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課件11張PPT。 May七年級提優課程-書面表達
常見錯誤分析
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1人稱和時態誤用信息提示
??????? 電腦是當代的高科技產品(a high-tech product),在我們的生活中越來越普及,幾乎深入到每個家庭。電腦可以幫我們處理(handle)很多事情。列舉一些事例,寫一篇關于電腦在日常生活中的用途的文章,說明電腦的利弊。1習作 ?? The computer — a high-tech product, has become so popular that they are (1) seen in almost every family. It is playing an important role in our everyday life. The computer will help (2) us handle many matters: official business, chat online, study, sending e-mails, long-distance education and entertainment such as listening to music and watching video.
But we also know that the computer was (3) bad for our eyes, especially for the young kids’. Now there are more and more children who have to wear glasses in order to see clearly. Many children become near-sighted, and they are doing worse and worse in their studies because they spend too much time playing computer games. So if you will want (4) to have beautiful and bright eyes and gain (獲取) some useful knowledge when we (5) are young, the most important thing you will do is to plan your time carefully and well. Only in this way can you have a bright future.(1)作者在文章開頭使用了the computer一詞,來代表電腦這一類產品。因此,that從句中如果使用they are,就和句首的主語the computer(單數名詞)不一致,因此應將they are 改為it is。 (2)眾所周知,電腦在我們的日常生活中正在起著很重要的作用。因此,不能理解成電腦將要幫助我們處理很多事務,而是現在(每天)電腦都在幫助人們處理日常事務,這種help是經常的,反復發生的,應用一般現在時。因此,要改為 helps。 (3)我們看到的事實是,電腦在為人們做了大量的好事的同時,也給人們帶來了麻煩。而且,這種困擾現在就存在,即:電腦天天在損害我們的健康和眼睛。應用一般現在時is。(5)將we改為you。從本句的條件句可以看出,“如果你在年輕的時候,既想學到知識,又想擁有一雙明亮的眼睛,你就記住,玩電腦可不要超越底線。”在這里,前后句的人稱要保持一致。 (4) want一詞一般沒有將來時。另外,本句是由if引導的條件狀語從句,按英語的時態規則“主句用一般將來時,從句應用一般現在時”。 將will want改為want。1★ 精品范文 The computer — a high-tech product, has become so popular that it is seen in almost every family. It is playing an important role in our everyday life. The computer helps us handle many matters: official business, chat online, study, sending e-mails, long-distance education and entertainment such as listening to music and watching video.
??????? ?But we also know that the computer is bad for our eyes, especially for the young kids’. Now there are more and more children who have to wear glasses in order to see clearly. Many children become near-sighted, and they are doing worse and worse in their studies because they spend too much time playing computer games. So if you want to have beautiful and bright eyes and gain some useful knowledge when you are young, the most important thing you will do is to plan your time carefully and well. Only in this way can you have a bright future.
2 語態錯誤信息提示
?????????比較下面兩幅圖片。請以“Great Changes in Our Country”為題寫一篇短文,介紹改革開放20多年來祖國的巨大的變化。詞數80左右。2習作Great Changes in Our Country
????? Great changes have been (1) taken place in our country. Many buildings have been builded (2) in cities and towns, even at villages. The more cars we have, the more crowded the roads are. So the roads were become (3) wider and wider. Many overpasses have been builded (4) in big cities.?Chinese people’s life is better now. We can buy things that we need in every part of the country. We have TVs, washing machines, fridges, computers, cars, etc. These things couldn’t buy (5) twenty years ago.?
We’ll study harder and make our country stronger and more beautiful.(1)take place是不及物動詞短語,沒有被動語態(2)被動語態的過去分詞用得不對。(3)動詞become在這里是系動詞,后接形容詞比較級作表語。系動詞通常沒有被動語態。(4)被動語態的過去分詞用得不對。(5)此處應用被動式couldn’t be bought。2★ 精品范文Great Changes in Our Country
????? Great changes have taken place in our country. Many buildings have been built in cities and towns, even at villages. The more cars we have, the more crowded the roads are. So the roads became wider and wider. Many overpasses have been built in big cities.?
??????Chinese people’s life is better now. We can buy things that we need in every part of the country. We have TVs, washing machines, fridges, computers, cars, etc. These things couldn’t be bought twenty years ago.?
??????We’ll study harder and make our country stronger and more beautiful.3 母語干擾信息提示
????????請你根據實際情況,以“My School Life”為題寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。
3 習作 My School Life
????? I’m a middle school student. Although our school is very usual (1), but (2) it’s beautiful in my heart. The school is covered with tall trees and beautiful flowers.
?????The here (3) air is very fresh. In the morning, lots of schoolmates (4) early (5) go to school and do some exercises. Usually we have breakfast after our first class. All of the students take morning exercises on the playground after two classes. After that, someone (6) are reading in the library, others are playing and talking on the playground. We have three classes in the afternoon and do some sports that we like after school and go home at about 6:00. Oh! How colorful my school life is!
(2)受漢語“雖然……但是……”的影響,作者將這一意思直接譯成英語“although…but…”,而在英語同一句子中只用這兩個詞的其中之一表示漢語的“雖然……但是……”。(1)作者顯然想表達“學校很一般或普通”,此處最好用common一詞,而usual意思是“通常的”。(3)here是副詞,用來修飾名詞時應位于被修飾詞之后。(4)schoolmate指校友、同學,通常不包含自己在內,改為students好些,指全校學生。(5)“早早到校”的英語表達是go to school early, 副詞early應位于句末。(6)someone意思是“某人”,要改為some students。3★ 精品范文 My School Life
??????I’m a middle school student. Although our school is very common, it’s beautiful in my heart. The school is covered with tall trees and beautiful flowers.
????? The air here is very fresh. In the morning, lots of students go to school early and do some exercises. Usually we have breakfast after our first class. All the students take morning exercises on the playground after two classes. After that, some students are reading in the library, others are playing and talking on the playground. We have three classes in the afternoon and do some sports that we like after school and go home at about 6:00. Oh! How colorful my school life is!

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