3). I bought a book on China and study it when I’m free. I hope I can visit your country one day, and I also hope you to visit (4) our country sometimes (5) in the future.
1. everyone是不定代詞,它可以用作主語,但不能和含of的介詞短語連用。此處應(yīng)把Everyone分開,即Every one,或者用Each來替換它。但要注意,這里不能用Every,因為它不能用作主語。2. chance表示“機會”的意思講時是可數(shù)名詞,須和冠詞連用。由于該句是否定句,如果在它前面加上any,它需要變成復(fù)數(shù)。最便捷的辦法是,把not換成no,表示not a,如果no后接的名詞是復(fù)數(shù),它則表示not any。3. 考生對worth一詞的用法顯然不清楚。worth常用于be worth doing這一結(jié)構(gòu)。be worth后不能接動詞不定式,而要接V-ing形式。因此,應(yīng)當(dāng)把to visit改為visiting。4. hope一詞不能用于hope sb. to do sth.結(jié)構(gòu),如果要表達“希望某人做某事”要用hope接that從句。因此要將you to visit改為you can visit。 5. 應(yīng)將sometimes改為sometime。sometimes意為“有時”,而sometime 的意思是“某個時間”,指某個不確定或未說明的時間。1★ 精品范文From: [email protected]
To: [email protected]
Subject: My wish
Dear Li Xiaoli,
I’m glad to receive your e-mail. I’ve showed it to my friends. Every one of us thinks China is one of the greatest countries. We’ve known much about your country for years, but we have no chance to go there. We often watch the Great Wall and beautiful Beijing on TV. So I think China is worth visiting. I bought a book on China and study it when I’m free. I hope I can visit your country one day, and I also hope you can visit our country sometime in the future.
??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Truly yours,
Mary Baker

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